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1. Do any of you have great idea?Maybe you are like me....and you have too many.[1st light bulb turning on needs to come up quickerThree light bulbs need to come up quicker]
2. [We need a longer pause before “at Speed”, maybe 1.5 seconds.Also, can it be faster and more dramatic, the reason being that if it is really fast people may miss the effect so some sort of dramatic entrance may help]
3. CloudSpeed is a “Scalable Software Factory”[I like the fade effectScalable Software Factory needs to come up quicker:1 second I think?]
4. And an “Elastic Development Environment”[Elastic Development Environment needs to come up quicker:Same as previous slide?ICONS:More modern Apple IconAdobe to become Windows 7 Mobile IconCisco To Become Black Berry Icon (I’d like to see the work Black Berry as well)The current Black Berry to become FacebookFade to the next slide is too slowCan Speed, Reliability, Cost Efficiency come up one after the other (fairly quckly)]
5. Would you like the advantage of getting your idea to market with speed, reliability and scalability?[Great]
6. But what is the Cloud?Cloud = web applications + benefits[I need “Cloud = Web Applications + Benefits” to show on screenMaybe like this:“Cloud ?” ………. “Cloud = Web Applications + Benefits”I’m thinking that the cloud (?) that you show 1st moves somewhere without the (?) and then we seeCloud = Web Applications + BenefitsAdd another point “Less Geeks Required”Can I get a different picture for “More Mobility and Connected”]
7. But what is the Cloud?Cloud = web applications + benefits[I need “Cloud = Web Applications + Benefits” to show on screenMaybe like this:“Cloud ?” ………. “Cloud = Web Applications + Benefits”I’m thinking that the cloud (?) that you show 1st moves somewhere without the (?) and then we seeCloud = Web Applications + BenefitsAdd another point “Less Geeks Required”Can I get a different picture for “More Mobility and Connected”]
8. Cloud Speed is ......to cloud application development ......what wordpress is to blogging[This is 4 sections on the page, with about .5 second pause between eachCloudSpeed is (Maybe use the CloudSpeed Icon + Is)Cloud Application DevelopmentWhat (.25 seconds)Wordpress is to blogging]