15. Let's have a look at an example of 'bad' writing in a business email, and how to turn it into a perfect specimen. Business Email Version 1 Joan Doe, thanks for your interest in a trading with partnership Ray International. But we are mainly looking for trading partners in europe, so we are unsure about how to make the right fit with your offer at present. U can call me in a month to talk further about possibl deals.. later, robert ceo ray International
17. And now also make some small hand edits Hi Joan Doe, Thank you for your interest in a trading with partnership Ray International. However, we are mainly looking for trading partners in Europe, so we are unsure about how to make the right fit with your offer at present. You can call me in a month to talk further about possible deals. I look forward to hearing from you, Thanks & Regards, Robert Neat CEO Ray International
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