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A2 First Assessment: Sep 2013 Name: Sophie
General A very good start to the year, you have created a body of work that shows clear cohesion
between the two part s of unit 3. As always your visual work is strong but you must make
sure all visual documentation is clearly visible to be able to see fully your thought processes.
Task Assessment Criteria
Covered
Feedback AO band
Leaflet AO1 An excellent leaflet that has a real professional feel
to it. The subject matter is extremely interesting
and very topical. The classic theme is one which I
think would work well at the Tate as a more
traditional gallery. Your research demonstrates
your fluent ability to glean significant information
from your chosen sources.
AO1: Fluent
Practical Work and
Gallery responses.
AO1
AO3
The documentary / journey work looks as if it could
be interesting but it is very difficult for me to make
a judgement because the images are so small. I
appreciate you want to make an edit but I (and the
examiner) needs to see your visual thought
processes to be able to give you the marks that
you are due. It is essential that your visual
decisions are shown on screen.
It is rather disappointing that you have not
completed all the tasks set for you in the summer
and this is demonstrated by your lack of gallery
responses.
AO1: basic
AO3: confident
Observational Starting
Points
AO3
AO2
Good work you have made a strong start to the
practical brief that is backed up with equally as
strong contextual research.
CONTACT SHEETS MUST BE LARGER
AO3: Confident
AO2: Confident
Research Starting
Points
AO1 AO1:
A2 first assessment sophie

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A2 first assessment sophie

  • 1. A2 First Assessment: Sep 2013 Name: Sophie General A very good start to the year, you have created a body of work that shows clear cohesion between the two part s of unit 3. As always your visual work is strong but you must make sure all visual documentation is clearly visible to be able to see fully your thought processes. Task Assessment Criteria Covered Feedback AO band Leaflet AO1 An excellent leaflet that has a real professional feel to it. The subject matter is extremely interesting and very topical. The classic theme is one which I think would work well at the Tate as a more traditional gallery. Your research demonstrates your fluent ability to glean significant information from your chosen sources. AO1: Fluent Practical Work and Gallery responses. AO1 AO3 The documentary / journey work looks as if it could be interesting but it is very difficult for me to make a judgement because the images are so small. I appreciate you want to make an edit but I (and the examiner) needs to see your visual thought processes to be able to give you the marks that you are due. It is essential that your visual decisions are shown on screen. It is rather disappointing that you have not completed all the tasks set for you in the summer and this is demonstrated by your lack of gallery responses. AO1: basic AO3: confident Observational Starting Points AO3 AO2 Good work you have made a strong start to the practical brief that is backed up with equally as strong contextual research. CONTACT SHEETS MUST BE LARGER AO3: Confident AO2: Confident Research Starting Points AO1 AO1: