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Persuasive Text- Reading and Writing
Persuasive Example ,[object Object],[object Object]
Purposes of Persuasive Text
Persuasive Text ,[object Object],[object Object],[object Object]
Persuasion is Powerful Use it to: ,[object Object],[object Object],[object Object]
Persuasion is Powerful Use it to: ,[object Object],[object Object],[object Object]
Persuasion is Powerful Use it to: ,[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],[object Object]
Persuasion is Powerful Use it to: ,[object Object],[object Object],[object Object]
Persuasion is Powerful Use it to: ,[object Object],[object Object],[object Object]
Persuasion is Powerful Use it to: ,[object Object],[object Object]
Persuasion is Powerful Use it to: ,[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],[object Object]
Persuasion is Powerful! Use it to… ,[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],[object Object]
Persuasion is Powerful! Use it to… ,[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],[object Object]
What Persuades You? ,[object Object],[object Object],[object Object]
Effective Persuasion Essentials Audience Awareness Clear Position Persuasive Language Organizational Structure
Persuasive Text Position Persuasive  Language Assessment Audience  Awareness Organizational  Structures Persuasive text is recursive in nature. These essential elements are constantly working together to make the best case for the writer ’s position.
Audience Awareness Providing information an audience may need and/or anticipating an audience ’s point of view
Audience Awareness ,[object Object],[object Object],[object Object]
Audience Awareness ,[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],[object Object]
Audience Awareness –  example ,[object Object],[object Object]
Audience Awareness –  your turn ,[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],[object Object]
Possible Audiences – Persuasive Letters
Audience Awareness –  follow up ,[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],[object Object]
Clear Position A position or argument; the audience knows exactly what the writer wants
Clear Position ,[object Object],[object Object]
Clear Position – example ,[object Object]
Find the Position Statement ,[object Object]
Find the Position Statement ,[object Object]
Drop and Write ,[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],[object Object]
Persuasive Language Words and phrases that urge or compel the reader to support the position of the author
Persuasive Language ,[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],[object Object]
Find Words that Could Be More Persuasive  ,[object Object],[object Object],[object Object]
Persuasive Language ,[object Object],[object Object]
Putting it together – Audience Awareness, Clear Position, Precise Language ,[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],[object Object]
Persuasion –  follow up ,[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],[object Object]
Organizational Structures ,[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],[object Object]
Organizational Structures ,[object Object],[object Object]
Organizational Structure –  Concession/Rebuttal Acknowledging or recognizing the opposing viewpoint, conceding something that has some merit, and then refuting it with another argument
My Turn!  Your Turn!  (Preparing for Concession/Rebuttal) ,[object Object],[object Object],[object Object]
My Turn!  Your Turn! ,[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],[object Object]
Group Discussion ,[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],[object Object]
Concession/Rebuttal ,[object Object],I know what other kids would say… I have a possible solution to this problem. I realize most teachers don ’t want cell phones in class because they cause problems, but…
Develop your Point with  Concession/Rebuttal ,[object Object],[object Object]
Concession/Rebuttal ,[object Object],[object Object]
Transitional Phrases – Concession/Rebuttal ,[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],[object Object]
Concession/Rebuttal  –  your turn ,[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],[object Object]
Organizational Structure – Causal Chain A connected series of cause/effect events
Causal Chain  –  examples ,[object Object],If you give us more time for a break, we will get more homework done, so our grades will be better, and our parents will be proud. If your mom forgets to buy gas, then you will run out of gas on the way to school, and then you will be late and get detention.
