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Opening sequence draft 2 together (1)
1. Part A
Opening Sequence
Draft 2
Drama
Ina Bayson
Ramina Arlauskaite
Carolle Mafuta-Nkalu
Everyone- White
2. Part B
Raminaโs Brainstorm
โข A young girl + boyfriend
โข Go to the same school
โข Other girls likes the boy, jealousy because of the
boyโs girlfriend
โข The girl bullies/fights the girlfriend
โข In the end, girlfriend just lying down with blood on
her mouth.
3. Part B
Carolleโs Brainstorms
โข The girl trying to cut herself in front of a mirror crying
โข *flashback*
โข Girl and boy kissing while watching TV
โข Her phone rings and boy takes it off her
โข Tries to hit her
โข *flash forward*
โข Shows her trying to cut herself again
4. Part B
Inaโs Brainstorm
โข Girlfriend+Boyfriend
โข Boy proposes to the girl after a date (in a cafe)
โข She accepts
โข Then, flash-forward:
โข of her stalking boyfriend with another girl (holding
hands)
โข Unanswered calls from the boy to the girl
5. Part B
Strongest Idea
โข Strongest Idea
โข Raminaโs Idea
โข Inaโs Idea
โข Not showing all story, just giving pieces of puzzle
6. Part B
Final Idea
โข Used Ramina and Inaโs Idea together:
โข Girlfriend + Boyfriend
โข Having a date, then he proposes to her
โข Other girl outside of cafe watching them angrily
โข He putting the ring in her finger
โข *Flash forward*
โข The Girlfriend saw boyfriend and the other girl
holding hands
โข She calls him but he didnโt pick up
7. Part C
Genre: Drama
Dealing with Consists of conflict in
emotional themes some scenes between
characters
Drama
Real life situations Themes
Addiction
Poverty
Sub genre Violence
Romance etc
Tragedy
Crime
Docudrama (when a
character act an event and
exaggerates it a bit)
8. Part C
Why did we chose this genre,
example
โข Happens in real life
o Shows that not all situations are perfect
โข Affects young married couples (not all)
o Showing that they are still too young
9. Part C
Conventions of Drama
Can have violence
Love
Conventions Struggling (pain)
Emotional scenes
Deep emotions Conflict between
characters
10. Part D
Inspirational films
My Amnesia Girl
Genre: Drama, Romance, and
โข Director: Comedy
o Cathy Garcia-Molina
โข Casts:
o John Lloyd Cruz
o Tony Gonzaga
o Carlos Agassi
o Etc.
โข Distributed by:
o Star Cinema Magic
โข Released Date:
o 24th November 2010
โข Language:
o Tagalog
o English
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gRUmk
YM1gFI
11. Part D
Inspirational Scene
She and her old Boyfriend When sheโs recalling her memory
(must be husband) saw each when her Fiancรฉe didnโt come to
other again their wedding day
She acts like she
don't know him
(lost her
memory)
Shocked that Long shot of her
she doesn't Mid shot of her
waiting for her heartbroken
remember Groom
him
She told him that she didnโt
lost her memory at all
She told him the He is shocked that
truth she lied to her
12. Part D I Love You To Death
โข Joey owns a pizza parlor, and is married to
Rosalee, and is a major womanizer. Rosalee goes to
extremes when she finds he has been cheating.
Scene 3: Rosalee founds her husband cheating
Long shot of Rosalee Mid shot of her with Two shot of Rosalee
enter the library books and the librarian
Time- 7:51/8:55
Mid shot of Rosalee point of view http://www.youtube.com/wat
Mid shot of her looking at shot as she seeโs her husband ch?v=4Vp-
books to borrow from the kissing another women Z0u4Rhs&feature=related
library
13. Part D
Character Representation
Good/happy wife
Mid shot of her smiling Two shot, Serving her Two shot, they are
and she seems very happy husband a drink having conversation
http://www.youtube.com/wat
ch?v=4Vp-
Z0u4Rhs&feature=related
Two shot, she loves being Two shot, kissing her
next to her husband husband
(protection)
14. Part D
Character Representation
Angry housewife
Time- 00:00/00:53
http://www.youtube.com/watch
?v=sAnS9H6sLyM&feature=relat
ed
Rosalee hatred towards her husband
because he cheated on her, she and
her mother planning to kill her
husband by over dose the food with
sleeping pills, and different
ingredient.
15. Part D
Uslovia Kontrakta
This film is a Russian film about two married
couple, she lies to her husband she cant
afford having babies because she has
problems ( the truth is she lies to him because
she doesn't wants to ruin her body.)
A girl who gets married her sister accidently falls
down on the glass table and has problems
with her brainstorm.
She Wants to get money to get the oppression
done by her fiancรฉ does not help her so she
dumps him. Goes to another city to get a job
she finds a job where she gives birth a gives
away her baby to another people who cant
afford them. So she decided to do it and get
the money from the people who wants the
baby. Afterwards the man gets into
relationship with the girl and gets divorced
with his wife finding out she was lying.
