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Kristina D’Arcangelo                                                                 D’Arcangelo 1


Professor David DiSarro


English 101


20 February 2013


                              Energy Drinks Should be Banned or Regulated


       Americans are known for expressing themselves, enjoying their freedom, showing off

their livelihood, and living in a fast-paced world. Every day, people are stressed out, rushing

between school, work, sports, and their social lives, causing them to overwork and exhaust

themselves. All of this hustle-bustle can lead to fatigue and a feeling of crashing or burning out,

which in turn leads them to turn to a boost of caffeine. For the past 100 years, the number one

jolt of caffeine came from a cup of coffee; however, energy drinks are now increasingly popular.

Almost half of the youth in America have said they drink energy drinks regularly or have tried an

energy drink more than once, looking for a hefty dose of caffeine (“Energy Drinks Pose” para 1).

This increase in the consumption of energy drinks has many side effects on teenagers, most of

which are negative. Kids think they are helping themselves stay awake and can accomplish

much more after drinking an energy drink, but what they do not know is that these drinks can

lead to many health problems such as dizziness, high blood pressure, obesity, heart attacks, and

even death (“Energy Drinks Pose” para 2). Through much investigation and research from

creditable doctors and scientists, it is evident that energy drinks are extremely dangerous to

adolescents, and should be banned in the United States or at least regulated, including modifying

the amount of harmful ingredients or the minimum age in which you are allowed to purchase

these harmful drinks.
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       According to a journal published by The New York Times, in 2012, the energy drink

industry had approximately $10 billion in sales (para 4). The majority of these consumers were

under the age of 35, (Meier, para 4). Most young adults are unaware that the manufacturers of

these drinks market their products as dietary supplements. In doing this, these drinks are not

regulated by the Food and Drug Administration. The negative effect of this is that manufacturers

are not limited to amount of caffeine they use in the making of these drinks, and they do not even

have to disclose this information or other harmful ingredients (McLellan and Lieberman, para 8).

The majority of these “miracle” drinks actually have extremely high amounts of dangerous and

damaging ingredients such as caffeine, ginseng, glucose, guarana, taurine. Most energy drinks

contain about 140-170 milligrams of caffeine in a 14-16oz can (“Caffeine” para 1). This is

double the amount of caffeine in and 8oz cup of coffee. Caffeine stimulates the nervous system,

and in excessive amounts can cause dizziness, headaches, jitteriness, and you will become unable

to fall asleep (“Energy Drinks Pose” para 2). When consuming this amount of caffeine in one

serving, adolescents become wired, only to significantly crash sooner than later. Energy drinks

also contain about 50-60 grams of glucose or sugar. This level of sugar in the blood can cause

insulin to go through the ceiling, which leads to the inability to burn fat, in turn causing obesity,

(“Glucose” para 1). This is misleading because most energy drinks are marketed to increase

productivity and weight lost from the high increase of energy, but they actually contain too much

sugar to burn off. Adolescents are misled, because these drinks can actually cause obesity.

Guarana is also an ingredient commonly found in these drinks. Guarana comes from a South

American shrub and is also loaded with caffeine. In comparison to a coffee bean, a seed from

guarana has 4-5% caffeine, where as a coffee bean only has 1-2% caffeine, (“Guarana” para 1).
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The combination of these ingredients in high dosages can be extremely harmful to person’s

health and can even cause death.


       Another dangerous fascination with energy drinks in mixing them with alcohol.

According to a survey, as many as 51% of college students reported they had mixed alcohol with

an energy drink, (Howland and Damarispara 1). This is extremely dangerous because of the high

level of stimulants such as taurine, ginseng, and caffeine in energy drinks. Alcohol is a

depressant, so when the two opposites are mixed together, it sends mixed signals to the central

nervous system and also causes cardio problems, (Howland and Damarispara 2). Also, alcohol

severely dehydrates people, causing intoxication. The high levels of caffeine and glucose in the

energy drinks also causes dehydration, and when the two are mixed together the combination

causes the person to be increasingly intoxicated. This high level of caffeine also adds to a

person’s impaired judgment. Typically, a person drinking alcohol mixed with an energy drink is

perceived to be “more drunk” then a person just drinking alcohol; however, it does depend on the

person’s height and weight. This combination of alcohol and high levels of caffeine and other

harmful ingredients can be deadly. Adolescents are not even old enough to consume or purchase

alcohol, so equally should not be old enough to consume or purchase energy drinks. A notable

