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‘That is what we do
isn’t it?’ The Production
of University English
Susan Bruce
Investigating Creative
Writing: student
perspectives
Steve May
Books Were My Liberation:
an interview with Alan Rice
Nicole King
Up Close: a round table
on close reading
Ben Knights and Jonathan Gibson
Reading and Writing Society:
the role of English subjects in
Education for Sustainability
Arran Stibbe
Developing Careers Services
for English Students
Jane Gawthrope
English Subject Centre
Newsletter
Issue 14 • April 2008
ISSN 1479-7089
This newsletter is published twice a year by the English Subject Centre, part of the Subject Network of the
Higher Education Academy. The Subject Centre provides many different kinds of help to English lecturers
– more details are available in this Newsletter and on our website (www.english.heacademy.ac.uk). At the
heart of all our work is the view that the higher education teaching of English is best supported from within the
discipline itself.
As well as updates on the Centre’s activities and important developments (both within the discipline
and across higher education), you will find articles here on a wide range of English-related topics. The next
issue of the Newsletter will appear in Autumn 2008. We welcome contributions. If you would like to submit
an article (of between 300 and 3,000 words), propose a book or software review (perhaps a textbook review
by one of your students) or respond in a letter to someone else’s article, please contact the editor, Nicole
King (nicole.king@rhul.ac.uk) or visit our Newsletter web page at www.english.heacademy.ac.uk/explore/
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Newsletter 14 April 2008 01
02 Welcome
Nicole King
03 Events Calendar
Articles
04 ‘That is what we do isn’t it?’
The Production of University English
Susan Bruce
10 Investigating Creative Writing:
student perspectives
Steve May
16 Books Were My Liberation:
an interview with Alan Rice
Nicole King
21 Up Close: a round table on close reading
Ben Knights and Jonathan Gibson
24 Reading and Writing Society:
the role of English Subjects in Education
for Sustainability
Arran Stibbe
30 Developing Careers Services for English Students
Jane Gawthrope
Book Reviews
34 Teaching & Learning English Literature
Ellie Chambers & Marshall Gregory
Reviewed by Peter Barry
35 Doing Creative Writing
Steve May
Reviewed by David Bausor
News, Reports & Opinions
36 Event Round-Up
40 Digital Resources at the British Library
Joanna Newman
41 Desert Island Texts
Chris Ringrose
42 IT Works!
Brett Lucas
44 The Last Word
Mick Short
Contents
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Contents
02 Newsletter 14 April 2008
Welcome
Nicole King
As this issue of the Newsletter
lands in your pigeonhole, spring
will have arrived, however
beleaguered by late frosts,
storms or even snow. Whether
or not the forsythia or daffodils
have now faded, you’ll know
the seasons have turned as
your students beat a path to your door in fretful (or
perhaps languid) preparation for their exams and
essays. As your teaching winds down and you begin to
think about exam boards and the summer conference
season, take a moment to regroup by immersing
yourself in the pages of Issue 14. In Arran Stibbe’s
helpful overview, you can find out about Education
for Sustainable Development, and why it is central
to how we teach Creative Writing, English literature
and English language. Consider the challenge of
understanding the first-year experience, as Susan
Bruce transports us to the scene of a classroom, where
learning is analysed through speech, gesture and gaze.
Dip into the interview given by National Teaching fellow
Alan Rice, whose American Studies work as a teacher
and researcher joyously and forthrightly exceed the
bounds of ‘English’ – indeed he reminds us what a rich
group of subjects ours is. Steve May details his research
into the degree expectations and experiences of
Creative Writing students around the UK and beyond.
He tells how his own practice has changed as a result of
what he discovered. Ben Knights and Jonathan Gibson
report back on a round table discussion on the topic of
close reading and where it figures in current teaching
practice. As you read these varied articles you may
notice how the idea of practical criticism makes repeat
appearances. Indeed, this foundation stone of English
studies in the 20th century (and beyond) gets critiqued,
admired and casually referenced depending on which
of our authors you read.
Further on in the issue you will find our regular
features, including Brett Lucas’s column IT Works!
where you can learn about some of the latest web-
based technologies to support and animate your
teaching; Book Reviews contributed to this issue by
Peter Barry and David Bausor; Desert Island Texts with
‘castaway’ Chris Ringrose and the new commentary
column The Last Word. In this issue’s The Last Word,
Mick Short, a new member of the Subject Centre’s
Advisory Board, provocatively questions the forked
path that now seems to divide English literature from
English language.
Since the last Newsletter, it has been a busy period for
the Subject Centre. You can quickly catch-up on some
of the many events we have held over the past eight
months in our Event Round-Up, while more extensive
event reports are available on our website. There
are also several new mini-projects which have been
funded, that we’ll report on in the next issue, but you
can find out about them now on our website’s
Project pages. We are delighted to report that
Teaching Holocaust Literature and Film, edited by
Robert Eaglestone and Barry Langford, has recently
been published; it is the sixth volume to appear in
the book series we edit for Palgrave Macmillan,
Teaching the New English.
Do you have an opinion about our subject? Perhaps you
have an idea for a Last Word commentary? Do you have
a book on teaching you’d like to review or an article in
a previous issue of the Newsletter you wish to respond
to? If so, please get in touch. The Newsletter’s success,
like our work in general, is down to your generosity and
commitment to working with us. Good luck with those
exam boards and conference papers.
Nicole King
Editor
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Welcome
Newsletter 14 April 2008 03
Events Calendar
Spring/Summer 2008
EVENT: The Future of the Taught MA in English
DATE: 25 April 2008
LOCATION: De Montfort University, Leicester
This one-day event will focus on the changing context of,
and pressures on, the taught postgraduate degree in English.
Participants will be able to discuss how their departments, and
the discipline as a whole, might respond to the different demands
of students, funding bodies and employers. There will be
opportunities both to consider strategic issues and to share ideas
and experiences of practical responses in terms of pedagogy and
curriculum design.
EVENT: Creative Writing: Teaching and Technology
DATE: 30 April 2008
LOCATION: Manchester Metropolitan University
The aims of this one-day event are to provide a forum for
discussion and debate. Topics and presentations will explore the
pedagogies of Creative Writing and technology. The purpose
of the day is not only to showcase new developments and share
practice, but also to provide ample discussion time to think
about what issues we are facing.
EVENT: Learning on the Language/Literature Border
DATE: 1 May 2008
LOCATION: UCLAN, Preston
This one-day event will look at how students learn and
experience English language and English literature in the
undergraduate curriculum. The aims of the day are to interrogate
the underlying assumptions of the way we approach English
language and English literature learning, and to develop an
understanding of how we can ensure students get the best
learning experience.
EVENT: Teaching: An Improviser’s Art
DATE: 1 May 2008
LOCATION: SOAS, London
This event, led by Kevin McCarron, Reader in American Literature
at Roehampton University, will draw on the parallels between
teaching and stand-up comedy, to suggest techniques and
strategies to reduce the burden of seminar preparation.
EVENT: What is Literacy in HE Today?
DATE: 13 May 2008
LOCATION: London, Bedford Square
The English Subject Centre is pleased to introduce the first of its
London Evening Discussion Groups. The purpose is to share ideas
about teaching with colleagues from across London in an informal
atmosphere. The first session will query the definition of literacy
in higher education today: Are our students literate enough?
How do we identify literacy in the 1st, 2nd and 3rd years? Is one
person’s literacy another person’s skill set?
EVENT: Networking Day for HE in FE English Lecturers
DATE: 13 June 2008
LOCATION: SOAS, London
If you teach English at higher education level in an further
education context, we hope you will join us at this networking
event. The event will give people from different parts of the
UK a chance to share experiences, curriculum content, ways of
working, frustrations and delights. The English Subject Centre will
report on work it has been carrying out in the higher education in
further education sector, looking at the various models of English
higher education in further education, and issues which have
emerged as of particular interest or concern to teachers.
EVENT: Teaching and Research in English:
Making the Links
DATE: 13 June 2008
LOCATION: University of Edinburgh
Bringing together subject-specific current practice and theory
in the area of teaching-research linkages, this workshop will
encourage teacher-researchers (including postgraduate students)
from the areas of Creative Writing, language and literature to
share ideas about topics, such as the effect teaching has on
research practice, the importance of diverse research interests in
curriculum development and provision and do our students care
if we are experts in what we teach?
EVENT: Networking Day for Humanities’ Careers Advisers
DATE: 16 July 2008
LOCATION: University of Birmingham
The English Subject Centre, in collaboration with Anne Benson
(Head of the Careers Service at UEA) is convening a third
meeting for higher education Career Advisers with an interest
in the humanities. The meeting will provide a forum for careers
advisers to discuss and share ideas and experiences, and this year
the theme will be engaging employers. Several Careers Services
will be showcasing their English Subject Centre-funded projects
to enhance services to English students.
For further details on any of these (mostly free) events please visit our website www.english.heacademy.ac.uk/explore/events
Events Calendar
04 Newsletter 14 April 2008
I suppose … debating is one of the big parts of
English isn’t it? It’s being able to express yourself
and using language and what you know from
literature, and listen and stuff; I suppose that is,
that is what we do, isn’t it? (Anna1
, Third Year
Combined Hons English student April 2007)
Something gets lost in the translation of Anna’s
observation onto the page: what doesn’t emerge
is the sense of discovery that inhabits her sentence
as she speaks it. It’s not just what she says, it’s the
way that she says it: her speech is punctuated by
hesitations difficult to reproduce in writing, but
intrinsic to its significance as an instance of the
process (not merely the product) of thinking as it
happens in the university teaching space. Anna was
answering a question we had put to her class on our
third visit to her university (which we call Baxter),
as part of TPUE, an English Subject Centre-funded
project in which Anna’s class had first participated
some months earlier. Detailed more fully in the recent
issue of Pedagogy, edited by Ben Knights and Nicole
King, TPUE pools the expertise of educationalists2
and English academics3
to examine how English
is ‘produced’ in the everyday exchanges of the
classroom. Relatively neglected as a focus of research,
these exchanges are an obvious proving ground for
some of the claims English has made about itself: that
it demonstrates a ‘continuous concern with social
inclusiveness’ (Holland, 2003); that it is ‘oppositional’
(Rorty, 1982) or particularly ‘democratising’ (QAA,
2000) or, conversely, that its role has traditionally been
to preserve the orthodox and defend hegemonic
ideologies from subversive attack (Eagleton, 1983).
Such scholarship on English is one context of our
research. The other is educationalist enquiry into
the changes currently besetting higher education
(increased audit, standardisation, larger student
numbers, the employability agenda – among others).
Some have argued that these changes reshape
traditional disciplinary priorities and/or have a
disproportionate effect on less privileged students.
But (again), there has been little examination of their
effects at the level of the classroom. So we are trying,
then, to examine the interconnections that do (or
don’t) exist between the subject matter and self-
conception of English and its pedagogic form, and also
to assess the relation between the nature of classroom
interactions and the differing levels of resources within
which they occur. To this effect, we record and analyse
English classes in three ‘types’ of universities: ‘post-
1992’, ‘pre-1992 non-Russell Group’ and ‘elite’. We pay
attention to a variety of modes of communication
– gaze, tone, silences, ‘body language’ – consideration
of which can sometimes foreground issues other to
those which arise from analysis of language alone.
From these recordings, we identify key moments
which we isolate as clips and/or multimodal
transcriptions (figure 1, ‘At the End of the Day’).
These we then use as the focus of our investigations,
and also as a mechanism of testing our own
interpretations against those of the students whose
interactions we are analysing.
In The Production of University English (TPUE) project, English academics
and educationalists together investigated how English is ‘produced’ in the
everyday classes taking place in a variety of British universities. Here,
Susan Bruce describes the project and shows how its methods can be used
to shed new light on the interpretative tools which we teach to our students.
‘That is what we do, isn’t it?’
The Production of University English
1 Names of participating individuals and institutions have been changed.
2 Ken Jones (Keele University) and Monica McLean (The University of Nottingham).
3 Also participating is David Amigoni (Keele University).
Susan Bruce is
Senior Lecturer at
Keele University,
where she teaches
Early Modern and
20th-century literature.
She is co-editor (with
Valeria Wagner) of
Fiction and Economy:
New Essays on
Economics and
Literature (Palgrave,
2007) (e-mail
s.e.bruce@keele.ac.uk).
Articles
Newsletter 14 April 2008 05
On the occasion referred to above, we
had returned to Baxter to show the
students two clips of a seminar devoted
to The Merchant of Venice, which we had
recorded earlier in the year, during which
the tutor, Barbara, had asked the students
to conduct a ‘trial’ of the play itself.
Dividing them into two ‘teams’, Barbara
had instructed each to ‘choose a Portia’
who, with the help of her team, would
rally and present arguments concerning
the text’s politics: was it, or was it not, an
anti-Semitic play? The clips we showed
on our return to Baxter were clips we
were subsequently to use to investigate
two sets of questions. One (addressed
in our Pedagogy article) involved the
interface between English and issues of
democracy and authority. The other (the
focus of this essay) was that students
sometimes use their interpretations
of texts, and their seminar discussions
of those interpretations, to articulate
observations which are as much about
themselves as they are about the texts
– which are ostensibly the subject of
their discussion. In returning to Baxter,
we wanted to ask the students what they
thought was happening in the clips that
interested us. And, for what it is worth,
our Baxter students articulated their
understanding of the nature of ‘English’ in
terms which broadly underscored the way
we’d begun to think about the issue in our
Pedagogy essay. Thus for Anna, English
is not only about learning to articulate
her own opinions, but also about learning
to listen to other people’s. Interestingly,
she and her classmates maintained that
English offered them ‘a lot more freedom’
than did other subjects they were taking:
History but also (surprisingly, given the
degree of autonomy one might expect
each discipline to allow its respective
disciples) Creative Writing. Both of these
were characterised as wedded to a ‘right
and a wrong way to look at the text,’
unlike English, which was a subject if
not of infinite variety, at least of infinite
hospitality: ‘in English lit,’ one student
said, ‘it’s like, your opinions are valid
and you can sort of say what you feel’.
There are shades here of the familiar
student claim that English is entirely
subjective, that interpretation has no
intrinsic delimitation. ‘What, then, if I said
to you that The Merchant of Venice was
about a train crash?’ Susan asked, in an
attempt to challenge this ‘interpretation-
as-absolute-free-for-all’ version of English
lit. This perennial (mis-) characterisation of
English deserves further research. What do
students really mean when they reiterate
this ‘anything goes’ claim about English,
and what underlies that utterance?
Excitement? Delight? Vertigo? And to
what degree is it intrinsically associated
with the perception we took this student
to be articulating here: the proposition
that English offers a particular space not
merely for self-expression, but for a kind of
self-validation?
That correlation between the articulation
of ideational observations and a process
of self-validation, dovetailed with our
hypothesis that students’ comments about
a text may sometimes act as a vehicle for
the articulation also of observations about
themselves, of which they themselves
may not always be conscious. In the clip
we showed the students, Lisa begins by
arguing that the play establishes a critical
difference between Antonio and Shylock
– that this difference is value-laden – and
that that value is signalled to the audience
by a poetics which aestheticises Antonio’s
labour and debases Shylock’s. Her tone is
a mixture of hesitancy and conviction, the
latter quality most pronounced in the final
clause of her first intervention:
Lisa: But though they are both
merchants, what they are involved in
and how they are, um … Their work is
described as very different, Um, like,
Antonio’s worries over his ships are
described in very eloquent and s- s-
sublime language about spices, the …
spreading out of/on [?] the waves, and
the waves enthroned … enthroned
with his … uh … silks. But, uh, Shylock
is the/a [?] rat sneaking in the dark and
the, the … sort of, it’s the, … It’s the
difference between the sort of glory
and beauty of ships and … the petty
trafficking that Shylock does: they’re
not the same.
Rhianna counters with an appeal to
the prestige conferred on Shylock
by his ability to access wealth
immediately when wealth is needed.
She speaks more forcefully than Lisa,
and appears impatient, both with an
argument which valorises Antonio
when all he is able to do is ‘wait
around for a ship’, and – perhaps –
with a discourse that tacitly privileges
figurative language over the power of
the event within the plot:
Rhianna: But, at the end of the day,
the amount of money, as he says it
himself, as he says somewhere, um,
would a, would a dog have 3,000
ducats to give you? Obviously he’s
proving it, the fact that the amount,
fair enough, Antonio has these ships
full of spices and silks, but at the end
of the day it’s, it’s Shylock that can
just grab 3,000 ducats and give them
lend them ****. So obviously Shylock
in some ways has, is of, of higher level
of, I can’t describe, commerce, that
sort of thing because he has more, he
has the more money available to him.
