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Competitive Analysis: ...
Here’s the POINT.
In the future, most of IBM’srevenue will come fromservices such as CloudComputing and the restfrom Hardware and Software.
Let’s be Specific and Concrete
By 2015, 40% of IBM’s revenuewill come from services such asCloud Computing, the rest willcome from Hardware andSoftware.
Find the primary andsecondary points and SHOW them.
By 2015, 40% of IBM’s revenuewill come from services such asCloud Computing.The remainder will come fromHardware & Software
Check and source the information.
By 2015, 38% of IBM’s revenuewill come from services such asCloud Computing.The remainder will come fromHardware & Softwar...
Let’s add some color. Hand drawn in pencil IBM Blue (in black pencil)
By 2015, 38% of IBM’s revenuewill come from services such asCloud Computing.The remainder will come fromHardware & Softwar...
It’s still kind of boring.
To add visual impact, think about what the slide is about.
What would you likepeople to remember: IBM Hand drawn cloud Cloud Computing 38% Hand ...
38%
Let’s put this together to make the point.
38% of IBM’s revenue will come from services such as Cloud Computing by 2015 Source: IBM An...
Another version.(there’s always more than one way to skin a cat)
38% of revenue will come from services such as Cloud Computing by 2015 Sour...
A final polish…
38% of revenue will come from services such as Cloud Computing by 2015 Sour...
Sharpen your point
Sharpen your point
Sharpen your point
Sharpen your point
Sharpen your point
Sharpen your point
Sharpen your point
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  1. Competitive Analysis: IBM projects Increased revenues driven by Cloud Computing IBM Revenue mix by 2015: • 29% Hardware Projected Revenue Mix, IBM • 33% Software 29% Hardware 39% Software Services 32% • 40% of Revenues from Services such as Cloud Computing SOURCE: COMPETITIVE ANALYSISConfidential and proprietary materials for authorized Acme personnel and outside agencies only. Use, disclosure or distribution of this material is not permitted to any unauthorized persons or third parties except by written agreement. 8
  2. Here’s the POINT.
  3. In the future, most of IBM’srevenue will come fromservices such as CloudComputing and the restfrom Hardware and Software.
  4. Let’s be Specific and Concrete
  5. By 2015, 40% of IBM’s revenuewill come from services such asCloud Computing, the rest willcome from Hardware andSoftware.
  6. Find the primary andsecondary points and SHOW them.
  7. By 2015, 40% of IBM’s revenuewill come from services such asCloud Computing.The remainder will come fromHardware & Software
  8. Check and source the information.
  9. By 2015, 38% of IBM’s revenuewill come from services such asCloud Computing.The remainder will come fromHardware & Software Source: IBM Annual Report 2012
  10. Let’s add some color. Hand drawn in pencil IBM Blue (in black pencil)
  11. By 2015, 38% of IBM’s revenuewill come from services such asCloud Computing.The remainder will come fromHardware & Software Source: IBM Annual Report 2012
  12. It’s still kind of boring.
  13. To add visual impact, think about what the slide is about.
  14. What would you likepeople to remember: IBM Hand drawn cloud Cloud Computing 38% Hand draw pie chart
  15. 38%
  16. Let’s put this together to make the point.
  17. 38% of IBM’s revenue will come from services such as Cloud Computing by 2015 Source: IBM Annual Report 2012
  18. Another version.(there’s always more than one way to skin a cat)
  19. 38% of revenue will come from services such as Cloud Computing by 2015 Source: IBM Annual Report 2012
  20. A final polish…
  21. 38% of revenue will come from services such as Cloud Computing by 2015 Source: IBM Annual Report 2012

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