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Evaluation
     Luara Pires

  Kauana Labaldi
  Chantelle Gilkes
your media
product (opening
sequence) use, develop
or challenge forms and
conventions of real
media products (real
films)?
INSPIRATIONAL FILMS
SUNSET BOULEVARD. •Murdering men

                     •Past obsessions

                     •Tragedy

                     •Death

                     •Criminal

                     •Guns

                     •Anger

                     •No consequence
INSPIRATIONAL FILMS
 DOUBLE INDEMNITY.

               •The use of detective

               •Investigation

               •Talked into a murder

               •Falling for the person not allow

               •Affairs
INSPIRATIONAL FILMS
 SIN CITY
            •Murder

            •No respect for the law

            •Investigation

            •Femme fatale

            •Romance

            •Affairs
NSPIRATIONAL FILMS
 BASIC INSTINCT   •Investigator

                  •Investigation

                  •Seductive

                  •Trying to get away

                  •Dominant

                  •Attractive

                  •Smooth
How/why? They use/develop/challenge
forms?
               SUNSET BOULEVARD
FORMS            USE/DEVELOP/CHAL   WHY?
                 LENGE

Black and        Use                 •To show that the
White Editing                        movie is film noir
                                     which mean black
                                     movie
                                     •To show the time
Establishing     Use/                •Establishing
                                     difference. shot
Shots                                •Give entire images
                 Devel               of places and
                 op                  setting.
                 Use                •Create a specific
Music
                                    mood
                                    •Atmosphere
                                    •Sound effects
DOUBLE INDEMNITY
FORMS               USE/DEVELOP/CHALLE     WHY?
                    NGE

Black and          Use
                •To show that the movie
White Editing   is film noir which mean
                black movie                    They use
                •To show the time              various
                difference.                    close up to
                             They use          show
                             various           specific
Close up           Use/      close up to       details and
                             show              places.
shots              Devel     specific
                   op        details and
                   Use       places.       •Create a specific
Music
                                           mood
                                           •Atmosphere
                                           •Sound effects
                                           •To create effects.
SIN CITY
FORMS          USE/DEVELOP/CHALL   WHY?
               ENGE
                                   •They use special effects
Special Effects Use/Develop        to emphesise colours.
                                   •Whole movie black and
                                   white.
                                   •Only colours used are
                                   green , red, blue.
                                   •Neo film noir.
                                   •They use various close
Shots          Use/develop         up shots
                                   •establishing shot
                                   • over the shoulder shot
                                   • extreme close up shots,
                                   which are all form to film
                                   noir, this is done to show
                                   specific details and
                                   places.
                                   •Create a specific mood
Music          use                 •Atmosphere
                                   •Sound effects
DOUBLE INDEMINITY
FORMS              USE/DEVELOP/CHALL   WHY?
                   ENGE
Close up shots                         To emphesise certain
                   Use/Develop         importance.




                                       To give show the
Low angle          Use                 importance of the lady.
shots

                                       •Create a specific mood
music              use                 •Atmosphere
                                       •Sound effects
                                       •To create effects.
                                       •Create tension.
How/why? they use/develop/challenge
                forms?
              SUNSET BOULEVARD
Conventions     USE/DEVELOP/CHALL   WHY?
                ENGE
Voice over                           the narrator is the
                Use/                character telling his own
                                    story.
                                    The villain is the femme
Villain         Use/develop         fatale develops as its a
                                    woman does this to show
                                    the dominance of a
                                    woman in society and
                                    how they can be
                                    dangerous
                                    •The victim is a man ,
Victim          challenge           which challenges the
                                    conventions this is done
                                    because to show that
                                    man can also be victims.
                                    • to show the opposite
Double Idemnity
convetions   USE/DEVELOP/CHALL   HOW/WHY?
             ENGE
Affair                           Its the affair between
             Used                suspect and the
                                 investigator
                                 The affair offers to kill her
Murder       Use                 husband to get his
                                 money.



