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ENEMY
by
Amy Jackson, Mario Mantillas and Kiaran O’leary
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CUT IN
INT. SCENE- PHONE RECORDING OF LOLA ATTACKING HER VICTIM
In the frame an unknown person receives a text CLOSE UP which
has a link of a video showing Lola attacking her victim. The
recording shows Lola verbally abusing her victim and being
provoked resulting in Lola pulling out a knife. The video cuts
and the audience is left with a pause of the end caption of
the video in the unknown persons hand.
LOLA
Who do you think your starting on?
VICTIM 1
Shut up you skank, no one even likes
you any more
Lola runs up to the victim and continues to shout abuse, after
giving in to temptation she pushes her opponent to the ground
and walks off.
FADE TO:
EXT. SCENE- LOLA GOES HOME BUT RUNS AWAY
MEDIUM SHOT LOW ANGLE. Lola walks up to her front door. CLOSE
UP Of Lola putting a key in the door and as she turns the key
diegetic sound of her mum screaming. MEDIUM SHOT Lola runs
away.
CUT TO:
EXT. SCENE- PARK WITH THE ENEMY - AFTERNOON
LONG SHOT. lola walks into the park and runs into a group of
girls who shout out offensive comments MEDIUM SHOT, provoking
lola to retaliate and start a verbal fight with one of the
girls in particular MEDIUM CLOSE UP. The dispute dies down as
result of lola walking away TRACKING SHOT.
VICTIM
err look at her trainers
LOLA
what! say that
again? go on, i
dare ya
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VICTIM
look. at. your. trainers.
Lola walks away from the group of girls, ignoring their com-
ments as they shout abuse.
INT. SCENE- LOLAS HOUSE - MORNING
MEDIUM SHOT. Lolas dad attacks her mum - not in the scene
which wakes lola up CLOSE UP. She rushes to get ready for
school, so she doesnt witness any more abuse MEDIUM SHOT.
DIEGETIC SPEECH OF THE DAD SHOUTING
DAD
your fucking useless, all you do is moan
DIEGETIC SOUNDS OF PHYSICAL BANGS
Lola runs down the stairs MEDIUM SHOT
INT. SCENE- LOLA GETS WEAPON
Lola is seen from a LOW ANGLE SHOT running down the stairs and
enters the kitchen MEDIUM OVER THE SHOULDER SHOT. CLOSE UP
Lola takes a knife from the kitchen draw CAMERA PAUSE. FADE IN
Lola goes out the door. CUTS TO Lola speed walking down the
drive.
DIEGETIC SOUND OF FRONT DOOR BANGING
INT. CLASSROOM AGGRAVATION
OVER THE SHOULDER MEDIUM SHOT. The two victims are whispering
causing Lola to get paranoid. EYE LINE MATCH of Lola looking
at the clock. CUTS TO CLOSE UP of the clock.
EXT. LOLA REFLECTS ON HER ACTIONS
At the end of school Lola chases after the victims out of the
school gates. This scene shows the end of the video that was
shown at the beginning of the film. Teachers run over to de-
fuse the situation.
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Teacher
Stop girls!
LONG SHOT Lola gets taken away in slow motion and the camera
FADES OUT CUT to end credits.