SlideShare una empresa de Scribd logo
1 de 1
Descargar para leer sin conexión
I submitted the introduction and this is feedback I got back. Can
you help me fix this?
Luis,• Week 1: Introduction (250–300 words)You will research
and find an example of a firm that is going through
transformational change. The first part of the plan will be the
Introduction. Context for the introduction includes the
following:o How were the stakeholders affected?o What
initiated the change?o How well has it been received or
accepted, and why?Task Requirements: Luis, you did not choose
a company and you did not answer all of the questions.
15/25Demonstration & application of knowledge: What you
wrote was well written but also very general. Your opening
paragraph was essentially a copy and paste of the assignment
which does not provide me any details on your chosen
organization. This is a large part of this assignment and needs
to be included moving forward. 40/55Academic Writing &
Format: The title page used is not what I listed, please make
sure to use this moving forward. 15/20Score:Proficient: 90 -
100%Effective: 80 - 89%Developing: 60 - 79%Unsatisfactory: 0
- 59%

Más contenido relacionado

Similar a I submitted the introduction and this is feedback I got back. Can yo.docx

CSUFOB 340B. LuskIssues at NEWGENNEWGEN is.docx
CSUFOB 340B. LuskIssues at NEWGENNEWGEN is.docxCSUFOB 340B. LuskIssues at NEWGENNEWGEN is.docx
CSUFOB 340B. LuskIssues at NEWGENNEWGEN is.docxannettsparrow
 
DiscussionEach week, youll have to post on at least three separat.docx
DiscussionEach week, youll have to post on at least three separat.docxDiscussionEach week, youll have to post on at least three separat.docx
DiscussionEach week, youll have to post on at least three separat.docxemersonpearline
 
Project management presentation.pptx
Project management presentation.pptxProject management presentation.pptx
Project management presentation.pptxAsadAli719
 
Interview Handout
Interview HandoutInterview Handout
Interview Handoutxnder
 
Reflective Essay assessment template
Reflective Essay assessment templateReflective Essay assessment template
Reflective Essay assessment templateMeezan Bank
 
NetKi Enterprises 7 steps to Cover Letter Success
NetKi Enterprises 7 steps to Cover Letter SuccessNetKi Enterprises 7 steps to Cover Letter Success
NetKi Enterprises 7 steps to Cover Letter SuccessNanette Kirk, MBA
 
ASU Startup School Session 1
ASU Startup School Session 1ASU Startup School Session 1
ASU Startup School Session 1Innovative Circus
 
Reflective Assessment Category 2 Written Assignment Self-re.docx
Reflective Assessment Category 2 Written Assignment  Self-re.docxReflective Assessment Category 2 Written Assignment  Self-re.docx
Reflective Assessment Category 2 Written Assignment Self-re.docxcarlt3
 
Assignment 2 Market FormsFor this assignment you will do a sign.docx
Assignment 2 Market FormsFor this assignment you will do a sign.docxAssignment 2 Market FormsFor this assignment you will do a sign.docx
Assignment 2 Market FormsFor this assignment you will do a sign.docxsherni1
 
Top 9 sql server 2005 interview questions answers
Top 9 sql server 2005 interview questions answersTop 9 sql server 2005 interview questions answers
Top 9 sql server 2005 interview questions answersjonhmart036
 
Assignment InstructionsThere are 2 parts. the first part, the one .docx
Assignment InstructionsThere are 2 parts. the first part, the one .docxAssignment InstructionsThere are 2 parts. the first part, the one .docx
Assignment InstructionsThere are 2 parts. the first part, the one .docxsimba35
 
Getting To Know You: The Purpose of Each College Application Essay
Getting To Know You: The Purpose of Each College Application EssayGetting To Know You: The Purpose of Each College Application Essay
Getting To Know You: The Purpose of Each College Application EssayRebecca Joseph
 
Prototype and test assignment prototype 2
Prototype and test assignment   prototype 2Prototype and test assignment   prototype 2
Prototype and test assignment prototype 2Paul Kneipp
 