                                 The victim here is a man
Victim       Use                 and he is murdered and
                                 no consequences, it is
                                 used to challenge the
                                 stereotype of men being
                                 domian.t
Sin city
convetions   USE/DEVELOP/CHALL   HOW/WHY?
             ENGE
Affair                           Its the affair between
             Use                 murder and victim , this is
                                 done to show how
                                 opposites attract
                                 The man kills the murder,
Murder       Use                 in a very soft and
                                 romantic way. This is
                                 done to show the ironic
                                 side of death.

                                 The victim here is a
Victim       Use                 woman , which uses the
                                 convetions very tipically,
                                 this is done to show how
                                 woman can be subm
Sin city
convetions      USE/DEVELOP/CHALLE   HOW/WHY?
                NGE

investigation                        In basic instinct investigation
                Used                 is used to shown importance
                                     of a happening


                                     The woman in the movie
seduction       Use                  uses seduction , this is
                                     done to show how woman
                                     can use seduce to get
                                     away


                                     To show her dominance.
Femme fatale    Use
Conven Use/            How?                      Screen shots   Comparison
tions  Challeng
       e
       /Develop
Femme      Use         Our character is very                    Similarities to Sun
Fatale                 dominant and shows a                     Set Boulevard: Both
                       lot of strong                            femme fatales are
                       personality.                             very dominant.
Victim     Use         We have a victim                         Differences to Sin
                       Rafael which was killed                  City: Victim is now a
                       by our main character.                   male, to make man
                       And his death is being                   look weak.
                       investigated.
Villain    Challenge By being a women,                          Similar to Basic
           d         good looking for the                       Instinct: Women are
                       society her hobbies are                  both very dominant on
                       not conventions to a                     death.
                       ‘normal’ killer.
Investig   Used        Investigator is used at                  Similar to Basic
ator                   the part of the                          Instinct: Both
                       interrogation.                           investigators are
                                                                being tempted by the
                                                                suspect.


Seducti    Used        Character is trying to                   Similar to Double
Forms       Develop/  How?                Comparison           Screen shots
            Challenge
            / Use?

Black and   Use      Having the           Sunset Boulevard
White                opening sequence     use black and
                     in black and white   white throughout
                     except the           the whole film.
                     flashbacks.
Close up    Use      By having close      Basic Instinct
Shots                ups when she is      uses close ups
                     remembering the      when she is
                     flashbacks.          crossing her legs.
Fade to     Use      To end the       n/a
black                opening sequence


Fade to     Use      Every time we        n/a
white                have a flashback


Bleach      Use      Our flashbacks       n/a
bypass               are all in this
                     effect.
Narrative and structure.
 The narrative of our movie is linear. It is set actual
  time , with just flash backs of the past.
2. How does your
media product
(opening
sequence)
represent
particular social
Who/Social class is being
represented?

LADIES/MEN/
FEMME FATALE
HIGHER CLASS

BECAUSE OF :
HOW DID WE REPRESENT:

MISE-EN-SCENE
( SETTING) - POSITIVE
LIGHITING:
WE USED :

 ARTIFICIAL LIGHTING
 AND NATURAL LIGHTING.
BODY LANGUAGE
(NEGATIVE_



                   SEDUCTIVE.




                 DOMINANCE
                 POWER
FACIAL EXPRESSION

                    (NEGATIVE)

              Disgust.




                Authority.
 OUR REPRESENTATION IS A VERY TYPICAL
 CONVETION OF A HIGH SOCIAL CLASS :

AS THEY ARE KNOW TO BE :



 DOMINANT
 DISGUST
 HAVE AUTHORITY
 GO TO POSH PLACES
OUR SOCIAL CLASS REPRESENTATION LINKS TO
 OUR TARGET AUDIENCE ASWELL AS

ONE OF THE CATEGORIES OF OUR OPENING
 SEQUENCE IS :

 THE AGE BOUNDRY OF 30-40 – this links with our
 social class representation because of way our character
 is represented as experienced.



