2. My business mail
Dear all customers.
My name is Keisuke Moriuchi and I am in charge of planning at my company.
I am writing to tell you about event by your company.
This event is advance playing event of my company games.
For more information, please see it on my company homepage
If you join this event, you can play new game and watch new promotion video.
If you interested this event, please join.
But this event has the capacity to five thousand people.
How to join is write my company homepage.
If you want to join this event, please contact me by the end of the month.
If you get right to participation, I will return to mail.
Returning to mail to the prize-winner will plan to send 3 month ago.
You don’t check getting right to participation for another way.
And my company doesn’t resend mail.
Sincerely yours.
3. Key point for writing this mail
• Writing briefly the contents.
• Choosing words for no misunderstanding.
• First writing important information.
4. 5 key for writing business mail
• Writing briefly the contents.
• Avoid negative expressions.
• Choosing words for no misunderstanding.
• Writing easy ward for reader
• First writing important information.
5. Why important you know how to write
business mail.
• I think I write business mail for company
entrance test and after entering a
company.
And if I cannot write business mail when
it, It have no merit.
6. How grow up do you do your writing
ability.
• Reading many business mail writing other
person.
• Writing business mail more and more.
• Knowing basic form.
