2. • I wanted a different view on my trailer from
individuals who actually had some sort of
knowledge about media products. Asking them
for feedback will be extremely helpful as it will
help me make the last few adjustments to my
trailer. Hopefully by making the adjustments that
I have been told it will improve my product
immensely.
3. “Add dramatic sound when the blonde character sees the bruise the first
time”
“Try to make the beginning much fast by cutting some scenes out as it is
taking too long to tel the story”
“Add whispers when the character finds blood and scratches on legs and
arms”
“Although you have created your own production company logo, add a
established one”
“Instead of having the full article cross over with the door opening include
an image of the young twins looking innocent - this created a contrast”
4. “Cut the scene down of them eating pizza, no need to make it so long
could just show them revealing their bruises”
“You could possibly use a voiceover of them saying ‘I can’t believe we got
our own perfect house’- this will help speed up the part of the story being
established”
“Could have a title card about them moving into the house or a voiceover
to say they are moving into a new house”
“Swap over the ‘In Cinemas’ and the actual title of the film trailer”
“Add more scary shots of blood and screaming to speed up the pace of
the trailer”
5. Discussion
• The feedback has been VERY helpful as it made me
realise the things which I don’t have in my trailer which
limits the quality of my trailer. By making the previous
adjustments I know my trailer will be able to be much
more scary and follow the conventions of other horror
trailers.
• I am going to consider all of the improvements which I
have been given from my audience and the media
students however I am only going to change the most
important feedback (i.e. the pacing of the trailer)