 THE CULTURAL LIFE STYLE : Traditional life style ,
 this links as we show the traditional life style of a higher
 class person.
Why did we represent this social
group?
We decided to represent this social group because
 :

 Of the time set of the film
 The character representation
 The use of femme fatale
 The effects used
 The setting.
3. WHAT KIND OF
MEDIA INSTITUTION
MIGHT
DISBTRIBUTE YOUR
MEDIA PRODUCT
AND WHY?
1ST DITRIBUTING COMPANY
RESEARCHED
                                     Paramount Pictures
                                     What we found out during our research
                                     and why we thought it would be
                                     suitable:

                                     1. it is one of the oldest distributing
                                        companies.
                                     2. It distributed the most amount of
                                        film noir
                                     3. Serves film worldwide
Reasons why it wasn’t suitable:
                                     4. Good finance, they have made more
                                        than $300 million over 2011.

1. Their budgets for films are higher than our budget.

2. It hasn’t distributed any neo film noirs lately.
2ND DISTRIBUTING COMPANY
       RESEARCHED
                             Columbia Pictures
                             What we found out during our research
                             and why we thought it would be suitable:

                             1. It had partnership with paramount
                                pictures

                             2. It is within the 5 distributing
Reasons why it wasn’t           companies that distributed more than
suitable:                       499 film noirs.
1. Very hight budget         3. Distributed worldwide
2. Hasn’t distributed any    4. Had the budget of $200 million over
   neo film noirs lately.       2011.
3. The partenrship with
   paramount pictures
   makes it be a worldwide
CHOSEN
ONE.
3RD DISTRIBUTING COMPANY
       RESEARCHED
       Miramax
       What we found out during our research
       and why we thought it would be
       suitable:

       1. More to do with the gender, usually
          produce films for female

       2. Miramax produces film noirs

       3. Miramax produces film with affairs

       4. The budget of Miramax was of 150 million
          in 2011.

       5. Owned by Disney

       6. Miramax works with films with the budget
          of $10-20 million per film.
REASONS WHY WE DECIDED
TO CHOOSE MIRAMAX
1.   Centred on a female audience after the age of 12 ,
     our target audience is on females.

2.   Produces Neo film noirs such as Sin city.

3.   Has themes of affairs and crimes.

4.   Works with budgets of $10-20 million per film.

5.   Smaller company.
TYPES OF FILMS RELEASED.
Miramax movie.                    Our opening sequence.




    CHÉRI                                  OUR
    OPENING SEQUENCE
    (Romance/suspense)
                            1. AFFAIRS
                            2. WOMAN
                              DOMINANCE
                       3.   FEMME FATALE
Miramax movie.
                                  Our opening sequence.
 Miramax movie.




     DIRTY PREETY THINGS                      OUR
     OPENING SEQUENCE
     (CRIME/DRAMA)
                               1. SECRETS
                             2. MYSTERIOUS
                           3. LONDON BASED.
MIRAMAX         Our opening
(crime/drama)   sequence.




