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              Teacher Correction versus Peer-Marking*

                                                     Corrección del maestro versus
                                                    corrección por revisión de pares

                                                                 Miguel**
                                        Mariana Correia Mourente Miguel
                                        Universidade Federal do Rio de Janeiro, Brazil
                                            mariana_mourente@yahoo.com.br

            Written language is undoubtedly more often used than oral language in a
        variety of contexts, including both the professional and academic life.
        Consequently, developing strategies for correcting compositions and improving
        students’ written production is of vital importance. This article describes an
        experiment aimed at assessing the two most widely used methods of correction
        for compositions –traditional teacher correction and peer marking and their
        effect on the frequency of errors. Data was collected by asking students to write
        and revise a text. Statistical tests were performed to analyse it. At the end of the
        experiment, it was found that no significant difference in efficiency existed
        between the two methods, contradicting expectations (cf. Davies, 2002; Levine
        et al., 2002 and Ward, 2001).

           Key words: English-Teaching, Foreign Language-Teaching Writing,
                words:
        Evaluation, Assessment

           El lenguaje escrito es sin duda usado con más frecuencia que el lenguaje
        oral en una variedad de situaciones o contextos, incluyendo tanto la vida
        profesional como la académica. En consecuencia, el desarrollo de estrategias
        para corregir composiciones y mejorar la producción escrita de los estudiantes
        es de suma importancia. Este artículo describe un experimento cuyo objetivo es
        evaluar los dos métodos más usados para la corrección de composiciones, la
        corrección tradicional por el maestro y la corrección por revisión de pares, con
        respecto a su efecto en la frecuencia de errores. Se recogió información haciendo
        que estudiantes escribieran y revisaran un texto y sobre esos textos se aplicaron
        pruebas estadísticas para analizar los errores. Contrario a lo esperado, al final
        del experimento, no se encontró ninguna diferencia significativa entre los

    *
      This research project was carried out as part of a non-mandatory internship undertaken by the author during 2002-2003.
This internship was offered by an institutional project called Projeto Cursos de Línguas Abertos à Comunidade and was funded
by Universidade Federal do Rio de Janeiro.
    ** Mariana Correia Mourente Miguel is a graduate student and teacher whose main interest lies in written production
in English as a foreign language as well as its evaluation and assessment. She has co-edited a collection of essays on foreign
language teaching in 2003 and is currently co-editing another volume to be published this year.
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                resultados encontrados por los dos métodos, (cfr. Davies, 2002; Levine et al.,
                2002 y Ward, 2001).

                  Palabras claves: Inglés-Enseñanza, Idioma Extranjero-Enseñanza,
                Composición, Evaluación


        INTRODUCTION                                                                                                 THEORETICAL BACKGROUND