Develop your Point with the Causal Chain ,[object Object]
If you give a mouse a cookie, He ’s going to ask for a  glass of milk. When you give him the milk, He ’ll probably ask you for  a straw. When he ’s finished, he’ll ask  for a napkin. ? Try it Together
Vote Yes-Yes on Feb. 14 Do you value quality education? Do you believe that the children in our community are our future? If you have answered  “yes” to these questions, here’s another one that perhaps you should stop and think about before you answer. Do you plan to support the growth in the Clear Creek Amana School District by voting Yes-Yes to the upcoming school bond issues on Feb.14? If not, you may need to re-evaluate your previous answers above. Clear Creek Amana schools are extremely overcrowded and in desperate need of additional buildings. The upcoming bond issue will not close any of the existing sites; rather, some of the bond will actually be used to upgrade the Amana and Oxford locations. Please do your own research, listen to the facts, and vote responsibly. Do not believe the rumors and other false information floating around. Schools bring residents; residents bring money to the community. Schools bring businesses; businesses bring new jobs, services and income into the community. We all have a chance on Tuesday, Feb. 14, to be active and responsible community members. Will you do your part? We urge all of you to vote Yes-Yes to each of the ballot questions for the upcoming school bond issue. Our future, our children and our community are depending on you.
Persuasive Introductions
Persuasive Introductions ,[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],[object Object]
Ineffective Persuasive Introduction ,[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],[object Object]
Persuasive Introductions ,[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],[object Object]
Anecdote/Scenario ,[object Object]
Questioning ,[object Object],[object Object]
Interesting Fact or Statistic ,[object Object],[object Object]
Introduction – practice ,[object Object],[object Object],[object Object]
Persuasive Conclusions
Persuasive Conclusions ,[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],[object Object]
Ineffective Persuasive Conclusion ,[object Object],[object Object]
Strategies for Conclusions ,[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],[object Object]
Call to Action – student sample ,[object Object]
Solution – student sample ,[object Object]
Prediction – student sample ,[object Object]
Conclusion – practice ,[object Object],[object Object],[object Object]
Persuasive Strategies ,[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],[object Object]
Expert Testimony ,[object Object],According to a noted authority… Jeremy Lin says…
Expert Testimony – example ,[object Object]
Expert Testimony   –   your turn ,[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],[object Object]
Anecdote  – self as expert ,[object Object],I remember the time when I had to carry my… As a seventh grader myself, I happen to know exactly why…
Anecdote  –  example ,[object Object]
Anecdotes –  your turn ,[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],[object Object]
Compromise or Problem Solving  –  examples ,[object Object],I have the solution to this problem, too. I think we can both agree that this is a pretty good deal.
Compromise or Problem Solving  –  example ,[object Object]
Compromise or Problem Solving  –  example I also understand that some students would choose not to do their homework  and do it later. But I have solutions to this problem, too.  A student could have to bring in a note signed by a parent or guardian that says why a student brought his or her work in late. An alternative solution is that homework can only be accepted a select number of days after it was due.
Compromise or Problem Solving ,[object Object],[object Object],[object Object]
Compromise or Problem Solving   –  your turn ,[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],[object Object]
Statistics ,[object Object],Sixty-five  percent of this year ’s 7 th  grade students met the standard on the writing WASL. Four out of five doctors recommend…
  Statistics – example ,[object Object]
Statistics –  your turn ,[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],[object Object]
Rhetorical Questions ,[object Object],Have you ever felt the glare of a teacher ’s eyes crisping the back of your neck? Hey, I did my homework on time. They didn ’t, and they  still  get credit for it?