MU0018 – Change Management
MU0018 – Change ManagementMU0018 – Change Management
MU0018 – Change Managementsmumbahelp
 
Ba302 organizational behavior problem-solving project guidelines
Ba302 organizational behavior problem-solving project guidelinesBa302 organizational behavior problem-solving project guidelines
Ba302 organizational behavior problem-solving project guidelinesssuser454af01
 
Unit VII AssignmentInstructions This assignment involves answer.docx
Unit VII AssignmentInstructions This assignment involves answer.docxUnit VII AssignmentInstructions This assignment involves answer.docx
Unit VII AssignmentInstructions This assignment involves answer.docxouldparis
 
Unit VII Assignment  Instructions This assignment involves answerin.docx
Unit VII Assignment  Instructions This assignment involves answerin.docxUnit VII Assignment  Instructions This assignment involves answerin.docx
Unit VII Assignment  Instructions This assignment involves answerin.docxgibbonshay
 

Similar a I submitted the introduction and this is feedback I got back. Can yo.docx (20)

CSUFOB 340B. LuskIssues at NEWGENNEWGEN is.docx
CSUFOB 340B. LuskIssues at NEWGENNEWGEN is.docxCSUFOB 340B. LuskIssues at NEWGENNEWGEN is.docx
CSUFOB 340B. LuskIssues at NEWGENNEWGEN is.docx
 
DiscussionEach week, youll have to post on at least three separat.docx
DiscussionEach week, youll have to post on at least three separat.docxDiscussionEach week, youll have to post on at least three separat.docx
DiscussionEach week, youll have to post on at least three separat.docx
 
Project management presentation.pptx
Project management presentation.pptxProject management presentation.pptx
Project management presentation.pptx
 
Interview Handout
Interview HandoutInterview Handout
Interview Handout
 
Reflective Essay assessment template
Reflective Essay assessment templateReflective Essay assessment template
Reflective Essay assessment template
 
NetKi Enterprises 7 steps to Cover Letter Success
NetKi Enterprises 7 steps to Cover Letter SuccessNetKi Enterprises 7 steps to Cover Letter Success
NetKi Enterprises 7 steps to Cover Letter Success
 
ASU Startup School Session 1
ASU Startup School Session 1ASU Startup School Session 1
ASU Startup School Session 1
 
Reflective Assessment Category 2 Written Assignment Self-re.docx
Reflective Assessment Category 2 Written Assignment  Self-re.docxReflective Assessment Category 2 Written Assignment  Self-re.docx
Reflective Assessment Category 2 Written Assignment Self-re.docx
 
Assignment 2 Market FormsFor this assignment you will do a sign.docx
Assignment 2 Market FormsFor this assignment you will do a sign.docxAssignment 2 Market FormsFor this assignment you will do a sign.docx
Assignment 2 Market FormsFor this assignment you will do a sign.docx
 
2nd Annual IT Recruiters Roundtable (BDPA Cincinnati)
2nd Annual IT Recruiters Roundtable (BDPA Cincinnati)2nd Annual IT Recruiters Roundtable (BDPA Cincinnati)
2nd Annual IT Recruiters Roundtable (BDPA Cincinnati)
 
Five Conversations Framework
Five Conversations Framework Five Conversations Framework
Five Conversations Framework
 
Top 9 sql server 2005 interview questions answers
Top 9 sql server 2005 interview questions answersTop 9 sql server 2005 interview questions answers
Top 9 sql server 2005 interview questions answers
 
Assignment InstructionsThere are 2 parts. the first part, the one .docx
Assignment InstructionsThere are 2 parts. the first part, the one .docxAssignment InstructionsThere are 2 parts. the first part, the one .docx
Assignment InstructionsThere are 2 parts. the first part, the one .docx
 
Study material
Study materialStudy material
Study material
 
Getting To Know You: The Purpose of Each College Application Essay
Getting To Know You: The Purpose of Each College Application EssayGetting To Know You: The Purpose of Each College Application Essay
Getting To Know You: The Purpose of Each College Application Essay
 