    Nowadays, a great importance is attached                                                                    Several studies such as Ward (2001),
to written language by many institutions                                                                     Levine et al. (2002), and Davies (2002),
since it is needed in order to succeed                                                                       state that peer-marking is more efficient than
academically. Entrance exams for both                                                                        traditional teacher marking. According to
undergraduate and graduate university                                                                        these researchers, peer marking presents
courses require mastery of it. Written English                                                               students with more opportunities to assume
is also more common than spoken English                                                                      an active role in the evaluation process. In
for many people both in their personal and                                                                   order to be able to detect mistakes in
professional lives. In Brazil, the federal                                                                   colleagues’ compositions, students must be
government has helped to give prominence                                                                     at least familiar with the vocabulary and
to written over spoken language by                                                                           structures that were taught in class. Besides
publishing the National Curriculum                                                                           that, these authors claim that students are
Programme for the teaching of foreign                                                                        more likely to pay attention in order not to
languages (Secretaria de Educação                                                                            make the same mistakes again. These authors
Fundamental, 1998). This document                                                                            also claim that this method provides
instructs teachers to focus on skills related                                                                students with opportunities to reflect on the
to written language and states many reasons                                                                  learning process and critically evaluate it.
why they should be emphasised even when                                                                      Last but not least, students are also exposed
teaching students as young as ten years old.                                                                 more to the foreign language they are
                                                                                                             studying and may learn new vocabulary
    This state of affairs naturally leads teacher                                                            items or grammar points.
trainers and teacher trainees to consider the
methods of correction for compositions. If                                                                           HYPOTHESIS
teachers are supposed to devote a great part
of their courses to the written language, they                                                                  In the present research project, the
should equally make attempts to optimise                                                                     objective is to verify which method is the
the learning process of skills related to it. In                                                             most efficient: the traditional correction,
this article, two of the most common                                                                         when only the teacher has the authority to
methods of correction for written production                                                                 correct students’ mistakes, or peer-marking,
–traditional teacher marking and peer                                                                        when the students themselves evaluate their
marking– will be empirically assessed.                                                                       colleagues’ production. The aspect under
                                                                                                             analysis is the efficacy of these methods
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                     concerning the decrease in the frequency of                                           a public institution with an especially low
                     errors after revision. The research question                                          fee to attract disadvantaged students.
                     that was drawn from the cited bibliography
                     is: Would students who practised peer                                                     The activities designed to gather data
                     marking commit fewer mistakes when                                                    involved the writing of a composition by the
                     revising their texts?                                                                 students working individually. After the
                                                                                                           compositions were written, they were
                          METHODOLOGY                                                                      collected. Then each class was assigned a
                                                                                                           different procedure. In Class A, the traditional
                        In order to verify this hypothesis, two                                            method was used while in Class B peer
                     activities were conducted with groups of                                              marking was chosen as the way of correcting
                     students belonging to the same level in order                                         the compositions. The corrected compositions
                     to gather the data required for our research.                                         were then given back to the students who
                     The students had had approximately 200                                                were asked to check the mistakes that had
                     guided learning hours, being situated at the                                          been highlighted, as well as to try to
                     A2 level (or Key English Test level) according                                        assimilate the right answers. The next step
                     to the Common European Framework (see                                                 for both classes was to give them an
                     Cambridge ESOL). All students were adults,                                            uncorrected copy of their compositions and
                     from 18 to 27 years old. They were attending                                          ask them to rewrite it, eliminating the errors
                     a general English course aimed at developing                                          that had been corrected. This procedure is
                     the four abilities. This course was offered by                                        further clarified in the diagram below:
Step 1: Students were instructed to write a composition



Step 2—A: Teacher                Step 2—B: Each
collected compositions           student corrected a
and corrected them               classmate’s
                                 composition




   Step 3: Students received their compositions and
                checked the markings



      Step 4: Students revised their compositions




                                                       Diagram 1. Procedure for collecting data
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   Both the original and the revised versions                                                               of the composition (“Erorig” is “erros no
of the composition were carefully read and                                                                  original”, or “mistakes in the first version”,
compared by the researcher in order to                                                                      shortened due to software limitations.).
determine how many mistakes had been                                                                        Considering the data distribution, the next
made in the original and in the revised                                                                     step was to perform the chi-square test to
versions. The data collected from this activity                                                             see whether there was a significant difference
were then submitted to statistical analysis                                                                 between students’ performance before and
because this type of analysis allows the                                                                    after the correction (cf. Robson, 1975, for a
detection of tendencies and the comparison                                                                  detailed account of how to structure
of groups, which proved useful given the                                                                    empirical research). As shown in the table
aims of the experiment.                                                                                     below (Table 1), the difference for both
                                                                                                            groups was not significant, which means that
   The data were not normally distributed,                                                                  neither of the methods tested in this
as one can see in the histogram below                                                                       experiment was considerably more efficient
(Graph 1), where “Erorig” stands for the                                                                    than the other in making students able to
number of mistakes found in the first version                                                               identify and correct their errors.