16. Chosen theme, brainstorm
Part E
for opening
โข Theme: Tragic (a bit), Romance
Close up
Flash forwards
Showing emotions Clips of after he
of a character/s proposed to her
Mid-shot
Brainstorm He took his phone out
Boyfriend + to see who called him
Girlfriend
POV
Other girl seeing them
Young and became together + proposing
engaged
Cheating in a
relationship
17. Part F
Research about our
theme: Young couples
โข There are almost 16 million adults aged 16-24 living in the UK of which
almost three in ten (4.6 million) are either married or living with their
partner.
โข So there is a conflict in needs and readiness when it comes to
relationships for those in that age bracket. Some may marry
prematurely because the need for connection wins out.
โข Students who marry while in school may be missing out on some
experiences that would enhance their life experience and maturity.
โข In their late teens and early twenties, people are still forming their
adult identities, and are still doing a lot of growing psychologically. It
is best to wait to marry until after about age 27 or so to ensure that
this growth curve has begun to slow down. This reduces the chance
that people will later come to realize that they didnโt really know
themselves yet when they got married, as well as feel that they have
grown apart from their partner.
18. Who are the Characters &
who they represent
Part H
Ramina: Nevaeh
The Boyfriendโs close friend
Clothes:
Black clothes to show jealousy, and
dark
Neil: John
Ina: Lily
The Boyfriend/ Fiancรฉe of his
Johnโs Fiancรฉe
girlfriend
Clothes: Semi formal clothes while heโs
Clothes: Semi Smart clothes when proposing
proposing to her
Jeans and Hoody when going out with
Jogging bottoms and Top when she
other girlfriend
saw them holding hands
19. Part H
Charactersโ Clothes
Lilyโs Semi Formal Outfit
- For their Date with John
Johnโs Semi Formal Outfit
- For their Date with Lily
Johnโs Non- Formal Outfit
- When he is with Nevaeh
Lilyโs Non- Formal Outfit
- When following John to the
Park with Nevaeh
Nevaehโs Casual Outfit
- When she is standing outside the
Cafรฉ
- When she is with John in the Park
20. Part H
Props
The necklace he will The necklace and
be using when heโs earring that Lily
wearing both semi would be wearing
formal and non- when sheโs with
formal clothes John of their date
The Iphone Lilyโs The Iphone that
going to use for the John will use for
ending the ending
The ring that
John will give to
Lily
21. Part I
Location/Setting
โข Cafe: where John proposes to Lily, while Nevaeh is
outside looking at them.
22. Part I
Location/Setting
โข Round wood Park: When Lily saw John and Nevaeh
holding hands
23. Part J
How are we going to
create enigma
โข Showing pieces of the
puzzle
o Not showing everything
o Building suspense
โข Flashes of clips
o There will be a flash forward
24. 5 bullet points of what is going
Part K
to happen in the whole film
โข John and Lily got engage and move in together
โข Lily becomes very over protective and thinks that John is
cheating on her
โข They always argue on simple things
โข Johnโs old friend (Nevaeh) textโs him to meet up, and Lily read
it and becomeโs suspicious
โข John picks up the phone and meet up with Nevaeh. He
doesnโt know that Lily is following him and Lily ended the
relationship and John explains that him and Nevaeh are just
friends, and everything went back to normal
25. Part K
5 bullet points of what is going to
happen in the opening sequence
โข John proposes to Lily while theyโre on a date.
โข Nevaeh is watching them angrily from outside the
cafe. Then *Flash Forward*
โข Lily followed John and saw him holding hands with
Nevaeh
โข Lily tries to call John
โข He declined the call
28. Part L
Shot list
Shot Shot Name Description Prop/Costume
Number
1 Two Shot Lily and John sitting down in Cafe, smart clothes- jeans,
the cafe (having a date) polo, trainers, skirt, top,
shoes, coffee
2 Over the John taking out the ring to Ring in the box
Shoulder shot propose to Lily
3 Mid shot Nevaeh of her looking at Black jacket, jeans,
John and Lily angrily white top, boots, make
up black lipstick
4 P.O.V Nevaehโs POV of what she is Table, chairs, coffee,
seeing people, ring, clothes
5 Close up Opening of the box (ring) Box and ring
6 Mid shot Lily shocked and happy Make up
7 Close up Lilyโs eyes crying of joy
29. Part L
Shot Shot Name Description Props/Costume
Number
8 Extreme Close Him putting the ring in her Ring
up finger
9 Long shot John and Nevaeh holding Park, clothes-
hands in park trousers, Hoody,
trainers, jeans,
jacket, hand bag
10 Mid shot Lily behind John and Tracksuit trousers,
Nevaeh top, jacket, trainers,
hair tied back
11 Close up Lily dialling the phone to phone
call John
12 Two shot Nevaeh and John Talking Clothes, phone
(Mid shot) *Phone rings*
13 Extreme close Him declining the call phone
up
30. Part M
Script
1. INT. INSIDE THE CAFE SHOP. DAY
Two shot, of Lily and John sitting down in the cafe shop, drinking tea.