[Lisa: Sh-]
Rhianna: Whereas Antonio is waiting …
around for a ship. And fair enough, if it
comes back he’ll have a lot of money,
but … whereas Antonio, Antonio
has no money at the minute so he
can’t – he can’t lend Bassiano [sic] the
money and he has to go to Shylock in
the first place. And it’s Shylock that can
just give this money away –
[Lisa: Sh-]
Rhianna: without really noticing, so
<trails off>
Rhianna had arguably drawn the short
straw here, in having to defend the case
that the immediacy of Shylock’s access
to money trumps the cachet afforded to
Antonio and his ships.
What do students really mean when they
reiterate this ‘anything goes’ claim about
English, and what underlies that utterance?
Excitement? Delight? Vertigo?
‘That is what we do, isn’t it?’ The Production of University English
06 Newsletter 14 April 2008
Time Talk Action Gaze
29.48
B: And the fact that they are both
involved in commerce, they are
both merchants, Shylock is a kind of
merchant as well. I think that’s …. ****
B: Sitting with legs crossed. She is
resting her elbows on the arms of
the chair and clasping her fingers
together at her chest
Gesturing in circling motion with hand
RH: Nods, rubbing arm, then keeps
arms folded
LH: Resting hands on books, left foot
crossed over right knee
B: At RH
Then around room – right hand side
RH: Downwards
LH: At B
29.54 LH: But though they are both
merchants, what they are involved in
and how they are, um …
Their work is described as very
different
LH: Right hand straight up from knee,
holding pen in hand. Flicking pen
in right hand and making a circular
gesture with pen
B: At LH
LH: From RH to teacher
LH: At teacher
30.04 Um,
like, Antonio’s worries over his ships
are described in
very eloquent and s- s- sublime
language about
LH: Swallows
RH: Raise of hand to gesture at boy
in her group like a silent agreement
about a point he made earlier?
LH: Looking across room, possibly to
RH: Thinking
RH: Initially looking down then to
boy, then to LH
LH: Down at paper then to B
30.14 spices, the … spreading out of/
on? the waves, and the waves
enthroned …
LH: Circling hand gesture with right
hand
B: Nods LH: To B
30.20 Enthroned with his … uh … Silks
But uh Shylock is the/a? rat sneaking
in the dark and the, the … sort of,
it’s the,
LH: Flips pen over, then points it
downwards as if pointing at word
LH: Changes grip on pen so thumb is
pressing on top of it
LH: Down then to RH
LH: Down then at B
30:30 It’s the difference
between the sort of glory and beauty
of ships and …
Points pen in air, thumb pressed on
top, wrist pointing outwards
Moves pen to left hand, lifts right
hand with fingers spread, then
brushes hair away from left hand side
of forehead, then pulls at hair slightly.
LH: B, then to RH
LH: At B
30.41 the petty trafficking that Shylock
does, they’re not the same
Left hand out to emphasise petty
Right hand pointing a finger
In this transcript from the Baxter University class, the details of both verbal and non-verbal communication become evident.
Key:
B: Barbara
LH: ‘Lisa’ – woman with curly hair on left-hand side of Barbara
RH: ‘Rhianna’ – woman on right-hand side of Barbara
AW: Arabella – woman with American accent
Timings from transcription taken from the second recording.
Figure 1 ‘At the End of the Day’
‘That is what we do, isn’t it?’ The Production of University English
Newsletter 14 April 2008 07
And, however artificial it is to extract a clip
from the fluid, porous space of the seminar
(we all know how discussions in seminars
circulate and return and are, almost by
definition, inconclusive), Lisa seems to
get the last word. With quiet conviction
she restates and synopsises her case,
concluding with what we take to be (despite
the ostensible affirmation with which it is
introduced) a correction to the teacher’s
attempted gloss on what she is saying:
Lisa: Shylock is a necessary evil. It
doesn’t necessarily mean he’s at all
respected or gains anything other
than the money, whereas Antonio
has a lot of respect for, um, his
merchanting and his adventuring.
Barbara: Because it’s more
extravagant …?
Alannah: And …
Lisa: Yeah, <quieter, trailing to finish>
It’s more beautiful.
Lisa never explains what she means
here by the claim she finally, after two
successive attempts, (‘[Lisa: Sh-]’) manages
to utter: that ‘Shylock is a necessary
evil’. Perhaps she means that capital
presupposes usury; perhaps she wants to
suggest that one of the roles of Shylock’s
enterprise is to throw into relief the
nobility of Antonio’s. What she is clear
about though, is that Antonio’s cachet
derives not from the relative ostentation of
his enterprise, but from its beauty.
There seems to be quite a lot at stake in
this brief exchange. The ground contested
is essentially an argument over the relative
merits and status of liquid versus cultural
capital: the two students don’t use
these terms, but those appear to be the
concepts they are invoking. But what is
not apparent from the transcript was that
the content of this argument may mirror
the respective social positionings of the
students conducting it. All the students
in this seminar were white; all bar one
was apparently British; about 80% were
female. But although the cohort was in
many respects homogeneous, the nuances
of the language employed by Lisa and
by Rhianna seemed to befit not just the
arguments each made, but something
expressive of a more profound difference
between the two women. Lisa, defending
the notion that social standing may be
generated by and communicated through
a plethora of factors of which liquid capital
is only one, often uses two adjectives or
examples where one might suffice, and
is much more hesitant and exploratory
in articulating her claims than Rhianna
is. Rhianna, convinced by the claim that
money not only talks, but talks louder
than any other kind of capital, cultural or
invested, employs a language which seems
implicitly to reflect her confidence in the
material reality of the power that control
of liquid wealth confers: ‘at the end of the
day’, she keeps repeating, it is Shylock
who can produce the readies.
The phrase, ‘at the end of the day’ is
one which accepts and validates one
factor as determining. Designed to cut
through nuances and hesitations and to
foreclose on the possibility of multiple
determinations, it is often, as it is here,
used in connection with an asseveration of
financial motives or contexts as ultimately
determining and (tacitly but no less
‘obviously’) rational. The same might
be argued of the phrase ‘fair enough’,
whose employment often functions to
close off alternative explanations even
as its speaker apparently admits them.
And again, insofar as the locution, as it is
used here, acknowledges the rationality
of Antonio’s behaviour, rationality is again
conflated with the pre-eminent importance
of material gain: what seem to be otiose
actions on Antonio’s part may, in the end,
(but only uncertainly) issue in profit, and
to the degree that they may, they are
rational.
The differences between the two students’
lexical choices, then, might signal more
fundamental differences between them:
their respective interpretations of the
text apparently overlap with their own
social positionings. Drawing attention
to our interest in the relation between
the ‘ideational’ aspects of discussion
and its ‘interpersonal’ qualities, Susan
pointed out that although this seminar,
formulated as a role-played debate, raised
special issues surrounding the relation of
the students’ arguments to their actual
beliefs, both, nevertheless, appeared in
this clip to be personally committed to
the arguments they were making. Susan
did not say explicitly that each seemed
wedded, herself, to the value system
she was attributing to the play, but she
did ask what they considered were the
most important ideas in the clip they had
watched. Rhianna replied:
Actually, there’s quite a lot about it
here, the role of, sort of, the value of
Rhianna’s account of the convergence of
interpretation and self appeals then to
personality, not to class or social positioning,
or ideological affiliation.
‘That is what we do, isn’t it?’ The Production of University English
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08 Newsletter 14 April 2008
commerce and the value of what we
class as more valuable sort of thing,
like, money-wise or even like person-
wise as well: there’s quite a lot of
question about that sort of, that sort
of, scale of things.
Here (‘what we class as more valuable sort
of thing’) there may be repeated the claim
that ready money trumps the promise of
future wealth, an assertion Rhianna then
reiterates:
Antonio has no money; Shylock has
thousands and thousands of ducats
that he can hand out and not even
notice, so therefore Shylock’s kind
of the one who has the value at the
minute really: you know, it’s all very
well saying the ship’s going to come
in: that’s like saying, ‘I’m going to win
the lottery one day, yes I’m going to
be rich’ – but at the minute you’re on
two pounds fifty a day … Not quite
the same thing essentially.
The closest we came to getting any of
the students to address the possible
correlation between their social
orientations and the arguments they
made – or, at least, the terms in which
they made them – came with Rhianna’s
affirmation that underlying both her
argument and her self-perception was a
valorisation of what she characterised as
the direct and unadorned: ‘as my friends
all know as well, that’s what I’m like, I’m
just a very, very blunt straightforward
person’, she said. Rhianna’s account of
the convergence of interpretation and
self appeals then to personality, not to
class or social positioning, or ideological
affiliation. But her implicit impatience with
the extravagant or over-interpretative,
and her implicitly ethical valorisation of
the ‘straightforward’, rehearses a contest
over language and truth that has been
played out before, in the text she has
been studying, in the verbal jousting of
Lancelot Gobbo and Lorenzo. Lorenzo’s
similar ethically charged conflation of
the honest and the straightforward is
encapsulated in his frustrated instruction
to the clown to ‘understand a plain man
in his plain meaning: go to thy fellows; bid
them cover the table, serve in the meat,
and we will come in to dinner’ (Merchant
3.5.52–5). His deceptively simple appeal
to the plain, the obvious, the direct, has
recently been associated with a class
interest counter to that embedded in
Launcelot’s witty extravagance4
; certainly,
for Lorenzo, his own plainness operates
as a salutary corrective to the suspicious
rhetorical extravagance of the Clown. ‘Oh
dear discretion, how his words are suited!’
Lorenzo remarks of Launcelot’s wit:
The fool hath planted in his memory
An army of good words, and I do
know A many fools that stand in
better place, Garnished like him, that
for a tricksy word Defy the matter.
(Merchant 3.5.60–65)
Of Lisa, we were unable to enquire what
she thought about the relation between
what she argued and the more personal
aspects of herself: she came in late, and
missed the showing of the clips. But if her
lexis differed to that of Rhianna, so too
did her method: she paid more implicit
attention than Rhianna to the way in which
the ‘tricksy words’ of the text may be
employed in it to ‘defy the matter’. More
of what Lisa says in At the End of the Day
– her references to the waves enthroned, to
the silks, to rats sneaking in the dark and to
the petty trafficking – weaves into her own
discourse close paraphrases of, or direct
quotations from, the play itself. She is also
aware that this is her interpretative strategy
of choice: while the others are explicit
about their preferences for reading for the
plot, or for characterisation, Lisa says that
she looks first at ‘the actual words the text
is using, the choice of diction’.
Lisa is, in other words, a close reader, and
close reading allows her here to articulate
something about the text that Rhianna’s
account cannot encompass: that there is
a correlation in it between the political
and the aesthetic – that the latter is not an
innocent quality. ‘It’s more beautiful’, she
finishes, and she is arguably right that the
representation of Antonio’s merchanting
at the opening of the play is not only
more extravagant, but more beautiful,
than the representation of Shylock’s usury.
But this observation leads us to a more
tendentious proposition, and to a paradox
with which we will, for the time being, end.
Close reading is not a strategy that would
come naturally to someone wedded to
the virtue of the speech of a plain man in
his plain meaning; close reading assumes,
on the contrary, that meaning is anything
but plain, even when it pretends to be
so. Close reading may embrace values
diametrically opposed to those embodied
in the phrase ‘at the end of the day’ (for
example), which insists on the ultimate
readability of action, presupposing a ‘last
instance’, by reference to which things
will become intelligible, justifiable and
clear. We don’t want to align differences
of lexis or method in any blunt, one-to-
one relation to particular ideological
interests – to insist, for example, that an
appeal to ‘plainness’ must be connected
to non-elite class positions, or only ever
characteristic of discourses that seek to
legitimate particular forms of market-
orientated behaviour. But we do want
to begin to raise the possibility that if
respective attachments to ‘plain meanings’
and ‘armies of good words’ are, like the
aesthetics of The Merchant of Venice itself,
not innocent either, that may be something
we should bear in mind when we teach the
tools of our discipline to a body of students
who originate from an ever wider social
spectrum. And if here, we have illustrated
the methodology we’ve developed, which
extends the methods of close reading to
the rather different ‘text’ of the seminar
itself, in future writings one of the things
which we may have to think about further,
is that close reading might be as inherently
political as any other kind of aesthetic
methodology is – however much one
would wish to think that it was not.
Close reading is not a strategy that would come
naturally to someone wedded to the virtue of the
speech of a plain man in his plain meaning; close
reading assumes, on the contrary, that meaning is
anything but plain, even when it pretends to be so.
4 See Margaret Tudeau-Clayton, ‘Shakespeare’s Extravagancy’ Shakespeare (1: 1–2), 2005 June–Dec, 136–53.
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The starting point for this project was simple and
practical. Creative Writing is a relatively new subject.
It has developed in different ways in different places.
There’s no consensus about what it is, or what it’s for.
However, it’s increasingly popular with students1
. It
struck me that I had been teaching Creative Writing
in universities for 12 years, had been running a large
undergraduate Creative Writing department for three,
but I had no clear idea of why students were choosing
our courses, what they expected from them, how
their experience matched (or failed to match) their
expectations, nor, taking a broader view, how their
attitude to the courses changed during their time at
university.
It’s true, for a previous English Subject Centre
project2
, I had visited various institutions and,
wherever possible, talked to students and recorded
the conversations, and equally true that at Bath Spa
we routinely carry out a questionnaire survey of new
students. And of course all tutors administer module
evaluation forms to students, and summarise (or are
supposed to summarise) these responses in terms of
changes in structure or content for individual units.
However, none of these gave me quite what I wanted.
Module evaluation forms are all very well, but can
be treated as a tedious admin chore, and even at
their best are course based, not student based, and
perhaps, most significantly, take for granted the
key factors of motivation and expectation in which I
was particularly interested. The surveys of incoming
students throw up some fascinating insights, but again
run the risk of lack of motivation and involvement for
participants (herded into computer rooms in order to
enforce compliance). Oral discussions permit a more
personal involvement, but also tend to accentuate the
loud and diminish the withdrawn. Group dynamics
may obscure the subtleties of individual response.
So, I tried to develop something different, something
that avoided:
• a tickbox or questionnaire approach
• local and limited responses to do with individual
courses, modules or tutors
• responses that were tied to purely academic
concerns
• an oral basis
Steve May is Head of
Department, Creative
Studies, at Bath Spa
University. Doing
Creative Writing, his
book for Creative
Writing students,
was published by
Routledge in 2007
(see page 35 for David
Bausor’s review). He
is currently working
on his 45th drama
commission for
BBC radio.
Investigating
Creative Writing:
student perspectives
An English Subject Centre funded mini-project
Why are students flocking to Creative Writing courses and degrees?
What’s it like to be on one? What do students expect to gain from them?
Steve May investigates the student experience of Creative Writing to
get answers.
1 See the English Subject Centre Survey of the English Curriculum and Teaching in UK Higher Education (2003), Halcrow Group Limited,
with Jane Gawthrope and Philip Martin, available at www.english.heacademy.ac.uk/archive/publications/reports/
curr_teach_main.pdf (accessed 6 December 2007).
In the Higher Education Statistics Agency statistics (www.hesa.ac.uk/) ‘Imaginative Writing’ first appears as a subject in its own right in
2002/2003 with 775 full-time undergraduate students. This rises to 2,250 in the most recent (2005/2006) figures (accessed 6 December
2007).
2 For a full range of student (mainly oral) quotes, see Steve May, “Teaching Creative Writing at Undergraduate Level: Why, how and does
it work?” (Report on English Subject Centre sponsored research project, 2003, available at www.english.heacademy.ac.uk/archive/
projects/reports/under_creatwrit_bath, accessed 26 January 2006).
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I wanted to encourage:
• a sense that I cared about what
participants said
• a sense that what they said could make
a difference, if not to their course, to
courses in future
• an environment where they felt free to
say (or not say) whatever they wanted
• responses which involved them as
people, including their aims and
aspirations
So, I transcribed some key quotes
gathered in the aforementioned English
Subject Centre project, and took them
into a class of first-year Creative Writing
students at Bath Spa. The quotes I used
were mostly related to motivation for
taking, and expectations of the course:
I definitely want to be published,
that’s why I’m here.
I think all the lecturers maybe
spuriously all think that everyone on
this course wants to be a writer.
I don’t want to be a writer, I don’t want
to learn anything, I just want a 2:1.
I was desperately looking through
clearing, cos originally I chose English
and History, but I didn’t get the
grades.
I wanted to do something as well as
Creative Writing, because people
don’t take it seriously.
My flatmates, writing? They go,
“that’s not a real degree”.
