The document is a personal narrative by a student describing their academic and personal growth over time. They started as a small plant but grew into a outstanding one. They became more patient and steady. Their goal after school is to become an EMT because they enjoy high-pace jobs and helping people. Their friends and mother are very important supports in their life.
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Editor's Notes
The “about me” is missing a bullet. “Involvement” should be capitalized. Same with “Steps/Moving Forward”.
Make all text on this page larger. Start the body text with the words “To be an…”
Make all text larger. Make body text one sentence.
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“barely rarely” sounds awkward. Town hall is not in the morning, but on Friday afternoons. Split this text into at least two sentences. Make all text larger.
“an” should be “a”. The comma should be a semicolon (or split it into two sentences with a period.)
Make title larger. On the second line, instead of “for,” write “to become a”. End the first sentence after “technician.” On the 4 th line from the bottom, “Is” should not be capitalized. On the 3 rd line from the bottom, the word is “paced”. On the 2 nd line from the bottom, it should be “because”.
“something I have been doing”
Capitalize all first letters in the title This text is a good size. On the last line, it should be “the”.
Every girl has a special relationship with her mother. But my mother and I have a very special one, a very strong one too. She is my best friend and my everything. She makes me laugh when I am down and gives me care when I need it the most. I can truly say she means more to me than anything.
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