Rhetorical Questions – example ,[object Object],[object Object]
Rhetorical Questions –  your turn ,[object Object],[object Object],[object Object]
Assessment Evaluating the quality of persuasion
Persuasion Scoring Guide Score of 4 Score of 3 Score of 2 Score of 1  Has a clear position and stays focused on that position.    Shows a keen awareness of the audience.  Selects persuasive words, phrases, and strategies that urge or compel the reader to support a position.  Organizes writing to make the best case to support position.  Uses convincing elaboration: arguments, well-chosen, specific, and relevant details, examples, anecdotes, facts, and/or statistics as evidence for support.  Begins with a compelling opening, and ends with an effective persuasive conclusion, such as a call for action.  Addresses the opposing argument(s) consistently and, if important, refutes.  Uses purposeful transitions consistently to connect position, arguments, and evidence.  Has an identifiable position and stays adequately focused on that position.  Shows an adequate awareness of the audience.  Adequately uses persuasive words, phrases, and strategies to support a position.  Organizes in a manner to persuade the reader.  Adequately uses elaboration which may include arguments, specific, and relevant details, examples, anecdotes, facts, and/or statistics as evidence for support.  Begins with an adequate opening, and ends with an adequate persuasive conclusion.  Adequately addresses the opposing argument(s) and, if important, refutes.   Adequately uses transitions to connect position, arguments, and evidence.  Has an unclear or inconsistent position or may lose focus on that position.  Shows a limited awareness of the audience.  Has limited use of persuasive words, phrases, and strategies to support a position.  Uses a basic organizational pattern to persuade the reader.  Uses limited elaboration to support arguments.  Uses undeveloped or ineffective openings and conclusions, which are often list-like.  Has some consideration of the opposing argument(s).  Uses basic transitions to connect position, arguments, or evidence.  Has vague or no position, or lacks focus.  Shows little or no awareness of the audience.  Has few or no persuasive words, phrases, or strategies to support a position.  Lacks any organizational pattern to persuade the reader.  Has little or no elaboration, often only a list of arguments.  Has no recognizable opening or conclusion.  Has no consideration of opposing arguments.   Uses few or no transitions to connect position, arguments, or evidence.
Assessment –  your turn ,[object Object],[object Object],[object Object]

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Persuasive writing powerpoint

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  • 15. Effective Persuasion Essentials Audience Awareness Clear Position Persuasive Language Organizational Structure
  • 16. Persuasive Text Position Persuasive Language Assessment Audience Awareness Organizational Structures Persuasive text is recursive in nature. These essential elements are constantly working together to make the best case for the writer ’s position.
  • 17. Audience Awareness Providing information an audience may need and/or anticipating an audience ’s point of view
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  • 30. Persuasive Language Words and phrases that urge or compel the reader to support the position of the author
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  • 38. Organizational Structure – Concession/Rebuttal Acknowledging or recognizing the opposing viewpoint, conceding something that has some merit, and then refuting it with another argument
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  • 47. Organizational Structure – Causal Chain A connected series of cause/effect events
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  • 50. If you give a mouse a cookie, He ’s going to ask for a glass of milk. When you give him the milk, He ’ll probably ask you for a straw. When he ’s finished, he’ll ask for a napkin. ? Try it Together
  • 51. Vote Yes-Yes on Feb. 14 Do you value quality education? Do you believe that the children in our community are our future? If you have answered “yes” to these questions, here’s another one that perhaps you should stop and think about before you answer. Do you plan to support the growth in the Clear Creek Amana School District by voting Yes-Yes to the upcoming school bond issues on Feb.14? If not, you may need to re-evaluate your previous answers above. Clear Creek Amana schools are extremely overcrowded and in desperate need of additional buildings. The upcoming bond issue will not close any of the existing sites; rather, some of the bond will actually be used to upgrade the Amana and Oxford locations. Please do your own research, listen to the facts, and vote responsibly. Do not believe the rumors and other false information floating around. Schools bring residents; residents bring money to the community. Schools bring businesses; businesses bring new jobs, services and income into the community. We all have a chance on Tuesday, Feb. 14, to be active and responsible community members. Will you do your part? We urge all of you to vote Yes-Yes to each of the ballot questions for the upcoming school bond issue. Our future, our children and our community are depending on you.
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  • 77. Compromise or Problem Solving – example I also understand that some students would choose not to do their homework and do it later. But I have solutions to this problem, too. A student could have to bring in a note signed by a parent or guardian that says why a student brought his or her work in late. An alternative solution is that homework can only be accepted a select number of days after it was due.