Prototype and test assignment prototype 2
Prototype and test assignment   prototype 2Prototype and test assignment   prototype 2
Prototype and test assignment prototype 2
 
MU0018 – Change Management
MU0018 – Change ManagementMU0018 – Change Management
MU0018 – Change Management
 
Ba302 organizational behavior problem-solving project guidelines
Ba302 organizational behavior problem-solving project guidelinesBa302 organizational behavior problem-solving project guidelines
Ba302 organizational behavior problem-solving project guidelines
 
Unit VII AssignmentInstructions This assignment involves answer.docx
Unit VII AssignmentInstructions This assignment involves answer.docxUnit VII AssignmentInstructions This assignment involves answer.docx
Unit VII AssignmentInstructions This assignment involves answer.docx
 
Unit VII Assignment  Instructions This assignment involves answerin.docx
Unit VII Assignment  Instructions This assignment involves answerin.docxUnit VII Assignment  Instructions This assignment involves answerin.docx
Unit VII Assignment  Instructions This assignment involves answerin.docx
 

Más de heathmirella

I wanr Equipment Evaluation report that fulfil the attached question.docx
I wanr Equipment Evaluation report that fulfil the attached question.docxI wanr Equipment Evaluation report that fulfil the attached question.docx
I wanr Equipment Evaluation report that fulfil the attached question.docxheathmirella
 
I simply have HW. I got the essay from my friend. The only thing i n.docx
I simply have HW. I got the essay from my friend. The only thing i n.docxI simply have HW. I got the essay from my friend. The only thing i n.docx
I simply have HW. I got the essay from my friend. The only thing i n.docxheathmirella
 
I want someone professional in mathematics. (Elements of Discrete Ma.docx
I want someone professional in mathematics. (Elements of Discrete Ma.docxI want someone professional in mathematics. (Elements of Discrete Ma.docx
I want someone professional in mathematics. (Elements of Discrete Ma.docxheathmirella
 
i want a report about the uploaded parsentation these are the qustio.docx
i want a report about the uploaded parsentation these are the qustio.docxi want a report about the uploaded parsentation these are the qustio.docx
i want a report about the uploaded parsentation these are the qustio.docxheathmirella
 
i want an essaypresentation one or one and a half page paper about .docx
i want an essaypresentation one or one and a half page paper about .docxi want an essaypresentation one or one and a half page paper about .docx
i want an essaypresentation one or one and a half page paper about .docxheathmirella
 
i want an essay for 800 wordsWhat is a process improvementWhy a.docx
i want an essay for 800 wordsWhat is a process improvementWhy a.docxi want an essay for 800 wordsWhat is a process improvementWhy a.docx
i want an essay for 800 wordsWhat is a process improvementWhy a.docxheathmirella
 
i want answer the assignment in finanic there is 6 Q all detiles in .docx
i want answer the assignment in finanic there is 6 Q all detiles in .docxi want answer the assignment in finanic there is 6 Q all detiles in .docx
i want answer the assignment in finanic there is 6 Q all detiles in .docxheathmirella
 
I want an essay that has 5-6 pages.The essay should be in MLA form.docx
I want an essay that has 5-6 pages.The essay should be in MLA form.docxI want an essay that has 5-6 pages.The essay should be in MLA form.docx
I want an essay that has 5-6 pages.The essay should be in MLA form.docxheathmirella
 
i want a 500 words essay about why junk food is bad.the first 30.docx
i want a 500 words essay about why junk food is bad.the first 30.docxi want a 500 words essay about why junk food is bad.the first 30.docx
i want a 500 words essay about why junk food is bad.the first 30.docxheathmirella
 
I want a lab to be rephrased. Please ignore the calculations and num.docx
I want a lab to be rephrased. Please ignore the calculations and num.docxI want a lab to be rephrased. Please ignore the calculations and num.docx
I want a lab to be rephrased. Please ignore the calculations and num.docxheathmirella
 
I wanna someone to write a report for my project between 8-10 Pages .docx
I wanna someone to write a report for my project between 8-10 Pages .docxI wanna someone to write a report for my project between 8-10 Pages .docx
I wanna someone to write a report for my project between 8-10 Pages .docxheathmirella
 
