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-I think this is because capitalism on the early 19th was
uncomprehensible, and so the book is at the beginning is.
I think this is because capitalism in the early 19th century was
incomprehensible, and so the book is as well.
-After this I will analize the dialogue of Laura and Don, and then I am
likely to draw any conclusions.
After this I will analyze Laura and Don’s conversation and then I will
draw some conclusions
-The reason why Clare decided to settle things with the plaintiffs is
because the costs that would take to go to court and lose the suit
would be much higher than just paying a couple of indemnizations.
The reason why Clare decided to settle with the plaintiffs is because
the cost associated with going to court and losing the lawsuit
would be much higher than just paying compensations.
-(Two stories). The first of which is the story of a company, Clare,
since its origins in 1830, to actual days.
The first of which is the story of a company, Clare, since its origins in
1830, to current days.
-It is because of Clare’s chemicals that Laura suffers this disease and,
ironic enough, only this company’s treatments can save her.
It is because of Clare’s chemicals that Laura suffers from this disease
and, ironically enough, only this company’s treatments can save her.
-Companies no longer care about people´s rights nor, at last, about
their lives.
Companies no longer care about people´s rights nor, in the
end/eventually, about their lives.
-Is it worth the gain in business the loss in life.
Is the gain in business worth the loss in life/the loss of lives?

2. -New companies have to pursuit the image of a company that can
grow (be better) without only looking at their benefits.
New companies have to pursue the image of a company that can
grow (be better) without only looking at their profits /New
companies have to pursue an image emphasizing growth as
opposed to merely profits.
-It was cheaper for them to pay the plaintiffs not only because the
demand would come to an end and they won’t have to fight justice
but also because if they go to fight justice they know there are too
many proves.
It was cheaper for them to pay the plaintiffs not only because the
lawsuit would come to an end and they wouldn’t have to fight for
their rights but also because if they did so there would be too
much evidence.
-The book is centered on Clare’s story, how was it founded and when,
who founded, how did clare put a fabric in Lacewood….
The book is centered on the story of Clare, its foundation and how
the company sets up a factory in Lacewood….
-Richard thinks businesses have no morale and follow no ethical
codes at all.
Richard thinks businesses have no moral values and follow no
ethical codes at all.
-I believe that any businesses in the world need profit to survive.
I believe that any business in the world needs profit to survive.
Richard changes this concept of the company to other one where they
must grow, no matter how.

3. Richard changes the/his concept of the company to another one
where it must grow, no matter how.
Richard is trying to make a parallelism between Laura and Clare.
Richard is trying to draw a parallel between Laura and Clare.
As it can be seen in Gain, companies’ craving for profits without
caring about harming the environment (…)
As can be seen in Gain, companies crave profits without caring
about harming the environment (…)
It has got hard to companies like Clare to keep selling toxic products
without being noticed, (…)
It has become hard for companies like Clare to keep selling toxic
products without being noticed, (…)
Well, actually it seems that society is far away of getting worried
about such stuff.
Well, actually it seems that society is far from getting worried about
such issues.
The affected ones want to make bad businesspeople pay due to they
have caused what the first ones are suffering.
The victims want to give businesspeople the taste of their own
medicine.