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All Kids Writing – Yes It Is Possible!
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     Reading for the Love of It
         Feb. 12  13, 2009 

             Faye Brownlie
         fayebrownlie@shaw.ca
Managing the Workshop
•    Work with large chunks of time
•    Teach one specific criteria at a time, over time
•    Model, model, model
•    Focus on pre-writing
•    Coach students as they are writing
•    Goal-set with students
•    Increase your silent writing time
Model
                              Guided practice
                              Independent practice
                              Independent application 
Pearson  Gallagher (1983) 
K- Writing:
                                1
                              Model - pictures  print
                              Refer to criteria
                              Kids draw  write
                              Refer to criteria 
Pearson  Gallagher (1983) 
Criteria – K/1
      Big, Bold, Bright                 Make a picture 




      Tell some leJers              Try some sounds you 
      you know                      know 




          What’s Next for This Beginning Writer? – Reid, Schultz, Petersen 
Grade 2/3 WriOng Criteria 


•  An opening sentence with a hook 

•  Details 

•  DisOnguished words 
Autumn Bear 


Author‐Diane Culling 
Illustrator ‐ Cindy Vincent 

Snowberry Books, 2007 
ISBN 978‐0‐9736678‐2‐0 
One September morning •a piece of fog touched me.  As I 
looked out my window the gold leaves dri^ed out of the 
tree  as I dragged my feet down the stairs to breakfreast, as I 
waited for the school bus I feel puffs of wind pick up my hair 
when the school bus came I slowley walk up the stairs as I 
bundled • in a seat as I went down the steps I saw birds 
migraOng south as if leaves followed them  it looked like 
they were air dancing.•          ‐Allyson, gr.2 
•  As the cool fall leafs fall the aniamails hide 
   in thir hafertat an the people put worm fire 
   on and they have hot chocolet with 
   mashmao.  If feel couze with the blaket on 
   you.  You feel like you want to stay home 
   forever.  The wind hits your face it feels like 
   somebudys teeching except it’s the breeze.     
   ‐by Jason, gr.3 
Autumn Wind 
•  When the Autumn wind blows it makes me shiver. It really 
   makes me quiver.  The wind is cold and really bold, it feels 
   refreshing on my face.  I get to keep my own pace.  My 
   hair would blow I can be slow, I walk on the ground I don’t 
   have a frown, it feels so good and it keeps me in a joyful 
   mood it keeps me happy for the rest of the day and I want 
   to play and play.  A^er the Autumn wind blows on my face 
   it is really cool, it almost feels as cold as my pool.      
     By Samantha, gr.3 
Grade 1 WriOng Criteria 

•powerful beginning 
•detail 
Pinduli 

By Janell Cannon 

Harcourt, 2004 
Colleen Reimer, Gr. 2/3 ‐ Study of the Planets 

     AnOcipaOon guide ‐ read 
• 
     Web with a partner ‐ read 
• 
     Join another partnership ‐ add in blue 
• 
     Teacher adds informaOon 
• 
     Add to web in red 
• 
     Write to inform 
• 
Joni/Eleanor’s K WriOng 
•  Class is 80‐90% ESL, half day K 
•  3 heterogenous groups 
•  Resource teacher ‐ each group once a week 
   for 40 minutes 
•  Classroom teacher focuses on language lesson 
Joni Cunningham 
Spul’u’kwuks Elementary, Richmond 
       Guess and Check Spelling 
• 3‐5 words 
• Child must try the word ‘guess’ before 
asking teacher for a ‘check’ 
• Mini‐conference: 
   • Word families 
   • Previous lessons 
   • Words around the room 
   • Just ‘learn’ it 
   • Underline leJers that are right 
•  Use with all wriOng:  dra^s, journals, science, 
   socials 
•  Date each entry 
•  A^er 10 pages per book 
•  Keep old ‘guess and check’ books to use as 
   reference 
•  Use with parent conferences:  strengths, 
   paJerns, how to help 
Found Poems
•  Read a text to the students
•  Students listen for phrases that they love –
   powerful phrases – phrases they want to
   remember
•  By birthdays, students stand and say their
   ‘found poem’
•  Mix the order to hear different variations of
   the poem
•  Students write their own ‘found poem’
Online literacy videos 
     www.sd72.bc.ca Literacy Videos 
• 
     Clustering from Text 
• 
     Squiggles 
• 
     It’s All in the Bag 
• 

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