The draft of my script

1. Scarlett
Int. A playroom/nursery
In the background there is an open window. A girl is playing
her china doll, but then is invited to play a different game
with a group of girls. She gets bored of the doll, throwing her
to the floor and decides to play with her friends instead. The
doll is picked up by another girl (not part of her friendship
group), the doll begins to whisper things to the new girl, the
other girl is playing by the window and the doll tells the new
girl to push her out.
The doll
Do it… Push her… Do it… Go…
The girl walks up, slowly to the girl previously playing with
the doll and cuts (with short black screens in-between) are
made with her closer to the girl every time… The last black
screen is complete with a scream. A cut to police sirens and a
crowd around the girl on the floor, it’s getting dark now. The
girl that pushed her mum comes to collect her, you see her
walking away with her mum, she has a back pack on and the last
shot is a zoom in of the doll in her back pack and then a cut
to the title.