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  • 86. Assessment Evaluating the quality of persuasion
  • 87. Persuasion Scoring Guide Score of 4 Score of 3 Score of 2 Score of 1  Has a clear position and stays focused on that position.  Shows a keen awareness of the audience.  Selects persuasive words, phrases, and strategies that urge or compel the reader to support a position.  Organizes writing to make the best case to support position.  Uses convincing elaboration: arguments, well-chosen, specific, and relevant details, examples, anecdotes, facts, and/or statistics as evidence for support.  Begins with a compelling opening, and ends with an effective persuasive conclusion, such as a call for action.  Addresses the opposing argument(s) consistently and, if important, refutes.  Uses purposeful transitions consistently to connect position, arguments, and evidence.  Has an identifiable position and stays adequately focused on that position.  Shows an adequate awareness of the audience.  Adequately uses persuasive words, phrases, and strategies to support a position.  Organizes in a manner to persuade the reader.  Adequately uses elaboration which may include arguments, specific, and relevant details, examples, anecdotes, facts, and/or statistics as evidence for support.  Begins with an adequate opening, and ends with an adequate persuasive conclusion.  Adequately addresses the opposing argument(s) and, if important, refutes.  Adequately uses transitions to connect position, arguments, and evidence.  Has an unclear or inconsistent position or may lose focus on that position.  Shows a limited awareness of the audience.  Has limited use of persuasive words, phrases, and strategies to support a position.  Uses a basic organizational pattern to persuade the reader.  Uses limited elaboration to support arguments.  Uses undeveloped or ineffective openings and conclusions, which are often list-like.  Has some consideration of the opposing argument(s).  Uses basic transitions to connect position, arguments, or evidence.  Has vague or no position, or lacks focus.  Shows little or no awareness of the audience.  Has few or no persuasive words, phrases, or strategies to support a position.  Lacks any organizational pattern to persuade the reader.  Has little or no elaboration, often only a list of arguments.  Has no recognizable opening or conclusion.  Has no consideration of opposing arguments.  Uses few or no transitions to connect position, arguments, or evidence.
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  1. This is an excerpt from a 7 th grade persuasive paper from the 2006 anchor set, scoring 4 on Content, Organization, and Style (COS). Discuss why this piece of writing is persuasive. The writer takes a clear position: late work can no longer be allowed. The writer uses evidence to elaborate and support his/her position. Use of statistics: 50% Use of specific details: late work earns a passing grade, some kids are happy not to get an E , this twists the grading system, and this can no longer be allowed.
  2. Discuss the various reasons why persuasive writing is important in everyday life. Use the document titled Persuasion is Powerful.doc to have students fill in the seven purposes for persuasion and then create a persuasive statement based on the pictures on each of the following slides. A sample key is available in the document folder. It is titled Powerful answer Key.doc . Support a cause Urge people to action Make a change Prove something wrong Stir up sympathy Create interest Get people to agree with you
  3. Here are the same purposes paired with more persuasive statements.
  4. Here are the same purposes paired with more persuasive statements.
  5. This slide is meant to set the stage for the next activity, where students access their prior knowledge and ability to persuade. This is a class discussion or think /pair/ share activity. Slides 37-39 provide a group activity; you will need to decide how to form groups ahead of time.
  6. Note: these four essentials are interrelated.
  7. It is important to note that while each component is defined separately, they cannot be separated. The diagram is an out-of-shape circle to represent the recursive nature of persuasive writing. Often we think of assessment coming at the end and being done primarily by the teacher. In this instance, we are thinking of assessment as the ongoing process by the writer that leads to revision during the writing process.
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  9. Point out to students that sometimes you are writing for a general audience (could be read by anyone). This means the writer needs to consider a wide range of readers. Discuss the implications for knowing your audience.
