3. I’m not happy but I’ll give you
one last chance to sort them out
Due: Monday Apr 22, 3pm
4. DON’T DO LAST MINUTE
1 hour a day
YOU HAVE TO PRIORITISE REVISION
5. General teacher comments
• marks on generous - you don't fix and doc marks come down (don't match!)
• Should be in order of blog checklist……..USE this!
– NO BLOG CHECKLISTS ON BLOGS!
• complete assessment record or delete entirely (affects time management and completion)
• absolutely no blank posts – just delete as last resort put in order on checklist
• planning BEFORE drafts!!!!! (Or that planning work discredited)
• Titles should match the titles on blog checklist (re-name and use capitals correctly!)
• Update your target audience details
– Draft assign 19
– Some more videos/pics of audience feedback/interviews
• similar products:
– docs u watched - screen grab with a short blurb /captions (did you do this throughout the year?)
– Research of the real life DPS and adverts (annotated) – title it : research of similar products (real life ancillary texts
• alterations along the way and copyright permission a MUST
• updated planning - you've done it for draft 2-4 - where is it?
– Timelines and scripts for draft 2, 3, 4 (use timeline creator – improve technology!)
– All other stuff for final draft (locations, costume, props, actors, music)
• This planning needs more detail (range of photos that are annotated explaining them)
• The photos of costume/props should be REAL if possible
• NEED MORE PLANNING FOR ANCILLARIES!!!! (rough sketches)
• Technology = screen grabs from iphoto……….ipad (how’d u use?) (apps you used)……..vlogs………research vids……..
• evidence of where you got music (screen grab from websites)
• Communication: no sp/grammar/puncutation errors, posts and text is clear and concise!
• Presentation: navigation, sequential………….TEXT: same size/font/bold/underline/spacing
– Photos: same size? Captions? Clear? Fit column? ……………… appropriate background/template? width of columns? (settings)
• last thing on blog: final documentary and then ancillary and then evaluation question videos (Easier for
moderator)
6. Alterations along the Way
Draft 1 Draft 2 Draft 3 Draft 4 Final Draft
The
audience
said….
Targets
(what you wanted
to change based
on audience
feedback)
What you
changed
from
previous
draft?
Why?
N/A
Create a big plan as a group first?
8. Alterations along the Way
Draft 1
The
audience
said….
Targets
(what you wanted
to change based
on audience
feedback)
What you
changed
from
previous
draft?
Why?
N/A
Should look like this for blog
9. Alterations along the Way
Draft 2
The
audience
said….
Targets
(what you wanted
to change based
on audience
feedback)
What you
changed
from
previous
draft?
Why?
MES?
Locations?
Structure?
Actors?
Experiment?
Music?
What did you take away or what did you add?
10. Alterations Along the Way
Ancillaries
Double page Magazine Spread
&
Newspaper Advert
11. Seeking permission for
Copyright material
# Title
&
Evidence you sought permission
Source How
long?
(seconds)
1
2
3
4
If it’s a game/film/TV
then that’s not seeking
permission from
Youtube – it’s the
producer/distribuor of
that text!
(E-mail/letter)
Divide up equally
Including ancillary