1. Filming new scenes
Planning

2. New story
After talking to a few people about my trailer so
far, a lot of people said the story didn’t quite
make sense. So I have decided to add a few
more scenes to my trailer so there is a better
story to intrigue audiences.

3. New story plot
The protagonist for my film is a girl, who, when
she was younger, killed her younger brother
by accidentally harming his face.
Because she was only 10 at the time, the girl
was forced into an institution where she was
kept away from society as they thought she
was a potential risk.

4. However once the girl turns 18, new evidence is
caught showing how the girl is innocent of her
brothers death and a masked man committed
the murder.
Because of the new evidence,
the girl is released from
the institution.

5. Once released, she begins to see the masked
man in her everyday life as well as flashbacks
to her childhood.
She can’t get away from these visions and they
begin to haunt her.

6. Twist
My twist in the film is that the Summer was not
let out of the institution because new
evidence was not found of her brother’s
death. Summer created the story in her head
as freedom from the institution.

7. Additional cast
I need a younger girl to play the younger version
of Summer in flashback scenes
My young cousin fits into the role.
because my younger cousin is
underage, I asked her mother for
permission to film which I was granted

8. New scenes to film
I need a scene of a newspaper to show some of
the story without having to product too many
overwhelming scenes for a trailer.
A newspaper scene will let audiences into the
story quickly.

9. Little girl > older girl scenes
To show how the two characters are the same, I
will be using shots of the little girl actress
screaming and then following them on with
shots of the older girl screaming.

10. More montage scenes
I need to include more scenes for my montage.
Ideas:
Image of newspaper
Lights flickering on and off (to show other
characters)