I posted 5 questions with thier FINAL answers shown.All I need t.docx
I posted 5 questions with thier FINAL answers shown.All I need t.docxI posted 5 questions with thier FINAL answers shown.All I need t.docx
I posted 5 questions with thier FINAL answers shown.All I need t.docxheathmirella
 
I submitted this assigment and someone had agreed to do it but after.docx
I submitted this assigment and someone had agreed to do it but after.docxI submitted this assigment and someone had agreed to do it but after.docx
I submitted this assigment and someone had agreed to do it but after.docxheathmirella
 
i want a report about the uploaded case study these are the qustions.docx
i want a report about the uploaded case study these are the qustions.docxi want a report about the uploaded case study these are the qustions.docx
i want a report about the uploaded case study these are the qustions.docxheathmirella
 
I want one page and half which include 1- why do I like him and .docx
I want one page and half which include 1- why do I like him and .docxI want one page and half which include 1- why do I like him and .docx
I want one page and half which include 1- why do I like him and .docxheathmirella
 
I ran out of ideas to complete the work to make it a 2 page single l.docx
I ran out of ideas to complete the work to make it a 2 page single l.docxI ran out of ideas to complete the work to make it a 2 page single l.docx
I ran out of ideas to complete the work to make it a 2 page single l.docxheathmirella
 
I WANT BARBARA MAKAYLAOperating Budget  This will be onwithi.docx
I WANT BARBARA MAKAYLAOperating Budget  This will be onwithi.docxI WANT BARBARA MAKAYLAOperating Budget  This will be onwithi.docx
I WANT BARBARA MAKAYLAOperating Budget  This will be onwithi.docxheathmirella
 
I picked Luchy Charms cercal Review the requirements for the Portfol.docx
I picked Luchy Charms cercal Review the requirements for the Portfol.docxI picked Luchy Charms cercal Review the requirements for the Portfol.docx
I picked Luchy Charms cercal Review the requirements for the Portfol.docxheathmirella
 
I ONLY WORK WITH PROFESSOR GEEK, ALL YOU OTHER WRITES GO AWAY!!!.docx
I ONLY WORK WITH PROFESSOR GEEK, ALL YOU OTHER WRITES GO AWAY!!!.docxI ONLY WORK WITH PROFESSOR GEEK, ALL YOU OTHER WRITES GO AWAY!!!.docx
I ONLY WORK WITH PROFESSOR GEEK, ALL YOU OTHER WRITES GO AWAY!!!.docxheathmirella
 
I need two pages for two topics First page 4 main goals you .docx
I need two pages for two topics First page 4 main goals you .docxI need two pages for two topics First page 4 main goals you .docx
I need two pages for two topics First page 4 main goals you .docxheathmirella
 

Más de heathmirella (20)

I wanr Equipment Evaluation report that fulfil the attached question.docx
I wanr Equipment Evaluation report that fulfil the attached question.docxI wanr Equipment Evaluation report that fulfil the attached question.docx
I wanr Equipment Evaluation report that fulfil the attached question.docx
 
I simply have HW. I got the essay from my friend. The only thing i n.docx
I simply have HW. I got the essay from my friend. The only thing i n.docxI simply have HW. I got the essay from my friend. The only thing i n.docx
I simply have HW. I got the essay from my friend. The only thing i n.docx
 
I want someone professional in mathematics. (Elements of Discrete Ma.docx
I want someone professional in mathematics. (Elements of Discrete Ma.docxI want someone professional in mathematics. (Elements of Discrete Ma.docx
I want someone professional in mathematics. (Elements of Discrete Ma.docx
 
i want a report about the uploaded parsentation these are the qustio.docx
i want a report about the uploaded parsentation these are the qustio.docxi want a report about the uploaded parsentation these are the qustio.docx
i want a report about the uploaded parsentation these are the qustio.docx
 
