1. Surverys and Peer Feedback
Name Elliot
Gender Male
Age 18
Could it be improved? Yes but there’s a limit to what you can achieve
How could it be improved? Include big name celebrities
Why would it be improved? Possibly make it less sporty and more casual
Is the target audience appropriate? Yes
How long should it be? 45-60 seconds
Name Georgina
Gender Female
Age 17
Could it be improved? It’s been done before try and do something different and out of
the box.
How could it be improved? By being creative so your audience remember it
Why would it be improved? To make it noticeable and stand out
Is the target audience appropriate? The target audience is to wide and should be narrowed down
How long should it be? 45 seconds

2. Name Josh
Gender Male
Age 18
Could it be improved? Possibly
How could it be improved? Celebrity endorsement
Why would it be improved? To make it more appealing more appealing to viewers
Is the target audience appropriate? Yes
How long should it be? 60-90 seconds
Name Freddie
Gender Male
Age 19
Could it be improved? Add strobe lights and more colours.
How could it be improved? Above
Why would it be improved? Above above
Is the target audience appropriate? I think it should be 15-25 year olds
How long should it be? 40 seconds