5. T H I S D O E S N ’ T
S A Y A N Y T H I N G
A B O U T Y O U R
P R O D U C T .
U N I Q U E
C O M P A R E D T O
W H O / W H A T ?
B T W . . . Y O U ’ R E
P R O B A B L Y N O T
U N I Q U E .
" W E A R E
U N I Q U E ! "
6. "WE ARE THE AIRBNB,
UBER, WORDPRESS
of X,Y,Z Industry"
This is bad AND an overused analogy. At best you’re taking away
your own shine and giving it to billion dollar company, at worst you
are trying to piggyback on billion dollar company's success.
Not to mention you’re still not saying anything about your company
product.
Also, Uber is not an example of the sharing economy!
7. “WE’RE GOING TO CHANGE THE
WORLD/SEARCH/MOBILE
/BLOGGING/ETC.”
IT’S AWESOME IF YOU’RE CONFIDENT ABOUT YOUR PRODUCT, BUT THIS DOESN’T SAY ANYTHING, MAK
UNSUPPORTED CLAIM LIKE THIS SOUNDS WAY TOO COCKY. BE HUMBLE AND SHOW SOME HUMILITY, YOU N
HOW THE PERSON YOU’RE PITCHING CAN HELP YOU GO FORWARD.
18. L E T S N O T G E T
T R A P P E D I N A
S T O R M
...let's watch it in action
M A N Y T H A N K S T O J A S O N
C A L A C A N I S
WHO IS JASON CALACANIS? Co-founded Weblogs, Inc. in 2003, supported
by an angel investment from Mark Cuban. America Online agreed to buy
Weblogs, Inc. in 2005 for $25–30 million.
FUN FACT: Calacanis took delivery of 2 Tesla Model S cars. The first has the
serial number 00001