British health website concurs, advising, “Redbull should not be drunk with alcohol, or after

exercising,” (“Mail Online”para 1). They also reported three cases of death from these

situations. The same website also states that Norway, Denmark, and France have banned energy

drinks from all stores except for pharmacies, (“Mail Online”para 8). The reason for this is

because they consider energy drinks as medicine or a drug due to its high caffeine content (Smith

1).
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       The New York Times reported in 2011, that there were 20,783 reported emergency room

visits in which an energy drink was cited as the primary cause of or a contributing factor to a

health problem, (Meier para 3). In 2007, 10,068 people reported emergency room visits again

citing energy drinks as the cause, (Meier para 3). They also stated that there were no numbers

submitted for 2012. "Such problems, which are typically linked to excessive caffeine

consumption, can include anxiety, headaches, irregular heartbeats and heart attacks," (Meier para

3). These statistics demonstrate that the number of cases of emergency room visits in the United

States doubled between 2007 and 2011. Adolescents need to take this into account, and realize

that if nothing is regulated with these energy drinks, the rate of emergency room visits and even

deaths will continue to increase.


       Energy drinks are extremely dangerous whether mixed with alcohol or consumed by

itself. At least 20 cases have been noted over the past 5 years in which the situation was deadly,

(Meier para 8). In one particular case, a 14-year-old girl, Anais Fournier, from Hagerstown,

Maryland, died in December, 2011. One thing to consider is Fournier did have a heart condition

known as mitral valve prolapse. The affects of this condition includes one of the heart valves to

malfunction. Fournier was shopping at a local mall the night of December 16, 2011, when she

purchased a 24-ounce can of “Monster” energy drink. On December 17, 2011 she drank a

second 24-ounce can of the same energy drink. Apparently she consumed two 24-ounce cans of

this energy drink within 24 hours. Later that night on December 17, 2011, she was allegedly at

home watching TV with her boyfriend when she unexpectedly went into cardiac arrest. Her

parents immediately brought her to Meritus Medical Center, and she was later flown to John

Hopkins Hospital. Doctors at the John Hopkins Hospital were forced to place her in an induced
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coma to keep her brain from swelling; however, she never regained consciousness. On

December 23, 2011, she was declared brain dead and her parents had to make an unfortunate

decision to pull her off life support. The parent of Anais Fournier are now filing a wrongful

death law suit against the Monster Beverage Corporation. Perhaps her mother, Wendy

Crossman, stated it best, “I was shocked to learn the FDA can regulate caffeine in a can of soda,

but not these huge energy drinks. With their bright colors and names like Monster, Redbull, and

Full Throttle, these drinks are targeting teenagers with no oversight or

accountability,”(Bonurapara 5). This is true because the energy drinks certainly target young

adolescents with their color schemes and advertisement, suggesting that kids can boost their

energy and productivity with one can, not knowing what harmful ingredients really lay beneath

its eye-catching marketing. Her mother also stated, “These drinks are death traps for young,

developing girls and boys, like my daughter, Anais,” (Bonurapara 8). Obviously, the Monster

corporation is fighting the allegations, claiming that the allegations of the product were not

responsible for the death of Anais Fournier. “Caffeine can be lethal in doses ranging from 200 to

400 milligrams,” (Bonurapara 10). The two cans of Monster energy drink that Anais consumed

contained 480 milligrams of caffeine which is equal to fourteen 12-ounce cans of soda. In

addition to the caffeine, Monster also contains guarana, which contains caffeine and taurine.

Taurine is said to have similar effects on cardiac mussels, (Bonurapara 15).


