2. Figurative language is used when a writer describes something
using comparisons that go beyond literal meaning.
The words mean more than what they say superficially. This gives
the writing a fresh look at a common subject.
Figurative language is not meant to be interpreted in a word by
word sense. The objects that are being compared are different
enough ways so that their similarities, when pointed out, are
interesting, unique and/or surprising.
Figurative language is used in poetry and fiction, as well as in
everyday speech. It can add “colour” to the story.
3. WHAT IS A SIMILE?
A simile draws a resemblance
between two unlike things.
A simile uses words such as like or
as to make a direct comparison.
4. SIMILES
Examples
• He was as busy as a bee
• And it seems to me you lived your life, like a candle in the
wind. "Candle in the Wind," Elton John
• It's been a hard day's night, and I've been working like a
dog. “Hard day’s night” The Beatles
• My heart is like an open highway. “It’s my life” Jon Bon Jovi
• They were like two peas in a pod
• The snow was like a blanket
• The deer ran like the wind
5. SIMILES
Examples
• He was as busy as a bee
• And it seems to me you lived your life, like a candle in the
wind. "Candle in the Wind," Elton John
• It's been a hard day's night, and I've been working like a dog.
“Hard day’s night” The Beatles
• My heart is like an open highway. “It’s my life” Jon Bon Jovi
• They were like two peas in a pod
• The snow was like a blanket
• The deer ran like the wind
6. SIMILES
More Examples
• as hungry as a bear
• as nutty as a fruitcake
• as quick as lightning
• as slippery as an eel
• as solid as a rock
• as stubborn as a mule
• as sturdy as an oak
7. WHAT IS A METAPHOR
A metaphor is a figure of speech (word or
phrase) that makes a comparison between two
unlike things, objects, people, or even feelings.
It draws a verbal picture.
A metaphor states that one thing is another
thing. It is symbolic of something else.
The comparison is made without the use of like
or as.
A metaphor is more positive that an simile – it
says the object is something.
8. METAPHORS
Examples
1. Conscience is a man’s compass. (Vincent Van Gogh)
2. All religions, arts and sciences are branches of the same
tree.(Albert Einstein)
3. Sport is war minus the shooting. (George Orwell)
4. It is raining cats and dogs.
5. You are what you eat.
6. A heart of stone (from Rebecca)
7. He has the heart of a lion.
8. You are the sun in my sky.
9. You are the light in my life.
9. METAPHORS
More Examples
• All work has dried up
• Life is a journey
• Love is a battlefield
• Drowning in a sea of …..
• Jumping for joy
• Rolling in dough
• Apple of my eye
• Homework is a breeze
• All the world’s a stage, and all the men and women merely
players. (William Shakespeare)
• Love is a lemon - either bitter or sweet. (Scott)
• Johnny was a raging tiger when he lost his lunch money.
10. TRY OUT YOUR
UNDERSTANDING
OF
SIMILES
AND
METAPHORS
Look at each of the next 10 slide and try to work out if the text
has a simile or uses a metaphor to add “colour” to the
sentence.
You don’t need to write these 10 examples down.
11. SIMILE OR METAPHOR?
• The bus wasn't air conditioned, and the hot,
heavy air was almost as stifling as the handcuffs
(p6)
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12. SIMILE OR METAPHOR
• The bus wasn't air conditioned, and the hot,
heavy air was almost as stifling as the handcuffs
(p6)
ANSWER: SIMILE
15. SIMILE OR METAPHOR?
“One hundred and ten years ago, Green Lake was
the largest lake in Texas. It was full of clear cool
water, and it sparkled like a giant emerald in the
sun.” (page101).
3
16. SIMILE OR METAPHOR?
One hundred and ten years ago, Green Lake was the
largest lake in Texas. It was full of clear cool water, and it
sparkled like a giant emerald in the sun (page101).
