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Patricia Moed patriciamoed@gmail.com Lizzie Borden Took An Ax Click on the Play button
To Do List Find Out the Who, What, When, Where, and Why of the Lizzie Borden case. State your opinion  whether you think Lizzie Borden is guilty or innocent. Correctly categorize 6 statements into facts and opinions. Identify an effective thesis statement and write one. Correctly identify 3 characteristics of the profile essay.    	When you are ready, click on the Play button.
When you are ready to continue your investigation, click on one of links on the right.  Just make sure to do the module on the thesis statement at the end. When  your finish each section, you will return to this page and have the option of selecting another module. Differentiating Between Fact and Opinion The Lizzie Borden Case The Profile Essay Writing a Strong Thesis Statement Main Menu 4
What Are Three Features of  A Topic?Click Anywhere on the Slide to Find Out. It is a general idea. For example: Social Networking Italian food Crime Pollution It is the general subject of a reading.  It can usually be described in one or two words. It answers the  question:   What is this reading about?
What’s The Topic Sentence? It’s the main point the writer wants to make  in a paragraph.
What’s the Difference Between the Topic Sentence and the  Thesis Statement?  The thesis statement is the main point the writer wants to make for an entire essay, which is at least 5 paragraphs long. The essay will have just 1 thesis statement. How  many  topic  sentences are there in an essay?  Only one?   Remember—the topic sentence is the main point of the paragraph, so in the typical 5 paragraph essay, there will be 3 topic sentences..
The Effective Thesis Statement Has 2 Parts:
Identify the Thesis Statement          Respectable single  women in 19th century America could not earn their own living and were financially dependent on their family.   Therefore, Lizzie and Emma, aged 32 and 42 , who were still single in 1982, lived at home with their parents and did not work.  Like other women at that time, they had limited opportunities.  They could volunteer at church or perform community service, but their principle role was to wait for a man to step forward and propose marriage.   Of the two daughters, Lizzie was more involved in the community.  She taught Sunday school and was active in the Women’s Christian Temperance Union, the Ladies’ Fruit and Flower Mission, and other organizations.  She kept herself busy, but she was not happy. What’s the topic? What’s the thesis statement?
Identify the Thesis Statement Respectable single  women in 19th century America could not earn their own living and were financially dependent on their family.   Therefore, Lizzie and Emma, aged 32 and 42 , who were still single in 1982, lived at home with their parents and did not work.  Like other women at that time, they had limited opportunities.  They could volunteer at church or perform community service, but their principle role was to wait for a man to step forward and propose marriage.   Of the two daughters, Lizzie was more involved in the community.  She taught Sunday school and was active in the Women’s Christian Temperance Union, the Ladies’ Fruit and Flower Mission, and other organizations.  She kept herself busy, but she was not happy. What’s the topic? What’s the thesis statement?
Test Your Knowledge.   Decide if the thesis statements below are effective or ineffective.   After making your decision, click on the statement to reveal the answer. Thesis #1:  Lizzie Borden was fortunate that in 1892, the judge and jury believed she was innocent  because she went to church and came from an affluent and respectable family.    Thesis #2:  If Lizzie Borden were on trial today, she would be found guilty of the murders. Thesis #4:  Abby Borden was trapped in a loveless marriage to Andrew and had a poor relationship with her stepdaughters Lizzie and Emma.  Thesis #3:  Lizzie Borden’s sister Emma was not home on the day of the murders.
Test Your Knowledge.   Decide if the thesis statements below are effective or ineffective.   After making your decision, click on the statement to reveal the answer. Thesis #1:  Lizzie Borden was fortunate that in 1892, the judge and jury believed she was innocent  because she went to church and came from an affluent and respectable family.  EFFECTIVE    Thesis #2:  If Lizzie Borden were on trial today, she would be found guilty of the murders. EFFECTIVE:   Thesis #4:  Abby Borden was trapped in a loveless marriage to Andrew and had a poor relationship with her stepdaughters Lizzie and Emma. EFFECTIVE Thesis #3:  Lizzie Borden’s sister Emma was not home on the day of the murders. INEFFECTIVE. IT DOES NOT CONTAIN THE WRITER’S OPINION.