                                                                                                Graph 1
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                                                                           Table 1

     DISCUSSION                                                                        acquisition process. It would also be
                                                                                       pertinent to verify if these two methods vary
    From the data analysed in the previous                                             in any other relevant aspect.
section, one can infer that the assumptions
made about peer marking are not entirely                                                       ACKNOWLEDGEMENTS
well founded. The experiment did not have
the deep impact it was expected to have on                                                The author would like to thank fellow
students’ use of the foreign language. Mistake                                         teacher Naíra Figueiredo Costa Monteiro de
identification did not improve significantly                                           Almeida, for kindly discussing the design of
when compared to students exposed to                                                   the experiment in its early phase and helping
traditional evaluation methods, since there                                            to collect data as well as all the students
was roughly an equal improvement for both                                              who willingly participated in the experiment
groups. Therefore, it may be more                                                      and consented on its publication under
appropriate for teachers to include both                                               anonymity. The author would also like to
styles of correction in their courses. This way,                                       thank in advance those who take an interest
students who eventually feel inhibited with                                            in this research and decide to conduct
one of the methods will be given                                                       similar projects in their schools.
opportunities to profit from the other.
                                                                                               REFERENCES
   A shortcoming in this research that has
to be acknowledged is the fact that it dealt                                              Cambridge ESOL. How many hours of study
specifically with Brazilian students. As a                                             are needed to reach the levels of the Main Suite
result, this experiment does not account for                                           exams? Retrieved from
the impact cultural background may have                                                   http://www.cambridgeesol.org/faq/
on students’ reaction to different evaluation                                          ms_gen_faqs.cfm#1
methods. Further research, including other
English as a foreign language teaching                                                    Davies, P Peer-assessment: No markings,
                                                                                                   .
contexts such as other Latin American                                                  just feedback? Retrieved from http://
                                                                                       www.comp.glam.ac.uk/pages/staff/pdavies/
countries, is thus needed in order to reach a
                                                                                       caa.htm
better understanding of how assessment
functions during the foreign language
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   Levine, A., Oded, B., Connor, U., and                                                                     Terceiro e quarto ciclos do ensino fundamental:
Asons, I. (2002). Variation in EFL-ESL                                                                       língua estrangeira. Brasília: MEC/SEF Retrieved
                                                                                                                                                  .
response. TESL-EJ, Berkeley 6: 3. Retrieved                                                                  from
December 2002, from                                                                                              http://www.mec.gov.br/sef/estrut2/pcn/pdf/
   http://www-writing.berkeley.edu/TESL-EJ/                                                                  estrangeira.pdf
ej23/a1.html
                                                                                                                Ward, A. (2001). Experimenting with web-
   Robson, C. (1975). Experiment, design and                                                                 enabled peer assessment. Retrieved from http:/
statistics in psychology. Harmondsworth:                                                                     /www.dcs.warwick.ac.uk/~ashley/Research/
Penguin Education.                                                                                           OASYS/forumarticle.html

   Secretaria de Educação Fundamental.
(1998). Parâmetros curriculares nacionais:




        This article was received on May 11th, 2004 and accepted on August 23rd, 2004

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  • 1. 23 PROFILE ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ Teacher Correction versus Peer-Marking* Corrección del maestro versus corrección por revisión de pares Miguel** Mariana Correia Mourente Miguel Universidade Federal do Rio de Janeiro, Brazil mariana_mourente@yahoo.com.br Written language is undoubtedly more often used than oral language in a variety of contexts, including both the professional and academic life. Consequently, developing strategies for correcting compositions and improving students’ written production is of vital importance. This article describes an experiment aimed at assessing the two most widely used methods of correction for compositions –traditional teacher correction and peer marking and their effect on the frequency of errors. Data was collected by asking students to write and revise a text. Statistical tests were performed to analyse it. At the end of the experiment, it was found that no significant difference in efficiency existed between the two methods, contradicting expectations (cf. Davies, 2002; Levine et al., 2002 and Ward, 2001). Key words: English-Teaching, Foreign Language-Teaching Writing, words: Evaluation, Assessment El lenguaje escrito es sin duda usado con más frecuencia que el lenguaje oral en una variedad de situaciones o contextos, incluyendo tanto la vida profesional como la académica. En consecuencia, el desarrollo de estrategias para corregir composiciones y mejorar la producción escrita de los estudiantes es de suma importancia. Este artículo describe un experimento cuyo objetivo es evaluar los dos métodos más usados para la corrección de composiciones, la corrección tradicional por el maestro y la corrección por revisión de pares, con respecto a su efecto en la frecuencia de errores. Se recogió información haciendo que estudiantes escribieran y revisaran un texto y sobre esos textos se aplicaron pruebas estadísticas para analizar los errores. Contrario a lo esperado, al final del experimento, no se encontró ninguna diferencia significativa entre los * This research project was carried out as part of a non-mandatory internship undertaken by the author during 2002-2003. This internship was offered by an institutional project called Projeto Cursos de Línguas Abertos à Comunidade and was funded by Universidade Federal do Rio de Janeiro. ** Mariana Correia Mourente Miguel is a graduate student and teacher whose main interest lies in written production in English as a foreign language as well as its evaluation and assessment. She has co-edited a collection of essays on foreign language teaching in 2003 and is currently co-editing another volume to be published this year.
  • 2. CORREIA ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ PROFILE ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ 24 resultados encontrados por los dos métodos, (cfr. Davies, 2002; Levine et al., 2002 y Ward, 2001). Palabras claves: Inglés-Enseñanza, Idioma Extranjero-Enseñanza, Composición, Evaluación INTRODUCTION THEORETICAL BACKGROUND Nowadays, a great importance is attached Several studies such as Ward (2001), to written language by many institutions Levine et al. (2002), and Davies (2002), since it is needed in order to succeed state that peer-marking is more efficient than academically. Entrance exams for both traditional teacher marking. According to undergraduate and graduate university these researchers, peer marking presents courses require mastery of it. Written English students with more opportunities to assume is also more common than spoken English an active role in the evaluation process. In for many people both in their personal and order to be able to detect mistakes in professional lives. In Brazil, the federal colleagues’ compositions, students must be government has helped to give prominence at least familiar with the vocabulary and to written over spoken language by structures that were taught in class. Besides publishing the National Curriculum that, these authors claim that students are Programme for the teaching of foreign more likely to pay attention in order not to languages (Secretaria de Educação make the same mistakes again. These authors Fundamental, 1998). This document also claim that this method provides instructs teachers to focus on skills related students with opportunities to reflect on the to written language and states many reasons learning process and critically evaluate it. why they should be emphasised even when Last but not least, students are also exposed teaching students as young as ten years old. more to the foreign language they are studying and may learn new vocabulary This state of affairs naturally leads teacher items or grammar points. trainers and teacher trainees to consider the methods of correction for compositions. If HYPOTHESIS teachers are supposed to devote a great part of their courses to the written language, they In the present research project, the should equally make attempts to optimise objective is to verify which method is the the learning process of skills related to it. In most efficient: the traditional correction, this article, two of the most common when only the teacher has the authority to methods of correction for written production correct students’ mistakes, or peer-marking, –traditional teacher marking and peer when the students themselves evaluate their marking– will be empirically assessed. colleagues’ production. The aspect under analysis is the efficacy of these methods