ANSWER: SIMILE
17. SIMILE OR METAPHOR?
“When they reached flat ground, Stanley looked
up to see the sun, a fiery ball balancing on top
of Big Thumb. God was twirling a
basketball” (p166)
4
18. SIMILE OR METAPHOR?
“When they reached flat ground, Stanley looked up to see
the sun, a fiery ball balancing on top of Big Thumb. God
was twirling a basketball” (p166)
Answer: Metaphor
25. “It said that Green Lake was "heaven on earth" and
that Miss Katherine's spiced peaches were "food
for the angels".” p102
SIMILE OR METAPHOR?
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26. SIMILE OR METAPHOR?
“It said that Green Lake was "heaven on earth" and that
Miss Katherine's spiced peaches were "food for the
angels".” p102
Answer: Metaphor
27. Zero’s face looked like a jack-o’-lantern that had
been left out too many days past Halloween. (Page
155)
SIMILE OR METAPHOR?
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28. Zero’s face looked like a jack-o’-lantern that had been left
out too many days past Halloween. (Page 155)
SIMILE OR METAPHOR?
ANSWER: SIMILE
29. Myra's head is as empty as a flowerpot (p30)
SIMILE OR METAPHOR?
10
30. Myra's head is as empty as a flowerpot" (p30)
SIMILE OR METAPHOR?
ANSWER: SIMILE
31. SIMILES
OR
METAPHORS
NOW IT IS YOUR TURN
TO WORK OUT
WHICH SENTENCES
CONTAIN
You will write your answers in your OneNote folder.
Create a GRAMMAR Section
Then create a page with the Title – “Similes and Metaphors”
32. TASK 1
1. Write down a definition for both a simile and a metaphor
On the next 2 slides there are 12 questions. Read them
carefully. You have to determine if the sentence contains a
simile or metaphor.
2. Please copy all questions onto your page then beside each,
write down whether it is a simile or metaphor and identify,
by highlighting, which words you are describing.
33. SIMILE OR METAPHOR
1. "The bark on the tree was as soft as the skies." p39
2. “I know it’s hot, but I feel so very cold. ….. My heart is
cold.” p120
3. “It felt like heaven as it flowed over his dry mouth and
down his parched throat. p157
4. “The peak looked to him exactly like a giant fist, with a
thumb sticking straight up.” p128
5. Elya Yelnats' luck was poisoned meat that he passed
down for generations to his family.
6. “There she is!” Trout shouted. “The Devil Woman!” p112
34. SIMILE OR METAPHOR
7. “You want to run away? You’ll be buzzard food in three
days.” p15
8. “…the lightning was coming out of the thumb, as if it were
the thumb of God.” p129
9. The Warden's fingernails were deadly weapons after she
painted them with rattlesnake venom. (from ch9 p90-910).
10. “Her brain and heart had been spinning ever since Sam
kissed her”. p112
11. “Zero sat as still as a statue”. p205
12. His throat felt as if it was coated with sandpaper. p191.
36. It's not that easy bein' green;
Having to spend each day the color of the leaves.
When I think it could be nicer being red, or yellow or
gold-
or something much more colorful like that.
It's not easy bein' green.
It seems you blend in with so many other ordinary things.
And people tend to pass you over 'cause you're not standing out like flashy
sparkles in the water- or stars in the sky.
But green's the color of Spring.
And green can be cool and friendly-like.
And green can be big like an ocean, or important like a mountain, or tall
like a tree.
When green is all there is to be
It could make you wonder why, but why wonder why? Wonder,
I am green and it'll do fine, it's beautiful!
And I think it's what I want to be.
TASK: 2
Look at the words to “It’s not that easy being Green”
Find the Similes (Yellow) – Metaphors (green)
37. TASK: 3
Create a poster
(using whatever tool you prefer)
that explains
similes
and
metaphors
38. TASK: 4
Chose 5 of the following characters from ‘Holes’..
On you & write two sentences on each of them.
1. Stanley
2. Mr Sir
3. Katherine Barlow
4. Zero
5. Zig-Zag
6. Mr Pendanski
7. The Warden
8. X-Ray
9. Armpit
One of the sentences must contain a simile and the other a metaphor.
Example example:
a. Zero smelled like a skunk after days of not bathing. (Simile)
b. Zero was a mole as he dug his five-foot deep hole. (Metaphor)
39. On the next slide you will see that U2 had a song
in the late 80’s.