I didn’t know what to expect and I
was very naïve to everything, like
seminars, was someone going to
come and talk at us? I had no idea
what to expect at all.
I then led a discussion of the quotes
– neither in order, nor exhaustively – trying
to follow the interest of the group as
we moved from topic to topic. Soon the
discussion was progressing energetically
– perhaps too energetically. When I invited
the students to write down anything they
wanted, to do with their experience of
Creative Writing, the results were a little
cursory and mechanical. I realised that the
discussion had been too full: the students
had said all they wanted to say orally, and
repeating it on paper was tiresome. So,
I did the experiment again, and limited
the discussion, rousing interest but moving
on quickly before people had a chance to
say all or most of what they wanted to say.
The results seemed much more interesting.
The students were eager and wrote
quickly – and (as we will see) were
surprisingly articulate.
I now had a crude methodology, which
I applied across the years at Bath Spa,
taking the first-year responses in to
second-year students, and second-year
responses in to third years. The exercise
took about 20 minutes, split into 10
minutes introduction and discussion of
“seed” quotes, and then 10 minutes
of student writing.
I found the resulting responses fascinating
and informative. Certain key themes
recurred, especially to do with confidence
(or lack of it), expectations and lack of
clarity about the purpose of workshop
exercises. It occurred to me that (given
the wide variety of auspices of Creative
Writing in higher education), it might be
even more interesting and informative
to repeat the process in a cross section
of institutions, to see whether Bath Spa
students were representative, or if there
were variations depending on institution
and kind of course. Coincidentally, at
about that time applications were invited
for a new series of English Subject Centre
mini-projects. I applied and, after a more
or less painless process of discussion, peer
review and revision, got funding of £5,000,
mainly to cover teaching relief, travel and
accommodation.
The next question was, why on earth
would any sane course director let an
outsider (and in many ways a rival at
that) loose on their students? Surely not
an attractive prospect, to have some
Justice Overdo prying about looking for
enormities? Perhaps some felt like this, but
I was pleasantly surprised by how positive
most people were whom I approached.
And I was offering something they all
valued: a snapshot of their own students’
attitudes, presented in a way they hadn’t
been presented before.
The project was (rather grandly) titled
“English and Creative Writing: Coherence,
progression and fitness for purpose
- student perspectives”. I have to confess
that the “English” bit was inserted to
make the proposal more appealing to the
English Subject Centre. To have limited
the survey only to institutions (and
students) doing both subjects would have
been both impossible and undesirable.
Part of the richness of the gathered
responses indeed lies in the wide variety
of subjects the students are doing
alongside Creative Writing.
I was offering something they all valued: a snapshot
of their own students’ attitudes, presented in a
way they hadn’t been presented before.
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The institutions that were kind enough
to host these visits were varied, though
perhaps not as varied as I would have
liked: several institutions unfortunately
had to drop out during the course of
the project. Participating institutions were
Lancaster, Chichester, Winchester, Brunel,
Northumbria, Columbia College Chicago
and, of course, Bath Spa. My thanks to all
the course leaders, tutors, administrators
and especially students who gave their
time and energy in helping me to carry out
the project.
Geographically the split was:
London 1
South-east England 1
South-west England 2
North-west England 1
North-east England 1
USA 1
The location of Creative Writing within
the institutions ranged from self-standing
(without film and poetry), through
inextricably conjoined with English, to
within English and within Drama. My first
visit took place in October 2006 and my
last in May 2007. I gathered contributions
from 237 students, totalling over 23,000
words.
Generally, when I showed student
responses from one institution to staff
at another, they pronounced them
interesting, but would add something to
the effect that “but of course our students
are different”. However, on each occasion,
it turned out that their students were
not materially different, and echoed the
concerns and attitudes of their peers in
other institutions. Yes, there were some
differences: perhaps the Northumbria
drama/script students (in fact script
students everywhere) were more focused
and practical, and show a more confident
understanding of the purpose of their
writing; and the Chicago students showed
greater awareness of what to expect,
perhaps because of the unique Columbia
College Story Workshop method. But
these are differences of emphasis. It is fair
to say that, for these seven institutions
at least, similarities of response far
outweighed differences.
This survey reveals a broad spectrum of
motivation, ranging from the dedicated
and committed would-be writer (with
varying levels of experience and ability),
through people with interest in or talent
for writing, including also those who want
to teach and those who want to expand
themselves as people, people who want
to do English in a different way, and (let’s
be honest) a proportion of free-loaders.
Perhaps I’m being harsh here: those
respondents who are honest enough
to confess that they chose Creative
Writing just because it sounded like an
interesting subject (or in one case “for a
bet and to reduce my workload”) are not
hugely different from many other students
choosing many other subjects – except
in one respect. Few of our students will
have had any experience of doing Creative
Writing in any kind of formalised way before
starting the course. Perhaps, for this reason
if for no other, it behoves us as teachers
to make as clear as possible at the outset
to our students how our courses work,
what they are expected to do while on the
course, and what they’re supposed to be
able to do after successfully completing it.
What students say
First, I must note the weight of positive
comments. Students praise their courses
for a variety of reasons: as interesting,
exciting, fun, as giving a chance to use
their imagination; because of tutors who
are experienced, professional and funny;
because of the chance to mix with like-
minded peers; as developmental in terms
of writing and character: in short, as one
first-year student sums it up:
This class has sparked something
inside of me, an inspiration, a
motivation I have been unable to
find anywhere else.
Another student, coming to the end
of their course, perhaps sums up the
experience for many:
Coming towards the end of the
Creative Writing degree, I feel that the
course has really worked for me. I have
been encouraged to experiment, while
always being given support in my
preferred genre. The first workshop
session was a horrible embarrassment,
but as everyone is thrown into it
together, a group dynamic forms. In
the best Creative Writing groups you
feel a real desire to help everyone
achieve their own goals, as well as
follow your own. I don’t see myself as
a professional writer yet, more of a
dabbler. However, writing is something
that I will always do and who knows,
when I’m an old lady in purple, maybe
I’ll read the grandkids my published
novels. (Year 3 student)
This (fairly representative) student has
been empowered, enabled to work
collaboratively, will continue to write
without the overt aim to publish, but
harbours semi-secret aspirations in that
I was terrified about the creative writing module
– I had to do it as part of English studies.
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3 Steve May, Doing Creative Writing (Routledge, 2007) p.117.
direction. Others have been converted
from “dabblers” to something more driven
and serious:
I also now have found the courage to
think about being a writer and not just
an enthusiastic amateur or – the most
dreaded – ‘a simple jotter’.
(Year 2 student)
However, other students have moved in
the opposite direction:
I set out with the course thinking
that I’d like to become a professional
writer. The course has taught me that I
don’t have it in me.
(Year 3 student)
I would contend that this is by no means
a sign of failure, either for the student or
the course they have taken. As I’ve put it
elsewhere3
:
There are too many people who
harbour an untried (and probably
unrealistic) longing to write. If you
have tried, and can reflect on your
experience, and analyse why you
don’t want to pursue writing further,
you will have learned a great deal,
both about writing and about yourself.
Further, if your course has been a good
course, and you’ve made best use of
it, you should have a fairly clear idea of
how ‘creative industries’ work, and how
work gets sold. You should also, more
generally, have learned how to manage
a project from initial idea through to
completion, and to work with other
people in a flexible, supportive and
intelligent way. These aren’t negligible
accomplishments. They should place
you well whatever direction you decide
to take.
Apart from those who have decided
that writing is not for them, there are
also recurring doubts, reservations and
anxieties, expressed by students across all
institutions. The “horrible embarrassment”
of the student quoted above, and fear in
anticipation of starting the course, are by
no means uncommon:
I was very scared coming to my first
seminar, because I wasn’t sure what to
expect. I had trouble finding the room
and getting there on time combined
with the uncertainty made me very
nervous when I sat down.
(Year 1 student)
I was terrified about the Creative
Writing module – I had to do it as
part of English studies. My interest
was much more about studying ‘good
published literature’ than attempting
anything of my own. However, so far
it has been fine, and I am actually
enjoying the exercises.
(Year 1 student)
The following student’s expectations in
terms of the peer group seem to have
been confirmed:
Although my initial fears were
of a class full of pretentious,
psychologically damaged rich kids,
and generally annoying wankers,
I have learnt to put up with them.
(Year 1 student)
The same student touches on another
common theme – a lack of clarity about the
purpose and benefit of in-class exercises
(however much fun they might be):
Although I enjoy writing in my own
time and having the chance to read
other people’s work, I’m glad Creative
Writing is only one module on my
English course.
Even the student quoted above who,
because of the course, has found courage
to think of themself as a writer prefaces
that affirmation as follows:
Although the exercises seem like a
waste [my emphasis], they help me to
open myself up to other writers and
explore other points of view. With the
mastering of such exercises comes
a certain sense of confidence – I no
longer fear the dreaded workshops
and the scrutinous gaze of other
writers. I look forward to having my
work torn apart as it allows me to build
upon it. I also now have found the
courage to think about being a writer
and not just an enthusiastic amateur or
– the most dreaded – ‘a simple jotter’.
(Year 2 student)
It is extremely common for students not to
realise what they’re learning:
I don’t really think the exercises
enhance my writing but I assume
some people find it a benefit to them.
(Year 2 student)
Generally I enjoy the course, but I feel
that sometimes the exercises that we
are asked to do are not beneficial to
me as I feel I write better and have
more ideas when I am alone and in a
creative mood.
(Year 1 student)
Generally, as students progress through
the course, they do come to understand
better the purpose of what they’re asked
to do in class:
At first I was embarrassed with some
of the Creative Writing class exercises
– I found them hokey and ‘touchy-
feely’. As I’ve gotten used to them,
I now feel much more comfortable
and participate enthusiastically.
(Level 2 student)
While some of the above students find
they work better when alone, outside of
class, perhaps equally represented are
students complaining about the difficulty
of motivating themselves without the
stimulation of the workshop environment:
I have one lesson on a Friday and the
rest of the time I’m expected to be
doing work in my own time. I find it hard
to get motivated when sitting at home
and prefer to be in uni more often with
specific lessons to sit and write.
(Year 2 student)
There are clashes also between the
structure of courses, and some students’
sense of individual freedom of expression:
I enjoy my personal Creative Writing
process, but resent the formalised
structure. Ultimately, this course is a
means to an end, although I am keen
I have been encouraged to experiment, while
always being given support in my preferred
genre. In the best Creative Writing groups you
feel a real desire to help everyone achieve their
own goals, as well as follow your own.
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for it to become more than just that,
less laboured. Undoubtedly I will gain
from it, however quite what that will be
I’m unsure. Reading this back, perhaps
I should be paying more attention.
(Year 2 student)
It is not uncommon, in a minority of
students, to see a dislocation between
writing-for-the-course and “real” personal
writing:
Before uni, I wrote a lot on my own.
The workload quickly took that away
from me, and now, over two years
later, I’ve lost a lot of confidence in
my prose work, and a lot of, shall
I say, raw, unmanaged talent.
(Year 3 student)
“Confidence” crops up again and again
– often as something that Creative Writing
courses give to students, but equally as
something that students lack, both in
themselves and in Creative Writing as a
degree course:
I would have to agree that people
seem to almost look down on Creative
Writing – I know people who call it the
‘Mickey Mouse’ part of my degree.
(Year 2 student)
I think the moment I had to produce a
piece of creative work for a workshop
I knew I wasn’t a writer, especially if
my work was the last to be looked at,
because I just felt out of my league.
I feel that I write just enough to pass
the course and for that reason alone.
(Year 3 student)
It is remarkable how many students within
any given group think of themselves as
“the worst writer” – perhaps a quarter or
a third. And it would surely be absurd to
expect students not to experience some
sense of competition in the workshop:
I’m not keen on reading out my work
… actually I despise reading out my
work in fear of being criticised as,
generally, I feel that it’s not as good as
others in the class.
(Year 2 student)
There’s always someone in the class
who I hate and whose writing I
hate, there’s also always a rival who
I respect and fight with to find out
who’s best and then there’s a bunch of
people I don’t really give a shit about.
(Year 3 student)
I used to write all the time before I
came to university, and never tried
very hard because it was just for fun.
Here, I have to try really hard every
week, and it takes up so much of
my time. But it’s all in a quest to not
being the worst writer.
(Year 3 student)
It does seem somewhat strange that
we, as writers or experts of literature,
whose business involves the intricacies
and complexities of human relationships,
perhaps subscribe (on the surface at least)
to a rather simple model of workshop
interaction, based on equality, giving of
constructive feedback, taking of same in
good measure and co-operation towards
mutual improvement. Not all students see
things quite that way, nor have unqualified
faith in their tutorial input:
I am less confident with my writing
now, as tutor feedback has proved
detrimental to my progression. I
find the writing modules slow and
frustrating. I thought I would be a
good writer one day, now I just think
I will finish my degree bitter and
slightly twisted.
Having one tutor praise your work
and then another almost failing you
when marking it, suggests to me
that it isn’t what your write but who
you are writing for. I will continue
to write but for me only, and I feel a
completely new career path will have
to be chosen. I haven’t given up
hope though.
(Year 3 student)
My preliminary conclusions and
suggestions are as follows:
• to make sure that from their first
workshop or lecture (before if possible)
our students are aware of the way our
courses work, what they will be asked to
do and why. (I will also try to make sure
our staff are aware of these things)
• to make students aware of the purpose
of individual exercises and workshop
activities, both in terms of their writing,
and of “transferability”, both to other
writing genres and activities outside of
writing
• to make students aware of the changing
demands of our courses as they move
through the levels, and the progression
from directed to self-directed work, and
from private experiment to public display
• to be aware of the pervasive lack of
confidence among a sizeable minority
of students in almost every workshop
group, and work to build confidence in
each individual
• to be aware of the “competitive”
element that students’ private self-
evaluation entails
• to be aware of (and respect) the range
of motivation underlying students’
decisions to do Creative Writing
Postscript
Finally, I need to stress something:
these students’ contributions, written in
haste, spontaneously, without warning,
planning, or the opportunity to edit,
are overwhelmingly articulate, clear and
persuasive. I’ll leave the last word to this
third-year student, whose eloquence and
ability to draw the reader into their story
for me belie the surface negativity:
This exercise sums up my feelings
about the course. I sit and think for a
while about what I should write, and
when I put pen to paper it confirms to
me that I am no writer. If the truth be
known, I started the course as a bet
and to reduce my workload.
Our students do learn from our courses:
for me the next step is to make sure
we make them aware of what they’re
learning, and what use it will be to them,
and alongside this to work towards a
consensus concerning the nature of the
subject of Creative Writing in higher
education, including (and especially) a
definition of research.
these students’ contributions, written in haste,
spontaneously, without warning, planning, or
the opportunity to edit, are overwhelmingly
articulate, clear and persuasive.
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At last …
a resource for teaching Creative Writing in
higher education created by creative writers.
This developing online resource will include: peer-reviewed scholarly articles, book reviews, practitioner
interviews, a discussion forum and helpful links to other sites, online articles and other resources to
help colleagues to reflect on their own teaching practice. The resource aims to be particularly relevant
to lecturers new to the field and students taking modules on Teaching Creative Writing. It will also be
invaluable to those who teach modules related to the pedagogy of writing.
We need your help. Let’s share our views and our knowledge on how, why and what we teach, when we
teach Creative Writing …
In the first instance, we invite scholarly articles which consider the following topics.
• Are there theories of Creative Writing? If so, what are they?
• What constitutes knowledge and research in Creative Writing?
• Why do we teach the way we do?
• What skills do we teach our students?
• Creative Writing & Pedagogic Research: how do they fit together?
Join the debate!
First deadline: 31 August 2008, with rolling deadlines thereafter.
Send articles and all enquiries by e-mail to
Dr Nigel McLoughlin
nmcloughlin@glos.ac.uk
Principal Lecturer in Creative Writing, University of Gloucestershire English Subject Centre Project Holder
Vice-Chair, National Association of Writers in Education Committee Member, NAWE Creative Writing in
Higher Education Network
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Books Were
My Liberation:
an interview with Alan Rice
Over the winter, Nicole King met with Alan Rice,
a scholar of the Black Atlantic who teaches English
and American Studies. He spoke of the rewards of
interdisciplinary teaching and of taking his subject
expertise, as well as his students, outside the classroom.