i want an essaypresentation one or one and a half page paper about .docx
i want an essaypresentation one or one and a half page paper about .docxi want an essaypresentation one or one and a half page paper about .docx
i want an essaypresentation one or one and a half page paper about .docx
 
i want an essay for 800 wordsWhat is a process improvementWhy a.docx
i want an essay for 800 wordsWhat is a process improvementWhy a.docxi want an essay for 800 wordsWhat is a process improvementWhy a.docx
i want an essay for 800 wordsWhat is a process improvementWhy a.docx
 
i want answer the assignment in finanic there is 6 Q all detiles in .docx
i want answer the assignment in finanic there is 6 Q all detiles in .docxi want answer the assignment in finanic there is 6 Q all detiles in .docx
i want answer the assignment in finanic there is 6 Q all detiles in .docx
 
I want an essay that has 5-6 pages.The essay should be in MLA form.docx
I want an essay that has 5-6 pages.The essay should be in MLA form.docxI want an essay that has 5-6 pages.The essay should be in MLA form.docx
I want an essay that has 5-6 pages.The essay should be in MLA form.docx
 
i want a 500 words essay about why junk food is bad.the first 30.docx
i want a 500 words essay about why junk food is bad.the first 30.docxi want a 500 words essay about why junk food is bad.the first 30.docx
i want a 500 words essay about why junk food is bad.the first 30.docx
 
I want a lab to be rephrased. Please ignore the calculations and num.docx
I want a lab to be rephrased. Please ignore the calculations and num.docxI want a lab to be rephrased. Please ignore the calculations and num.docx
I want a lab to be rephrased. Please ignore the calculations and num.docx
 
I wanna someone to write a report for my project between 8-10 Pages .docx
I wanna someone to write a report for my project between 8-10 Pages .docxI wanna someone to write a report for my project between 8-10 Pages .docx
I wanna someone to write a report for my project between 8-10 Pages .docx
 
I posted 5 questions with thier FINAL answers shown.All I need t.docx
I posted 5 questions with thier FINAL answers shown.All I need t.docxI posted 5 questions with thier FINAL answers shown.All I need t.docx
I posted 5 questions with thier FINAL answers shown.All I need t.docx
 
I submitted this assigment and someone had agreed to do it but after.docx
I submitted this assigment and someone had agreed to do it but after.docxI submitted this assigment and someone had agreed to do it but after.docx
I submitted this assigment and someone had agreed to do it but after.docx
 
i want a report about the uploaded case study these are the qustions.docx
i want a report about the uploaded case study these are the qustions.docxi want a report about the uploaded case study these are the qustions.docx
i want a report about the uploaded case study these are the qustions.docx
 
I want one page and half which include 1- why do I like him and .docx
I want one page and half which include 1- why do I like him and .docxI want one page and half which include 1- why do I like him and .docx
I want one page and half which include 1- why do I like him and .docx
 
I ran out of ideas to complete the work to make it a 2 page single l.docx
I ran out of ideas to complete the work to make it a 2 page single l.docxI ran out of ideas to complete the work to make it a 2 page single l.docx
I ran out of ideas to complete the work to make it a 2 page single l.docx
 
I WANT BARBARA MAKAYLAOperating Budget  This will be onwithi.docx
I WANT BARBARA MAKAYLAOperating Budget  This will be onwithi.docxI WANT BARBARA MAKAYLAOperating Budget  This will be onwithi.docx
I WANT BARBARA MAKAYLAOperating Budget  This will be onwithi.docx
 
I picked Luchy Charms cercal Review the requirements for the Portfol.docx
I picked Luchy Charms cercal Review the requirements for the Portfol.docxI picked Luchy Charms cercal Review the requirements for the Portfol.docx
I picked Luchy Charms cercal Review the requirements for the Portfol.docx
 
I ONLY WORK WITH PROFESSOR GEEK, ALL YOU OTHER WRITES GO AWAY!!!.docx
I ONLY WORK WITH PROFESSOR GEEK, ALL YOU OTHER WRITES GO AWAY!!!.docxI ONLY WORK WITH PROFESSOR GEEK, ALL YOU OTHER WRITES GO AWAY!!!.docx
I ONLY WORK WITH PROFESSOR GEEK, ALL YOU OTHER WRITES GO AWAY!!!.docx
 
