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I believe that... learning foreign culture in variety countries is good experience.
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2. Topic 1
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3. Topic 2
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4. Topic 3 Introduce superb Korean culture, ea kuk sim
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Going to other countries and introducing our super Korean culture help to imbue a
introduce this topic to your
mind with new patriotism.
reader?
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Korean culture that have been handed down through the ages are frequently full of wisdom form
Support #1 our ancestors. One of the most famous sports are Taekwondo. Taekwondo is a Korean martial art
and combat sport. Taekwondo is the national sport of South Korea and became an official sport in
the 2000 Sydney Olympics. It is helpful in training one's body and spirit.
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When I went to Turkey to do Missionary work, I performed Taekwondo in front of many children
Support #2 and people. There were all overwhelmed our powerful performance. Then, we taught them how to
do Taekwondo to the children.
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5. Introduction Paragraph
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How can I get my reader's attention?
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topic?
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Attention Getter Can you remember the time when you were a child, parents read stories in the bed?
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Background Information
Everyday my mom read different and interesting stories from all over the
- Introduce your topic, but not
world for me and my sister. One day, she read fabulous collection of fairy tales
your thesis
and I still remember very beautiful buildings and people in that book that was
- Provide insider details that
totally different. Those were very marvelous things for young child who had
would help your reader better
never seen different colored or white people. Since that time, I always wanted
understand your topic, but not
to go another countries and experience different culture.
information you are discussing in
your support.
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Why should your reader care?
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It is important that you read
this essay because...
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Thesis Statement
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6. Conclusion Paragraph
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Include a brief summary of the paper's main points. Evoke a vivid image
Suggest results or consequences Wrap it all up for your reader
Leave a lasting impression
Restate your thesis in
a fresh, new way
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Summarize /
Reflect / Give Final
thoughts on Topic 1
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thoughts on Topic 2
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thoughts on Topic 3
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Final Thought
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-Compound or Complex sentence
-Leave a lasting impression
-Sums up your essay in one
incredible sentence
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Paragraph 1- Introduction Paragraph 3 - Body Paragraph 2 Paragraph 5 - Conclusion
- Attention Getter - Topic Introduction - Thesis Restatement
- Background Information - Support 1 - Summarize/Reflect/Final - Topic 1
- Why should we care sentence - Support 2 - Summarize/Reflect/Final - Topic 2
- Thesis Statement - Support 3 - Summarize/Reflect/Final - Topic 3
- Transition - Strong Final Thought
Paragraph 2 - Body Paragraph 1
Paragraph 4 - Body Paragraph 3 Final page - Bibliography
- Topic Introduction - On a new page
- Support 1 - Topic Introduction - Titled - Bibliography
- Support 2 - Support 1 - Use citations created from Easybib
- Support 3 - Support 2 - MLA Format
- Transition - Support 3 - Alphabetized
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