‘To shoot hard labour’ is an Antiguan
colloquialism that means to work hard,
very hard. It came to mind when I met
up with Alan Rice last December, in
Lancaster. Rice is the sort of lecturer we
all wish we had or perhaps strive to be: he
is immediately warm, stridently positive
about his subject(s) and (a very few minutes
will evidence) an intensely serious scholar
– the type around whom you immediately,
willingly, raise your game. Instead of just
the interview, he invited me up to Lancaster
to spend the day, have lunch, and do a
specialised tour of Lancaster; indeed he
does not do half measures. He also, by
stealth and by proclamation, reminds one
of the privileges and pleasures of being a
university lecturer.
Rice is Reader in American Cultural Studies
and English at the University of Central
Lancaster, where he has worked since
1995. He did his undergraduate work
at the University of Edinburgh, his MA
at Bowling Green State University and
earned his PhD at Keele University in 1997.
He is the author of Radical Narratives
of the Black Atlantic (Continuum, 2003)
and co-editor (with Martin Crawford) of
Liberating Sojourn: Frederick Douglass and
Transatlantic Reform (University of Georgia
Press, 1999). As these titles suggest, Rice
contributes to many subject areas, but,
more than anything, he sees himself as
an American Studies scholar and teacher.
Always a ‘really interdisciplinary animal’ his
undergraduate studies at the University
of Edinburgh helped him to understand
his passion for American Studies per se:
‘The most interesting people teaching
at Edinburgh,’ Rice told me, ‘were either
doing drama or American Literature
or History.’ From the beginning of our
interview to the end, Rice gave a collective
narrative: continuously citing the work and
mentorship of others in telling the story
of his own development. At Edinburgh,
‘there were these giants of American
history – Owen Dudley Edwards, Rhodri
Jeffrey-Jones and Sam Shepperson,’
whilst in literature, ‘Colin Nicholson and
Randall Stevenson managed to convince
me that English wasn’t all bad.’ These men
and women, such as Faith Pullin, inspired
Rice, who decided then and there that he
wanted to be a university teacher. With
only a ‘very moderate 2:1’, however, it was
an arduous process to get funded for a
PhD, and eventually required a detour
to the US.
In what he described as his ‘hiatus period’,
Rice doggedly, but unsuccessfully, pursued
postgraduate bursaries. To get by he
worked a variety of jobs, usually more
than one at time: ‘I worked as a home
help, worked cleaning cafes and worked
in the afternoons at the National Library
of Scotland.’ The idea was, he explained,
‘to keep my eye in research, mainly about
jazz music and politics … I eventually
got published in the Edinburgh Review
but still couldn’t ever get funding to do
a PhD’ It was at this early moment in the
interview that I thought of that Antiguan
phrase. For in addition to working for
wages, and doing research on the side,
Alan also became involved in local and
community politics. Friends thought he
was punishing himself, and after two
years of unsuccessful funding applications
they tried to convince him to go for
something else. ‘I was like Sisyphus; I was
just going to carry on pushing that rock
up that mountain till I got there.’ On
the recommendation of Mary Ellison, the
professor he hoped to work with at Keele,
he was offered a job as a graduate teaching
assistant at Bowling Green State University.
Although it was a long way to go, Rice
nevertheless reasoned that it was perhaps
the only way to get started towards the
PhD, and he was proven right: he did a
two-year MA in American Cultural Studies
in just one year while teaching six hours of
English Composition ‘to farmers’ sons and
daughters – totally unreconstructed kind
of Midwesterners – it was very, very busy, it
was very strange, but I loved it.’ Again, the
phrase ‘to shoot hard labour’ came to my
mind. Armed with excellent grades for his
MA, he applied for the Keele scholarship
a third time, got it and went on to write a
dissertation on the jazz aesthetic in Toni
Morrison’s novels, while teaching American
Studies to undergraduates. ‘It was a
wonderful American Studies department
with brilliant, collegial teachers like Richard
Godden, Mary Ellison and, the late – and
much lamented – Charles Swan, and very
interdisciplinary – very much jazz and
music and literature and history, all kind of
feeding off of one another.’
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Given Rice’s postgraduate experiences, it
is not surprising that teaching and research
have remained symbiotic elements over
the course of his career. I was curious
however, about what drove him to keep
going for the Keele scholarship, and
how did he know, as an undergraduate
in Edinburgh, that he wanted to be a
university lecturer? For Rice, to reflect on
his role as a teacher included reflecting on
his upbringing, his undergraduate years
and the evolution of his research interests
in black Atlantic and radical narratives.
In the following extracts, from our 90
minute formal interview, I received some
fascinating answers.
Becoming a teacher
‘I think I just thought that it is a really
important role and it’s something
whereby you can make information
which is really important, accessible to
a group of people who can hopefully
go on and do something important with
that information. I suppose a lot of it
comes from being someone for whom
books were my liberation. I was born and
brought up on a council estate in Surrey.
It’s great being born and brought up on
a council estate in Manchester – there’s a
working-class culture up there! We don’t
have a working class culture [in Surrey],
well there is one, but in fact it was at the
dog ends of Thatcherism … There was this
horrible consumerism all around you and
nothing to hold up against it, you know,
just in terms of getting a handle on that
world around you. You had working class
people just gagging to buy their council
houses! For me, what had saved me had
been books. I really wanted to give that
to other people, I really wanted to be
involved in the world of ideas. But also I
love performing … I really like the banter
of being in a class, taking them on and
making them think beyond the box, that’s
why I do it.’
The pull of black American culture
Nearly all of Rice’s publications have either
black Atlantic or black American culture at
their centre. Where did his interest begin
and how did it develop?
‘I think the most important moment for
me was probably getting into jazz. My
friend Nigel used to bunk off school and
sit in his room and play jazz music. He
went to a different school than me with
different holidays, so I could pretend that
I was bunking off school with him but I
wasn’t – because I would never do that.
I used to sit in his room listening to jazz
music from all ages and all periods. I didn’t
get into it straight away at all but once I
got into it, I really loved it. When I went
away to university at Edinburgh, I used to
spend most of my time in record shops,
just buying more and more jazz. And then,
when I went on to do American literature
and American history, I gravitated towards
black American literature and black
American history spaces ... When I think
about it, the reason I did it was because I
was wanting, I think, to study a different
culture, (and one that spoke English,
because my languages were never going
to be good enough) and also I wanted
to study radical culture. I did do lots of
work on the Levellers and Diggers and
all that good stuff, doing history, and I
was interested in it, but it was almost, it
was always too close. I am very interested
in working-class histories, but I’m really
glad I’m interested in them now, having
come back to them from African American
histories, and through that black Atlantic
prism.’
In the classroom
When asked what words he would use
to describe himself in the classroom the
quick fire answer was, ‘chalk and talk!’
and I wasn’t surprised to learn that Rice
is quite mobile and energetic, but while
his lectures are now ‘very improvised’ this
wasn’t always the case:
‘When I first went to Preston I actually
wrote out all of my lectures, longhand,
that was partly because I didn’t have a
year beforehand to kind of sort things
out, I was just thrown in the deep end,
and I really needed [the script]. But now,
especially in the Black Atlantic class,
there won’t be a note in sight usually …
I tend to do mini-lectures now; 20-minute
lectures and then encourage questioning
and debate … I am very traditional – I’ve
only just started to use PowerPoint – I’ve
always used overheads and slides. And I’m
not really that keen on it, but increasingly
you’re forced into it by the technological
world around you. I tend not to put text
on [PowerPoint], it’s just a way of showing
illustrations with the odd quote. If you’re
doing PowerPoint in the way everybody
what had saved me had been books.
I really wanted to give that to other people,
I really wanted to be involved in the world of ideas.
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else does it, which is, here are the three
main points, here are the other three
main points – that’s really constrictive,
because actually there never are three
main points, and that’s my problem with
it really – it makes (the lecture) almost a
consumerist thing.’
The interdisciplinary way
It was clear to me that Rice’s commitment
to interdisciplinarity stretched across
the various facets of his professional
identity. So I asked him to talk about
the practicalities and consequences of
doing interdisciplinary work and training
undergraduates in English and American
Studies. His answer, a cross between a
lecture and a sermon, was intense and
absorbing. I gained a visceral sense of
what a student in one of Rice’s no-lecture-
classes might experience.
‘When I was an undergraduate in English
literature and history, I’d get the essays
back from the English literature people
saying “there’s not nearly enough practical
criticism here – context is great but you’re
over-selling your context.” And when
I’d get my essays back from historians it
would be ‘you’re taking far too long over
this source, this document, there’s context
there but there’s not enough context.’
And I was determined that when I was an
academic that I would never say, never say,
those things to students. What they should
have been saying to me was something
along the lines of “actually, this is the way
criticism should be, but if you want to
do something more to it you could bring
this in or that in.” So what my practice
is about, for instance, showing people a
paragraph out of Beloved and then doing
almost a mind map but not literally, I don’t
do it of that paragraph. So, for instance,
you’ve got that paragraph in Beloved
which is about cannibalism.
You know the one where Stamp Paid is
looking at the window and he says “it’s not
what racism has done to black people, it’s
what racism has done to white people.”
Where they’re eating it up, they’re eating
themselves up – it’s self cannibalism and its
cannibalism and you know it’s a paragraph!
And what I suppose I do is to say, in this
paragraph we could look at Freud here, we
could look at ideas to do with psychology
and the whole psychology around
cannibalism, but you could also look at
the history of the cannibal in postcolonial
discourse and the way in which this comes
into it. Then there’s the whole thing about
American history, and the way in which
the black body which has been eaten in
order for the white culture to live and
sustain itself, and then you would almost
say, well let’s trace that in this novel. At
one point in Beloved there’s the line that
says the Ku Klux Klan are actually like
cannibals – that image goes through the
text and each time it has a different kind
of contextualisation which leads you to
somewhere else. So you can’t hold this
text in to a practical criticism – you don’t
want to hold it in to a practical criticism,
you don’t even want to hold it in to a
contextualisation around history, you want
to have contextualisation around so many
different things. Then you might want
to say, well actually, let’s have a look at
some of these pictures of lynchings, to talk
about the way in which people took away
trophies from those lynchings, cut-up the
bodies. And that’s what Morrison’s talking
about again and again. She’s not just
talking about slavery; she’s talking about
post-slavery as well. She’s not just talking
about Reconstruction, she’s not talking
about the 1950s, even. What she’s talking
about is the way in which the history of
racism has impacted us all. So I suppose
what my teaching practice is about is, as
an English teacher, and I do teach English
students as well as American Studies
students, I don’t change one iota when I
teach English students. Not one iota do
I go back to those days when I was – at
times – poorly taught at Edinburgh, being
forced into a very narrow view of textual
criticism as the be all and end all.’
Escaping the ivory tower
Although it is difficult to fathom where he
finds the time, a significant aspect of Rice’s
life as an academic is the work he currently
does outside of the classroom and the
university. A key point however, and a
lesson to beginning lecturers especially, is
that each of Rice’s activities link up – they
feed in and feed back into his courses and
books, while what he teaches and writes
gives him credibility as well as expertise
in new environments beyond the walls
of HEIs. His passion for this aspect of his
working life also has deep roots dating
back to those days in Edinburgh.
‘Even before I got into academia, I found
people who were working on ideas in a
broad sense. We had a reading group,
mainly people who were on welfare, on
the dole in Scotland, and we were all
reading Derrida (this is the mid 1980s).
When I was an undergraduate ... I’d get the
essays back from the English literature people
saying ‘there’s not nearly enough practical
criticism here’
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Newsletter 14 April 2008 19
We were reading Derrida, and about
half of us were then going out on the
miners’ picket line the next morning. The
other half were saying ‘No!’, and arguing
about Derridean ideas around it! But you
know some of us were doing both and
then we got very involved in the anti-
poll tax movement. We were involved in
community action but were also spending
all our spare moments in the National
Library reading things like Bataille …
One of the guys, a guy called Jack Fuller,
actually managed to get some money from
the Adult Education to run a Derrida class,
and we all hauled into this Derrida class
... that class sort of gave me a community
even at that moment when there was
no community for me, in terms of there
was no department or anything like that.
That gave me a real grounding in the fact
that ideas don’t just happen in academia,
they happen all over the place, and that
seemed to me to be a really important
lesson from that time in Edinburgh.’
Rice was an early English Subject Centre
project holder, on the Americanisation
and the Teaching of American Studies
(AMATAS) project, and, more recently,
he worked with Lancaster city partners
on the Slave Trade Arts Memorial (STAMP)
project. He has also curated ‘Trade and
Empire: Remembering Slavery’ at the
University of Manchester’s Whitworth
Gallery (June 2007–April 2008). So I
inquired about the relationship between
his different working environments – his
knack for juggling them – and I solicited
his opinion on public intellectuals.
Let’s talk about the STAMP project,
because I think that’s a really interesting
model.
‘One day in 2002 there was a training
day for teachers to teach slavery. And
Lancaster, to give it credit, was doing
some of this work because it is a slave port
and they were grasping towards getting
it into the curriculum. There were about
10 teachers there and we did a day with
them. I devised this slavery tableau – a
tableau of the Atlantic Triangle, and it
worked quite well. I developed it for work
with schoolchildren as a way of explaining
the Middle Passage, the whole triangle
in fact, with 18 different character cards
and they move round. The characters
are based on characters in my book,
Radical Narratives … It’s a dynamic way of
teaching, and I use it in my Black Atlantic
courses with my own undergraduates, just
as a means of a different way of showing
people how things work. At the end of
the workshop we all sat down – people
from the council diversity group, the
museum, and the local non-governmental
organizations like Political Link … We said,
there’s a bit of a gap really, there’s the
display in the museum which we know is
a bit tired, but there’s nothing much else
in Lancaster, and the only place people
do go to think about slavery is Sambo’s
grave, which is tidal – you can’t get there
sometimes and you can get cut off there,
you know?! So we all sat there and said
it would be great to have a memorial
wouldn’t it? We said, well maybe we can
do this. A group to set up a slave memorial
got together … and suddenly we were on
the game and having public meetings and
then we got some funding which just came
out of virtually nowhere! And not just for
the memorial but for a whole educational
thing around the memorial, so we went
into dozens of schools and us organisers
spoke to nearly a thousand school children
over the life of the project. We then
commissioned an artist – the council gave
us lots of support – and we now have the
first ever memorial to the victims of the
slave trade on a quay-side site in Britain.
It’s a wonderful memorial but it’s also there
permanently, so there’s always a place
people can go to find out about slavery.
I’ve got somewhere to take my students
now, every single field trip. There’s a
memorial right in the town next to me,
to take my students to, to show them
so they can discuss the issues around
that memorial. What they have tended
to do is stand by the memorial and start
interviewing members of the public about
what they think about it and getting
different views about it and then writing
them up and talking about these kinds
of things. So it becomes a whole new
method of how to work because of that
memorial being there. I love that aspect of
it. [The curatorial work] is very important
to me as well, it means that I’ve been able
to translate a lot of my academic work
from Radical Narratives and since into an
exhibition, which means being able to
Books Were My Liberation: an interview with Alan Rice©iStockphoto
It gave me a real grounding in the fact that ideas
don’t just happen in academia, they happen all
over the place, and that seemed to me to be a
really important lesson from that time in Edinburgh.
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bring a whole new community into that
work. So it’s teaching in a different kind
of way.
The university gave me full support to
do this, even though it wasn’t in Preston,
which I thought was quite good, because
they/we were saying this is about
community in the larger sense. But also
it fed into my teaching as I started doing
weeks, then developed a whole module,
called ‘Monuments and Memorials of the
Black Atlantic’, for our MA course. I think
it is a great shame there are not more
public intellectuals among academics …
It’s a disgrace that the RAE culture means
we are not being public intellectuals,
both in the sense of having the time to
be involved in community actions which
feed into your academic work and having
the time and energy to do curatorial work
… Far too many academics are content
to talk only to one another, and I am not
content to do that.’
Endings
Rice and I had started our day together,
disregarding wind and rain, with a tour
of places of interest and significance
regarding Lancaster and the Atlantic slave
trade. I was shown a private residence
which is still home to the descendants
of a major slave trader, the magisterial
Lancaster Priory and parish church where,
between the pews and stained glass
windows, prominent city fathers have
towering plaques detailing their good
works, while history records their extensive
dealings in human flesh and the profits
they reaped from it. Most movingly
perhaps, was when I saw the memorial to
victims of the slave trade – the only one
in Great Britain at present – the physical
manifestation of the STAMP project. We
ended the day in Rice’s home having
tea with his partner, perusing his library
and welcoming his young daughters as
they arrived home from school. I have
written elsewhere that we don’t often
have the opportunity to visit each other’s
classrooms, but my day with Alan Rice
gave me that and more – I glimpsed a bit
of the complex process of how we juggle
our identities as teachers, researchers,
members of families and tribes. It was
quite a day. My last question to Rice
was what he’d be doing if he weren’t an
academic (and a curator and a community
activist). He replied ‘I wouldn’t want to do
anything else. It’s about the teaching and
it’s about the research and it’s about the
project thing. No, I don’t think I could do
anything else, it’s in my DNA.’
