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ineffective and effective memoirs 9­17­12.notebook                 September 17, 2012




    9/17/12

    8th Grade Language Arts

    Agenda:

    1. Warm-up: Share your memoir worthy experiences with
    someone in the room

    2. Ineffective and Effective Memoirs ts:
                                          men                                     H)
                                  As sign              )                    ir (T
                                                 s (W                   emo
                                         Ci rcle                   ur m
                                   -Lit                       r yo
                                                     opi c fo
                                              eat                    (F)
                                     -C hoos               tsid
                                                                ers
                                                 Th  e Ou
                                          inish                      (F)
                                       -F                 Wr  iting
                                               abu  lary
                                         -Voc




                                                                                        1
ineffective and effective memoirs 9­17­12.notebook            September 17, 2012




      “Why write a memoir? It means the world becomes yours. If
          you don‛t do it, it drifts away and takes a whole piece of
      yourself with it, like an amputation. To attack it and attack it
      and get it under control- it‛s like taking possession of your life,
                                         isn‛t it?”

                                                -Ted Hughes




                                                                                   2
ineffective and effective memoirs 9­17­12.notebook   September 17, 2012




     Movinginwithmymom
       The summer between my seventh grade and eighth 
     grade year I moved out of my dad’s house and into 
     my mom’s.  It was a difficult thing to do, but my mom 
     and I had been talking about it for some me.  She 
     moved closer to my dad’s house so that I wouldn’t 
     have to change schools.  Then, when it was me to 
     stay with her for six weeks in the summer, we 
     decided I would not go back at the end.  My mom 
     hired a lawyer, and I had to see a mediator.  The court 
     appointed mediator told me I might have to stay with 
     my dad if that’s what the courts decide.  But I knew 
     that I would get to stay with my mom.  Eventually the 
     court made its decision, and I was able to legally be 
     with my mom.  Aer that I only saw my dad at 
     Christmas.  




                                                                          3
ineffective and effective memoirs 9­17­12.notebook           September 17, 2012


                        What doesn't work in Mrs. Slavens'
                                  ineffective memoir?




                                                                                  4
ineffective and effective memoirs 9­17­12.notebook   September 17, 2012




                 Life Always Comes Full Circle 




                                                                          5
ineffective and effective memoirs 9­17­12.notebook                                             September 17, 2012




            “Qualities of a Memoir That Works”




         The memoirist invented details that fit with the spirit, intenon, and truth of the story




                                                                                                                    6
ineffective and effective memoirs 9­17­12.notebook    September 17, 2012




    “A memoir is how one remembers one‛s life.”

                                        -Gore Vidal

      “The story of your life is not your life. It is
                                    your story.”

                                   -John Barth  




                                                                           7
ineffective and effective memoirs 9­17­12.notebook   September 17, 2012




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Slavens memoir list

  • 1. ineffective and effective memoirs 9­17­12.notebook September 17, 2012 9/17/12 8th Grade Language Arts Agenda: 1. Warm-up: Share your memoir worthy experiences with someone in the room 2. Ineffective and Effective Memoirs ts: men H) As sign ) ir (T s (W emo Ci rcle ur m -Lit r yo opi c fo eat (F) -C hoos tsid ers Th e Ou inish (F) -F Wr iting abu lary -Voc 1
  • 2. ineffective and effective memoirs 9­17­12.notebook September 17, 2012 “Why write a memoir? It means the world becomes yours. If you don‛t do it, it drifts away and takes a whole piece of yourself with it, like an amputation. To attack it and attack it and get it under control- it‛s like taking possession of your life, isn‛t it?” -Ted Hughes 2
  • 3. ineffective and effective memoirs 9­17­12.notebook September 17, 2012 Movinginwithmymom The summer between my seventh grade and eighth  grade year I moved out of my dad’s house and into  my mom’s.  It was a difficult thing to do, but my mom  and I had been talking about it for some me.  She  moved closer to my dad’s house so that I wouldn’t  have to change schools.  Then, when it was me to  stay with her for six weeks in the summer, we  decided I would not go back at the end.  My mom  hired a lawyer, and I had to see a mediator.  The court  appointed mediator told me I might have to stay with  my dad if that’s what the courts decide.  But I knew  that I would get to stay with my mom.  Eventually the  court made its decision, and I was able to legally be  with my mom.  Aer that I only saw my dad at  Christmas.   3
  • 4. ineffective and effective memoirs 9­17­12.notebook September 17, 2012 What doesn't work in Mrs. Slavens' ineffective memoir? 4
  • 5. ineffective and effective memoirs 9­17­12.notebook September 17, 2012 Life Always Comes Full Circle  5
  • 6. ineffective and effective memoirs 9­17­12.notebook September 17, 2012 “Qualities of a Memoir That Works” The memoirist invented details that fit with the spirit, intenon, and truth of the story 6
  • 7. ineffective and effective memoirs 9­17­12.notebook September 17, 2012 “A memoir is how one remembers one‛s life.” -Gore Vidal “The story of your life is not your life. It is your story.” -John Barth   7