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1. AS Coursework Overall Marks
Name: George Eccles
Planning – Comments and mark out of 14/20
For full comments please see the pre-production marks sheet
Construction – Main Task – comments and mark out of 38/60
There is evidence of proficiency in the creative use of many of the technical skills
Footage:
Is appropriate for target audience, mostly fitting genre conventions of drama/thriller
well. Controlled use of camera although some shots out of focus.
Editing:
Editing started well, building tension, however pace was lost towards the end. Good
attempt at a variety of shots.
Sound:
Good use of diegetic and non-diegetic sound, although a better balance of sound
track and dialogue needed in parts.
Overall:
A proficient thriller piece, however more attention to mise en scene needed
Evaluation – Comments and mark out of 14/20
Question 1: Answered using word and slideshare. Candidate offers some good
analysis on his choices for his film opening. Some good use of examples.
Question 2: Answered using Microsoft visio and slideshare. A good flow diagram
showing how stereotypes have been used to represent social groups. Font is
extremely small and could be bigger.
Question 3: Answered using prezi. Candidate explains well that Vertigo Films or
Lionsgate would be best to distribute his film using some good examples.
Question 4 and 5: Answered using power-point and slideshare. Question 4 -
Avatars used to represent the stereotypical audience members. Good inclusion of
their likes and dislikes. Question 5 - A short survey was conducted however it is
unclear how and to how many people. Some reflection on the results however this
would have benefited from deeper analysis.
Question 6: Answered using word and slideshare. A good collage created of the
technologies used. Technologies have been talked through well.
Question 7: Answered using word and slideshare. Candidate provides a reflective
piece explaining what he has learnt throughout his journey from preliminary to final
task.
Overall a proficient evaluation, most answers offer good attention to detail, however
some could have more. Reliance mainly word, power-point and slideshare to answer
questions.
Total 66/100 Grade: C