1. Sentence with the mistake(s)  CORRECTION
1. …but Asian adults are working in semi-slavery conditions
just so companies can save some cents.  a few.
2. …the business is now only thinking about benefits 
profits
3. …he gives a controversed but interesting idea…  he
gives a controversial yet interesting
4. However, alongside the book, we see that the recovering
is being very complicated… throughout/ recovery
5. It is in this situations when you… these
6. I consider that Richard Powers wills to reflect the effects
that capitalism has not only on particulars, but also… 
intends/ individuals.
7. However, we also have the Clare Inc, whose toxics are
incrementing Cancer’s rate on people.  toxic
waste/increasing/ THE cancer rate
8. …for no apparent reason like family history or strong
exposure to sun rays.  other than
9. …capitalism is put in a bad way in the book  criticized
10. …enterprises like Clare are way more concerned
about… much more (way is too colloquial)
11. To conclude, I think business world should be
controlled…  the business world
12. The majority of Lacewood’s population worked in Clare
or has to do something with it.  had something to do
13. …cancer caused by chemical plants and to concenciate
the society of the danger…  society/raise awareness on
the danger

2. 14.Business is something that can be seen as a good and
positive thing, but also as something dangerous. Richard
Powers’ point of view while writing this book is the same. 
illustrates this dichotomy.
15. It provides with jobs to the majority of the town´s
population  provides the majority of the population with
jobs
16. On one hand, Richard Powers writes about corporation
growth  On the one hand
17… Can affect society in a negative way specially when
negative consequences occur  especially.
Specially=specifically, made to measure /
Especially=particularly
18…what the author´s point of view on business-wise
was… on business OR business-wise
19 … and fight for their ideal world, where profits could not
consist in people´s harm and diseases  would not /
consist in harming people.
20 …prefers a little money than taking Clare down to
prevent what happened to Laura to happen to other people
 from happening.
21. …making the conclusion that all these multinationals
are disrespectful and nocives  drawing - reaching -
arriving to / harmful
22. The mixture of feelings was born wherever the great
deal of a business’s influence should be left to the human
character.  arises / a great deal/ is
23. we see how unfairly it is becoming to keep up and
compete…  unfair