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   Structure is also basic



   Structure not clear
   Storyboard is better but still not clear

   We looked at films instead of documentaries

   Inspirational double page spread has
    minimum/ no annotation

   Slides need to be clear
   Slides are much more clearer

   Storyboard is detailed

   Structure is better/ more understandable

   Inspirational were annotated correctly

   Shot list was clear and detailed

   We looked into right documentaries and how they
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How we improved through drafts

  • 2. Hardly any location detail  Storyboard is too basic  Structure is also basic  Structure not clear
  • 3. Storyboard is better but still not clear  We looked at films instead of documentaries  Inspirational double page spread has minimum/ no annotation  Slides need to be clear
  • 4. Slides are much more clearer  Storyboard is detailed  Structure is better/ more understandable  Inspirational were annotated correctly  Shot list was clear and detailed  We looked into right documentaries and how they inspired us