The Effective Thesis Statement:  Apply What You’ve Learned ,[object Object],        If Lizzie committed the murders, what was her motive?  Greed, jealousy, or dislike of her stepmother Abby?  Do you have another theory? ,[object Object]
 When you’re ready, click on the screen to get your final directions, which will complete your investigation.Now,  write your own thesis statement about Lizzie Borden.   A  strong thesis statement includes the topic and the author’s opinion about the topic. Post your thesis statement on the Discussion Board.
Congratulations!  You have successfully finished your investigation of the Lizzie Borden murders.

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  • 1. Patricia Moed patriciamoed@gmail.com Lizzie Borden Took An Ax Click on the Play button
  • 2. To Do List Find Out the Who, What, When, Where, and Why of the Lizzie Borden case. State your opinion whether you think Lizzie Borden is guilty or innocent. Correctly categorize 6 statements into facts and opinions. Identify an effective thesis statement and write one. Correctly identify 3 characteristics of the profile essay. When you are ready, click on the Play button.
  • 3. When you are ready to continue your investigation, click on one of links on the right. Just make sure to do the module on the thesis statement at the end. When your finish each section, you will return to this page and have the option of selecting another module. Differentiating Between Fact and Opinion The Lizzie Borden Case The Profile Essay Writing a Strong Thesis Statement Main Menu 4
  • 4. What Are Three Features of A Topic?Click Anywhere on the Slide to Find Out. It is a general idea. For example: Social Networking Italian food Crime Pollution It is the general subject of a reading. It can usually be described in one or two words. It answers the question: What is this reading about?
  • 5. What’s The Topic Sentence? It’s the main point the writer wants to make in a paragraph.
  • 6. What’s the Difference Between the Topic Sentence and the Thesis Statement? The thesis statement is the main point the writer wants to make for an entire essay, which is at least 5 paragraphs long. The essay will have just 1 thesis statement. How many topic sentences are there in an essay? Only one? Remember—the topic sentence is the main point of the paragraph, so in the typical 5 paragraph essay, there will be 3 topic sentences..
  • 7. The Effective Thesis Statement Has 2 Parts:
  • 8. Identify the Thesis Statement Respectable single women in 19th century America could not earn their own living and were financially dependent on their family. Therefore, Lizzie and Emma, aged 32 and 42 , who were still single in 1982, lived at home with their parents and did not work. Like other women at that time, they had limited opportunities. They could volunteer at church or perform community service, but their principle role was to wait for a man to step forward and propose marriage. Of the two daughters, Lizzie was more involved in the community. She taught Sunday school and was active in the Women’s Christian Temperance Union, the Ladies’ Fruit and Flower Mission, and other organizations. She kept herself busy, but she was not happy. What’s the topic? What’s the thesis statement?
  • 9. Identify the Thesis Statement Respectable single women in 19th century America could not earn their own living and were financially dependent on their family. Therefore, Lizzie and Emma, aged 32 and 42 , who were still single in 1982, lived at home with their parents and did not work. Like other women at that time, they had limited opportunities. They could volunteer at church or perform community service, but their principle role was to wait for a man to step forward and propose marriage. Of the two daughters, Lizzie was more involved in the community. She taught Sunday school and was active in the Women’s Christian Temperance Union, the Ladies’ Fruit and Flower Mission, and other organizations. She kept herself busy, but she was not happy. What’s the topic? What’s the thesis statement?
  • 10. Test Your Knowledge. Decide if the thesis statements below are effective or ineffective. After making your decision, click on the statement to reveal the answer. Thesis #1: Lizzie Borden was fortunate that in 1892, the judge and jury believed she was innocent because she went to church and came from an affluent and respectable family. Thesis #2: If Lizzie Borden were on trial today, she would be found guilty of the murders. Thesis #4: Abby Borden was trapped in a loveless marriage to Andrew and had a poor relationship with her stepdaughters Lizzie and Emma. Thesis #3: Lizzie Borden’s sister Emma was not home on the day of the murders.