2. INT. INSIDE THE CAFE SHOP. DAY
Over the shoulder shot, John taking out the ring to propose to Lily.
3. EXT. THE CAFE SHOP WINDOW
Mid-shot, Nevaeh looking at John and Lily angrily. Wearing a black
jacket, jeans, white top, boots, and black lipstick.
4. EXT. THE CAFE SHOP WINDOW
Point of view shot, Nevaeh point of view of what she is seeing.
5. INT. INSIDE THE CAFE SHOP. DAY
Close up shot, Johnโs hand opening the ring box
31. Part M
6. INT. INSIDE THE CAFE SHOP. DAY
Mid-shot, Lily shocked and happy, she put her hands over her mouth
speechless.
7. INT. INSIDE THE CAFE SHOP. DAY
Close up, Lilyโs face crying as John propose to her.
8. INT. INSIDE THE CAFE SHOP. DAY
Extreme Close up, John putting the ring on Lilyโs finger.
9. EXT. ROUNDWOOD PARK.
Long shot, John and Nevaeh holding hands, walking in the park. Johnโs
wearing gray trousers, red hoody, and trainers whilst Nevaeh wearing
jeans, black jacket, and hand bag.
10. EXT. ROUNDWOOD PARK.
Mid-shot of Lily behind John and Nevaeh, wearing
tracksuit, top, jacket, trainers, and hair tied back.
32. Part M
11. EXT. ROUNDWOOD PARK.
Close up shot, Lily dialling her phone to call John, she press
the button hard as she cannot believe what sheโs seeing.
12. EXT. ROUNDWOOD PARK.
Two shot and Mid shot, Nevaeh and John talking, laughing, the
phone rings.
13. EXT. ROUNDWOOD PARK.
Extreme Close up shot, Johnโs hand and the phone. He declines the
call.
BLACKOUT
33. Part N
Applying theories of
Todorov
โข Opening Sequence
o Everything started good- him proposing
o Then, becomes complicated- she sees John with someone else, suspicion
o New equilibrium- for the audience to watch and find out more
โข Whole Story
o He proposes to Lily, she moved in with John and started to be over protective
o Lily saw Nevaehโs text to John and followed him and saw Nevaeh with him
o They broke up because Lily thinks that heโs cheating
o But went back together knowing that Nevaeh is only his close friend
34. Part O
Applying theories of
Propp
โข Villain- Nevaeh- wearing black, emo looking, Lily
thinks that she is Johnโs girlfriend
โข Main Character- John- story revolves around him
โข Second Character- Lily- Johnโs girlfriend
35. Part P
Applying theories of
Strauss
โข We didnโt use his theory of Binary Opposition, because there
are no characters that are evil in our Opening Sequence
โข There are no good and bad
โข All of the characters are equal (no one is stronger than the
other)
36. Part Q
Target Audience
โข Age: 15-25
โข Gender: Both
โข Social Class: Working class
โข Hobbies: exploring, going out,
โข Lifestyle: Teenagers, young adults
โข Location: London
37. Part Q
Interviews Results
3.5
3
2.5
15-18 years old 2
19-21 years old
1.5
1
0.5
0
38. Part R
Film Distributor and why
โข One of the six major movie
studios
โข One of the oldest American
movie studios
โข Industry: Film โข In the film industry since
โข Founded: 30th April, 1912 1912
o Its products are motion pictures
โข Headquarters: California, US
โข They also distribute drama
โข Products: Motion Pictures
films
โข Founder: Carl Laemmle o The Phantom of the Opera (1925)
o The Hunchback of Notre Dame (1923)
39. Part S
Age rate of the film
BBFC standard
โข โ15โ for a film must have an
appropriate language and
behaviour for the audiences.
โข There are no strong language
โข There are no sexual activity or
nudity (no strong detail)
โข There can be violence, but not
focus on pain and injury
40. Part T
Evidence- Title and
credits (fonts)
โข As a group we decided to use font Time new roman
o It will be helpful for our opening sequence title easy to read and eye
catching
o To express a range of voices and emotions .
o Versatile and comfortable to work with, this title are like a favourite pair for
our group opening sequence Draft 2.
This is an example of
what Font we will be
using for our
Opening Sequence.
41. Part U
Music/Sound
This sound is when Lily is
standing behind John and
Nevaeh, looking at them
shocked and heartbroken
To show that she may be
thinking something bad
This can be on the scene
when Nevaeh is standing
outside the cafe looking at
John and Lily angrily
This will be used when John
proposes to Lily.
To show happiness and joy