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Writing Business E-mails

          Dr. Debopriyo Roy
             University of Aizu
Fact
A recent UK study showed that 25% of the
workforce spent at least one hour per day
managing and writing business emails, of
which 34% were irrelevant.
1. Stop, think then write (or don't!)

 Are you emailing to say you’d telephone
  when the fax goes through? Is a phone call
  more appropriate? Choosing the right
  communication medium will increase your
  chance of being listened to.
2. Prevent premature sending
 To avoid sending a badly spelled, half
  written pile of rubbish, wait until you have
  written the email before you key in the
  recipient’s names. Hitting send too early is
  a painful, toe-curling experience.
3. Be professional
 You lose control of your email as soon as
  you hit 'Send' so stick to professional
  language. Out go all “ist” comments –
  racist, sexist, ageist, genderist (okay so I
  made that last one up but you get my drift).
  Even your own brand of oh-so-funny humor
  can cause offence in the wrong hands.
4. If in doubt, spell it out!
 How well you know your audience will
  dictate whether you use short hand, jargon,
  abbreviations and emoticons. If in doubt,
  spell it out! Always err on the side of being
  too polite and respectful, particularly when
  writing emails to business colleagues where
  translation may be required.
5. Be precise, concise and clear
   • Keep it brief
   • Use the subject header
   • Get to the point, quickly
   • Use “urgent” flags sparingly
   • Use bullets (did you see how I cunningly
    demonstrated by example?)
6. Tailor emails to your audience
 Always open emails with a hello and use the name
  that they signed off with, even if it’s
  crazyhorse38!

 If you must send the same email to loads of
  people, put their address in the bcc box and use
  just one email address in the To box . This keeps
  the person’s email address private and makes it
  look like you’ve taken the time to write a personal
  email.
7. Most people can’t read minds

 Writing an email to a career site requesting “all
  the stuff you have on getting a job” could at best
  land you with a load of bandwidth hungry
  information or at worst be ignored. The more
  specific you are, the more likely you are to get a
  response.

 If responding to multiple questions embedded in a
  large email, copy the questions into your email
  and write your answers next to them.
8. Keep your cool
 Your emotional state can slip into an email
  without notice, with curt sentences, skipped
  pleasantries and blunt asks. I purposefully let these
  emails gather dust until the person writes again in
  a more appropriate tone or picks up the phone.
  You wouldn’t tolerate someone coming to your
  desk and having a tantrum would you?

 TAKE OFF THE CAPS LOCK KEY. It’s rude to
  shout.
9. Need to know basis.
 A common business email warfare tactic is
  to cc in senior managers in the vain thought
  that this adds weight to the communication.
  Fight your fights in private so that when
  you really need someone else to step in,
  they know you mean it.
10. Be clean and tidy!
 Attachments clog up networks and spread viruses.
  Could the salient points be pasted into the email? If
  you value your PC, only open attachments if you trust
  the source. Use spam filters and delete chain emails
  or other scams and make the web world a better
  place.

 Writing business emails well can make you stand out
  in the corporate landscape. Writing them badly can
  do the same, but for very different reasons. These 10
  email writing tips will help you get it right.

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Introduction to Business Emails

  • 1. Writing Business E-mails Dr. Debopriyo Roy University of Aizu
  • 2. Fact A recent UK study showed that 25% of the workforce spent at least one hour per day managing and writing business emails, of which 34% were irrelevant.
  • 3. 1. Stop, think then write (or don't!)  Are you emailing to say you’d telephone when the fax goes through? Is a phone call more appropriate? Choosing the right communication medium will increase your chance of being listened to.
  • 4. 2. Prevent premature sending  To avoid sending a badly spelled, half written pile of rubbish, wait until you have written the email before you key in the recipient’s names. Hitting send too early is a painful, toe-curling experience.
  • 5. 3. Be professional  You lose control of your email as soon as you hit 'Send' so stick to professional language. Out go all “ist” comments – racist, sexist, ageist, genderist (okay so I made that last one up but you get my drift). Even your own brand of oh-so-funny humor can cause offence in the wrong hands.
  • 6. 4. If in doubt, spell it out!  How well you know your audience will dictate whether you use short hand, jargon, abbreviations and emoticons. If in doubt, spell it out! Always err on the side of being too polite and respectful, particularly when writing emails to business colleagues where translation may be required.
  • 7. 5. Be precise, concise and clear  • Keep it brief  • Use the subject header  • Get to the point, quickly  • Use “urgent” flags sparingly  • Use bullets (did you see how I cunningly demonstrated by example?)
  • 8. 6. Tailor emails to your audience  Always open emails with a hello and use the name that they signed off with, even if it’s crazyhorse38!  If you must send the same email to loads of people, put their address in the bcc box and use just one email address in the To box . This keeps the person’s email address private and makes it look like you’ve taken the time to write a personal email.
  • 9. 7. Most people can’t read minds  Writing an email to a career site requesting “all the stuff you have on getting a job” could at best land you with a load of bandwidth hungry information or at worst be ignored. The more specific you are, the more likely you are to get a response.  If responding to multiple questions embedded in a large email, copy the questions into your email and write your answers next to them.
  • 10. 8. Keep your cool  Your emotional state can slip into an email without notice, with curt sentences, skipped pleasantries and blunt asks. I purposefully let these emails gather dust until the person writes again in a more appropriate tone or picks up the phone. You wouldn’t tolerate someone coming to your desk and having a tantrum would you?  TAKE OFF THE CAPS LOCK KEY. It’s rude to shout.
  • 11. 9. Need to know basis.  A common business email warfare tactic is to cc in senior managers in the vain thought that this adds weight to the communication. Fight your fights in private so that when you really need someone else to step in, they know you mean it.
  • 12. 10. Be clean and tidy!  Attachments clog up networks and spread viruses. Could the salient points be pasted into the email? If you value your PC, only open attachments if you trust the source. Use spam filters and delete chain emails or other scams and make the web world a better place.  Writing business emails well can make you stand out in the corporate landscape. Writing them badly can do the same, but for very different reasons. These 10 email writing tips will help you get it right.