  10. Audience awareness is frequently the reason for choice of language. Take some time to define and give examples of formal and informal language. Discuss when each would be the appropriate choice. Examples: Formal really marvelous or good Informal (slang or jargon) sweet Formal Mr. Smith, How are you today? Informal (slang or jargon) Hey Dude, ‘wasup?
  11. Discuss with your students how this demonstrates audience awareness. (Directly addresses the audience, imagines what it is like to be the teacher, sees the need to relate to another viewpoint, etc.)
  12. If there is something that is really hot with your students, substitute it for “newest video game.” Make cards for as many groups as you need. Allow students to draw a card to find out their audience. Audiences may include: Bill Gates foundation (as a donation) Parents or guardians (as a gift) Grandparents (as a gift) A friend (as a loan) Local business Make sure you have a variety of audience types.
  13. As each group reads their letters, the listening groups fill in the form citing audience and evidence. After listening to all the letters, the group will reveal the actual audience. Groups need to discuss why the audience was easy to identify or not and record their ideas on the worksheet.
  14. Occasionally, in more sophisticated writing, the position of the writer is not revealed until later in the writing. When done well, this can be very effective.
  15. Read the student sample above. The position statement is— I am writing this letter to persuade you into making a rule against turning in late homework assignments . Discuss the position the student has stated and whether or not that statement is clear to the reader. Note where that statement appears in the paragraph. Relate to students that the position statement can be found anywhere in the piece. It might be fun for students to rewrite this paragraph attempting to place the position statement in a different place. Then discuss which position is the most effective and why.
  16. Read the student sample above. Ask students to locate the sentence that states the writer ’s position concerning late homework. Discuss the position the student has stated and whether or not that statement is clear to the reader. Note where that statement appears in the paragraph. The position statement is -- Late homework should be accepted, and I will tell you why -- found at the end of the paragraph.
  17. Discuss this example with students. This is a clear position statement presented in a more subtle and sophisticated manner. In this example the position statement is in the middle of the paragraph (I know that the rule has its pros and cons, but I really do think that the cons heavily outweigh the pros… ) and the writer uses the position as a transition into the body of the writing. If your students need additional practice there is find the position statement.doc in the document folder with three additional samples. Students may highlight or underline the position statements and compare their answers with others.
  18. Discuss with students. (The “precise words” are from the example that follows. Tell students to look for these words in the example.) Generate lists of precise words to persuade with language. Start with an ordinary word such as run or old and list precise synonyms. Discuss the difference between the connotations of the words listed. Examples: old or antique or vintage or senior cabin or vacation home or shack or hut cheap or inexpensive rerun or encore presentation See if students can generate more examples.
  19. Discuss words that could be more precise. Take suggestions from students about ways to make this piece more effective. Write on chart paper. There is also a worksheet in the document folder ( Adding precise words.doc) . The worksheet is the same as the slide and may be used with students in partners or individually instead of the slide. On the following slide there is an example of how one seventh grader wrote this paragraph.
  20. This is from the 2006 WASL.
  21. Chart several possible position statements. Have the the class brainstorm the perspectives, needs and points-of view of the audience. Chart their ideas. Also chart persuasive language that might support the position of wanting the trip. After the class has created three charts, pair students. Have each partner group write an actual letter to the Disney Corporation, choosing information and ideas from the charts.
  22. Some students have been used to writing a five-paragraph essay. This organizational structure is not an effective structure for persuasive writing. The following slides will present a variety of effective structures for use in persuasion.
  23. This is a preliminary exercise to get students to see more that one point of view and construct counter arguments (rebuttal). Students will not necessarily concede a position as they argue back and forth, but it will prepare them for the next step in concession/rebuttal. Duplicate and distribute My Turn form.doc in Document Folder . (There is also a My Turn dialogue.doc in the Document Folder that can be read aloud as an example.) On the form, have students write down the rule they want to be revised, added, or eliminated and why. Go to the next slide.
