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  1. 1. Title By Candice Russell Candice Russell The Beacon School
  2. 2. FADE IN: INT. MUSIC PRACTICE STUDIO - DAY Asian A level student [SWEETAH] nervously stands leaning against the wall of a practice room, holding a jumble of papers. The door to the room is partially open. YOUNG ADULT MALE BAND MEMBERS are tinkering around with their instruments. Sweetah is engrossed as she listens with enthusiasm to the unidentified miss-mash of music. Suddenly without warning, a YOUNG ADULT MALE [BRANDON] bursts through the door, making Sweetah jump. The unexpected encounter forces Sweetah to drop her papers into a scattered pile on the floor. Embarrassed Sweetah, nervously smiles at Brandon. Brandom slowly runs his eyes down Sweetah’s body. SWEETAH Oh, I am so sorry Brandon bends down to gather up the loose scattered paper, staring at Sweetah’s ankles. BRANDON Why? Don’t be Brandon slowly gets back up and hands the pile of paper to a nervous Sweetah. SWEETAH Er thanks. Er have you had a chance to view the song I wrote? Brandan tenderly smiles at her. BRANDON Sort of, I’m off for a smoke, join me. Brandan heads in the direction of the main door and Sweetah eagerly follows him. EXT. MUSIC PRACTICE STUDIO COURTYARD - DAY Brandon walks briskly towards the bench and then immediately halts. He stares at Sweetah who is now in front of him. Continuing to admiringly stare at her, he draws a lighter and a packet of cigarettes out from his jacket pocket. Takes one cigarette out of the packet and holds it to his mouth, whilst replacing the packet back into his pocket. He then lights the cigarette and draws in his first puff. Smoothly, he blows the smoke out and offers the cigarette to Sweetah. (CONTINUED)
  3. 3. CONTINUED: 2. She looks intensively at the cigarette and then hesitantly back to Brandon. SWEETAH I don’t smoke, thanks. BRANDON (Suggestively) Try it, you may even enjoy it. Gingerly Sweetah holds out her hand to receive the cigarette. She takes it to her mouth and tries to draw it in, but the smoke is choking and she coughs with embarrassment and offers the cigarette back. She observes Brandon’s slight grin as he retrieves it back. With his other hand he gently touches her arm, in an attempt to console her. SWEETAH (Feeling a little more confident) My song, what do you think? BRANDON (Politely) Yeah, OK, needs some work though. You free now? SWEETAH Yes, but we can’t go back to mine, my dad wouldn’t understand. Brandon eyes Sweetah up and down and gestures her to follow him, as he stumps out the cigarette with his foot. BRANDON I know somewhere, come. Star stuck and spell bound she accompanies him. EXT. DESERTED ALLEYWAY - DAY Walking down some stairs leading to a deserted alleyway, Brandon stops and discreetly removes a small, unidentified package out from his jacket pocket. He takes one of the pills out of the package and offers the other to Sweetah. Astonished and unprepared, Sweetah takes a huge breath of fresh air. She steps back and shakes her head, whilst looking deep into Brandon’s widening eyes as he alluringly licks his lips. Sweetah becomes confused and bewildered at the very suggestion.
  4. 4. 3. Brandon re-offers the pill to her with an intimidating and hard stare, almost suggesting it is not an option to refuse. She slowly and hesitantly obliges and swallows it whole in an attempt to get rid of it immediately. EXT. CAR YARD GATES = DAY The couple happily walk along a rough alley road, until Brandon halts at a large purple gate. He becomes furious and violently rattles the door. SWEETAH Hey, what’s the problem? BRANDON It’s locked, it’s never locked. SWEETAH Who’s lockup is it? BRANDON Just a mates. Feeling his anguish Sweetah removes a hairpin from her hair and twiddles it into the padlock. A delighted and amazed Sweetah looks directly at Brandan as the padlock comes away in her hand. Brandon opens the door to the yard and silently beckons Sweetah to follow him. Frightfully hesitant Sweetah delicately places her hand in Brandon’s and allows him to lead her into the yard. INT. CAR YARD - DAY Brandon leads Sweetah through a maze of classic cars. She observes with caution as he eagerly attempts to open varies cars. She begins to feel content that this venture will be short lived. Brandan becomes anxious, as he tries to open the back door of a old ford zodiac and to his relief the door freely opens. Immediately Sweetah becomes horrified as Brandon hastily jumps into the car, urging her to join him. For a brief moment, she hesitates, but complies with his request.
  5. 5. 4. INT. CAR SEAT - DAY Sweetah feels Brandon’s tender arms embrace her body as they sink back into the seat sharing a loving kiss. Preoccupied the female does not notice or hear the MALE OWNER of the yard turn up. EXT.CAR YARD GATES - DAY The yard owner is bewildered and seriously confused to see his padlock on the floor and the door to his yard open. Hastily he enters his yard. INT. CAR YARD - DAY The owner scans his yard, looking for signs of disturbance. He sighs with relief and then rushes to his CCTV Station. Curiously, and observantly he scans the CCTV status, noticing that nothing has been disturbed. He then begins to make a cup of tea in the kitchen area. Brandan becomes more sexually persistent towards Sweetah. She becomes stressed and pushes him off of her and emerges to a sitting position. SWEETAH Have you got a... BRANDON No, do I need one? Sweetah observes as Brandon becomes anxious and inconsiderate, as he starts to pull her towards him. SWEETAH Well yeah. otherwise I want to go home. An extremely annoyed, but silent Brandon unwraps his arms from around her and quietly exits the car. BRANDON Alright I’ll be right back. He rushes out of the yard. Neither, the owner of the yard or the young male notice one another. Sweetah, restfully sinks back into the seat to await the males return. The owner’s mobile, rings. He engages in a muffled conversation. He then proceeds to exit the yard. (CONTINUED)
  6. 6. CONTINUED: 5. Sweetah, begins to foam at the mouth and her eyes begin to roll. EXT. CAR YARD GATES - DAY The owner firmly closes the gate door and secures it with the padlock, checking it is definitely secure. INT. CAR SEAT- DAY Sweetah goes into a convolution that leads to a violent and overly dramatic seizure. EXT. CAR YARD GATES - DAY The yard owner gets into his van and drives away, passing a oblivious Brandon on his way. Standing at the yard gate, Brandon is confused. BRANDON (Shouts) Sweetah, Sweetah where are you? There is complete silence all around. BRANDON (Screams) Sweetah, Sweetah FADE OUT. THE END

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