2. DELIA RAHELA DAN
What Went Well? Even Better If ?
• Delia’s used a colourful theme • Delia’s blog would have been
whilst designing her blog, this even better if she included
shows the examiner that she has comments at the end of all her
taken time effort and thought projects and tasks, this could
when making her blog. have worked in her favour as it
would have shown the examiner
what she exactly done whilst
• Delia has evidence of all her completing all her projects and
projects and project drafts in tasks.
bedded onto her blog.
• Delia has made a few spelling
• Delia’s storyboard, teachers errors on her blog.
review, final draft and script are
all in date and time order, this
shows the examiner that she is • Delia should have asked her
organised and understands how fellow peers for their options on
to keep a well managed and well her work after every draft she
maintained blog. produced.
3. MILKA ERKO
What Went Well? Even Better If ?
• Milka used a colourful theme • Milka didn’t include comments at
whilst designing her blog, this
shows the examiner that she the end of each of her tasks and
has taken time effort and drafts.
thought when making her blog.
• Milka added some details about
• Milka has a well organised and herself in the section provided by
effective group meeting blog,
this will show the examiner that ‘blogger’ to let the examiner
she was very organised and know about some of her
prepared whilst conducting her hobbies, interests and plans.
project.
• If some film reviews and more
• Milka work is in date/time order
and is well labelled and information about why Milka
organised. chose to use her selected genre
whilst producing her media
project.
4. SIMILARITIES
• Both Delia and Milka’s blogs are colourful and have attractive
backgrounds to capture the viewers eye and attention.
• Both Delia and Milka’s blogs are well managed and organised, they work
is all in time and date order and is well labelled and titled clearly.
• Both Delia and Milka’s blogs show evidence of peer, self and teacher
assessments.
• Both Delia and Milka have inbedded their work into their blogs correctly
and efficiently.
5. Evidence of drafts, scripts and
Evidence of group evaluation at the end
improved opening sequence.
of project.
6. Evidence of a group meeting Evidence of teacher and peer
log. assessments.