• Does the song use metaphors or similes?
• Which lines?
EXTENSION ACTIVITY
40. LISTEN TO
“HAWKMOON
269 ” BY U2.
HIGHLIGHT
SIMILES
IN YELLOW AND
METAPHORS IN
GREEN.
Like a desert needs rain
Like a town needs a name
I need your love
Like a drifter needs a room
Hawkmoon
I need your love [Repeat]
Like a rhythm unbroken
Like drums in the night
Like sweet soul music
Like sunlight
I need your love
Like coming home
And you don't know where you've
been
Like black coffee
Like nicotine
I need your love (I need your love)
[Repeat]
When the night has no end
And the day yet to begin
As the room spins around
I need your love (Repeat)
Like a Phoenix rising needs a holy tree
Like the sweet revenge of a bitter
enemy
I need your love
Like the hot needs the sun
Like honey on her tongue
Like the muzzle of a gun
Like oxygen
Like the hot needs the sun
Like honey on her tongue
Like the muzzle of a gun
Like oxygen
I need your love (I need your love)
(Repeat)
When the night has no end
And the day yet to begin
As the room spins around
I need your love
I need your love... [Repeat 9 times]
Like thunder needs rain
Like a preacher needs pain
Like tongues of flame
Like a sheet stained
I need your love [Repeat]
Like a needle in a vein
Like someone to blame
Like a thought unchained
Like a runaway train
I need your love
I need your love... [Repeat 7 times]
Like faith needs a doubt
Like a freeway out
I need your love
Like powder needs a spark
Like lies need the dark
I need your love
In the heart of the heat of the love
In the heart of the heat of the love...
41. I examined how the writer used figurative
language devices (similes and metaphors)
to engage the reader’s interest. To do this:
A. I identified some of the devices in the text .
B. I explained how most of the devices worked in the
Holes text and created some of my own similes
and metaphors for it.
C. I gave detailed explanations about how the
devices worked in the Holes text, creating my
own similes and metaphors for it and applied my
knowledge to other forms of writing.
LESSON
Reflection
Choose which
statement
applies to
you.
Briefly explain
your choice.
Put your
answer at the
bottom of the
lesson page
Notas del editor
Where are the similes? – The clues?
These are all very common and well established - used in many descriptions by many people. Ou may have heard quite a few of them.
A metaphor is a figure of speech comparing two unlike things that have something in common.
Metaphors describe one thing as if it were another.
1. A conscience (a concept connected sentient (thinking/feeling) being is simply not a compass (a physical object) meant to help find the right direction in which to travel. The moral “compass” is the conscience, which points out where to go when you’re morally lost.
2. All these aspirations are directed toward ennobling life, lifting it from the sphere of mere physical existence & leading the individual towards freedom.”
3. George Orwell’s quote is abbreviated. In 1945 he wrote “Sport is war minus the shooting." To put it into context: the passage which precedes this phrase. "Serious sport has nothing to do with fair play. It is bound up with hatred, jealousy, boastfulness, disregard of all rules and sadistic pleasure in witnessing violence.“ So, according to Orwell, "serious sport" is all about dominance, complete and other control without regard to anyone else. It is not simply “a game” but a competition.
4. Origin -unknown, it seems a likely derivation from some natural phenomenon. First used by Jonathan Swift, who used it several times -1st in 1710.
Its literal meaning is “raining heavily,” and it refers to poor sanitary conditions in London. It is thought that he was alluding to the filthy streets (early 18th century) of England. Heavy rains would carry along debris and dead animals and of course, the animals had not fallen from the sky. Rather, the sight of these dead animals floating by in a rain storm may have been the cause of the coining of this phrase.
5. It is a metaphorical expression implying what people eat could eventually affect their lives. If they eat healthy food, they will feel healthy, and if they eat rubbish and junk food, they will not feel healthy. To simply put it, food defines your physical and mental character. .
6. To have a heart of stone means the person does not show any sympathy, conscience or pity.
7. Heart of a lion - Having a lot of courage and being brave.
8. "You are the sun in my sky," means that the person being spoken about is the light in author’s life. Since the Earth revolves around the sun, this phrase can mean that a person's life revolves around the person to whom the compliment was given.
