Education

1. Sentence with the mistake
Correct sentence
Even though she was grown up within a
conservated ideology….
Even though she had grown up/was raised
within a conservative family….
This situation made her to be convinced
about leaving her family and friends…
This situation convinced her to leave her
family and friends…
…and making them lose a big sum of
money as a fact of teenager rebellion
…and making them lose a big sum of
money as an act of teenage rebellion
He writes his memories on a prison cell on
the eve of his execution
He writes his memoirs in a prison cell on
the eve of his execution

2. However, is this “love atmosphere” the
solely thing what matters?
However, is this “love atmosphere” the
only/sole thing that matters?
Hence, by despising high quality themes
and elements….
Therefore, by despising high quality
themes and elements….
People who argue that there are noticeable
similarities between Romeo and Juliet and
The Great Gatsby is due to the fact that
both works deal with time issues….
People claiming that there are noticeable
similarities between Romeo and Juliet and
The Great Gatsby argue that both works
deal with time issues….
…this german classic unfolds the stay of
Hans Castorp in this institution…

3. …this German classic unfolds with Hans
Castorp entering this institution…
However, is not a perfect book, because
neither in life nor in novels is possible to
reach perfection
However, it is not a perfect book, because
neither in life nor in novels is it possible to
reach perfection
The plot of this film is unpredictable
because not only it is packed with laughs,
but it also includes violence.
The plot of this film is unpredictable
because not only is it packed with laughs,
but it is also particularly moving.
In addition of the actors’ performing it is
important to notice that the setting has
been specially cared this time.
In addition to the actors’ performance it is
important to highlight that special

4. care/attention has been given to the
setting.
By that moment, at the beginning of the
story, Christopher thinks as us.
At that moment, at the beginning of the
story, Christopher thinks as we do.
So that the spectator witnesses the
development and inside growing of both of
them
So that the spectator witnesses the inner
development of both of them
As well, we must consider that all the
involved people, director, guionist… are
first-level professionals
Furthermore, we must consider that all the
people involved, director, screen / script
writer… are top-notch professionals

5. The brilliant performance of the actors,
who make you wilful to know more in
every moment
The brilliant performance of the actors,
that leaves you constantly willing to know
more
A remarkable characteristic is the
heterogeneous group of characters that
the series shows, some of which represent
people from Baltimore.
A remarkable characteristic is the
heterogeneous group of characters that
the series shows, some of whom represent
people from Baltimore.
I’d recommend the movie for relaxing and
stopping thinking for a while
I’d recommend the movie to relax / unwind
and stop thinking for a while.

6. The performance is incredibly transmiting
and the love phases very touchy
The performance is incredibly moving and
the love scenes very touching