I need two pages for two topics First page 4 main goals you .docx
I need two pages for two topics First page 4 main goals you .docxI need two pages for two topics First page 4 main goals you .docx
I need two pages for two topics First page 4 main goals you .docx
 

Último

Auchitya Theory by Kshemendra Indian Poetics
Auchitya Theory by Kshemendra Indian PoeticsAuchitya Theory by Kshemendra Indian Poetics
Auchitya Theory by Kshemendra Indian PoeticsDhatriParmar
 
AI Uses and Misuses: Academic and Workplace Applications
AI Uses and Misuses: Academic and Workplace ApplicationsAI Uses and Misuses: Academic and Workplace Applications
AI Uses and Misuses: Academic and Workplace ApplicationsStella Lee
 
Riti theory by Vamana Indian poetics.pptx
Riti theory by Vamana Indian poetics.pptxRiti theory by Vamana Indian poetics.pptx
Riti theory by Vamana Indian poetics.pptxDhatriParmar
 
Metabolism of lipoproteins & its disorders(Chylomicron & VLDL & LDL).pptx
Metabolism of  lipoproteins & its disorders(Chylomicron & VLDL & LDL).pptxMetabolism of  lipoproteins & its disorders(Chylomicron & VLDL & LDL).pptx
Metabolism of lipoproteins & its disorders(Chylomicron & VLDL & LDL).pptxDr. Santhosh Kumar. N
 
Plant Tissue culture., Plasticity, Totipotency, pptx
Plant Tissue culture., Plasticity, Totipotency, pptxPlant Tissue culture., Plasticity, Totipotency, pptx
Plant Tissue culture., Plasticity, Totipotency, pptxHimansu10
 
Awards Presentation 2024 - March 12 2024
Awards Presentation 2024 - March 12 2024Awards Presentation 2024 - March 12 2024
Awards Presentation 2024 - March 12 2024bsellato
 
3.12.24 The Social Construction of Gender.pptx
3.12.24 The Social Construction of Gender.pptx3.12.24 The Social Construction of Gender.pptx
3.12.24 The Social Construction of Gender.pptxmary850239
 
LEAD6001 - Introduction to Advanced Stud
LEAD6001 - Introduction to Advanced StudLEAD6001 - Introduction to Advanced Stud
LEAD6001 - Introduction to Advanced StudDr. Bruce A. Johnson
 
Material Remains as Source of Ancient Indian History & Culture.ppt
Material Remains as Source of Ancient Indian History & Culture.pptMaterial Remains as Source of Ancient Indian History & Culture.ppt
Material Remains as Source of Ancient Indian History & Culture.pptBanaras Hindu University
 
Certification Study Group - Professional ML Engineer Session 3 (Machine Learn...
Certification Study Group - Professional ML Engineer Session 3 (Machine Learn...Certification Study Group - Professional ML Engineer Session 3 (Machine Learn...
Certification Study Group - Professional ML Engineer Session 3 (Machine Learn...gdgsurrey
 
Quantitative research methodology and survey design
Quantitative research methodology and survey designQuantitative research methodology and survey design
Quantitative research methodology and survey designBalelaBoru
 
UNIT I Design Thinking and Explore.pptx
UNIT I  Design Thinking and Explore.pptxUNIT I  Design Thinking and Explore.pptx
UNIT I Design Thinking and Explore.pptxGOWSIKRAJA PALANISAMY
 
Dhavni Theory by Anandvardhana Indian Poetics
Dhavni Theory by Anandvardhana Indian PoeticsDhavni Theory by Anandvardhana Indian Poetics
Dhavni Theory by Anandvardhana Indian PoeticsDhatriParmar
 
DNA and RNA , Structure, Functions, Types, difference, Similarities, Protein ...
DNA and RNA , Structure, Functions, Types, difference, Similarities, Protein ...DNA and RNA , Structure, Functions, Types, difference, Similarities, Protein ...
DNA and RNA , Structure, Functions, Types, difference, Similarities, Protein ...AKSHAYMAGAR17
 