                1. FILM NOIR

                2. ROMANCE

                3. Femme fatale

                4. Crimes.

                5. Death

                6. Investigation.
Who would the
audience be
interested in
your media
Target audience
 Hobbies: Cinema, fashion, antique.
 Age: 30-40
 Gender: Mostly Female, but some older men.
 Ethinicity: English/ American/ German.
 Lifestyle: Traditional, cultural, used to having technology but still
  likening the old versions of films. Likes women power, feels
  proud about their sex. Location: People that live in the city.
Why will out target audience be interested?
 Target Audience will be interested because our opening
  sequence shows enigma, culture, fashionable and very feminist.
 They way our film is edited creates a lot of enigma, we use
  extreme close up shots to emphasize important things. We also
  use zoom in and zoom out to show different places and times.
  Flash backs are also used to show scenes of the past to make
  the present scene more clear.
List of things we did to attract our
audience.
 Followed the conventions
 Challenged some of the stereotypes
 Used props affectively
 Plots is unusual and different
 Had a good amount of close ups
 Characters were represented well
 Clear narrative
 Clear story
Target Audience
Audience were attract to our opening sequence
 because the plot is very different and it
 challenges some of the stereotypes. The
 narrative is easy to follow as our target audience
 prefers simpler films.
BBFC
BBFC
                                           BBFC OPENING SEQUENCE
                                              OUR
Discrimination                                       Discrimination
Discriminatory language or behaviour must not be
endorsed by the work as a whole.                     We are not discriminating anyone.
Drugs                                                Drugs:
Any misuse of drugs must be infrequent and
should not be glamorised or give instructional       We are using cigarettes , but its not being
detail.                                              glamorised or instructional.
Horror                                               Horror:
Moderate physical and psychological threat may
be permitted, provided disturbing sequences are      We are not having horror in any form.
not frequent or sustained.

Imitable behaviour                                   Imitable behaviour:
Dangerous behaviour (for example, hanging,
suicide and self-harming) should not dwell on        We are not applying any of these into our
detail which could be copied, or appear pain or      film.
harm free.
Language                                             Language:
The use of strong language (for example,
‘fuck’) must be infrequent.                          We are not using any strong language.
Nudity                                               Nudity:
Nudity is allowed, but in a sexual context must be
brief and discreet.                                  No nudity
Sex                                                  Sex
Sexual activity may be briefly and discreetly
                                                     We are only showing a very discreet
BBFC
What have you
learnt about
technologies from
the process of
constructing this
product?
RESEARCH
             Computers
               Google
             DVD player
               DVDs
            PowerPoint
            Active board.
RESEARCH


DVD players
 watch DVDs
 research the different techniques used in real films
 gain inspiration for our opening sequence

PowerPoint
 slides with all the information
 examples we gained in our research

Interactive bored
 present presentations
 Of what we found in our research
BRAINSTORMING/PLANNING:

         Cameras
        PowerPoint
        Computers
          Google
        Usb cables
            Usb
       Active board.
         Internet.
BRAINSTORMING/PLANNING:

Internet
 Gain examples of movies
 Inspirational scenes

Usb
 We used to save our presentations
 Also to present our work on the
 interactive white boards

Usb cable
 Used it to transfer images from our
 camera to the computer
BLOGS:

  Computer
   Google
   Internet
   Blogger
Camera cables
    Iphone
 PowerPoint
blog
Iphone
   We used iphone to take pictures-
   As evidence
   Costumes
   Characters

Internet
 We used internet to update blogger
 We used slide share to upload PowerPoint's to blogger


Usb cable
 Upload photos from iphone to blog
 Evidence of filming
 Setting
PRELIMINARY:
              iMacs
          Computers
            Camera
             Tripod
          PowerPoint
         Active board
            Internet
         Camera cable
      Photography camera
             Iphone
             iMovie
DRAFT 1 :   DRAFT 2 :      DRAFT 3 :
•Camera     •Camera
                           ALL OF
•Tripod     •Tripod
            •Memory card   THOSE
•Memory card               DRAFT 4 :
            •Imac
•Imac       •Garage band   ALL OF
•Imovie     •Imovie
•Garage band•Garage band   THOSE
•ITunes     •ITunes        DRAFT 5:
•Internet   •YouTube       ALL OF
•Google     •Internet      THOSE
            •Google
Things we used for our Draft 1 Opening
             Sequence
             DRAFT 1 :
               Camera
                  Tripod
           Memory card
                    Imac
                 Imovie
           Garage Band
                 ITunes
                Internet
                 Google
Draft 1/2/3/4/5
Imovie
 Upload our footage to the computers
 Editing our first draft
 Add transitions/ Effects

Garage band
 We used garage band to record voice over's
 Also to put music into our opening

