2. What is “peer work”?
• In any class, peer work occurs when students work with
minimal or no instructor involvement to create, solve, design,
or review.
• For the purposes of English 112, peer work refers to peers
reviewing and providing constructive feedback for written
work.
3. Common fears:
• “My peers are in my class, too, so do they really know enough
to help me?”
• “Will someone be mean to me?”
• “What if my feedback to my peers is useless to them?”
• “Will I be graded based on someone else’s work?”
4. “My peers are in my class, too, so do they
really know enough to help me?”
• Your peers will act as “readers” for your work.
• All commentary we provide peers should come from the
perspective of an interested reader who also knows the
assignment.
• No one is expected to become an English instructor.
• We will keep our focus on content—leave the grammar help
to me.
5. “Will someone be mean to me?”
• No!
• We are a warm, supportive, and encouraging learning
community; we help.
• We will treat everyone as if their work were our own. How
would we like to be treated?
• You are not your work; constructive criticism builds; it does
not destroy.
• The following slide will provide some guidance.
6. Expectations for peer review:
• Each peer review opportunity will have a clear rubric to
explain what you should do to help your peers.
• Follow the rubric to the letter. Avoid offering assistance
beyond what the rubric requires.
• The exception to this rule is, of course, if your peer asks you a
question about your feedback. Feel free to explain what you
meant.
7. Things to note:
• The feedback stays true to the rubric.
• The peer reviewer is careful to be constructive and supportive.
• The words the peer reviewer uses address the work and not
the writer.
8. Example *paragraph for
review:
The Ingalls family’s experiences with a harsh winter test the limits
of their civility, and routines help them pass these tests. Charles
and Caroline (“Ma” and “Pa”) have to set good examples for the
girls, or the tension of the difficult situation could destroy the
family’s unity. Keeping up with customary routines is one way
they do this. If they do have to let go of a part of their routine,
they acknowledge that they will get back to it as soon as possible.
Ma and Pa maintain these rules not to be mean to the girls;
instead, they want their children to be ready to return to a
normal way of living after the blizzards lift. They want the girls to
have something to live for while they undergo hardships.
*Based on Laura Ingalls Wilder’s The Long, Hard Winter
9. Example of rubric:
Please provide feedback to your peer’s body paragraph based on
only on answering the following questions. Provide specific
answers; “yes” or “no” will not suffice.
• What is the topic sentence?
• Is the topic sentence well supported? How can you tell?
Provide specific examples.
• Do the ideas flow or seem to jump around? Provide details.
• What is your favorite thing about the paragraph?
10. Example of feedback:
• The topic sentence is present: “The Ingalls family’s experiences with a harsh winter
test the limits of their civility.”
• The topic sentence has solid support, but specific details from the book are
needed. For example, how does the reader see these limits tested with specific
events from the novel? As a reader, I would like to know about how bad things
really got for the family and what they did to overcome their circumstances and
stay “human.” What is the difference between surviving and maintaining
“civility”? I was a little confused by the word “good.” Is there a more specific word
to describe the examples the girls need? The examples might help clarify this
word as well. The reader will then see what “good” means.
• The ideas flow well overall because the writer organized the ideas effectively. I
could follow the writer’s train of thought. What would help is more transition
from one idea to the next. For example, the last two sentences of the paragraph
explain the parents’ reasoning well, but the sentences read as a little choppy.
• My favorite thing about the paragraph is that it makes me want to read the book. I
never read the Little House series as a kid, and this paragraph makes me see how
the novels could appeal to adults, too. It also makes me think about how I can
help my own kids overcome adversity.
11. What does the writer do now?:
• Be part of the learning community!
• Use the suggestions that seem reasonable and well-founded.
• Feel free not to follow any advice that does not ring true; the
reader is trying to help and is not trying to become the author.
• Ask questions of your peer reader(s) if needed.
• Thank them for their help.
• Let Prof. Tymon know if you need help with the process.
12. Thank you!
• Your continuing efforts in our learning community help us all!
• As always, should any questions or concerns arise, contact
Prof. Tymon (ptymon@vhcc.edu) for assistance.
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