1. “DAMAGED- GRAVES”
By
[Ellie Fleming]

2. EXT. ABANDONED AREA- DAY
A shot of the damaged logo is viewed as the introduction of
the song begins.
Sweetman backs away from the logo and focuses on it.
Sweetman plays the introduction to the song.
INT. MUSIC VENUE- NIGHT
A shot of Tweek smiling at the crowd and fiddling with his
drumsticks.
Sweetman kisses the camera crew.
EXT. ABANDONED AREA- DAY
A shot of the entire band is viewed. They are preparing for
the introduction to finish, and seem rather calm. This is
to show the difference in energy as the verse begins.
Sweetman plays the introduction to the song.
INT. MUSIC VENUE- NIGHT
Sweetman interacts with the crowd, displaying a
considerable amount of energy as the verse of the song
begins. The crowd is just as enthusiastic.
EXT. ABANDONED AREA- DAY
Tweekbegins playing the drums with a lot of energy. There
are many shots following of each band member playing their
instrument.
INT. MUSIC VENUE- NIGHT
Sweetman is on the floor motioning in a relatable way to
the lyrics; „Throw away the key‟.
EXT. ABANDONED AREA- DAY
Continued shots of the band playing along to the lyrics.
Several separate shots of each band member playing
aggressively.
INT. MUSIC VENUE- NIGHT
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3. Sweetman stomps his feet in synchronisation with the
drumbeat, linking to the vocals; „Break me, break me‟.
The crowd shouts along to the lyrics, „Break me!‟
EXT. ABANDONED AREA- DAY
The band is still playing to the song.
INT. MUSIC VENUE- NIGHT
Aidan is head- banging.
Shot of Tweek playing the drums.
Sweetman wraps the microphone cord around his neck to
relate to the lyrics; „Tell me this is causality‟.
EXT. ABANDONED AREA- DAY
Sweetman tugs on his necklace to fit with the lyrics „tied
to the chains.‟
A close- up shot of Aidan‟s bass.
Tweek is still drumming with a lot of passion and stares at
the camera playfully.
INT. MUSIC VENUE- NIGHT
A shot of the crowd singing along to the lines. They look
as if they are shouting at the top of their voice, so they
can be slightly heard over the music.
Tweek smiles at the crowd as he plays the drums.
Aidan head bangs with aggression along with the crowd.
A member of the crowd runs along on top of another member.
EXT. ABANDONED AREA- DAY
Sweetman stares up to the sky as he sings the lyrics, „the
vultures circle in the sky‟.
A shot of Tweek playing drums.
Aidan jumps into the air with his bass, kicking his legs
out.
A shot of Tweek playing drums.
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4. A shot of Sweetman smiling; relating to the lyrics, „And
still I smile, yeah I fucking smile!‟
A shot of Aidan head-banging.
INT. MUSIC VENUE- NIGHT
A shot of the audience moshing to the music. Certain crowd
members are being carried by others and shoved in all
directions.
A shot of Tweek playing the drums.
EXT. ABANDONED AREA- DAY
A shot of Tweek playing the drums.
A shot of Aidan aggressively playing the bass.
A shot of the band playing.
A shot of Tweek playing the drums.
INT. MUSIC VENUE- NGHT
A shot of Sweetman head- banging
A shot of the crowd.
A shot of Tweek playing drums.
A shot of the crowd making a „wall of death‟.
A shot of Sweetman halting the crowd
EXT. ABANDONED AREA- DAY
A shot of the band preparing for the breakdown to end.
A shot of Aidan.
INT. MUSIC VENUE- NIGHT
A shot of Sweetman directing the crowd into each other as
the music continues.
A shot of Aidan head-banging.
A shot of Tweek playing the drums.
A shot of Sweetman joining in with the chaos of the crowd.
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5. EXT. ABANDONED AREA- DAY
A shot of the band playing.
A shot of Tweek playing the drums.
A shot of Sweetman‟s guitar.
INT. MUSIC VENUE- NIGHT
A shot of the crowd.
A shot of Sweetman punching the air.
A shot of the band playing.
A shot of Sweetman joining in with the crowd, yelling
„Break me!‟
EXT. ABANDONED AREA- DAY
A shot of Aidan‟s bass.
A shot of the band playing.
A shot of Tweek playing the drums.
A shot of Sweetman playing his guitar.
A shot of Sweetman grabbing his shirt, as he sings, „Tied
to the chains, you break me down.‟
INT. MUSIC VENUE- NIGHT
A shot of Tweek playing drums.
A shot of the crowd.
A shot of Aidan playing bass.
A shot of Sweetman on the floor singing aggressively to the
crowd.
A shot of Tweek playing drums.
A shot of Sweetman singing.
EXT. ABANDONED AREA- DAY
A shot of Sweetman playing his guitar and singing.
A shot of Tweek playing drums.
A shot of Aidan playing bass.
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6. A shot of the band playing.
A shot of Aidan playing bass.
A shot of the band playing.
A shot of Sweetman singing and playing his guitar.
INT. MUSIC VENUE- NIGHT
A shot of the band thanking the audience and preparing for
the next song.
THE END
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