Tripod
 To make our footage steady
 Control camera angles
 Control camera movement
Preliminary
  Grade:
  With this task we learned how to edit and how
   to use the camera in a variety of shots and
   angles.
Opening Sequence draft 1
 Draft 1:
Grade: 1B
 We got this grade because our location and
  framing was very poor and our focus. We also
  didn’t use the editing techniques and transitions
  affectively.
 We now learned how to frame our characters
  correctly, found a better location.
Opening Sequence draft 2
 Draft 2:
 Grade: 2C
 We had this grade because the flashbacks we
  was using was not affective and clear and our
  credits was not good.
 We now added extra flashbacks to be more
  specific on what we want to emphasize.
Opening Sequence draft 3
 Draft 3:
 Grade: 2A/3C
 We have this grade because we didn’t do well on
  the titles and credits.
 We now learned where to put the titles and
  credits and we also use better fonts.
Opening Sequence draft 4
 Draft 4:
 Grade: 3A
 We have this grade because we had good shots, and
  our framing was very clear and we used rule of thirds
  very affectively but our voice over was not correct
 We now have a new script for voice over and we
  added more shots.
Opening Sequence Final Draft
 Draft 5:
 Grade: A2
 We got this grade because we had really good
  framing, filming appropriate material for the target
  audience.
 We now learned that we should have had a voice
  over for the male investigator and more variety of
  shots.

