1. Kaya & Sanel
Target Audience M
Age – 18 – 21
Gender – Male and Female
Ethnicity – British
Location – United Kingdom
Interests/Hobbies – Partying, sex, drugs
Lifestyle – Free spirit, people who live for the day not the future
Why would our target audience be interested in our idea/plot?
• Its based on real life, so it could relate to some of our target audience
• Our target audience will be interested to learn about the drug throughout the film and
interested in her hallucinations
• The film is based in modern time and youth culture, use of slang in a closed narrative so
they can connect and relate to what they see in the film and leave thinking about the
consequences

2. Kaya & Sanel
Target Audience M
Why would our target audience be interested in our film because of its form?
• The use of editing in the hallucinations will interest the target audience, they may find it
funny or remarkable
• The use of modern music through out the film will interest our target audience as the film
will seem more real which helps them connect to it
• The hidden message behind the film will interest them into seeing why the message is
there and therefore will realise there is not way out when you try drugs and not to let
their friends pressure them into using it.
Why would your target audience be interested in your film because of genre/conventions?
• Our target audience can relate to drama’s as a lot happen in growing up in the society we
live in.
• Many of the conventions in the film are very realistic which helps build climax and tension
with our target audience because they would have or will be in the same situation in their
lives
• The convention of emotion shares experience with the target audience making them feel
understood and not out casted.

3. Kaya & Sanel
Target Audience M
What feedback we received from our target audience
The majority answers
We asked 18 – 2 19 – 2 20 – 1 21 – 1
• Showing the illusions is very captivating and makes the opening sequence
and film different from others of its kind
• Sends our a good and education message
• The title is unique, sounds interesting, and they like it
• Would watch the rest of the film because of the hallucinations and to see
what happens to Laura
• They likes the location because it was familiar and makes it more relatable
• We could improve by making flashbacks longer, use a more dramatic
scene

4. Kaya & Sanel
Characters N
How have you developed your characters since draft 1?
• We haven't developed the characters at all, we’ve changed them completely.
• We changed our character to people that the target audience can relate to and feel
sympathy and emotions or making it seem real.
• We unlike draft have no older characters, the characters in our opening sequence now
are all young adults

5. Kaya & Sanel
Characters N
(The costume will
be changed as we
didn’t have the
right props also the
make up we want, Actor 1:
we haven't got yet) Laura Hibbitt
Age:
Inspiration photos 18
Actor 1:
Sanel Homer The eye make up
Age:
The cut on the
16
lips and the tears
The dark and dull colours
and baggy clothes

6. Kaya & Sanel
Characters N
Costume and props
Pale skin
Black runny eye make up Dark wig, to give a more
dark look for her character
Dirt on face to show she's
not hygienic Bloody nose to show she's
not well and doesn't bother
about hygiene
Black and white dirty top Dark blue baggy jacket
Side bag
Black baggy knee length
skirt and black tattered
tights
Black scarf

7. Kaya & Sanel
Characters N
Mise –en-scene
Name – Laura Hibbit
Gender – Female
Age – 18
Costume – Dark brown wig, black jacket, baggy skirt, dirty top, dirty
knee high boots
Props – Beer bottle (Becks)
Make-up – Pale skin, Black smudged eye make up, bloody nose, sweaty
head, tears, cuts on the lip, dirty cheeks
Stereotype – Typical youth that doesn't care about the future and ruins
her life
Facial expression – Dizzy, dead, lights are on and no ones home
Body language – Effortless, exhausted

8. Kaya & Sanel
N Characters
Laura Hibbit –
What does she represent?
Laura represents a typical youth in Britain who gets
pressured by her friends to try drugs which ends up ruining
her life and her future, sending a message to the audience
that there's no easy way out of using drugs and that it will
end up killing you one day. We want the target audience to
relate to her and feel sympathy for her so she is to
represent someone they can visualise in real life.

