Presented at Literary Linguistics in Composition & Literature: A Graduate Student Colloquium
The University of Akron
October 24, 2012
“The Stories Lawyers Tell: Linguistic Empathy in the Appellate Brief’s Statement of Facts”
Linguistic examination of the way that persuasive legal writing employs grammatical structures to gain empathy for clients.
2. Literary Linguistics in Nonfiction
Writing
•
Specific linguistic
components:
• Not
communication
• A narrative
framework
•
“Meta” language of
argumentation:
• Beyond rhetorical
moves
• And storytelling
devices
3. Legal Writing:
Memos vs. Briefs
Brief
Memo
•
•
Objective
Explores potential
arguments for a
case
•
•
Persuasive
Argues a particular
“version” of the
story of the case
5. Roadmap
•
Example Brief
•
Narrative vs. Communication Frameworks
•
Narrative Linguistic Devices:
• Kuno's Empathy Perspective
• Parentheticals
• Evaluative Vocabulary
6. The Story:
Margaret and Francie
“The Plot Thickens: The Appellate Brief as Story”
Kenneth D. Chestek
2007
7. •
•
Old York’s statue
prohibits same-sex
couples from
adopting
•
Key Facts of
the Case
Margaret Rubin and
Francie Kohler have a
son, Johnny (borne by
Francie)
Francie is killed,
leaving no will
•
Francie’s mother does
not want Johnny
9. Narrative Framework
Storytelling is not an
“illocutionary act.”
McCawley’s example
Brief example
•
*Fred said that once
upon a time there
were three little pigs.
•
“Margaret Rubin and
Francie Kohler only
wanted a child.”
•
Fred said that the third
little pig made his
house of straw. (sic)
•
*? We argue that M.R.
and F.K. only wanted
a child.
13. Empathy Perspective
Syntactic Prominence Principle
Sentence subject NP
No. of Sentences
14
Margaret, Francie, or both
Office of Children & Youth (OCY), Delia (caseworker)
4
Superior Court of Old York
3
Francie’s mother, Stella
3
State, Old York
2
Other
2
TOTAL
28
14. Empathy Perspective
Descriptor Empathy Hierarchy
“Stella, who never
approved of
Margaret’s
relationship with
Francie…”
VS.
Stella, who never
approved of
Francie’s relationship
with Margaret
15. Empathy Perspective
Word Order Empathy Hierarchy
Word Order Empathy Hierarchy
Margaret Rubin and Francie Kohler only wanted a child.
{Margaret’s and Francie’s commitment…}
Margaret and Francie were devoted to their dream, however.
Margaret and Francie went to Vermont…
Margaret and Francie went to several adoption agencies…
17. Paragrammatics
“... they decided, as
do many committed
couples, that they
wanted to raise a
family.”
Parentheticals
The voice of the
writer/narrator inserted
into the narrative
18. Paragrammatics
“…Ms. Clarke
recommended that
the adoption petition
be denied, solely on
the basis that
Margaret admitted
that she was a
lesbian.”
Evaluative
Vocabulary
Less obtrusive
commentary on the
narrative action
19. •
The purpose of the Appellate Brief is to persuade
the court to view a case (“story”) from a particular
POV.
•
To craft this POV, particularly in the Statement of
Facts, a legal writer should use narrative writing
techniques to present a persuasive case.
•
The narrative framework can be shown (and
used) linguistically.
In Conclusion
Notas del editor
Introduction--law school writing center--NOT a lawyer!
Based on my observations and research and conversations with LARW professors
Could be applicable to othertypes of persuasive writing, but this is what I’m immersed in!
The literary linguistics components indicate a narrative framework, versus communication paradigm.
These are part of a combination of “meta” language contained in argumentation: the rhetorical moves, the storytelling devices, and now, the specific linguistic pieces that we can point to that reflect these somewhat-amorphous categories. The linguistics are concrete.
Both have Statements of the Facts of the case. Memo must be objective, but the brief's will have a "slant"
Use of narrative in the field-
“Applied Legal Storytelling Conference”
Sample brief written as an example of using fiction devices in persuasive legal writing
taking the “boring” out of briefs, and using emotion to appeal to judges
James McCawley (“Speech Acts and Goffman’s Participant Roles”):
The only illocutionary {communication} acts that occur for a storyteller are “reports of what the teller said about the story, not what he said in telling it”
The first McCawley example is not “right” to our ears; the second is grammatically correct, but loses the effect of the story--same goes for the second example that I changed from the brief.
Kuroda used his native Japanese to easily illustrate the differences in the use of adjectives that show emotion or sensation: there is no grammatical way to use such adj with a 2nd or 3rd person pronoun in Japanese--because then the speaker would be representing the “feeler”--which is what a storyteller does: represents the character (writer “puts on” the persona and “feels”). The legal writer tries to act as storyteller-- to bring the experience of his “characters” closer to the reader.
With very specific uses of words by structuring them in key ways
The role of the persuasive writer is like that of a movie director, deciding which is the best perspective from which to tell the story. Where writers place their “cameras” influence where the reader’s empathy will most likely lie.
He outlines various principles that linguistically support this idea. Three of them are particularly relevant to our example brief.
FIRST
The writer gives “syntactic prominence” to the person that he wants the reader to empathize with.
Empathy resides with the subject of the sentence.
SECOND
The use of Margaret as the descriptor of the relationship (the “possessor”)--even though the subject of the sentence is FRANCIE’s mother--gives *extra* emphasis to her as the empathy subject (client).
THIRD
While these show Margaret and Francie as the topics of empathy, in fact Margaret is the true focus.
This rule shows that empathy resides with the “first” (left-most, in English) subject in plural constructions, of which Margaret is.
Paragrammar shifts the “footing” between the narrator (writer) telling the story and then commenting on the story. (ref. to previous discussion of The Three Little Pigs)
We will look at 2 exmaples: parentheticals and evaluative words
FIRST
Commenting on the action--
the contrast of the interruptive quality of the narrator’s “voice” brings the narrative quality more sharply into focus
Subtle way that the narrator/writer directs the emotional “direction” of the reader
EVALUATIVE ADVERB
*grammatically unnecessary; persuasively significant*
The implication, then, for teachers of persuasive writing especially, is that this type of narrative focus can be taught linguistically, not just in a general sense.