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Planning for evaluation

  • 1. Evaluation Luara Pires Kauana Labaldi Chantelle Gilkes
  • 2. your media product (opening sequence) use, develop or challenge forms and conventions of real media products (real films)?
  • 3. INSPIRATIONAL FILMS SUNSET BOULEVARD. •Murdering men •Past obsessions •Tragedy •Death •Criminal •Guns •Anger •No consequence
  • 4. INSPIRATIONAL FILMS DOUBLE INDEMNITY. •The use of detective •Investigation •Talked into a murder •Falling for the person not allow •Affairs
  • 5. INSPIRATIONAL FILMS SIN CITY •Murder •No respect for the law •Investigation •Femme fatale •Romance •Affairs
  • 6. NSPIRATIONAL FILMS BASIC INSTINCT •Investigator •Investigation •Seductive •Trying to get away •Dominant •Attractive •Smooth
  • 7. How/why? They use/develop/challenge forms? SUNSET BOULEVARD FORMS USE/DEVELOP/CHAL WHY? LENGE Black and Use •To show that the White Editing movie is film noir which mean black movie •To show the time Establishing Use/ •Establishing difference. shot Shots •Give entire images Devel of places and op setting. Use •Create a specific Music mood •Atmosphere •Sound effects
  • 8. DOUBLE INDEMNITY FORMS USE/DEVELOP/CHALLE WHY? NGE Black and Use •To show that the movie White Editing is film noir which mean black movie They use •To show the time various difference. close up to They use show various specific Close up Use/ close up to details and show places. shots Devel specific op details and Use places. •Create a specific Music mood •Atmosphere •Sound effects •To create effects.
  • 9. SIN CITY FORMS USE/DEVELOP/CHALL WHY? ENGE •They use special effects Special Effects Use/Develop to emphesise colours. •Whole movie black and white. •Only colours used are green , red, blue. •Neo film noir. •They use various close Shots Use/develop up shots •establishing shot • over the shoulder shot • extreme close up shots, which are all form to film noir, this is done to show specific details and places. •Create a specific mood Music use •Atmosphere •Sound effects
  • 10. DOUBLE INDEMINITY FORMS USE/DEVELOP/CHALL WHY? ENGE Close up shots To emphesise certain Use/Develop importance. To give show the Low angle Use importance of the lady. shots •Create a specific mood music use •Atmosphere •Sound effects •To create effects. •Create tension.
  • 11. How/why? they use/develop/challenge forms? SUNSET BOULEVARD Conventions USE/DEVELOP/CHALL WHY? ENGE Voice over the narrator is the Use/ character telling his own story. The villain is the femme Villain Use/develop fatale develops as its a woman does this to show the dominance of a woman in society and how they can be dangerous •The victim is a man , Victim challenge which challenges the conventions this is done because to show that man can also be victims. • to show the opposite
  • 12. Double Idemnity convetions USE/DEVELOP/CHALL HOW/WHY? ENGE Affair Its the affair between Used suspect and the investigator The affair offers to kill her Murder Use husband to get his money. The victim here is a man Victim Use and he is murdered and no consequences, it is used to challenge the stereotype of men being domian.t
  • 13. Sin city convetions USE/DEVELOP/CHALL HOW/WHY? ENGE Affair Its the affair between Use murder and victim , this is done to show how opposites attract The man kills the murder, Murder Use in a very soft and romantic way. This is done to show the ironic side of death. The victim here is a Victim Use woman , which uses the convetions very tipically, this is done to show how woman can be subm
  • 14. Sin city convetions USE/DEVELOP/CHALLE HOW/WHY? NGE investigation In basic instinct investigation Used is used to shown importance of a happening The woman in the movie seduction Use uses seduction , this is done to show how woman can use seduce to get away To show her dominance. Femme fatale Use
  • 15. Conven Use/ How? Screen shots Comparison tions Challeng e /Develop Femme Use Our character is very Similarities to Sun Fatale dominant and shows a Set Boulevard: Both lot of strong femme fatales are personality. very dominant. Victim Use We have a victim Differences to Sin Rafael which was killed City: Victim is now a by our main character. male, to make man And his death is being look weak. investigated. Villain Challenge By being a women, Similar to Basic d good looking for the Instinct: Women are society her hobbies are both very dominant on not conventions to a death. ‘normal’ killer. Investig Used Investigator is used at Similar to Basic ator the part of the Instinct: Both interrogation. investigators are being tempted by the suspect. Seducti Used Character is trying to Similar to Double
