1. Shot/Script Breakdown Sheet
Retribution:
Detective – Tunde
Mass Killer – Michael
Tobi Jones –Tunde
News Reporter – Soliyana
Victim 1
Victim 2
Victim 3
Victim 4
Extras

2. Shot Sound Editing Setting
1 Green Screen Gangster Designed by
music starts director (me)
2 Establishing GM Fade (quick) Estate in
shot of block of continues Balham
flats/ estate
3 Low angle of GM Fade (quick) Stairs in the
tobi walking continues block
down stairs
4 Behind close GM music cut In block
up, waiting for (horror
lift sounds start)

3. Shot Sound Editing Setting
1 Shot of the Ding (HS cut In the block
button of lift continue)
being GM fades
out
2 Medium Shot Horror Slides into
in the lift as it sounds/ ‘Firework Films’
closes thunder logo then slides
out
3 Mid shot of Horror/ knife Fade to black In the lift
Tobi getting sounds
murdered
4 Black News Cuts to another
Reporter shot
speaks (VO)

4. Shot Sound Editing Setting
1 High Angle Silence Slow Fade In the Lift
shot of Tobi
dead in lift
2 Mid/CU shot of silence fade pub
David grieving
3 Mid/side shot Diegetic Cut In a room
of police Sound
interview
4 High Angle of Diegetic Cuts to black In a room
girl responding Sound)

5. Shot Sound Editing Setting
1 Black Phones Fade
Ringing
2 CU of David Diegetic cut Outside in
(Detective) on Sound – front of gates
phone to killer Horror fast
pace music
starts
3 LS of David Music gets Cut In a car Park
Jones running louder
to his car
4 David dragging Horror music Cut On estate
boy up on wall

6. Shot Sound Editing Setting
1 K1 Mid shot/ Horror cut toilets
Behind of girl SE(scream)/
in mirror music low
2 LS Chase Scene Music cont. cut On blocks
3 Chilling Scene Music cont. Cut Outside
4 K2 – Telephone Horror SE Cut On estate
Death – (bang)music
Pan/MS low

7. Shot Sound Editing Setting
1 Chase Scene – Horror music cut estate
Low Shots cont (fast)
2 Side MCU of Diegetic cut In a room
monster on top Sound –
of someone Horror fast
pace music
starts
3 K3 Music gets Cut In a car Park
louder
4 Someone Horror music Cut Street in
jumping to the Clapham
ground

8. Shot Sound Editing Setting
1 CU of girl with Slow Horror cut Dark room
tape round her SE, music
mouth slows/fades
2 K4 – door Music low, cut In house
slams MS and horror SE
moves back –
stab from back
3 Low Angle with Horror music Cut In a forest
Detective with low
gun
4 Pan Shot / MS Horror Cut Forest
of them SE(gunshot)
confronting music low

9. Shot Sound Editing Setting
1 Title Sequence Silence fades
2 CU of footsteps Footsteps fade toilet
SE/ horror
sounds
3 Low Shot of Silence Fade Toilet
Shoes in toilet
4 Murder and Bang (loud) Cut toilet
Face in scene