       The use of energy drinks should be banned for the sale to adolescences under the age of

18, or at least regulated. We should not give naive children under the age of 18 the opportunity

to hurt themselves by consuming an energy drink. Under age children are not allowed to buy

harmful tobacco products that have long term negative effects, nor should they be able to buy
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energy drinks, which may have immediate damaging side effects. The high levels of caffeine

and other damaging ingredients should be reduced or controlled. There should be a limit to the

number of dangerous ingredients that can be used in formulating an energydrink, including

limiting the percentage of each ingredient. It is proven that these drinks can negatively affect a

person’s heart rate, blood pressure, cholesterol, motor activity including speech rate, alertness

and body temperature, which adolescents are unable to detect from the list of ingredients. They

are unaware of what ingredients are actually put into these drinks, and if they are not regulated,

the manufactures may continue to increase the levels of destructive ingredients to add an

increased “jolt” in these drinks. The false advertisement aiming toward adolescents is

destructive and misleading. If nothing is done to regulate these products, the rate of emergency

room visits and death will unfortunately increase and become a reoccurring event.
D’Arcangelo 7

                                    Works Cited


Bonura, Denise. Anais Fournier’s parents file wrongful death lawsuit against Monster Beverage

       Corp. The Record Herald.com Retrieved 5 Februrary2012.


Howland, JohnathanPhD, MPH; Damaris J. Rohsenow, PhD. Risks of Energy Drinks when


       Mixed with Alcohol, The Journal of American Medical Association. Published


              16 January 2013.


Loeb, Heather. “Do the Ingredients in Energy Drinks Work?” MH Lists. Web. Retrieved


       6 February 2013.


McLellan, TM; Lieberman, Hr.Do Energy Drinks Contain Active Components other than


       Caffeine?Nutrition Reviews, 2012 Dec; Vol. 70 (12), pgs 730-44. Date of Electronic


              Publication: 2012 Nov 9.


Medline Plus. "Energy Drinks Pose Risks to Teens,” U. S. National Library of Medicine.


       Published 1 February 2013.


Meier, Barry. "More Visits to Hospital Linked to Energy Drinks." The New York Times.


       12 January 2013.


Smith, Geraint. "Three Deaths Linked to Energy Drink." Mail Online.Web. Retrieved