  • 16. Forms Develop/ How? Comparison Screen shots Challenge / Use? Black and Use Having the Sunset Boulevard White opening sequence use black and in black and white white throughout except the the whole film. flashbacks. Close up Use By having close Basic Instinct Shots ups when she is uses close ups remembering the when she is flashbacks. crossing her legs. Fade to Use To end the n/a black opening sequence Fade to Use Every time we n/a white have a flashback Bleach Use Our flashbacks n/a bypass are all in this effect.
  • 17. Narrative and structure.  The narrative of our movie is linear. It is set actual time , with just flash backs of the past.
  • 18. 2. How does your media product (opening sequence) represent particular social
  • 19. Who/Social class is being represented? LADIES/MEN/ FEMME FATALE HIGHER CLASS BECAUSE OF :
  • 20. HOW DID WE REPRESENT: MISE-EN-SCENE ( SETTING) - POSITIVE
  • 21. LIGHITING: WE USED :  ARTIFICIAL LIGHTING  AND NATURAL LIGHTING.
  • 22. BODY LANGUAGE (NEGATIVE_ SEDUCTIVE. DOMINANCE POWER
  • 23. FACIAL EXPRESSION (NEGATIVE) Disgust. Authority.
  • 24.  OUR REPRESENTATION IS A VERY TYPICAL CONVETION OF A HIGH SOCIAL CLASS : AS THEY ARE KNOW TO BE :  DOMINANT  DISGUST  HAVE AUTHORITY  GO TO POSH PLACES
  • 25. OUR SOCIAL CLASS REPRESENTATION LINKS TO OUR TARGET AUDIENCE ASWELL AS ONE OF THE CATEGORIES OF OUR OPENING SEQUENCE IS :  THE AGE BOUNDRY OF 30-40 – this links with our social class representation because of way our character is represented as experienced.  THE CULTURAL LIFE STYLE : Traditional life style , this links as we show the traditional life style of a higher class person.
  • 26. Why did we represent this social group? We decided to represent this social group because :  Of the time set of the film  The character representation  The use of femme fatale  The effects used  The setting.
  • 27. 3. WHAT KIND OF MEDIA INSTITUTION MIGHT DISBTRIBUTE YOUR MEDIA PRODUCT AND WHY?
  • 28. 1ST DITRIBUTING COMPANY RESEARCHED Paramount Pictures What we found out during our research and why we thought it would be suitable: 1. it is one of the oldest distributing companies. 2. It distributed the most amount of film noir 3. Serves film worldwide Reasons why it wasn’t suitable: 4. Good finance, they have made more than $300 million over 2011. 1. Their budgets for films are higher than our budget. 2. It hasn’t distributed any neo film noirs lately.
  • 29. 2ND DISTRIBUTING COMPANY RESEARCHED Columbia Pictures What we found out during our research and why we thought it would be suitable: 1. It had partnership with paramount pictures 2. It is within the 5 distributing Reasons why it wasn’t companies that distributed more than suitable: 499 film noirs. 1. Very hight budget 3. Distributed worldwide 2. Hasn’t distributed any 4. Had the budget of $200 million over neo film noirs lately. 2011. 3. The partenrship with paramount pictures makes it be a worldwide
  • 31. 3RD DISTRIBUTING COMPANY RESEARCHED Miramax What we found out during our research and why we thought it would be suitable: 1. More to do with the gender, usually produce films for female 2. Miramax produces film noirs 3. Miramax produces film with affairs 4. The budget of Miramax was of 150 million in 2011. 5. Owned by Disney 6. Miramax works with films with the budget of $10-20 million per film.
  • 32. REASONS WHY WE DECIDED TO CHOOSE MIRAMAX 1. Centred on a female audience after the age of 12 , our target audience is on females. 2. Produces Neo film noirs such as Sin city. 3. Has themes of affairs and crimes. 4. Works with budgets of $10-20 million per film. 5. Smaller company.
  • 33. TYPES OF FILMS RELEASED. Miramax movie. Our opening sequence. CHÉRI OUR OPENING SEQUENCE (Romance/suspense) 1. AFFAIRS 2. WOMAN DOMINANCE 3. FEMME FATALE
  • 34. Miramax movie. Our opening sequence. Miramax movie. DIRTY PREETY THINGS OUR OPENING SEQUENCE (CRIME/DRAMA) 1. SECRETS 2. MYSTERIOUS 3. LONDON BASED.
  • 35. MIRAMAX Our opening (crime/drama) sequence. 1. FILM NOIR 2. ROMANCE 3. Femme fatale 4. Crimes. 5. Death 6. Investigation.
  • 36. Who would the audience be interested in your media
  • 37. Target audience  Hobbies: Cinema, fashion, antique.  Age: 30-40  Gender: Mostly Female, but some older men.  Ethinicity: English/ American/ German.  Lifestyle: Traditional, cultural, used to having technology but still likening the old versions of films. Likes women power, feels proud about their sex. Location: People that live in the city. Why will out target audience be interested?  Target Audience will be interested because our opening sequence shows enigma, culture, fashionable and very feminist.  They way our film is edited creates a lot of enigma, we use extreme close up shots to emphasize important things. We also use zoom in and zoom out to show different places and times. Flash backs are also used to show scenes of the past to make the present scene more clear.
  • 38. List of things we did to attract our audience.  Followed the conventions  Challenged some of the stereotypes  Used props affectively  Plots is unusual and different  Had a good amount of close ups  Characters were represented well  Clear narrative  Clear story
