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Revision Assistant 
Improving student writing through better automated, 
formative feedback.
With Revision Assistant 
Students Control the Writing Process
Writers receive feedback immediately, at the 
click of a button.
Writers receive feedback immediately, at the 
click of a button.
Targeted, constructive comments appear in 
context in student work.
Signal Checks show students how well 
they’re performing on their writing tasks.
Holistic Scores 
Wi-fi-like visual cues tell students how 
well their entire essay performs on 
Common Core aligned rubric traits.
Sentence Level Evaluation 
Blue and orange 
highlighting shows 
students their stronger 
and weaker sentences 
for each trait.
Revision Advice 
Comments associated with 
each highlighted sentence 
explain the strength or 
weakness and offer steps to 
building a better essay.
Emphasize revision and reflection as a process 
by capturing previous drafts.
With Revision Assistant 
Teachers Gain Support in the Classroom
See every draft and gain insight into each 
student’s process, effort, and progress.
Drive deeper, more meaningful conversations, 
structured around feedback and revision. 
“I feel like I’m 
neglecting them. With 
this I can say, did you 
get your signal check? 
What did it say?” 
—High School English Teacher
Focus on guiding student learning and spend 
less time on administrative tasks. 
‣ Revision Assistant provides prompts that are already aligned to 
Common Core Standards. 
supports the whole 
writing process. 
provides Common 
Core prompts 
supports class 
management. 
‣ The Library includes persuasive, narrative, and expository 
prompt. 
‣ Students submit assignments to teachers through Revision 
Assistant. 
‣ Teachers may review final submissions, drafts, and related signal 
checks in the application. 
‣ Teachers may send comments through Revision Assistant.
With Revision Assistant 
Teachers and Students are Changing 
the Conversation
What Students are Saying 
“I loved being able to get 
help revising before 
submitting it.” —Student
What Students are Saying 
“It did not give me 
answers. It made me 
think for myself.” —Student
What Students are Saying 
“It gives me constant 
feedback on my essay.” 
—Student
What Students are Saying 
“It was able to point out 
some weak points that 
you had, but also 
encourages you by 
showing what you did 
right.” —Student
What Teachers are Saying 
“They tend to see me as the 
adversary. When they 
started working on 
Revision Assistant, that 
dynamic changed….
What Teachers are Saying 
…They were more open to 
suggestions…it really 
changed the conversation.” 
—High School Teacher
What Teachers are Saying 
“With a Signal Check, it’s the 
student initiating a really 
targeted conversation, which 
really didn’t happen much 
before with some of the weaker 
students…”—High School Teacher
What Teachers are Saying 
“That weaker, more marginal 
student who might give up a lot 
easier is the one where, they’ll 
write a paragraph, click the 
signal check, and try to make it 
better.”—High School Teacher
Revision Assistant 
Improving student writing through better automated, 
formative feedback.

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Introducing Revision Assistant

  • 1. Revision Assistant Improving student writing through better automated, formative feedback.
  • 2. With Revision Assistant Students Control the Writing Process
  • 3. Writers receive feedback immediately, at the click of a button.
  • 4. Writers receive feedback immediately, at the click of a button.
  • 5. Targeted, constructive comments appear in context in student work.
  • 6. Signal Checks show students how well they’re performing on their writing tasks.
  • 7. Holistic Scores Wi-fi-like visual cues tell students how well their entire essay performs on Common Core aligned rubric traits.
  • 8. Sentence Level Evaluation Blue and orange highlighting shows students their stronger and weaker sentences for each trait.
  • 9. Revision Advice Comments associated with each highlighted sentence explain the strength or weakness and offer steps to building a better essay.
  • 10. Emphasize revision and reflection as a process by capturing previous drafts.
  • 11. With Revision Assistant Teachers Gain Support in the Classroom
  • 12. See every draft and gain insight into each student’s process, effort, and progress.
  • 13. Drive deeper, more meaningful conversations, structured around feedback and revision. “I feel like I’m neglecting them. With this I can say, did you get your signal check? What did it say?” —High School English Teacher
  • 14. Focus on guiding student learning and spend less time on administrative tasks. ‣ Revision Assistant provides prompts that are already aligned to Common Core Standards. supports the whole writing process. provides Common Core prompts supports class management. ‣ The Library includes persuasive, narrative, and expository prompt. ‣ Students submit assignments to teachers through Revision Assistant. ‣ Teachers may review final submissions, drafts, and related signal checks in the application. ‣ Teachers may send comments through Revision Assistant.
  • 15. With Revision Assistant Teachers and Students are Changing the Conversation
  • 16. What Students are Saying “I loved being able to get help revising before submitting it.” —Student
  • 17. What Students are Saying “It did not give me answers. It made me think for myself.” —Student
  • 18. What Students are Saying “It gives me constant feedback on my essay.” —Student
  • 19. What Students are Saying “It was able to point out some weak points that you had, but also encourages you by showing what you did right.” —Student
  • 20. What Teachers are Saying “They tend to see me as the adversary. When they started working on Revision Assistant, that dynamic changed….
  • 21. What Teachers are Saying …They were more open to suggestions…it really changed the conversation.” —High School Teacher
  • 22. What Teachers are Saying “With a Signal Check, it’s the student initiating a really targeted conversation, which really didn’t happen much before with some of the weaker students…”—High School Teacher
  • 23. What Teachers are Saying “That weaker, more marginal student who might give up a lot easier is the one where, they’ll write a paragraph, click the signal check, and try to make it better.”—High School Teacher
  • 24. Revision Assistant Improving student writing through better automated, formative feedback.