BÀI TẬP BỔ TRỢ TIẾNG ANH 11 THEO ĐƠN VỊ BÀI HỌC - CẢ NĂM - CÓ FILE NGHE (GLOB...
BÀI TẬP BỔ TRỢ TIẾNG ANH 11 THEO ĐƠN VỊ BÀI HỌC - CẢ NĂM - CÓ FILE NGHE (GLOB...BÀI TẬP BỔ TRỢ TIẾNG ANH 11 THEO ĐƠN VỊ BÀI HỌC - CẢ NĂM - CÓ FILE NGHE (GLOB...
BÀI TẬP BỔ TRỢ TIẾNG ANH 11 THEO ĐƠN VỊ BÀI HỌC - CẢ NĂM - CÓ FILE NGHE (GLOB...Nguyen Thanh Tu Collection
 
The basics of sentences session 8pptx.pptx
The basics of sentences session 8pptx.pptxThe basics of sentences session 8pptx.pptx
The basics of sentences session 8pptx.pptxheathfieldcps1
 
ASTRINGENTS.pdf Pharmacognosy chapter 5 diploma in Pharmacy
ASTRINGENTS.pdf Pharmacognosy chapter 5 diploma in PharmacyASTRINGENTS.pdf Pharmacognosy chapter 5 diploma in Pharmacy
ASTRINGENTS.pdf Pharmacognosy chapter 5 diploma in PharmacySumit Tiwari
 

Último (20)

Auchitya Theory by Kshemendra Indian Poetics
Auchitya Theory by Kshemendra Indian PoeticsAuchitya Theory by Kshemendra Indian Poetics
Auchitya Theory by Kshemendra Indian Poetics
 
AI Uses and Misuses: Academic and Workplace Applications
AI Uses and Misuses: Academic and Workplace ApplicationsAI Uses and Misuses: Academic and Workplace Applications
AI Uses and Misuses: Academic and Workplace Applications
 
Riti theory by Vamana Indian poetics.pptx
Riti theory by Vamana Indian poetics.pptxRiti theory by Vamana Indian poetics.pptx
Riti theory by Vamana Indian poetics.pptx
 
Metabolism of lipoproteins & its disorders(Chylomicron & VLDL & LDL).pptx
Metabolism of  lipoproteins & its disorders(Chylomicron & VLDL & LDL).pptxMetabolism of  lipoproteins & its disorders(Chylomicron & VLDL & LDL).pptx
Metabolism of lipoproteins & its disorders(Chylomicron & VLDL & LDL).pptx
 
Plant Tissue culture., Plasticity, Totipotency, pptx
Plant Tissue culture., Plasticity, Totipotency, pptxPlant Tissue culture., Plasticity, Totipotency, pptx
Plant Tissue culture., Plasticity, Totipotency, pptx
 
Awards Presentation 2024 - March 12 2024
Awards Presentation 2024 - March 12 2024Awards Presentation 2024 - March 12 2024
Awards Presentation 2024 - March 12 2024
 
3.12.24 The Social Construction of Gender.pptx
3.12.24 The Social Construction of Gender.pptx3.12.24 The Social Construction of Gender.pptx
3.12.24 The Social Construction of Gender.pptx
 
t-test Parametric test Biostatics and Research Methodology
t-test Parametric test Biostatics and Research Methodologyt-test Parametric test Biostatics and Research Methodology
t-test Parametric test Biostatics and Research Methodology
 
LEAD6001 - Introduction to Advanced Stud
LEAD6001 - Introduction to Advanced StudLEAD6001 - Introduction to Advanced Stud
LEAD6001 - Introduction to Advanced Stud
 
Problems on Mean,Mode,Median Standard Deviation
Problems on Mean,Mode,Median Standard DeviationProblems on Mean,Mode,Median Standard Deviation
Problems on Mean,Mode,Median Standard Deviation
 