  • 39. Target Audience Audience were attract to our opening sequence because the plot is very different and it challenges some of the stereotypes. The narrative is easy to follow as our target audience prefers simpler films.
  • 41. BBFC BBFC OPENING SEQUENCE OUR Discrimination Discrimination Discriminatory language or behaviour must not be endorsed by the work as a whole. We are not discriminating anyone. Drugs Drugs: Any misuse of drugs must be infrequent and should not be glamorised or give instructional We are using cigarettes , but its not being detail. glamorised or instructional. Horror Horror: Moderate physical and psychological threat may be permitted, provided disturbing sequences are We are not having horror in any form. not frequent or sustained. Imitable behaviour Imitable behaviour: Dangerous behaviour (for example, hanging, suicide and self-harming) should not dwell on We are not applying any of these into our detail which could be copied, or appear pain or film. harm free. Language Language: The use of strong language (for example, ‘fuck’) must be infrequent. We are not using any strong language. Nudity Nudity: Nudity is allowed, but in a sexual context must be brief and discreet. No nudity Sex Sex Sexual activity may be briefly and discreetly We are only showing a very discreet
  • 42. BBFC
  • 43. What have you learnt about technologies from the process of constructing this product?
  • 44. RESEARCH  Computers  Google  DVD player  DVDs  PowerPoint  Active board.
  • 45. RESEARCH DVD players  watch DVDs  research the different techniques used in real films  gain inspiration for our opening sequence PowerPoint  slides with all the information  examples we gained in our research Interactive bored  present presentations  Of what we found in our research
  • 46. BRAINSTORMING/PLANNING: Cameras PowerPoint Computers Google Usb cables Usb Active board. Internet.
  • 47. BRAINSTORMING/PLANNING: Internet  Gain examples of movies  Inspirational scenes Usb  We used to save our presentations  Also to present our work on the interactive white boards Usb cable  Used it to transfer images from our camera to the computer
  • 48. BLOGS: Computer Google Internet Blogger Camera cables Iphone PowerPoint
  • 49. blog Iphone  We used iphone to take pictures-  As evidence  Costumes  Characters Internet  We used internet to update blogger  We used slide share to upload PowerPoint's to blogger Usb cable  Upload photos from iphone to blog  Evidence of filming  Setting
  • 50. PRELIMINARY: iMacs Computers Camera Tripod PowerPoint Active board Internet Camera cable Photography camera Iphone iMovie
  • 51. DRAFT 1 : DRAFT 2 : DRAFT 3 : •Camera •Camera ALL OF •Tripod •Tripod •Memory card THOSE •Memory card DRAFT 4 : •Imac •Imac •Garage band ALL OF •Imovie •Imovie •Garage band•Garage band THOSE •ITunes •ITunes DRAFT 5: •Internet •YouTube ALL OF •Google •Internet THOSE •Google
  • 52. Things we used for our Draft 1 Opening Sequence DRAFT 1 : Camera Tripod Memory card Imac Imovie Garage Band ITunes Internet Google
  • 53. Draft 1/2/3/4/5 Imovie  Upload our footage to the computers  Editing our first draft  Add transitions/ Effects Garage band  We used garage band to record voice over's  Also to put music into our opening Tripod  To make our footage steady  Control camera angles  Control camera movement
  • 54. Preliminary  Grade:  With this task we learned how to edit and how to use the camera in a variety of shots and angles.
  • 55. Opening Sequence draft 1  Draft 1: Grade: 1B  We got this grade because our location and framing was very poor and our focus. We also didn’t use the editing techniques and transitions affectively.  We now learned how to frame our characters correctly, found a better location.
  • 56. Opening Sequence draft 2  Draft 2:  Grade: 2C  We had this grade because the flashbacks we was using was not affective and clear and our credits was not good.  We now added extra flashbacks to be more specific on what we want to emphasize.
  • 57. Opening Sequence draft 3  Draft 3:  Grade: 2A/3C  We have this grade because we didn’t do well on the titles and credits.  We now learned where to put the titles and credits and we also use better fonts.
  • 58. Opening Sequence draft 4  Draft 4:  Grade: 3A  We have this grade because we had good shots, and our framing was very clear and we used rule of thirds very affectively but our voice over was not correct  We now have a new script for voice over and we added more shots.
  • 59. Opening Sequence Final Draft  Draft 5:  Grade: A2  We got this grade because we had really good framing, filming appropriate material for the target audience.  We now learned that we should have had a voice over for the male investigator and more variety of shots.