  24. Help students follow the directions on the slides. Emphasize that each partner must become very familiar with the other person's rule because they will take an opposing viewpoint. Have students then engage in an argument in writing. They are to argue the issue back and forth in a paper exchange, each challenging the other's point of view.
  25. You have a My Turn questions.doc paper in the document folder. One person should scribe for the group of three. At least one group should share with the entire group. Did anyone concede that the other side had a good point? If not, would that have made the argument stronger. In the next slides, we will explore the concept of concession/rebuttal further.
  26. Discuss this sample (from the 2006 WASL) with your students. The concession/rebuttal is in blue.
  27. Shared writing Take ideas from the class and chart times that this has happened to students in your class. As you make your list, discuss the effectiveness of the rebuttals. Example Concession: I know you don ’t want me to go to Jerome’s house since last time we started messing around and Jerome broke his arm, BUT Rebuttal: this time we will be really careful. His arm is out of the cast, and the doctor says it ’s stronger than before. We also won’t get on the trampoline this time.
  28. There are certain transitions that signal concession and rebuttal or counter argument. However, they should not become formulaic by being prescribed. You may need to discuss these transitions and give examples of how they might be used. Elicit additional ideas from students. (Some suggestions are below.) Post these transitions so that students can select from them for their writing. Additional examples: One might argue . . . For the most part . . . . Under these conditions . . . Perhaps, possibly, it is possible It must be granted No doubt If it were so In some cases It seems, it may be, in effect
  29. In the document folder is 7th concession-rebuttal samples.doc . This has two samples of 7th graders baseline papers and the concession/rebuttal they added after the lesson. You notice that the paper has not been rewritten. The student has indicated where the revision should go. This is exactly as it was seen on the student paper. Students should save this paper with revisions in their portfolios.
  30. Adapted from the 2006 WASL This is an example of how a causal chain is developed within a paper. The causal chain is elaborated and embedded in the text and is highlighted in blue.
  31. Shared writing These are the first few lines of the picture book, If You Give a Mouse a Cookie by Laura Numeroff. In the book, the sequences eventually end with he ’ll probably want a cookie . If students can’t continue, you may want to get the book from the library and see what the next event is. Stop after these five actions and challenge the group to continue the sequence and finish the book with as many items as it may take to get to “he’ll probably want a cookie. Chart their version. You may want to set a limit on the length.
  32. Here is an actual newspaper letter to the editor. Have students find the House that Jack Built strategy in this letter. (You may do this together or have students do this individually. “Vote Yes-yes.doc” is available in the document folder. )
  33. The strategies listed in this slide are those that will be addressed in the following lessons. However, there are many more possibilities that might be acceptable. (See the Introductions and Conclusions module on the OSPI website.)
  34. Discuss this introduction and which of the criteria it meets. In the following slides you will find examples of the strategies listed above. Note that these strategies are not the only possibilities. (It implies the organizational structure of the paper and states a clear position.)
  35. The next 3 slides will provide sample introductions. Read the samples out loud and identify with the class the characteristics of each and why they are effective for persuasive writing.
  36. Discuss with the class why this is an effective introduction ( grabs the reader ’s attention, contains a scenario, implies a clear position).
  37. Notice that this introduction includes a short scenario ( visit your grandpa in the hospital) a s well as several questions. Again, discuss the effective characteristics of the introduction ( grabs the reader ’s attention, takes a clear position, keeps the reader thinking by asking questions).
  38. This writer grabs our attention with an interesting statistics in the first sentence. It is followed by a clear position on late homework.
  39. Students should be with a partner. Pass out the 10 minute break.doc (found in the document folder). This document has no introduction but has a place for students to write their own. It also has no conclusion and students will use it again in the conclusions lessons. Partners discuss possibilities for introductions for this paper. Remind them to refer to the Effective Introduction s sheet as they did previously.
  40. The strategies listed in this slide are those that will be addressed in the following lesson. However, there are many more possibilities that might be acceptable. (See the Introductions and Conclusions module on the OSPI website.)