Save the Date:
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New Lecturers
Conference
21–23 November 2008
Registration will open soon on our website
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Newsletter 14 April 2008 21
This English Subject Centre round table in September
2007 – instigated by Mark Rawlinson of the University
of Leicester – was a response to the alarm expressed
by many colleagues in the higher education
community over the perception that the close reading
skills of undergraduates are in decline. Alan Brown
and Adam Piette provided short reflective talks, and
the day, which ended with a session in which three
small groups each designed a ‘close reading’ module,
included an intensive period of group work on specific
poems (Kipling’s ‘The Dykes’ and Simon Armitage’s
‘Not the Furniture Game’). The opportunity to spend
time with colleagues practising the skills which
were under discussion was a particularly warmly
welcomed aspect of a rich and productive event.
This part of the day was an opportunity not just to
do some close reading but also to reflect upon what
that process involved – what presuppositions and
knowledge (many of them not necessarily shared with
our students) we’d brought to the task. It was also a
salutary way of experiencing at first hand the anxieties
and excitement of a seminar/tutorial from a student’s
point of view.
An underlying principle concerned the indivisibility of
subject knowledge and pedagogic practice: that in
sharing with students our own working practices and
intellectual strategies we take part in the perpetual
actualisation of the subject1
. Indeed, ‘close reading’
has been predicated on a long-standing – though
now perhaps residual – insistence within English
literary studies that there is no gulf fixed between
the specialist knowledge of academics and what
students can work out from a text, given confidence,
argumentative stamina and a modicum of knowledge.
And yet, as Alan Brown forcibly reminded us, there
has, all the time, (and not least since practical criticism
gave way to critical practice in the 1980s) been a
paradox submerged beneath the apparent democracy
of the text-focused classroom: that ‘English’ did in
fact have designs on the formation
of the subjectivity of its students, and that its teachers
and examiners did possess a hidden knowledge or
‘true judgment’ to which students could only aspire to
conform2
. Many forms of close reading therefore lead
to students attempting to guess what is in the tutor’s
mind, or, in some cases, adopting a stance designed
to demonstrate their superiority to fellow students.
The situation at A Level – and a lot of the time in
universities – might be described as a kind of ‘cultural
obedience’: inviting the production, in response to
the actual or implied question ‘what did you think of
this, then?’ of formulaic appreciations of texts which
students had no intention of reading in their own time.
Participants looked back frequently to the origins of
close reading in the work of I A Richards and the new
critics, highlighting the embeddedness of the original
practice of close reading in teaching. Alan Brown
stressed the fact that Richards was interested less in
the establishment of criteria for ‘good’ interpretation
than in the close reading of poetry as a mechanism
for the ordering of the mind. Adam Piette looked at
the legacy of the American New Critics, whose work
implied a hierarchy of readers ranging from less to
more skilled, with themselves – an elite of poet-critics
– at the top.
Whether or not close reading should involve
judgments of literary quality was touched upon briefly.
One participant described an exercise in which he and
his students analysed and compared ‘good’ and ‘bad’
poems – and uncovered a striking unanimity about
literary value. Other participants tended to want to
distance the critical act from value judgments, in a
number of different ways – indeed, it was argued that
the encounter with a text in a seminar should engage
with the text beyond the issue of liking or disliking.
Another colleague distinguished between different
types of value judgment, saying that while she found
asking students ‘Do you like it?’ in a seminar was
Up Close:
a round table on close reading
Is close reading a dying art? In this extended event report, Ben Knights
and Jonathan Gibson highlight current thinking about one of the
fundamental processes of teaching and learning in our subject areas.
Ben Knights is the
Director of the English
Subject Centre. His
most recent book is
Masculinities in Text
and Teaching (Palgrave
2007).
Jonathan Gibson
is an Academic
Co-ordinator at the
English Subject Centre
and also writes and
researches in the areas
of Early Modern and
Renaissance Studies.
1 See, for example, Susan Bruce, Ken Jones and Monica McLean, ‘Some Notes on a Project: Democracy and Authority
in the Production of a Discipline’, Pedagogy 7.3 (2007) 481–500.
2 Cf. Alan Brown, ‘On the Subject of Practical Criticism’, Cambridge Quarterly 28 (1999), 293–00327; Robert Scholes,
The Crafty Reader (Yale UP, 2001).
Up Close: a round table on close reading
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counter-productive, asking ‘Is it good?’
could be a useful starting point. She
pointed out that students’ enthusiasm for
a text could wax and wane in the course
of a seminar. It was also quite possible for
students to simultaneously dislike a text
and enjoy analysing it – a practice, it was
suggested, that was valuable in teaching
them about the differences between
reading for pleasure and reading as a
literary critic. Models for this approach
could be found in the analytical (rather
than ‘appreciative’) approach to texts
currently taught at English Language A
Level. The importance of picking up and
extending immediate student responses
to text was highlighted by several
participants: ‘not liking’ something in
a text was often student shorthand for
not understanding something. Another
participant described a dramatic contrast
between two halves of the same module:
the first half was taught in a very ‘top-
down’, theory-heavy manner, with the
result that some students were completely
alienated; in the second half of the course,
a second lecturer’s student-led approach
– built on brainstorming sessions with the
students – was much more successful in
building student commitment.
A number of suggestions emerged
from the module design exercise at
the end of the day. First of all, that we
should articulate (to ourselves and to
our students) the skills and conceptual
repertoires on which we draw. If we
are aspiring to build ‘disciplinary
consciousness’ we should not ‘smuggle
in’ close reading, but foreground it, and
offer students ‘kit bags’ for thinking about
figurative language, device and linguistic
choice. Stylistics and systematic language
study are among the sources of such
equipment, and we need to bear in mind
that in many universities we have students
who will have taken A Level English
Language. While we can and should ask
initial open questions of the ‘what did you
notice?’/‘what do you think?’ variety, we
have to do more work on how to build on
the initial responses we receive, on drawing
in the less confident or articulate members
of the group, and on safeguarding co-
operation. There was a plea for modules
which foreground close reading to be
taught by experienced teachers. It is
dispiriting for students if terminology that
has excited them in a close reading course
cannot be applied on modules taught by
other lecturers. One group suggested
that close reading should be thoroughly
‘embedded’, playing a key role in every
module on a degree. Another (Utopian)
idea was for a year group to reassemble
in a final-year module to bring together
and interrogate, in unseen close reading,
knowledge gathered in previous years.
It was also strongly put to us that
the close study of form, device and
linguistic choice could only benefit from
engagement with Creative Writing – itself
a form of close reading. Even if our goal
is not the teaching of creative writing
in itself, one way of releasing the grip
of anxiety generated by the apparently
authoritative text is to use authors’ drafts
or variant texts, or to engage in forms of
transformative writing – to invite students
to write their own versions or variant texts
as a way of getting to grips with style,
genre and linguistic choice3
. It was felt that
Virtual Learning Environments (VLEs) could
be a potentially invaluable tool in enabling
students to unpick texts at their own pace,
or to supplement class activity in focusing
on the effects of different approaches,
students collectively building up layers of
interpretations. The teaching of reading
‘pencil in hand’ can readily be translated
to forms of annotation and hypertext. It
was realised that many of the suggestions
made implied making more use of
formative assessment than recent regimes
tend to encourage, or teachers have
time to mark. But there was enthusiastic
support for the portfolio of drafts with
commentary as a form of summative
assessment which could enable students
to sustain and move through a cyclical
process of reading, writing and revisiting.
Classically, of course, practical criticism
and new criticism are characterised as
approaches brought to bear on context-
Many forms of close reading therefore
lead to students attempting to guess
what is in the tutor’s mind
3 Rob Pope, Textual Intervention: Critical and Creative Strategies for Literary Studies (London: Routledge, 1995);
Ben Knights and Chris Thurgar-Dawson, Active Reading: Transformative Writing in Literary Studies (London: Continuum, 2006).
‘not liking’ something in a text was often student
shorthand for not understanding something.
Up Close: a round table on close reading©RoyalHolloway,UniversityofLondon
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Newsletter 14 April 2008 23
Up Close: a round table on close reading
free texts, usually poems (‘the words
on the page’). New critical readings
are, however, heavily dependent on a
wide-ranging cultural knowledge that
is arguably more inaccessible than ever
before for the majority of today’s students.
It is clear, then, that the teaching of close
reading must also involve the teaching
of cultural contexts of various types.
But, at the same time, as teachers we
have to try to find ways of providing
or pointing towards historical and
contextual knowledge without skewing
the discussion. Sensitive teaching avoids
overwhelming people with specialist
knowledge, but equally should not hoard
knowledge as though it were only suitable
for an inner circle of knowers.
Communal close reading (as modelled in
the group exercise on the day) seemed
to be something favoured by many
participants. The module plans produced
at the end of the day involved several
exercises of this sort, for example, the
use of ‘peer-assisted-learning’ (tutorless
groups of students). These plans also
showcased ways in which comparing
responses to a text with those of other
students can be powerfully aided by
modern technology: on a discussion
board, for example, or via an annotation
exercise on a wiki.
All in all, there seemed to be little appetite
for a ‘return’ to the practical criticism of
the past. Rather, participants were keen
to embed the teaching of close reading
within a 21st-century curriculum. Several
spoke of the need to apply the techniques
of practical criticism to ‘non-literary’ as well
as ‘literary’ texts. We were reminded how
much close and careful reading – while we
were urged to be wary of the reductivism
of treating it as a ‘skill’ – is actually
practised in a variety of professions. Also,
as Adam Piette pointed out, close reading
is actually a core activity of many strands
of ‘theory’ (think of De Man, Derrida or
the New Historicists). There seemed to
be a drawing-back from the old idea
that practical criticism is something that,
in zooming in on a student’s mind in
isolation, is a good way of ‘sorting out the
sheep from goats’. The feeling of the day
seemed to be, rather, that close reading is
a desirable element in an English degree
that has been skimped on in recent
years and that can be incorporated into
degree structures without becoming an
inquisitorial tool. Despite qualifications
and reservations, what emerged (not
least from the period of practice) was a
sense that ‘close reading’ is coming back
to centre stage. That, in any case, it has
never gone away as a core element in the
teaching repertoire. And that participants
shared an enthusiasm for close reading
as a pedagogic form, provided it was
conducted in a suitably generous spirit.
In summary (and at the risk of
over-simplification), the following
recommendations emerge.
• Teach close reading, and from the very
beginning of the programme! But be
explicit about why and how you are
doing it.
• Involve all your colleagues: practice
close reading across the curriculum.
• Don’t be purist. Don’t flinch from
drawing on the analytical tools provided
by stylistic analysis, or the use of
methods of creative response, or from
the medium provided by the VLE or
the wiki.
• Theory and close reading are not
incompatible.
• History and close reading are not
incompatible.
• Support students in learning to move
between wide reading and detailed,
‘up close’ reading.
the close study of form, device and
linguistic choice can only benefit from
engagement with Creative Writing
Summaries of other Subject
Centre events can be found on
pages 36–39.

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  • 1. ‘That is what we do isn’t it?’ The Production of University English Susan Bruce Investigating Creative Writing: student perspectives Steve May Books Were My Liberation: an interview with Alan Rice Nicole King Up Close: a round table on close reading Ben Knights and Jonathan Gibson Reading and Writing Society: the role of English subjects in Education for Sustainability Arran Stibbe Developing Careers Services for English Students Jane Gawthrope English Subject Centre Newsletter Issue 14 • April 2008 ISSN 1479-7089
  • 2. This newsletter is published twice a year by the English Subject Centre, part of the Subject Network of the Higher Education Academy. The Subject Centre provides many different kinds of help to English lecturers – more details are available in this Newsletter and on our website (www.english.heacademy.ac.uk). At the heart of all our work is the view that the higher education teaching of English is best supported from within the discipline itself. As well as updates on the Centre’s activities and important developments (both within the discipline and across higher education), you will find articles here on a wide range of English-related topics. The next issue of the Newsletter will appear in Autumn 2008. We welcome contributions. If you would like to submit an article (of between 300 and 3,000 words), propose a book or software review (perhaps a textbook review by one of your students) or respond in a letter to someone else’s article, please contact the editor, Nicole King (nicole.king@rhul.ac.uk) or visit our Newsletter web page at www.english.heacademy.ac.uk/explore/ publications/newsletter/index.php In the meantime, you can keep in touch with our activities by subscribing to our e-mail list at www.jiscmail. ac.uk/lists/english–heacademy.html. The Newsletter is distributed to English departments throughout the UK and is available online at www.english.heacademy.ac.uk/explore/publications/index.php along with previous issues. If you would like extra copies, please e-mail us at esc@rhul.ac.uk The English Subject Centre Staff Jackie Fernandes: Administrator Jane Gawthrope Manager Jonathan Gibson: Academic Co-ordinator Keith Hughes: Liaison Officer for Scotland Nicole King: Academic Co-ordinator Ben Knights: Director Payman Labaff: Website and Systems Development Assistant Brett Lucas: Website Developer and Learning Technologist Rebecca Price: Administrative Assistant Candice Satchwell: Project Officer for HE in FE The English Subject Centre, Royal Holloway, University of London, Egham TW20 0EX T• 01784 443221 F• 01784 470684 esc@rhul.ac.uk www.english.heacademy.ac.uk Cover Image: Clifton Suspension Bridge, © iStockphoto.