  • 11. Test Your Knowledge. Decide if the thesis statements below are effective or ineffective. After making your decision, click on the statement to reveal the answer. Thesis #1: Lizzie Borden was fortunate that in 1892, the judge and jury believed she was innocent because she went to church and came from an affluent and respectable family. EFFECTIVE Thesis #2: If Lizzie Borden were on trial today, she would be found guilty of the murders. EFFECTIVE: Thesis #4: Abby Borden was trapped in a loveless marriage to Andrew and had a poor relationship with her stepdaughters Lizzie and Emma. EFFECTIVE Thesis #3: Lizzie Borden’s sister Emma was not home on the day of the murders. INEFFECTIVE. IT DOES NOT CONTAIN THE WRITER’S OPINION.
  • 12.
  • 13. When you’re ready, click on the screen to get your final directions, which will complete your investigation.Now, write your own thesis statement about Lizzie Borden. A strong thesis statement includes the topic and the author’s opinion about the topic. Post your thesis statement on the Discussion Board.
  • 14. Congratulations! You have successfully finished your investigation of the Lizzie Borden murders.
  • 15. For more information on Lizzie’s Hatchet and the Murder Trial, click on the Resources Links below. --History's Lost and Found: Lizzie Borden's Hatchet --Information about Lizzie Borden’s Trial Contact: Patricia Moed E: patriciamoed@gmail.com PH: 617-833-1658

Notas del editor

  1. A double murder in a quiet Massachusetts town. A wealthy businessman and his wife are brutally axed to death. Lizzie Borden, the daughter of the 2 murder victims, is accused of the crime. You’re the writer assigned to investigate the case and write an essay profiling Lizzie. When you are ready to begin your investigation, click on the Play button.
  2. Well, what’s your first step? Before putting anything down on paper, a good investigator starts by uncovering the facts—the who, what, when, where, and why. Another vital skill is understanding the difference between facts and opinions. You will use this skill as your sift through the evidence in this case. You’ll also learn the characteristics of a good profile essay and formulate an opinion of the alleged murderer in order to write an effective this statement. This is your mission and challenge. The buttons below allow you to rewind, play, go back, or go forward. If at any time you want to stop the lesson, click on the exit button.
  3. You have just one more module to complete. Click on it to continue.
  4. All good writers need to know the difference between the topic, topic sentence, and thesis statement. We’ll start with the topic. To find out the 3 features of a topic, click anywhere on the screen.
  5. Here’s the next definition of a topic sentence.
  6. Finally, you’ll learn about the thesis statement and how it’s different from the topic sentence. Do you know the difference? Click anywhere on the screen to find out the answer.
  7. What will you need to include to have an effective thesis statement? It actually has 2 important components—a topic and the author’s opinion about the topic. Read the examples and when you’re ready, you’ll practice finding the thesis statement in the opening paragraph of an essay.
  8. What the topic in this introductory paragraph? What’s the thesis statement? See if you can identify them. When you’re ready to check your answers, click on the Play button.
  9. What the topic in this introductory paragraph? What’s the thesis statement? See if you can identify them.
  10. Test your knowledge of thesis statements. Are the statements effective or ineffective? After you decide, click on the statement to reveal the answer.
  11. Test your knowledge of thesis statements. Are the statements effective or ineffective? After you decide, click on the statement to reveal the answer.
  12. Your last assignmentfor this week is to post your thesis statement on Lizzie Borden on the Discussion Board. Make sure it includes both the topic and your opinion. Comment on the thesis statements of at least 2 other people in the class. Do you think they have written an effective thesis statement or a weak one? If it is weak, how can it be improved? Make sure to give specific comments and give the writer helpful comments, such as: “I’m not sure what your opinion is. Are you saying that Lizzie is guilty?”Also, comment on at least two other thesis statements. Are they effective? Do you think the writer’s opinion is valid? Directions will be posted on the Discussion Board. For now, click on the Play button to advance to the next slide.
  13. Congratulations! You have successfullyfinished your investigation of the Lizzie Borden murders. You have uncovered a lot of information about the profile essay, you have learned how to write an effective thesis statement, and you can correctly identify facts and opinions. If you’d like to dig a little deeper into Lizzie’s trial and the history behind her murderous hatchet, click on the Play button to advance to the next slide which has links to several additional resources. If you want to end the program, click on the Exit button. Once again, thanks for joining the investigation.