9. Kaya & Sanel
Characters N
Actor 2:
There is no picture of Gia in costume Doll Dolly
Age:
None
Inspiration photos
Actor 2:
Gia Alveranga
Age:
16

10. Kaya & Sanel
Characters N
Costume and props
Cute dolls dress which will be Stripy black and white tights which
ripped and smeared in blood will be ripped

11. Kaya & Sanel
Characters N
Mise –en-scene
Name – Doll Dolly
Gender – Female
Age – None
Costume – Tutu skirt, fitted colour full t-shirt, knee high stripy socks
and platform high heels
Not actual character Props – None
Make-up – Eye shadow, blush, fake lashes, face paint, bloody arms
Stereotype – Demented doll
Facial expression – Lots of blinking, face doesn't move
Body language – Very, very, fast body movement, lots of random
movement

12. Kaya & Sanel
N Characters
Doll Dolly–
What does she represent?
Not actual character
Doll Dolly is meant to be represented as a hallucinated
character that doesn't exist in real life. She is there to
frighten and show what happens while Laura in on LSD

13. Kaya & Sanel
Characters N
Actor 2:
There is no picture of Rahel in
Clown
costume
Age:
None
Inspiration photos
Actor 2:
Rahel Fasil
Age:
16

14. Kaya & Sanel
Characters N
Costume and props
Orange afro wig
Clown shoes
Clown jumpsuit

15. Kaya & Sanel
Characters N
Mise –en-scene
Name – Clown
Gender – Male
Age – None
Costume – Colour full jumpsuit and hat
Props – None
Not actual character Make-up – Blood tears, black around the eyes, drawn mouth
Stereotype – Demented Clown
Facial expression – Lots of blinking, face doesn't move
Body language – Very, very, fast body movement, lots of
random movement

16. Kaya & Sanel
N Characters
Clown–
What does he represent?
Not actual character
Clown is meant to be represented as
a hallucinated character that doesn't
exist in real life. She is there to
frighten and show what happens
while Laura in on LSD

17. Kaya & Sanel
Locations (her journey from home to the park/ forest)
O
The front door where She starts her journey
Laura will leave to the forest 
This is where CCTV will She continues her
watch her walk into the park journey to the forest


18. Kaya & Sanel Locations O
She enters the forest and
continues her journey

19. Kaya & Sanel
Locations – Where the scene happens O
This is where she will stop
and collapse
• Its always accessible as there is no gate stopping you getting in
• We will get there by 226 bus then walking up to the park down a straight road

20. Kaya & Sanel
Locations – The park/forest O
Heath and Safety:
• Could slip as it's very muddy
• Cars goes by – could run over
• Trees can fall on you
• Could get a hay-fever attack
• You could trip on rock
• Could fall over the CCTV platform
• Prickly leaves
• It could rain
• Poisonous little insects
• Animals in cages and the cages are loose so
• Could be kidnapped animal could set free

21. Kaya & Sanel
Locations O
This is the room where Laura will first try
the drug in the flashbacks
• This location is always accessible as its
one of our group members home
• We will get there by bus then walking
Heath and Safety:
• House could go on fire
• Fall over

22. Kaya & Sanel
Locations O
The bath where Laura will cut herself in the flashbacks
• This location is always accessible as its one of our group members
home
• We will get there by bus then walking
Heath and Safety:
• House could go on fire
• Fall down the stairs

23. Kaya & Sanel
Locations O
Where Laura will party in the flashbacks
• This location is only accessible when the school is open and when the
drama room is being used
• We will get there by bus then walking as we would use it during the
school day
Heath and Safety:
• Lights can fall on you
• Other technical things can fall on you
• School could go on fire

24. Kaya & Sanel
Locations O
Where Laura gets in a fight with her friend
in the flashbacks
• This location is always accessible as its
one of our group members home
• We will get there by bus then walking
Heath and Safety:
• House could go on fire
• Fall over

25. Kaya & Sanel
Locations O
The front door Laura leaves from
• This location is only accessible when someone's in the house to let us
open the door as they’re not a group member
• We will get there by bus then walking
Heath and Safety:
• Get kidnapped
• Fall over
• Cross the road and get run over