ANOVA Parametric test: Biostatics and Research Methodology
ANOVA Parametric test: Biostatics and Research MethodologyANOVA Parametric test: Biostatics and Research Methodology
ANOVA Parametric test: Biostatics and Research Methodology
 
Material Remains as Source of Ancient Indian History & Culture.ppt
Material Remains as Source of Ancient Indian History & Culture.pptMaterial Remains as Source of Ancient Indian History & Culture.ppt
Material Remains as Source of Ancient Indian History & Culture.ppt
 
Certification Study Group - Professional ML Engineer Session 3 (Machine Learn...
Certification Study Group - Professional ML Engineer Session 3 (Machine Learn...Certification Study Group - Professional ML Engineer Session 3 (Machine Learn...
Certification Study Group - Professional ML Engineer Session 3 (Machine Learn...
 
Quantitative research methodology and survey design
Quantitative research methodology and survey designQuantitative research methodology and survey design
Quantitative research methodology and survey design
 
UNIT I Design Thinking and Explore.pptx
UNIT I  Design Thinking and Explore.pptxUNIT I  Design Thinking and Explore.pptx
UNIT I Design Thinking and Explore.pptx
 
Dhavni Theory by Anandvardhana Indian Poetics
Dhavni Theory by Anandvardhana Indian PoeticsDhavni Theory by Anandvardhana Indian Poetics
Dhavni Theory by Anandvardhana Indian Poetics
 
DNA and RNA , Structure, Functions, Types, difference, Similarities, Protein ...
DNA and RNA , Structure, Functions, Types, difference, Similarities, Protein ...DNA and RNA , Structure, Functions, Types, difference, Similarities, Protein ...
DNA and RNA , Structure, Functions, Types, difference, Similarities, Protein ...
 
BÀI TẬP BỔ TRỢ TIẾNG ANH 11 THEO ĐƠN VỊ BÀI HỌC - CẢ NĂM - CÓ FILE NGHE (GLOB...
BÀI TẬP BỔ TRỢ TIẾNG ANH 11 THEO ĐƠN VỊ BÀI HỌC - CẢ NĂM - CÓ FILE NGHE (GLOB...BÀI TẬP BỔ TRỢ TIẾNG ANH 11 THEO ĐƠN VỊ BÀI HỌC - CẢ NĂM - CÓ FILE NGHE (GLOB...
BÀI TẬP BỔ TRỢ TIẾNG ANH 11 THEO ĐƠN VỊ BÀI HỌC - CẢ NĂM - CÓ FILE NGHE (GLOB...
 
The basics of sentences session 8pptx.pptx
The basics of sentences session 8pptx.pptxThe basics of sentences session 8pptx.pptx
The basics of sentences session 8pptx.pptx
 
ASTRINGENTS.pdf Pharmacognosy chapter 5 diploma in Pharmacy
ASTRINGENTS.pdf Pharmacognosy chapter 5 diploma in PharmacyASTRINGENTS.pdf Pharmacognosy chapter 5 diploma in Pharmacy
ASTRINGENTS.pdf Pharmacognosy chapter 5 diploma in Pharmacy
 

I submitted the introduction and this is feedback I got back. Can yo.docx

  • 1. I submitted the introduction and this is feedback I got back. Can you help me fix this? Luis,• Week 1: Introduction (250–300 words)You will research and find an example of a firm that is going through transformational change. The first part of the plan will be the Introduction. Context for the introduction includes the following:o How were the stakeholders affected?o What initiated the change?o How well has it been received or accepted, and why?Task Requirements: Luis, you did not choose a company and you did not answer all of the questions. 15/25Demonstration & application of knowledge: What you wrote was well written but also very general. Your opening paragraph was essentially a copy and paste of the assignment which does not provide me any details on your chosen organization. This is a large part of this assignment and needs to be included moving forward. 40/55Academic Writing & Format: The title page used is not what I listed, please make sure to use this moving forward. 15/20Score:Proficient: 90 - 100%Effective: 80 - 89%Developing: 60 - 79%Unsatisfactory: 0 - 59%