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Today…peer editing
• Once you are in groups, share your Google
Doc with each other. Make sure you’ve
shared with me as well.
• I will make suggestions today, and your final
copy is due MONDAY.
+
Today…peer editing
• Things to look for:
• Short paragraphs
• Quotes stand alone
• No I, we, you
• No editorializing/bias—no reporter opinion!
+
Today…peer editing
• Things to look for:
• Grade Name said for 1st time…after
that, ONLY LAST NAME
• Senior Megan Martinez said.
• Martinez said. Not Megan said.
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News story peer editing

  • 1. + Today…peer editing • Once you are in groups, share your Google Doc with each other. Make sure you’ve shared with me as well. • I will make suggestions today, and your final copy is due MONDAY.
  • 2. + Today…peer editing • Things to look for: • Short paragraphs • Quotes stand alone • No I, we, you • No editorializing/bias—no reporter opinion!
  • 3. + Today…peer editing • Things to look for: • Grade Name said for 1st time…after that, ONLY LAST NAME • Senior Megan Martinez said. • Martinez said. Not Megan said.
  • 4. +