4. Most Common Errors
They’re vs. Their vs. There
Your vs. You’re
Its vs. It’s
Who’s vs. Whose
Affect vs. Effect
Me vs. I
Peek vs. peak (and pique, but
whatever)
Who vs. That vs. Which
13. Active Voice
• I love those chicken wings.
• Subject – verb – object
Passive Voice
• Those chicken wings are loved by me.
• Object – passive verb – subject
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Identifying Passive Voice
14. “To be” is the most basic verb in the English language. It can also be
the most overused.
Forms of “Be”
• I am;
• You are; We are; They are;
• He/she/it is;
• I was;
• You were; We were; They were;
• He/she/it was;
• I have been; I am being;
Easily form passive sentences by relying on “be”
To Be or Not to Be
15. Easily form passive sentences by relying on
“be”
“The skull was made by Hamlet in arts and crafts.”
“Hamlet made that skull in arts and crafts.”
No matter what something is or might be, there
will almost certainly be a better action verb to
tell your story.
Easy ways to avoid:
• Stay away from “due to” or “because of”
• Get active
• Our groups are often split by our teacher.
• Our teacher often splits our groups.
• Get rid of padding in your sentences
To Be or Not to Be
16. Literary Devices
Metaphors – (Two things are the same)
He is just as sharp as a tack.
Analogies – (Like/as comparison) Mike’s
jokes land like a bag of rotting garbage.
Alliteration – Frank frantically followed.
Colloquial Language – Does a wild bear
crap in the woods?
24. Do Less
7th – 8th grade reading level
Short paragraphs
Use bullets
Don’t use a $10 word when a $5 word will suffice. Better
yet, but that for a dollar.
Avoid jargon unless it’s required.
Get rid of adjectives
• Adjectives are messy and mean different things to different people
25.
26. Keep It Simple
“Airtight privacy controls on your accounts can be
an effective way to keep potential employees from
finding personal information, but it’s not always
the best protection for everyone.
“Making your accounts private builds an extra
barrier between you and employers, but it is not a
perfect protection.”
27. Great content should be…
• „Customer‟ focused
• Authentic
• Compelling
• Entertaining
• Surprising
• Valuable
• Interesting
On Writing
28. Truth – Even if it’s not truth, it has to have truth within it.
Even if you have no specific experience, you have
experience that can relate to your content.
Relevance – Content has to matter.
Passion – Need to care about what you’re writing.
Human Element –Even if the post is more of a business
article, you can relate content to what makes a manager
tick. Find their hurt.
Originality – Not new, but bring a fresh perspective.
Surprise – Don’t stick to just the common place, bring an
unexpected twist – and surprise can take many forms.
On Writing
29. Finding Your Voice
Voice
• How you write
• Research the field
• Fit your audience
• Empathy is crucial
• Don‟t write to limits
30.
31. Finding Your Voice
Write What You Know
Personal filter is the most important
thing
Write Basic Points or Subheadings
- Dont Outline
Consumption experts
33. ANYTHING can be a story
• Start with a headline, then research
• Content Food Chain
• Not repurposing or cannibalizing
• Dig deep for new ideas
Thinking of Content
35. On Writing
Relax
• Be natural
• Tell a story
• Lose the buzzwords (not the keywords)
• Be informal, figurative
• Grammar can be flexible
Be Original
• To a point
• Originality is elusive, perspective is
inherent
• Oakley Hall – “Steal wisely.”
36. On Writing
Be Confident and Back It Up
• Readers can sense BS
• Have proof
• Believe what you‟re writing
Two types of content:
• Help someone learn
• Personal accounts
Get people to ask Questions
Write to Your Strengths
Notas del editor
Note exceptions like when you don’t know what might have happened or there is no clear action.