9. If a person says”You is are the light of my life” it means that the person is someone that you love very much.
These metaphors are well known – used in writing often in poetry and songs, but also in everyday conversations and writing.
How many do you know? Even if you have not heard them before, can you work out the meaning for them anyway?
Next are a few slides – can you correctly identify if a simile or a metaphor used in the sentences?
Next are a few slides - can you correctly identify if a simile or a metaphor used in the sentences?
This simile clearly illustrates Stanley's uncomfortable situation and his lack of agency.
The simile conveys the former beauty of the now dried, dead Green Lake. Comparing the lake to "a giant emerald" creates a clear image of a pristine environment with nothing to mar its natural beauty. Emeralds also symbolize preciousness and wealth, further emphasizing the former beauty of the place, and also hinting at the material wealth that families like Trout Walker derived from the lake. This elaborate description juxtaposes with the current state of Green Lake, described as "a dry, flat wasteland." Water has become a precious commodity in the present Camp Green Lake - as precious as emeralds to the boys who suffer from thirst all day, every day. The simile is significant as it contrasts the locations former beauty with its current derelict state, to make the place appear even more hostile.
This simile clearly conveys Stanley's fear and his thirst, as well as the constant hardships the young offenders face in the harsh conditions of Camp Green Lake. Furthermore, the simile echoes the natural imagery throughout the novel and the motif of the lake, connecting Stanley's fear to the dry, barren landscape. In this way, the land represents the plight of the boys who dig in it.
There is an element of dramatic irony in this section because the reader, like Stanley, knows that the team is unlikely to find anything in the hole.
We know that the tube was actually found in a totally different location the day before.
Sachar uses quite striking figurative language to describe how Stanley registers (MEMORISES) the real location in his mind, writing that Stanley "dug the hole into his memory“ It is not done literally but the rather a dramatic use of language to gain real effect.
The implication is that Green Lake was once a beautiful place – drawing on a sense of nostalgia through repetition of past tense “was and were“. The positive phrases such as “Heaven…” & "food for the angels." have a religious imagery – suggesting that Green Lake used to be a PARADISE, compared to the wasteland Stanley finds it in now.
There is also a deliberate contrast between the delicious spiced peaches and the bland meals the boys eat - further illustrating their dire situation.
This simile describes the first time Stanley sees Zero smile. This typically positive action is portrayed in a grotesque way. Stanley explains that because Zero is often angry, it is unusual when he does smile. For this reason, the author uses the simile to create a warped image of a wicked grimace. The comparison to a jack-o'-lantern has frightening connotations, and further emphasizes the incongruity of his smile. This simile gives great insight into Zero's character, presenting him as angry and bizarre, a boy that only Stanley can really get close to or elicit any positive reaction from. It is perhaps also important that this smile comes in the context of Stanley talking about his "no-good-dirty-rotten-pig-stealing-great-great-grandfather" - words that Zero's ancestor Madame Zeroni might equally have used when characterizing the man who forgot her and paid a heavy price for this betrayal.
This simile manages to characterize Myra - a relatively superficial and two-dimensional character - in one quick, effective stroke. There are negative connotations to this description, of course. Myra is naive, unintelligent, and foolish---The comparison to a "flowerpot" also suggests femininity, emphasizing Myra's girlish qualities and also suggests beauty, as flowers embody the beauty of nature.(The speaker later admits that the girl is very beautiful). However, these positive connotations are crucially undercut by the adjective "empty." This is a biting simile
1. As soft as the skies (Simile) 2. My heart is cold (Metaphor) 3. .. like heaven (Simile)
4. like a giant fist (Simile) 5. luck was poisoned meat (Metaphor) 6. the devil woman (Metaphor)
7. You’ll be buzzard food (metaphor) 8. as if it were the thumb of God (Simile) 9. fingernails were deadly weapons (metaphor)
10. …brain and heart had been spinning (Metaphor) 11. still as a statue (Simile) 12. .. as if it was coated with sandpaper. (Simile)