       5 February 2013.

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Energy drinks third draft

  • 1. Kristina D’Arcangelo D’Arcangelo 1 Professor David DiSarro English 101 20 February 2013 Energy Drinks Should be Banned or Regulated Americans are known for expressing themselves, enjoying their freedom, showing off their livelihood, and living in a fast-paced world. Every day, people are stressed out, rushing between school, work, sports, and their social lives, causing them to overwork and exhaust themselves. All of this hustle-bustle can lead to fatigue and a feeling of crashing or burning out, which in turn leads them to turn to a boost of caffeine. For the past 100 years, the number one jolt of caffeine came from a cup of coffee; however, energy drinks are now increasingly popular. Almost half of the youth in America have said they drink energy drinks regularly or have tried an energy drink more than once, looking for a hefty dose of caffeine (“Energy Drinks Pose” para 1). This increase in the consumption of energy drinks has many side effects on teenagers, most of which are negative. Kids think they are helping themselves stay awake and can accomplish much more after drinking an energy drink, but what they do not know is that these drinks can lead to many health problems such as dizziness, high blood pressure, obesity, heart attacks, and even death (“Energy Drinks Pose” para 2). Through much investigation and research from creditable doctors and scientists, it is evident that energy drinks are extremely dangerous to adolescents, and should be banned in the United States or at least regulated, including modifying the amount of harmful ingredients or the minimum age in which you are allowed to purchase these harmful drinks.
  • 2. D’Arcangelo 2 According to a journal published by The New York Times, in 2012, the energy drink industry had approximately $10 billion in sales (para 4). The majority of these consumers were under the age of 35, (Meier, para 4). Most young adults are unaware that the manufacturers of these drinks market their products as dietary supplements. In doing this, these drinks are not regulated by the Food and Drug Administration. The negative effect of this is that manufacturers are not limited to amount of caffeine they use in the making of these drinks, and they do not even have to disclose this information or other harmful ingredients (McLellan and Lieberman, para 8). The majority of these “miracle” drinks actually have extremely high amounts of dangerous and damaging ingredients such as caffeine, ginseng, glucose, guarana, taurine. Most energy drinks contain about 140-170 milligrams of caffeine in a 14-16oz can (“Caffeine” para 1). This is double the amount of caffeine in and 8oz cup of coffee. Caffeine stimulates the nervous system, and in excessive amounts can cause dizziness, headaches, jitteriness, and you will become unable to fall asleep (“Energy Drinks Pose” para 2). When consuming this amount of caffeine in one serving, adolescents become wired, only to significantly crash sooner than later. Energy drinks also contain about 50-60 grams of glucose or sugar. This level of sugar in the blood can cause insulin to go through the ceiling, which leads to the inability to burn fat, in turn causing obesity, (“Glucose” para 1). This is misleading because most energy drinks are marketed to increase productivity and weight lost from the high increase of energy, but they actually contain too much sugar to burn off. Adolescents are misled, because these drinks can actually cause obesity. Guarana is also an ingredient commonly found in these drinks. Guarana comes from a South American shrub and is also loaded with caffeine. In comparison to a coffee bean, a seed from guarana has 4-5% caffeine, where as a coffee bean only has 1-2% caffeine, (“Guarana” para 1).
  • 3. D’Arcangelo 3 The combination of these ingredients in high dosages can be extremely harmful to person’s health and can even cause death. Another dangerous fascination with energy drinks in mixing them with alcohol. According to a survey, as many as 51% of college students reported they had mixed alcohol with an energy drink, (Howland and Damarispara 1). This is extremely dangerous because of the high level of stimulants such as taurine, ginseng, and caffeine in energy drinks. Alcohol is a depressant, so when the two opposites are mixed together, it sends mixed signals to the central nervous system and also causes cardio problems, (Howland and Damarispara 2). Also, alcohol severely dehydrates people, causing intoxication. The high levels of caffeine and glucose in the energy drinks also causes dehydration, and when the two are mixed together the combination causes the person to be increasingly intoxicated. This high level of caffeine also adds to a person’s impaired judgment. Typically, a person drinking alcohol mixed with an energy drink is perceived to be “more drunk” then a person just drinking alcohol; however, it does depend on the person’s height and weight. This combination of alcohol and high levels of caffeine and other harmful ingredients can be deadly. Adolescents are not even old enough to consume or purchase alcohol, so equally should not be old enough to consume or purchase energy drinks. A notable British health website concurs, advising, “Redbull should not be drunk with alcohol, or after exercising,” (“Mail Online”para 1). They also reported three cases of death from these situations. The same website also states that Norway, Denmark, and France have banned energy drinks from all stores except for pharmacies, (“Mail Online”para 8). The reason for this is because they consider energy drinks as medicine or a drug due to its high caffeine content (Smith 1).