  • 3. 25 PROFILE ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ Teacher Correction versus Peer-Marking ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ concerning the decrease in the frequency of a public institution with an especially low errors after revision. The research question fee to attract disadvantaged students. that was drawn from the cited bibliography is: Would students who practised peer The activities designed to gather data marking commit fewer mistakes when involved the writing of a composition by the revising their texts? students working individually. After the compositions were written, they were METHODOLOGY collected. Then each class was assigned a different procedure. In Class A, the traditional In order to verify this hypothesis, two method was used while in Class B peer activities were conducted with groups of marking was chosen as the way of correcting students belonging to the same level in order the compositions. The corrected compositions to gather the data required for our research. were then given back to the students who The students had had approximately 200 were asked to check the mistakes that had guided learning hours, being situated at the been highlighted, as well as to try to A2 level (or Key English Test level) according assimilate the right answers. The next step to the Common European Framework (see for both classes was to give them an Cambridge ESOL). All students were adults, uncorrected copy of their compositions and from 18 to 27 years old. They were attending ask them to rewrite it, eliminating the errors a general English course aimed at developing that had been corrected. This procedure is the four abilities. This course was offered by further clarified in the diagram below: Step 1: Students were instructed to write a composition Step 2—A: Teacher Step 2—B: Each collected compositions student corrected a and corrected them classmate’s composition Step 3: Students received their compositions and checked the markings Step 4: Students revised their compositions Diagram 1. Procedure for collecting data
  • 4. CORREIA ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ PROFILE ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ 26 Both the original and the revised versions of the composition (“Erorig” is “erros no of the composition were carefully read and original”, or “mistakes in the first version”, compared by the researcher in order to shortened due to software limitations.). determine how many mistakes had been Considering the data distribution, the next made in the original and in the revised step was to perform the chi-square test to versions. The data collected from this activity see whether there was a significant difference were then submitted to statistical analysis between students’ performance before and because this type of analysis allows the after the correction (cf. Robson, 1975, for a detection of tendencies and the comparison detailed account of how to structure of groups, which proved useful given the empirical research). As shown in the table aims of the experiment. below (Table 1), the difference for both groups was not significant, which means that The data were not normally distributed, neither of the methods tested in this as one can see in the histogram below experiment was considerably more efficient (Graph 1), where “Erorig” stands for the than the other in making students able to number of mistakes found in the first version identify and correct their errors. Graph 1
  • 5. 27 PROFILE ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ Teacher Correction versus Peer-Marking ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ Table 1 DISCUSSION acquisition process. It would also be pertinent to verify if these two methods vary From the data analysed in the previous in any other relevant aspect. section, one can infer that the assumptions made about peer marking are not entirely ACKNOWLEDGEMENTS well founded. The experiment did not have the deep impact it was expected to have on The author would like to thank fellow students’ use of the foreign language. Mistake teacher Naíra Figueiredo Costa Monteiro de identification did not improve significantly Almeida, for kindly discussing the design of when compared to students exposed to the experiment in its early phase and helping traditional evaluation methods, since there to collect data as well as all the students was roughly an equal improvement for both who willingly participated in the experiment groups. Therefore, it may be more and consented on its publication under appropriate for teachers to include both anonymity. The author would also like to styles of correction in their courses. This way, thank in advance those who take an interest students who eventually feel inhibited with in this research and decide to conduct one of the methods will be given similar projects in their schools. opportunities to profit from the other. REFERENCES A shortcoming in this research that has to be acknowledged is the fact that it dealt Cambridge ESOL. How many hours of study specifically with Brazilian students. As a are needed to reach the levels of the Main Suite result, this experiment does not account for exams? Retrieved from the impact cultural background may have http://www.cambridgeesol.org/faq/ on students’ reaction to different evaluation ms_gen_faqs.cfm#1 methods. Further research, including other English as a foreign language teaching Davies, P Peer-assessment: No markings, . contexts such as other Latin American just feedback? Retrieved from http:// www.comp.glam.ac.uk/pages/staff/pdavies/ countries, is thus needed in order to reach a caa.htm better understanding of how assessment functions during the foreign language
  • 6. CORREIA ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ PROFILE ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ ○ 28 Levine, A., Oded, B., Connor, U., and Terceiro e quarto ciclos do ensino fundamental: Asons, I. (2002). Variation in EFL-ESL língua estrangeira. Brasília: MEC/SEF Retrieved . response. TESL-EJ, Berkeley 6: 3. Retrieved from December 2002, from http://www.mec.gov.br/sef/estrut2/pcn/pdf/ http://www-writing.berkeley.edu/TESL-EJ/ estrangeira.pdf ej23/a1.html Ward, A. (2001). Experimenting with web- Robson, C. (1975). Experiment, design and enabled peer assessment. Retrieved from http:/ statistics in psychology. Harmondsworth: /www.dcs.warwick.ac.uk/~ashley/Research/ Penguin Education. OASYS/forumarticle.html Secretaria de Educação Fundamental. (1998). Parâmetros curriculares nacionais: This article was received on May 11th, 2004 and accepted on August 23rd, 2004