  • 3. Newsletter 14 April 2008 01 02 Welcome Nicole King 03 Events Calendar Articles 04 ‘That is what we do isn’t it?’ The Production of University English Susan Bruce 10 Investigating Creative Writing: student perspectives Steve May 16 Books Were My Liberation: an interview with Alan Rice Nicole King 21 Up Close: a round table on close reading Ben Knights and Jonathan Gibson 24 Reading and Writing Society: the role of English Subjects in Education for Sustainability Arran Stibbe 30 Developing Careers Services for English Students Jane Gawthrope Book Reviews 34 Teaching & Learning English Literature Ellie Chambers & Marshall Gregory Reviewed by Peter Barry 35 Doing Creative Writing Steve May Reviewed by David Bausor News, Reports & Opinions 36 Event Round-Up 40 Digital Resources at the British Library Joanna Newman 41 Desert Island Texts Chris Ringrose 42 IT Works! Brett Lucas 44 The Last Word Mick Short Contents Cert no. SA-COC-1530 Contents
  • 4. 02 Newsletter 14 April 2008 Welcome Nicole King As this issue of the Newsletter lands in your pigeonhole, spring will have arrived, however beleaguered by late frosts, storms or even snow. Whether or not the forsythia or daffodils have now faded, you’ll know the seasons have turned as your students beat a path to your door in fretful (or perhaps languid) preparation for their exams and essays. As your teaching winds down and you begin to think about exam boards and the summer conference season, take a moment to regroup by immersing yourself in the pages of Issue 14. In Arran Stibbe’s helpful overview, you can find out about Education for Sustainable Development, and why it is central to how we teach Creative Writing, English literature and English language. Consider the challenge of understanding the first-year experience, as Susan Bruce transports us to the scene of a classroom, where learning is analysed through speech, gesture and gaze. Dip into the interview given by National Teaching fellow Alan Rice, whose American Studies work as a teacher and researcher joyously and forthrightly exceed the bounds of ‘English’ – indeed he reminds us what a rich group of subjects ours is. Steve May details his research into the degree expectations and experiences of Creative Writing students around the UK and beyond. He tells how his own practice has changed as a result of what he discovered. Ben Knights and Jonathan Gibson report back on a round table discussion on the topic of close reading and where it figures in current teaching practice. As you read these varied articles you may notice how the idea of practical criticism makes repeat appearances. Indeed, this foundation stone of English studies in the 20th century (and beyond) gets critiqued, admired and casually referenced depending on which of our authors you read. Further on in the issue you will find our regular features, including Brett Lucas’s column IT Works! where you can learn about some of the latest web- based technologies to support and animate your teaching; Book Reviews contributed to this issue by Peter Barry and David Bausor; Desert Island Texts with ‘castaway’ Chris Ringrose and the new commentary column The Last Word. In this issue’s The Last Word, Mick Short, a new member of the Subject Centre’s Advisory Board, provocatively questions the forked path that now seems to divide English literature from English language. Since the last Newsletter, it has been a busy period for the Subject Centre. You can quickly catch-up on some of the many events we have held over the past eight months in our Event Round-Up, while more extensive event reports are available on our website. There are also several new mini-projects which have been funded, that we’ll report on in the next issue, but you can find out about them now on our website’s Project pages. We are delighted to report that Teaching Holocaust Literature and Film, edited by Robert Eaglestone and Barry Langford, has recently been published; it is the sixth volume to appear in the book series we edit for Palgrave Macmillan, Teaching the New English. Do you have an opinion about our subject? Perhaps you have an idea for a Last Word commentary? Do you have a book on teaching you’d like to review or an article in a previous issue of the Newsletter you wish to respond to? If so, please get in touch. The Newsletter’s success, like our work in general, is down to your generosity and commitment to working with us. Good luck with those exam boards and conference papers. Nicole King Editor Recycle when you have finished with this publication please pass it on to a colleague or student or recycle it appropriately. Welcome
  • 5. Newsletter 14 April 2008 03 Events Calendar Spring/Summer 2008 EVENT: The Future of the Taught MA in English DATE: 25 April 2008 LOCATION: De Montfort University, Leicester This one-day event will focus on the changing context of, and pressures on, the taught postgraduate degree in English. Participants will be able to discuss how their departments, and the discipline as a whole, might respond to the different demands of students, funding bodies and employers. There will be opportunities both to consider strategic issues and to share ideas and experiences of practical responses in terms of pedagogy and curriculum design. EVENT: Creative Writing: Teaching and Technology DATE: 30 April 2008 LOCATION: Manchester Metropolitan University The aims of this one-day event are to provide a forum for discussion and debate. Topics and presentations will explore the pedagogies of Creative Writing and technology. The purpose of the day is not only to showcase new developments and share practice, but also to provide ample discussion time to think about what issues we are facing. EVENT: Learning on the Language/Literature Border DATE: 1 May 2008 LOCATION: UCLAN, Preston This one-day event will look at how students learn and experience English language and English literature in the undergraduate curriculum. The aims of the day are to interrogate the underlying assumptions of the way we approach English language and English literature learning, and to develop an understanding of how we can ensure students get the best learning experience. EVENT: Teaching: An Improviser’s Art DATE: 1 May 2008 LOCATION: SOAS, London This event, led by Kevin McCarron, Reader in American Literature at Roehampton University, will draw on the parallels between teaching and stand-up comedy, to suggest techniques and strategies to reduce the burden of seminar preparation. EVENT: What is Literacy in HE Today? DATE: 13 May 2008 LOCATION: London, Bedford Square The English Subject Centre is pleased to introduce the first of its London Evening Discussion Groups. The purpose is to share ideas about teaching with colleagues from across London in an informal atmosphere. The first session will query the definition of literacy in higher education today: Are our students literate enough? How do we identify literacy in the 1st, 2nd and 3rd years? Is one person’s literacy another person’s skill set? EVENT: Networking Day for HE in FE English Lecturers DATE: 13 June 2008 LOCATION: SOAS, London If you teach English at higher education level in an further education context, we hope you will join us at this networking event. The event will give people from different parts of the UK a chance to share experiences, curriculum content, ways of working, frustrations and delights. The English Subject Centre will report on work it has been carrying out in the higher education in further education sector, looking at the various models of English higher education in further education, and issues which have emerged as of particular interest or concern to teachers. EVENT: Teaching and Research in English: Making the Links DATE: 13 June 2008 LOCATION: University of Edinburgh Bringing together subject-specific current practice and theory in the area of teaching-research linkages, this workshop will encourage teacher-researchers (including postgraduate students) from the areas of Creative Writing, language and literature to share ideas about topics, such as the effect teaching has on research practice, the importance of diverse research interests in curriculum development and provision and do our students care if we are experts in what we teach? EVENT: Networking Day for Humanities’ Careers Advisers DATE: 16 July 2008 LOCATION: University of Birmingham The English Subject Centre, in collaboration with Anne Benson (Head of the Careers Service at UEA) is convening a third meeting for higher education Career Advisers with an interest in the humanities. The meeting will provide a forum for careers advisers to discuss and share ideas and experiences, and this year the theme will be engaging employers. Several Careers Services will be showcasing their English Subject Centre-funded projects to enhance services to English students. For further details on any of these (mostly free) events please visit our website www.english.heacademy.ac.uk/explore/events Events Calendar
  • 6. 04 Newsletter 14 April 2008 I suppose … debating is one of the big parts of English isn’t it? It’s being able to express yourself and using language and what you know from literature, and listen and stuff; I suppose that is, that is what we do, isn’t it? (Anna1 , Third Year Combined Hons English student April 2007) Something gets lost in the translation of Anna’s observation onto the page: what doesn’t emerge is the sense of discovery that inhabits her sentence as she speaks it. It’s not just what she says, it’s the way that she says it: her speech is punctuated by hesitations difficult to reproduce in writing, but intrinsic to its significance as an instance of the process (not merely the product) of thinking as it happens in the university teaching space. Anna was answering a question we had put to her class on our third visit to her university (which we call Baxter), as part of TPUE, an English Subject Centre-funded project in which Anna’s class had first participated some months earlier. Detailed more fully in the recent issue of Pedagogy, edited by Ben Knights and Nicole King, TPUE pools the expertise of educationalists2 and English academics3 to examine how English is ‘produced’ in the everyday exchanges of the classroom. Relatively neglected as a focus of research, these exchanges are an obvious proving ground for some of the claims English has made about itself: that it demonstrates a ‘continuous concern with social inclusiveness’ (Holland, 2003); that it is ‘oppositional’ (Rorty, 1982) or particularly ‘democratising’ (QAA, 2000) or, conversely, that its role has traditionally been to preserve the orthodox and defend hegemonic ideologies from subversive attack (Eagleton, 1983). Such scholarship on English is one context of our research. The other is educationalist enquiry into the changes currently besetting higher education (increased audit, standardisation, larger student numbers, the employability agenda – among others). Some have argued that these changes reshape traditional disciplinary priorities and/or have a disproportionate effect on less privileged students. But (again), there has been little examination of their effects at the level of the classroom. So we are trying, then, to examine the interconnections that do (or don’t) exist between the subject matter and self- conception of English and its pedagogic form, and also to assess the relation between the nature of classroom interactions and the differing levels of resources within which they occur. To this effect, we record and analyse English classes in three ‘types’ of universities: ‘post- 1992’, ‘pre-1992 non-Russell Group’ and ‘elite’. We pay attention to a variety of modes of communication – gaze, tone, silences, ‘body language’ – consideration of which can sometimes foreground issues other to those which arise from analysis of language alone. From these recordings, we identify key moments which we isolate as clips and/or multimodal transcriptions (figure 1, ‘At the End of the Day’). These we then use as the focus of our investigations, and also as a mechanism of testing our own interpretations against those of the students whose interactions we are analysing. In The Production of University English (TPUE) project, English academics and educationalists together investigated how English is ‘produced’ in the everyday classes taking place in a variety of British universities. Here, Susan Bruce describes the project and shows how its methods can be used to shed new light on the interpretative tools which we teach to our students. ‘That is what we do, isn’t it?’ The Production of University English 1 Names of participating individuals and institutions have been changed. 2 Ken Jones (Keele University) and Monica McLean (The University of Nottingham). 3 Also participating is David Amigoni (Keele University). Susan Bruce is Senior Lecturer at Keele University, where she teaches Early Modern and 20th-century literature. She is co-editor (with Valeria Wagner) of Fiction and Economy: New Essays on Economics and Literature (Palgrave, 2007) (e-mail s.e.bruce@keele.ac.uk). Articles
  • 7. Newsletter 14 April 2008 05 On the occasion referred to above, we had returned to Baxter to show the students two clips of a seminar devoted to The Merchant of Venice, which we had recorded earlier in the year, during which the tutor, Barbara, had asked the students to conduct a ‘trial’ of the play itself. Dividing them into two ‘teams’, Barbara had instructed each to ‘choose a Portia’ who, with the help of her team, would rally and present arguments concerning the text’s politics: was it, or was it not, an anti-Semitic play? The clips we showed on our return to Baxter were clips we were subsequently to use to investigate two sets of questions. One (addressed in our Pedagogy article) involved the interface between English and issues of democracy and authority. The other (the focus of this essay) was that students sometimes use their interpretations of texts, and their seminar discussions of those interpretations, to articulate observations which are as much about themselves as they are about the texts – which are ostensibly the subject of their discussion. In returning to Baxter, we wanted to ask the students what they thought was happening in the clips that interested us. And, for what it is worth, our Baxter students articulated their understanding of the nature of ‘English’ in terms which broadly underscored the way we’d begun to think about the issue in our Pedagogy essay. Thus for Anna, English is not only about learning to articulate her own opinions, but also about learning to listen to other people’s. Interestingly, she and her classmates maintained that English offered them ‘a lot more freedom’ than did other subjects they were taking: History but also (surprisingly, given the degree of autonomy one might expect each discipline to allow its respective disciples) Creative Writing. Both of these were characterised as wedded to a ‘right and a wrong way to look at the text,’ unlike English, which was a subject if not of infinite variety, at least of infinite hospitality: ‘in English lit,’ one student said, ‘it’s like, your opinions are valid and you can sort of say what you feel’. There are shades here of the familiar student claim that English is entirely subjective, that interpretation has no intrinsic delimitation. ‘What, then, if I said to you that The Merchant of Venice was about a train crash?’ Susan asked, in an attempt to challenge this ‘interpretation- as-absolute-free-for-all’ version of English lit. This perennial (mis-) characterisation of English deserves further research. What do students really mean when they reiterate this ‘anything goes’ claim about English, and what underlies that utterance? Excitement? Delight? Vertigo? And to what degree is it intrinsically associated with the perception we took this student to be articulating here: the proposition that English offers a particular space not merely for self-expression, but for a kind of self-validation? That correlation between the articulation of ideational observations and a process of self-validation, dovetailed with our hypothesis that students’ comments about a text may sometimes act as a vehicle for the articulation also of observations about themselves, of which they themselves may not always be conscious. In the clip we showed the students, Lisa begins by arguing that the play establishes a critical difference between Antonio and Shylock – that this difference is value-laden – and that that value is signalled to the audience by a poetics which aestheticises Antonio’s labour and debases Shylock’s. Her tone is a mixture of hesitancy and conviction, the latter quality most pronounced in the final clause of her first intervention: Lisa: But though they are both merchants, what they are involved in and how they are, um … Their work is described as very different, Um, like, Antonio’s worries over his ships are described in very eloquent and s- s- sublime language about spices, the … spreading out of/on [?] the waves, and the waves enthroned … enthroned with his … uh … silks. But, uh, Shylock is the/a [?] rat sneaking in the dark and the, the … sort of, it’s the, … It’s the difference between the sort of glory and beauty of ships and … the petty trafficking that Shylock does: they’re not the same. Rhianna counters with an appeal to the prestige conferred on Shylock by his ability to access wealth immediately when wealth is needed. She speaks more forcefully than Lisa, and appears impatient, both with an argument which valorises Antonio when all he is able to do is ‘wait around for a ship’, and – perhaps – with a discourse that tacitly privileges figurative language over the power of the event within the plot: Rhianna: But, at the end of the day, the amount of money, as he says it himself, as he says somewhere, um, would a, would a dog have 3,000 ducats to give you? Obviously he’s proving it, the fact that the amount, fair enough, Antonio has these ships full of spices and silks, but at the end of the day it’s, it’s Shylock that can just grab 3,000 ducats and give them lend them ****. So obviously Shylock in some ways has, is of, of higher level of, I can’t describe, commerce, that sort of thing because he has more, he has the more money available to him. [Lisa: Sh-] Rhianna: Whereas Antonio is waiting … around for a ship. And fair enough, if it comes back he’ll have a lot of money, but … whereas Antonio, Antonio has no money at the minute so he can’t – he can’t lend Bassiano [sic] the money and he has to go to Shylock in the first place. And it’s Shylock that can just give this money away – [Lisa: Sh-] Rhianna: without really noticing, so <trails off> Rhianna had arguably drawn the short straw here, in having to defend the case that the immediacy of Shylock’s access to money trumps the cachet afforded to Antonio and his ships. What do students really mean when they reiterate this ‘anything goes’ claim about English, and what underlies that utterance? Excitement? Delight? Vertigo? ‘That is what we do, isn’t it?’ The Production of University English
  • 8. 06 Newsletter 14 April 2008 Time Talk Action Gaze 29.48 B: And the fact that they are both involved in commerce, they are both merchants, Shylock is a kind of merchant as well. I think that’s …. **** B: Sitting with legs crossed. She is resting her elbows on the arms of the chair and clasping her fingers together at her chest Gesturing in circling motion with hand RH: Nods, rubbing arm, then keeps arms folded LH: Resting hands on books, left foot crossed over right knee B: At RH Then around room – right hand side RH: Downwards LH: At B 29.54 LH: But though they are both merchants, what they are involved in and how they are, um … Their work is described as very different LH: Right hand straight up from knee, holding pen in hand. Flicking pen in right hand and making a circular gesture with pen B: At LH LH: From RH to teacher LH: At teacher 30.04 Um, like, Antonio’s worries over his ships are described in very eloquent and s- s- sublime language about LH: Swallows RH: Raise of hand to gesture at boy in her group like a silent agreement about a point he made earlier? LH: Looking across room, possibly to RH: Thinking RH: Initially looking down then to boy, then to LH LH: Down at paper then to B 30.14 spices, the … spreading out of/ on? the waves, and the waves enthroned … LH: Circling hand gesture with right hand B: Nods LH: To B 30.20 Enthroned with his … uh … Silks But uh Shylock is the/a? rat sneaking in the dark and the, the … sort of, it’s the, LH: Flips pen over, then points it downwards as if pointing at word LH: Changes grip on pen so thumb is pressing on top of it LH: Down then to RH LH: Down then at B 30:30 It’s the difference between the sort of glory and beauty of ships and … Points pen in air, thumb pressed on top, wrist pointing outwards Moves pen to left hand, lifts right hand with fingers spread, then brushes hair away from left hand side of forehead, then pulls at hair slightly. LH: B, then to RH LH: At B 30.41 the petty trafficking that Shylock does, they’re not the same Left hand out to emphasise petty Right hand pointing a finger In this transcript from the Baxter University class, the details of both verbal and non-verbal communication become evident. Key: B: Barbara LH: ‘Lisa’ – woman with curly hair on left-hand side of Barbara RH: ‘Rhianna’ – woman on right-hand side of Barbara AW: Arabella – woman with American accent Timings from transcription taken from the second recording. Figure 1 ‘At the End of the Day’ ‘That is what we do, isn’t it?’ The Production of University English
