1. Only half the class thought our
idea was communicated clearly. To
improve further results we need to
work on our communication skills
Although the results are
somewhere in the middle some of
the class thought we were very
unprofessional and
unenthusiastic. To improve this
we could use body language and
Speak clearly and confidently
These results show that our class
were clearly not excited about or
film idea but I think this is because
we didn’t present the story clearly
enough for people to understand. If
we were to improve this we could
use visual aids such as props from
our film
Over half the class felt they weren’t
being directly addressed. This could be
improved by using more eye contact
with the audience.
Almost half the class thought our idea
was poor but I would put this down to
not clearly communicating the idea
leaving people confused about what it
actually is. To improve this we need to
explain the story in more detail and
make sure people understand fully.

2. Most of the class thought that we
answered questions confidently and
some thought we had an original idea
and good eye contact
Almost all of the class said that we
need more direct eye contact, more
open and relaxed body language and to
speak more clearly. I think this can be
improved as we get more confidence as
nerves contributed to the poorness of
these aspects.