  41. Discuss this conclusion and which of the criteria it meets. (It is difficult to assess how well the conclusion connects with the body of the piece if you don ’t have the body. In this instance we have given that information in parentheses.) The positive strategy in the conclusion is that there is a call to action. In the following slides you will find examples of the strategies for conclusions. Note that these strategies are not the only possibilities.
  42. The next 3 slides will provide sample conclusions. Read the samples out loud and identify with the class the characteristics of each and why they are effective for persuasive writing.
  43. The call to action is at the end ( Say no to no late work). In addition, this conclusion includes audience awareness - directly addressing Mr. Perez, and also a rhetorical question (But isn ’t that how we get wiser?). Discuss with your students.
  44. This conclusion proposes a compromise solution to deal with students who don ’t turn work in on time. Discuss with your students.
  45. The prediction is in the center of the conclusion (If a rule as such is adopted, no one will take part in extra activities offered to them, the AP programs will be lacking, students will be falling asleep in class, and grades will begin dropping.) The position is clear and the author ends with a not so rhetorical question. Discuss with your students.
  46. Students should be with a partner Students should get out their copies of 10 minute break. Partners discuss possibilities for conclusions for this paper. Remind them to refer to the sheet Effective Conclusions as they did previously. This is a WASL paper from 2003.
  47. You will not want to do all of these at one time, but teach one or two as a lesson. The directions tell the student to use their “homework” paper for practice, but you may change the slide or directions to refer to any piece of writing that would be appropriate. Emphasize with students that these strategies are used to develop their writing and to support the author ’s position.
  48. Example
  49. Feel free to change from the homework paper to another topic or paper.
  50. The writer portrays himself/herself as an expert ( Even an A student like myself) and also offers a solution to the problem.
  51. Feel free to change from the homework paper to another topic or paper.
  52. This is an example that illustrates problem solving. Read the slide and have students discuss. Determine the effectiveness. You may want to return to this slide later and discuss how the writer has used transitions ( But in the second sentence and An alternative solution in the last sentence.)
  53. Shared writing A gallery walk is simply a walking tour around the room to see what everyone has produced. It ’s frequently done in silence. After the gallery walk, note which solutions have several stickies and read them aloud.
  54. Example
  55. Feel free to change from the homework paper to another topic or paper.
  56. A rhetorical question is a particular kind of question which, although it seems to be entirely innocent because it assumes its own answer, is a very persuasive rhetorical device. Here is an example: “How would you like to be in his position?” Obviously the answer is implied in the question and need not be given, yet the effect is to engage the reader's attention persuasively.
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  58. Feel free to change from the homework paper to another topic or paper. At the end of the series of lessons, you can have students sort through the revisions they have added to their baseline paper. They should select those that work most effectively and write a final draft. You may also want to assign a different persuasive prompt. Students apply what they have learned.
  59. This Persuasive scoring guide.doc is also found in the document folder and can be copied and distributed to each student so that it is readable. Discuss this guide with your students and pull one or two anchor papers from the WASL (on the OSPI website) and compare them to the Persuasive Scoring Guide.
  60. Whole class In the document folder you will find the following papers: Assessment sample 1.doc Assessment sample 2.doc Assessment sample 3.doc Assessment sample 4.doc Discuss papers with the students and compare them to the Scoring Guide. Decide on the elements the papers contain and designate a score. You will notice that samples 2-4 have a first draft and a revised draft so that students can see improvement with the addition of persuasive strategies. For teacher use there is an annotations of assessment.doc in the document folder which may help during the discussions. If you would like further examples of persuasive writing on the same prompt, there are three exemplary papers (from the middle school WASL) in the document folder. Exemplary texts are particularly useful as models for what students can aim for in terms of quality. There are two versions. The first ( nolatehomeworknot annotated.doc) has only the papers. The second version ( nolatehomeworkannotated.doc) has explanations of the strategies the writers have used.