  • 9. Newsletter 14 April 2008 07 And, however artificial it is to extract a clip from the fluid, porous space of the seminar (we all know how discussions in seminars circulate and return and are, almost by definition, inconclusive), Lisa seems to get the last word. With quiet conviction she restates and synopsises her case, concluding with what we take to be (despite the ostensible affirmation with which it is introduced) a correction to the teacher’s attempted gloss on what she is saying: Lisa: Shylock is a necessary evil. It doesn’t necessarily mean he’s at all respected or gains anything other than the money, whereas Antonio has a lot of respect for, um, his merchanting and his adventuring. Barbara: Because it’s more extravagant …? Alannah: And … Lisa: Yeah, <quieter, trailing to finish> It’s more beautiful. Lisa never explains what she means here by the claim she finally, after two successive attempts, (‘[Lisa: Sh-]’) manages to utter: that ‘Shylock is a necessary evil’. Perhaps she means that capital presupposes usury; perhaps she wants to suggest that one of the roles of Shylock’s enterprise is to throw into relief the nobility of Antonio’s. What she is clear about though, is that Antonio’s cachet derives not from the relative ostentation of his enterprise, but from its beauty. There seems to be quite a lot at stake in this brief exchange. The ground contested is essentially an argument over the relative merits and status of liquid versus cultural capital: the two students don’t use these terms, but those appear to be the concepts they are invoking. But what is not apparent from the transcript was that the content of this argument may mirror the respective social positionings of the students conducting it. All the students in this seminar were white; all bar one was apparently British; about 80% were female. But although the cohort was in many respects homogeneous, the nuances of the language employed by Lisa and by Rhianna seemed to befit not just the arguments each made, but something expressive of a more profound difference between the two women. Lisa, defending the notion that social standing may be generated by and communicated through a plethora of factors of which liquid capital is only one, often uses two adjectives or examples where one might suffice, and is much more hesitant and exploratory in articulating her claims than Rhianna is. Rhianna, convinced by the claim that money not only talks, but talks louder than any other kind of capital, cultural or invested, employs a language which seems implicitly to reflect her confidence in the material reality of the power that control of liquid wealth confers: ‘at the end of the day’, she keeps repeating, it is Shylock who can produce the readies. The phrase, ‘at the end of the day’ is one which accepts and validates one factor as determining. Designed to cut through nuances and hesitations and to foreclose on the possibility of multiple determinations, it is often, as it is here, used in connection with an asseveration of financial motives or contexts as ultimately determining and (tacitly but no less ‘obviously’) rational. The same might be argued of the phrase ‘fair enough’, whose employment often functions to close off alternative explanations even as its speaker apparently admits them. And again, insofar as the locution, as it is used here, acknowledges the rationality of Antonio’s behaviour, rationality is again conflated with the pre-eminent importance of material gain: what seem to be otiose actions on Antonio’s part may, in the end, (but only uncertainly) issue in profit, and to the degree that they may, they are rational. The differences between the two students’ lexical choices, then, might signal more fundamental differences between them: their respective interpretations of the text apparently overlap with their own social positionings. Drawing attention to our interest in the relation between the ‘ideational’ aspects of discussion and its ‘interpersonal’ qualities, Susan pointed out that although this seminar, formulated as a role-played debate, raised special issues surrounding the relation of the students’ arguments to their actual beliefs, both, nevertheless, appeared in this clip to be personally committed to the arguments they were making. Susan did not say explicitly that each seemed wedded, herself, to the value system she was attributing to the play, but she did ask what they considered were the most important ideas in the clip they had watched. Rhianna replied: Actually, there’s quite a lot about it here, the role of, sort of, the value of Rhianna’s account of the convergence of interpretation and self appeals then to personality, not to class or social positioning, or ideological affiliation. ‘That is what we do, isn’t it?’ The Production of University English ©RoyalHolloway,UniversityofLondon
  • 10. 08 Newsletter 14 April 2008 commerce and the value of what we class as more valuable sort of thing, like, money-wise or even like person- wise as well: there’s quite a lot of question about that sort of, that sort of, scale of things. Here (‘what we class as more valuable sort of thing’) there may be repeated the claim that ready money trumps the promise of future wealth, an assertion Rhianna then reiterates: Antonio has no money; Shylock has thousands and thousands of ducats that he can hand out and not even notice, so therefore Shylock’s kind of the one who has the value at the minute really: you know, it’s all very well saying the ship’s going to come in: that’s like saying, ‘I’m going to win the lottery one day, yes I’m going to be rich’ – but at the minute you’re on two pounds fifty a day … Not quite the same thing essentially. The closest we came to getting any of the students to address the possible correlation between their social orientations and the arguments they made – or, at least, the terms in which they made them – came with Rhianna’s affirmation that underlying both her argument and her self-perception was a valorisation of what she characterised as the direct and unadorned: ‘as my friends all know as well, that’s what I’m like, I’m just a very, very blunt straightforward person’, she said. Rhianna’s account of the convergence of interpretation and self appeals then to personality, not to class or social positioning, or ideological affiliation. But her implicit impatience with the extravagant or over-interpretative, and her implicitly ethical valorisation of the ‘straightforward’, rehearses a contest over language and truth that has been played out before, in the text she has been studying, in the verbal jousting of Lancelot Gobbo and Lorenzo. Lorenzo’s similar ethically charged conflation of the honest and the straightforward is encapsulated in his frustrated instruction to the clown to ‘understand a plain man in his plain meaning: go to thy fellows; bid them cover the table, serve in the meat, and we will come in to dinner’ (Merchant 3.5.52–5). His deceptively simple appeal to the plain, the obvious, the direct, has recently been associated with a class interest counter to that embedded in Launcelot’s witty extravagance4 ; certainly, for Lorenzo, his own plainness operates as a salutary corrective to the suspicious rhetorical extravagance of the Clown. ‘Oh dear discretion, how his words are suited!’ Lorenzo remarks of Launcelot’s wit: The fool hath planted in his memory An army of good words, and I do know A many fools that stand in better place, Garnished like him, that for a tricksy word Defy the matter. (Merchant 3.5.60–65) Of Lisa, we were unable to enquire what she thought about the relation between what she argued and the more personal aspects of herself: she came in late, and missed the showing of the clips. But if her lexis differed to that of Rhianna, so too did her method: she paid more implicit attention than Rhianna to the way in which the ‘tricksy words’ of the text may be employed in it to ‘defy the matter’. More of what Lisa says in At the End of the Day – her references to the waves enthroned, to the silks, to rats sneaking in the dark and to the petty trafficking – weaves into her own discourse close paraphrases of, or direct quotations from, the play itself. She is also aware that this is her interpretative strategy of choice: while the others are explicit about their preferences for reading for the plot, or for characterisation, Lisa says that she looks first at ‘the actual words the text is using, the choice of diction’. Lisa is, in other words, a close reader, and close reading allows her here to articulate something about the text that Rhianna’s account cannot encompass: that there is a correlation in it between the political and the aesthetic – that the latter is not an innocent quality. ‘It’s more beautiful’, she finishes, and she is arguably right that the representation of Antonio’s merchanting at the opening of the play is not only more extravagant, but more beautiful, than the representation of Shylock’s usury. But this observation leads us to a more tendentious proposition, and to a paradox with which we will, for the time being, end. Close reading is not a strategy that would come naturally to someone wedded to the virtue of the speech of a plain man in his plain meaning; close reading assumes, on the contrary, that meaning is anything but plain, even when it pretends to be so. Close reading may embrace values diametrically opposed to those embodied in the phrase ‘at the end of the day’ (for example), which insists on the ultimate readability of action, presupposing a ‘last instance’, by reference to which things will become intelligible, justifiable and clear. We don’t want to align differences of lexis or method in any blunt, one-to- one relation to particular ideological interests – to insist, for example, that an appeal to ‘plainness’ must be connected to non-elite class positions, or only ever characteristic of discourses that seek to legitimate particular forms of market- orientated behaviour. But we do want to begin to raise the possibility that if respective attachments to ‘plain meanings’ and ‘armies of good words’ are, like the aesthetics of The Merchant of Venice itself, not innocent either, that may be something we should bear in mind when we teach the tools of our discipline to a body of students who originate from an ever wider social spectrum. And if here, we have illustrated the methodology we’ve developed, which extends the methods of close reading to the rather different ‘text’ of the seminar itself, in future writings one of the things which we may have to think about further, is that close reading might be as inherently political as any other kind of aesthetic methodology is – however much one would wish to think that it was not. Close reading is not a strategy that would come naturally to someone wedded to the virtue of the speech of a plain man in his plain meaning; close reading assumes, on the contrary, that meaning is anything but plain, even when it pretends to be so. 4 See Margaret Tudeau-Clayton, ‘Shakespeare’s Extravagancy’ Shakespeare (1: 1–2), 2005 June–Dec, 136–53. ‘That is what we do, isn’t it?’ The Production of University English
  • 11. Newsletter 14 April 2008 09 Newsletter 14 ‘The Teaching the New English series is a welcome and timely contribution to the changing canon, curriculum, and classroom practice of English in higher education. Imaginatively conceived and professionally edited, the series will be required reading for instructors in English studies worldwide.’ – Professor Elaine Showalter, Professor Emerita of English, Princeton University, USA, and Author of Teaching Literature NEW! This innovative new series is concerned with the teaching of the English degree in universities in the UK and elsewhere. The series addresses new and developing areas of the curriculum as well as more traditional areas that are reforming in new contexts. Although the series is grounded in intellectual and theoretical concepts of the curriculum, it is concerned with the practicalities of classroom teaching. The volumes will be invaluable for new and more experienced teachers alike. Published in association with the English SubjectCentre. Series Editor: C. B. Knights All titles in the Teaching the New English series are available at the special discounted price of £12.99 each + postage and packing (RRP £16.99). Just enter the code WTEACH08a into the promotional box on the checkout page when you order from www.palgrave.com
  • 12. 10 Newsletter 14 April 2008 The starting point for this project was simple and practical. Creative Writing is a relatively new subject. It has developed in different ways in different places. There’s no consensus about what it is, or what it’s for. However, it’s increasingly popular with students1 . It struck me that I had been teaching Creative Writing in universities for 12 years, had been running a large undergraduate Creative Writing department for three, but I had no clear idea of why students were choosing our courses, what they expected from them, how their experience matched (or failed to match) their expectations, nor, taking a broader view, how their attitude to the courses changed during their time at university. It’s true, for a previous English Subject Centre project2 , I had visited various institutions and, wherever possible, talked to students and recorded the conversations, and equally true that at Bath Spa we routinely carry out a questionnaire survey of new students. And of course all tutors administer module evaluation forms to students, and summarise (or are supposed to summarise) these responses in terms of changes in structure or content for individual units. However, none of these gave me quite what I wanted. Module evaluation forms are all very well, but can be treated as a tedious admin chore, and even at their best are course based, not student based, and perhaps, most significantly, take for granted the key factors of motivation and expectation in which I was particularly interested. The surveys of incoming students throw up some fascinating insights, but again run the risk of lack of motivation and involvement for participants (herded into computer rooms in order to enforce compliance). Oral discussions permit a more personal involvement, but also tend to accentuate the loud and diminish the withdrawn. Group dynamics may obscure the subtleties of individual response. So, I tried to develop something different, something that avoided: • a tickbox or questionnaire approach • local and limited responses to do with individual courses, modules or tutors • responses that were tied to purely academic concerns • an oral basis Steve May is Head of Department, Creative Studies, at Bath Spa University. Doing Creative Writing, his book for Creative Writing students, was published by Routledge in 2007 (see page 35 for David Bausor’s review). He is currently working on his 45th drama commission for BBC radio. Investigating Creative Writing: student perspectives An English Subject Centre funded mini-project Why are students flocking to Creative Writing courses and degrees? What’s it like to be on one? What do students expect to gain from them? Steve May investigates the student experience of Creative Writing to get answers. 1 See the English Subject Centre Survey of the English Curriculum and Teaching in UK Higher Education (2003), Halcrow Group Limited, with Jane Gawthrope and Philip Martin, available at www.english.heacademy.ac.uk/archive/publications/reports/ curr_teach_main.pdf (accessed 6 December 2007). In the Higher Education Statistics Agency statistics (www.hesa.ac.uk/) ‘Imaginative Writing’ first appears as a subject in its own right in 2002/2003 with 775 full-time undergraduate students. This rises to 2,250 in the most recent (2005/2006) figures (accessed 6 December 2007). 2 For a full range of student (mainly oral) quotes, see Steve May, “Teaching Creative Writing at Undergraduate Level: Why, how and does it work?” (Report on English Subject Centre sponsored research project, 2003, available at www.english.heacademy.ac.uk/archive/ projects/reports/under_creatwrit_bath, accessed 26 January 2006). Investigating Creative Writing: student perspectives©iStockphoto
  • 13. Newsletter 14 April 2008 11 I wanted to encourage: • a sense that I cared about what participants said • a sense that what they said could make a difference, if not to their course, to courses in future • an environment where they felt free to say (or not say) whatever they wanted • responses which involved them as people, including their aims and aspirations So, I transcribed some key quotes gathered in the aforementioned English Subject Centre project, and took them into a class of first-year Creative Writing students at Bath Spa. The quotes I used were mostly related to motivation for taking, and expectations of the course: I definitely want to be published, that’s why I’m here. I think all the lecturers maybe spuriously all think that everyone on this course wants to be a writer. I don’t want to be a writer, I don’t want to learn anything, I just want a 2:1. I was desperately looking through clearing, cos originally I chose English and History, but I didn’t get the grades. I wanted to do something as well as Creative Writing, because people don’t take it seriously. My flatmates, writing? They go, “that’s not a real degree”. I didn’t know what to expect and I was very naïve to everything, like seminars, was someone going to come and talk at us? I had no idea what to expect at all. I then led a discussion of the quotes – neither in order, nor exhaustively – trying to follow the interest of the group as we moved from topic to topic. Soon the discussion was progressing energetically – perhaps too energetically. When I invited the students to write down anything they wanted, to do with their experience of Creative Writing, the results were a little cursory and mechanical. I realised that the discussion had been too full: the students had said all they wanted to say orally, and repeating it on paper was tiresome. So, I did the experiment again, and limited the discussion, rousing interest but moving on quickly before people had a chance to say all or most of what they wanted to say. The results seemed much more interesting. The students were eager and wrote quickly – and (as we will see) were surprisingly articulate. I now had a crude methodology, which I applied across the years at Bath Spa, taking the first-year responses in to second-year students, and second-year responses in to third years. The exercise took about 20 minutes, split into 10 minutes introduction and discussion of “seed” quotes, and then 10 minutes of student writing. I found the resulting responses fascinating and informative. Certain key themes recurred, especially to do with confidence (or lack of it), expectations and lack of clarity about the purpose of workshop exercises. It occurred to me that (given the wide variety of auspices of Creative Writing in higher education), it might be even more interesting and informative to repeat the process in a cross section of institutions, to see whether Bath Spa students were representative, or if there were variations depending on institution and kind of course. Coincidentally, at about that time applications were invited for a new series of English Subject Centre mini-projects. I applied and, after a more or less painless process of discussion, peer review and revision, got funding of £5,000, mainly to cover teaching relief, travel and accommodation. The next question was, why on earth would any sane course director let an outsider (and in many ways a rival at that) loose on their students? Surely not an attractive prospect, to have some Justice Overdo prying about looking for enormities? Perhaps some felt like this, but I was pleasantly surprised by how positive most people were whom I approached. And I was offering something they all valued: a snapshot of their own students’ attitudes, presented in a way they hadn’t been presented before. The project was (rather grandly) titled “English and Creative Writing: Coherence, progression and fitness for purpose - student perspectives”. I have to confess that the “English” bit was inserted to make the proposal more appealing to the English Subject Centre. To have limited the survey only to institutions (and students) doing both subjects would have been both impossible and undesirable. Part of the richness of the gathered responses indeed lies in the wide variety of subjects the students are doing alongside Creative Writing. I was offering something they all valued: a snapshot of their own students’ attitudes, presented in a way they hadn’t been presented before. Investigating Creative Writing: student perspectives ©RoyalHolloway,UniversityofLondon
  • 14. 12 Newsletter 14 April 2008 The institutions that were kind enough to host these visits were varied, though perhaps not as varied as I would have liked: several institutions unfortunately had to drop out during the course of the project. Participating institutions were Lancaster, Chichester, Winchester, Brunel, Northumbria, Columbia College Chicago and, of course, Bath Spa. My thanks to all the course leaders, tutors, administrators and especially students who gave their time and energy in helping me to carry out the project. Geographically the split was: London 1 South-east England 1 South-west England 2 North-west England 1 North-east England 1 USA 1 The location of Creative Writing within the institutions ranged from self-standing (without film and poetry), through inextricably conjoined with English, to within English and within Drama. My first visit took place in October 2006 and my last in May 2007. I gathered contributions from 237 students, totalling over 23,000 words. Generally, when I showed student responses from one institution to staff at another, they pronounced them interesting, but would add something to the effect that “but of course our students are different”. However, on each occasion, it turned out that their students were not materially different, and echoed the concerns and attitudes of their peers in other institutions. Yes, there were some differences: perhaps the Northumbria drama/script students (in fact script students everywhere) were more focused and practical, and show a more confident understanding of the purpose of their writing; and the Chicago students showed greater awareness of what to expect, perhaps because of the unique Columbia College Story Workshop method. But these are differences of emphasis. It is fair to say that, for these seven institutions at least, similarities of response far outweighed differences. This survey reveals a broad spectrum of motivation, ranging from the dedicated and committed would-be writer (with varying levels of experience and ability), through people with interest in or talent for writing, including also those who want to teach and those who want to expand themselves as people, people who want to do English in a different way, and (let’s be honest) a proportion of free-loaders. Perhaps I’m being harsh here: those respondents who are honest enough to confess that they chose Creative Writing just because it sounded like an interesting subject (or in one case “for a bet and to reduce my workload”) are not hugely different from many other students choosing many other subjects – except in one respect. Few of our students will have had any experience of doing Creative Writing in any kind of formalised way before starting the course. Perhaps, for this reason if for no other, it behoves us as teachers to make as clear as possible at the outset to our students how our courses work, what they are expected to do while on the course, and what they’re supposed to be able to do after successfully completing it. What students say First, I must note the weight of positive comments. Students praise their courses for a variety of reasons: as interesting, exciting, fun, as giving a chance to use their imagination; because of tutors who are experienced, professional and funny; because of the chance to mix with like- minded peers; as developmental in terms of writing and character: in short, as one first-year student sums it up: This class has sparked something inside of me, an inspiration, a motivation I have been unable to find anywhere else. Another student, coming to the end of their course, perhaps sums up the experience for many: Coming towards the end of the Creative Writing degree, I feel that the course has really worked for me. I have been encouraged to experiment, while always being given support in my preferred genre. The first workshop session was a horrible embarrassment, but as everyone is thrown into it together, a group dynamic forms. In the best Creative Writing groups you feel a real desire to help everyone achieve their own goals, as well as follow your own. I don’t see myself as a professional writer yet, more of a dabbler. However, writing is something that I will always do and who knows, when I’m an old lady in purple, maybe I’ll read the grandkids my published novels. (Year 3 student) This (fairly representative) student has been empowered, enabled to work collaboratively, will continue to write without the overt aim to publish, but harbours semi-secret aspirations in that I was terrified about the creative writing module – I had to do it as part of English studies. Investigating Creative Writing: student perspectives©RoyalHolloway,UniversityofLondon