  • 4. D’Arcangelo 4 The New York Times reported in 2011, that there were 20,783 reported emergency room visits in which an energy drink was cited as the primary cause of or a contributing factor to a health problem, (Meier para 3). In 2007, 10,068 people reported emergency room visits again citing energy drinks as the cause, (Meier para 3). They also stated that there were no numbers submitted for 2012. "Such problems, which are typically linked to excessive caffeine consumption, can include anxiety, headaches, irregular heartbeats and heart attacks," (Meier para 3). These statistics demonstrate that the number of cases of emergency room visits in the United States doubled between 2007 and 2011. Adolescents need to take this into account, and realize that if nothing is regulated with these energy drinks, the rate of emergency room visits and even deaths will continue to increase. Energy drinks are extremely dangerous whether mixed with alcohol or consumed by itself. At least 20 cases have been noted over the past 5 years in which the situation was deadly, (Meier para 8). In one particular case, a 14-year-old girl, Anais Fournier, from Hagerstown, Maryland, died in December, 2011. One thing to consider is Fournier did have a heart condition known as mitral valve prolapse. The affects of this condition includes one of the heart valves to malfunction. Fournier was shopping at a local mall the night of December 16, 2011, when she purchased a 24-ounce can of “Monster” energy drink. On December 17, 2011 she drank a second 24-ounce can of the same energy drink. Apparently she consumed two 24-ounce cans of this energy drink within 24 hours. Later that night on December 17, 2011, she was allegedly at home watching TV with her boyfriend when she unexpectedly went into cardiac arrest. Her parents immediately brought her to Meritus Medical Center, and she was later flown to John Hopkins Hospital. Doctors at the John Hopkins Hospital were forced to place her in an induced
  • 5. D’Arcangelo 5 coma to keep her brain from swelling; however, she never regained consciousness. On December 23, 2011, she was declared brain dead and her parents had to make an unfortunate decision to pull her off life support. The parent of Anais Fournier are now filing a wrongful death law suit against the Monster Beverage Corporation. Perhaps her mother, Wendy Crossman, stated it best, “I was shocked to learn the FDA can regulate caffeine in a can of soda, but not these huge energy drinks. With their bright colors and names like Monster, Redbull, and Full Throttle, these drinks are targeting teenagers with no oversight or accountability,”(Bonurapara 5). This is true because the energy drinks certainly target young adolescents with their color schemes and advertisement, suggesting that kids can boost their energy and productivity with one can, not knowing what harmful ingredients really lay beneath its eye-catching marketing. Her mother also stated, “These drinks are death traps for young, developing girls and boys, like my daughter, Anais,” (Bonurapara 8). Obviously, the Monster corporation is fighting the allegations, claiming that the allegations of the product were not responsible for the death of Anais Fournier. “Caffeine can be lethal in doses ranging from 200 to 400 milligrams,” (Bonurapara 10). The two cans of Monster energy drink that Anais consumed contained 480 milligrams of caffeine which is equal to fourteen 12-ounce cans of soda. In addition to the caffeine, Monster also contains guarana, which contains caffeine and taurine. Taurine is said to have similar effects on cardiac mussels, (Bonurapara 15). The use of energy drinks should be banned for the sale to adolescences under the age of 18, or at least regulated. We should not give naive children under the age of 18 the opportunity to hurt themselves by consuming an energy drink. Under age children are not allowed to buy harmful tobacco products that have long term negative effects, nor should they be able to buy
  • 6. D’Arcangelo 6 energy drinks, which may have immediate damaging side effects. The high levels of caffeine and other damaging ingredients should be reduced or controlled. There should be a limit to the number of dangerous ingredients that can be used in formulating an energydrink, including limiting the percentage of each ingredient. It is proven that these drinks can negatively affect a person’s heart rate, blood pressure, cholesterol, motor activity including speech rate, alertness and body temperature, which adolescents are unable to detect from the list of ingredients. They are unaware of what ingredients are actually put into these drinks, and if they are not regulated, the manufactures may continue to increase the levels of destructive ingredients to add an increased “jolt” in these drinks. The false advertisement aiming toward adolescents is destructive and misleading. If nothing is done to regulate these products, the rate of emergency room visits and death will unfortunately increase and become a reoccurring event.
  • 7. D’Arcangelo 7 Works Cited Bonura, Denise. Anais Fournier’s parents file wrongful death lawsuit against Monster Beverage Corp. The Record Herald.com Retrieved 5 Februrary2012. Howland, JohnathanPhD, MPH; Damaris J. Rohsenow, PhD. Risks of Energy Drinks when Mixed with Alcohol, The Journal of American Medical Association. Published 16 January 2013. Loeb, Heather. “Do the Ingredients in Energy Drinks Work?” MH Lists. Web. Retrieved 6 February 2013. McLellan, TM; Lieberman, Hr.Do Energy Drinks Contain Active Components other than Caffeine?Nutrition Reviews, 2012 Dec; Vol. 70 (12), pgs 730-44. Date of Electronic Publication: 2012 Nov 9. Medline Plus. "Energy Drinks Pose Risks to Teens,” U. S. National Library of Medicine. Published 1 February 2013. Meier, Barry. "More Visits to Hospital Linked to Energy Drinks." The New York Times. 12 January 2013. Smith, Geraint. "Three Deaths Linked to Energy Drink." Mail Online.Web. Retrieved 5 February 2013.