  • 15. Newsletter 14 April 2008 13 3 Steve May, Doing Creative Writing (Routledge, 2007) p.117. direction. Others have been converted from “dabblers” to something more driven and serious: I also now have found the courage to think about being a writer and not just an enthusiastic amateur or – the most dreaded – ‘a simple jotter’. (Year 2 student) However, other students have moved in the opposite direction: I set out with the course thinking that I’d like to become a professional writer. The course has taught me that I don’t have it in me. (Year 3 student) I would contend that this is by no means a sign of failure, either for the student or the course they have taken. As I’ve put it elsewhere3 : There are too many people who harbour an untried (and probably unrealistic) longing to write. If you have tried, and can reflect on your experience, and analyse why you don’t want to pursue writing further, you will have learned a great deal, both about writing and about yourself. Further, if your course has been a good course, and you’ve made best use of it, you should have a fairly clear idea of how ‘creative industries’ work, and how work gets sold. You should also, more generally, have learned how to manage a project from initial idea through to completion, and to work with other people in a flexible, supportive and intelligent way. These aren’t negligible accomplishments. They should place you well whatever direction you decide to take. Apart from those who have decided that writing is not for them, there are also recurring doubts, reservations and anxieties, expressed by students across all institutions. The “horrible embarrassment” of the student quoted above, and fear in anticipation of starting the course, are by no means uncommon: I was very scared coming to my first seminar, because I wasn’t sure what to expect. I had trouble finding the room and getting there on time combined with the uncertainty made me very nervous when I sat down. (Year 1 student) I was terrified about the Creative Writing module – I had to do it as part of English studies. My interest was much more about studying ‘good published literature’ than attempting anything of my own. However, so far it has been fine, and I am actually enjoying the exercises. (Year 1 student) The following student’s expectations in terms of the peer group seem to have been confirmed: Although my initial fears were of a class full of pretentious, psychologically damaged rich kids, and generally annoying wankers, I have learnt to put up with them. (Year 1 student) The same student touches on another common theme – a lack of clarity about the purpose and benefit of in-class exercises (however much fun they might be): Although I enjoy writing in my own time and having the chance to read other people’s work, I’m glad Creative Writing is only one module on my English course. Even the student quoted above who, because of the course, has found courage to think of themself as a writer prefaces that affirmation as follows: Although the exercises seem like a waste [my emphasis], they help me to open myself up to other writers and explore other points of view. With the mastering of such exercises comes a certain sense of confidence – I no longer fear the dreaded workshops and the scrutinous gaze of other writers. I look forward to having my work torn apart as it allows me to build upon it. I also now have found the courage to think about being a writer and not just an enthusiastic amateur or – the most dreaded – ‘a simple jotter’. (Year 2 student) It is extremely common for students not to realise what they’re learning: I don’t really think the exercises enhance my writing but I assume some people find it a benefit to them. (Year 2 student) Generally I enjoy the course, but I feel that sometimes the exercises that we are asked to do are not beneficial to me as I feel I write better and have more ideas when I am alone and in a creative mood. (Year 1 student) Generally, as students progress through the course, they do come to understand better the purpose of what they’re asked to do in class: At first I was embarrassed with some of the Creative Writing class exercises – I found them hokey and ‘touchy- feely’. As I’ve gotten used to them, I now feel much more comfortable and participate enthusiastically. (Level 2 student) While some of the above students find they work better when alone, outside of class, perhaps equally represented are students complaining about the difficulty of motivating themselves without the stimulation of the workshop environment: I have one lesson on a Friday and the rest of the time I’m expected to be doing work in my own time. I find it hard to get motivated when sitting at home and prefer to be in uni more often with specific lessons to sit and write. (Year 2 student) There are clashes also between the structure of courses, and some students’ sense of individual freedom of expression: I enjoy my personal Creative Writing process, but resent the formalised structure. Ultimately, this course is a means to an end, although I am keen I have been encouraged to experiment, while always being given support in my preferred genre. In the best Creative Writing groups you feel a real desire to help everyone achieve their own goals, as well as follow your own. Investigating Creative Writing: student perspectives
  • 16. 14 Newsletter 14 April 2008 for it to become more than just that, less laboured. Undoubtedly I will gain from it, however quite what that will be I’m unsure. Reading this back, perhaps I should be paying more attention. (Year 2 student) It is not uncommon, in a minority of students, to see a dislocation between writing-for-the-course and “real” personal writing: Before uni, I wrote a lot on my own. The workload quickly took that away from me, and now, over two years later, I’ve lost a lot of confidence in my prose work, and a lot of, shall I say, raw, unmanaged talent. (Year 3 student) “Confidence” crops up again and again – often as something that Creative Writing courses give to students, but equally as something that students lack, both in themselves and in Creative Writing as a degree course: I would have to agree that people seem to almost look down on Creative Writing – I know people who call it the ‘Mickey Mouse’ part of my degree. (Year 2 student) I think the moment I had to produce a piece of creative work for a workshop I knew I wasn’t a writer, especially if my work was the last to be looked at, because I just felt out of my league. I feel that I write just enough to pass the course and for that reason alone. (Year 3 student) It is remarkable how many students within any given group think of themselves as “the worst writer” – perhaps a quarter or a third. And it would surely be absurd to expect students not to experience some sense of competition in the workshop: I’m not keen on reading out my work … actually I despise reading out my work in fear of being criticised as, generally, I feel that it’s not as good as others in the class. (Year 2 student) There’s always someone in the class who I hate and whose writing I hate, there’s also always a rival who I respect and fight with to find out who’s best and then there’s a bunch of people I don’t really give a shit about. (Year 3 student) I used to write all the time before I came to university, and never tried very hard because it was just for fun. Here, I have to try really hard every week, and it takes up so much of my time. But it’s all in a quest to not being the worst writer. (Year 3 student) It does seem somewhat strange that we, as writers or experts of literature, whose business involves the intricacies and complexities of human relationships, perhaps subscribe (on the surface at least) to a rather simple model of workshop interaction, based on equality, giving of constructive feedback, taking of same in good measure and co-operation towards mutual improvement. Not all students see things quite that way, nor have unqualified faith in their tutorial input: I am less confident with my writing now, as tutor feedback has proved detrimental to my progression. I find the writing modules slow and frustrating. I thought I would be a good writer one day, now I just think I will finish my degree bitter and slightly twisted. Having one tutor praise your work and then another almost failing you when marking it, suggests to me that it isn’t what your write but who you are writing for. I will continue to write but for me only, and I feel a completely new career path will have to be chosen. I haven’t given up hope though. (Year 3 student) My preliminary conclusions and suggestions are as follows: • to make sure that from their first workshop or lecture (before if possible) our students are aware of the way our courses work, what they will be asked to do and why. (I will also try to make sure our staff are aware of these things) • to make students aware of the purpose of individual exercises and workshop activities, both in terms of their writing, and of “transferability”, both to other writing genres and activities outside of writing • to make students aware of the changing demands of our courses as they move through the levels, and the progression from directed to self-directed work, and from private experiment to public display • to be aware of the pervasive lack of confidence among a sizeable minority of students in almost every workshop group, and work to build confidence in each individual • to be aware of the “competitive” element that students’ private self- evaluation entails • to be aware of (and respect) the range of motivation underlying students’ decisions to do Creative Writing Postscript Finally, I need to stress something: these students’ contributions, written in haste, spontaneously, without warning, planning, or the opportunity to edit, are overwhelmingly articulate, clear and persuasive. I’ll leave the last word to this third-year student, whose eloquence and ability to draw the reader into their story for me belie the surface negativity: This exercise sums up my feelings about the course. I sit and think for a while about what I should write, and when I put pen to paper it confirms to me that I am no writer. If the truth be known, I started the course as a bet and to reduce my workload. Our students do learn from our courses: for me the next step is to make sure we make them aware of what they’re learning, and what use it will be to them, and alongside this to work towards a consensus concerning the nature of the subject of Creative Writing in higher education, including (and especially) a definition of research. these students’ contributions, written in haste, spontaneously, without warning, planning, or the opportunity to edit, are overwhelmingly articulate, clear and persuasive. Investigating Creative Writing: student perspectives
  • 17. Newsletter 14 April 2008 15 At last … a resource for teaching Creative Writing in higher education created by creative writers. This developing online resource will include: peer-reviewed scholarly articles, book reviews, practitioner interviews, a discussion forum and helpful links to other sites, online articles and other resources to help colleagues to reflect on their own teaching practice. The resource aims to be particularly relevant to lecturers new to the field and students taking modules on Teaching Creative Writing. It will also be invaluable to those who teach modules related to the pedagogy of writing. We need your help. Let’s share our views and our knowledge on how, why and what we teach, when we teach Creative Writing … In the first instance, we invite scholarly articles which consider the following topics. • Are there theories of Creative Writing? If so, what are they? • What constitutes knowledge and research in Creative Writing? • Why do we teach the way we do? • What skills do we teach our students? • Creative Writing & Pedagogic Research: how do they fit together? Join the debate! First deadline: 31 August 2008, with rolling deadlines thereafter. Send articles and all enquiries by e-mail to Dr Nigel McLoughlin nmcloughlin@glos.ac.uk Principal Lecturer in Creative Writing, University of Gloucestershire English Subject Centre Project Holder Vice-Chair, National Association of Writers in Education Committee Member, NAWE Creative Writing in Higher Education Network For further info www.english.heacademy.ac.uk/explore/resources/creative/index.php Creative Writing: Teaching, Theory & Practice Newsletter 14
  • 18. 16 Newsletter 14 April 2008 Books Were My Liberation: an interview with Alan Rice Over the winter, Nicole King met with Alan Rice, a scholar of the Black Atlantic who teaches English and American Studies. He spoke of the rewards of interdisciplinary teaching and of taking his subject expertise, as well as his students, outside the classroom. ‘To shoot hard labour’ is an Antiguan colloquialism that means to work hard, very hard. It came to mind when I met up with Alan Rice last December, in Lancaster. Rice is the sort of lecturer we all wish we had or perhaps strive to be: he is immediately warm, stridently positive about his subject(s) and (a very few minutes will evidence) an intensely serious scholar – the type around whom you immediately, willingly, raise your game. Instead of just the interview, he invited me up to Lancaster to spend the day, have lunch, and do a specialised tour of Lancaster; indeed he does not do half measures. He also, by stealth and by proclamation, reminds one of the privileges and pleasures of being a university lecturer. Rice is Reader in American Cultural Studies and English at the University of Central Lancaster, where he has worked since 1995. He did his undergraduate work at the University of Edinburgh, his MA at Bowling Green State University and earned his PhD at Keele University in 1997. He is the author of Radical Narratives of the Black Atlantic (Continuum, 2003) and co-editor (with Martin Crawford) of Liberating Sojourn: Frederick Douglass and Transatlantic Reform (University of Georgia Press, 1999). As these titles suggest, Rice contributes to many subject areas, but, more than anything, he sees himself as an American Studies scholar and teacher. Always a ‘really interdisciplinary animal’ his undergraduate studies at the University of Edinburgh helped him to understand his passion for American Studies per se: ‘The most interesting people teaching at Edinburgh,’ Rice told me, ‘were either doing drama or American Literature or History.’ From the beginning of our interview to the end, Rice gave a collective narrative: continuously citing the work and mentorship of others in telling the story of his own development. At Edinburgh, ‘there were these giants of American history – Owen Dudley Edwards, Rhodri Jeffrey-Jones and Sam Shepperson,’ whilst in literature, ‘Colin Nicholson and Randall Stevenson managed to convince me that English wasn’t all bad.’ These men and women, such as Faith Pullin, inspired Rice, who decided then and there that he wanted to be a university teacher. With only a ‘very moderate 2:1’, however, it was an arduous process to get funded for a PhD, and eventually required a detour to the US. In what he described as his ‘hiatus period’, Rice doggedly, but unsuccessfully, pursued postgraduate bursaries. To get by he worked a variety of jobs, usually more than one at time: ‘I worked as a home help, worked cleaning cafes and worked in the afternoons at the National Library of Scotland.’ The idea was, he explained, ‘to keep my eye in research, mainly about jazz music and politics … I eventually got published in the Edinburgh Review but still couldn’t ever get funding to do a PhD’ It was at this early moment in the interview that I thought of that Antiguan phrase. For in addition to working for wages, and doing research on the side, Alan also became involved in local and community politics. Friends thought he was punishing himself, and after two years of unsuccessful funding applications they tried to convince him to go for something else. ‘I was like Sisyphus; I was just going to carry on pushing that rock up that mountain till I got there.’ On the recommendation of Mary Ellison, the professor he hoped to work with at Keele, he was offered a job as a graduate teaching assistant at Bowling Green State University. Although it was a long way to go, Rice nevertheless reasoned that it was perhaps the only way to get started towards the PhD, and he was proven right: he did a two-year MA in American Cultural Studies in just one year while teaching six hours of English Composition ‘to farmers’ sons and daughters – totally unreconstructed kind of Midwesterners – it was very, very busy, it was very strange, but I loved it.’ Again, the phrase ‘to shoot hard labour’ came to my mind. Armed with excellent grades for his MA, he applied for the Keele scholarship a third time, got it and went on to write a dissertation on the jazz aesthetic in Toni Morrison’s novels, while teaching American Studies to undergraduates. ‘It was a wonderful American Studies department with brilliant, collegial teachers like Richard Godden, Mary Ellison and, the late – and much lamented – Charles Swan, and very interdisciplinary – very much jazz and music and literature and history, all kind of feeding off of one another.’ Books Were My Liberation: an interview with Alan Rice
  • 19. Newsletter 14 April 2008 17 Given Rice’s postgraduate experiences, it is not surprising that teaching and research have remained symbiotic elements over the course of his career. I was curious however, about what drove him to keep going for the Keele scholarship, and how did he know, as an undergraduate in Edinburgh, that he wanted to be a university lecturer? For Rice, to reflect on his role as a teacher included reflecting on his upbringing, his undergraduate years and the evolution of his research interests in black Atlantic and radical narratives. In the following extracts, from our 90 minute formal interview, I received some fascinating answers. Becoming a teacher ‘I think I just thought that it is a really important role and it’s something whereby you can make information which is really important, accessible to a group of people who can hopefully go on and do something important with that information. I suppose a lot of it comes from being someone for whom books were my liberation. I was born and brought up on a council estate in Surrey. It’s great being born and brought up on a council estate in Manchester – there’s a working-class culture up there! We don’t have a working class culture [in Surrey], well there is one, but in fact it was at the dog ends of Thatcherism … There was this horrible consumerism all around you and nothing to hold up against it, you know, just in terms of getting a handle on that world around you. You had working class people just gagging to buy their council houses! For me, what had saved me had been books. I really wanted to give that to other people, I really wanted to be involved in the world of ideas. But also I love performing … I really like the banter of being in a class, taking them on and making them think beyond the box, that’s why I do it.’ The pull of black American culture Nearly all of Rice’s publications have either black Atlantic or black American culture at their centre. Where did his interest begin and how did it develop? ‘I think the most important moment for me was probably getting into jazz. My friend Nigel used to bunk off school and sit in his room and play jazz music. He went to a different school than me with different holidays, so I could pretend that I was bunking off school with him but I wasn’t – because I would never do that. I used to sit in his room listening to jazz music from all ages and all periods. I didn’t get into it straight away at all but once I got into it, I really loved it. When I went away to university at Edinburgh, I used to spend most of my time in record shops, just buying more and more jazz. And then, when I went on to do American literature and American history, I gravitated towards black American literature and black American history spaces ... When I think about it, the reason I did it was because I was wanting, I think, to study a different culture, (and one that spoke English, because my languages were never going to be good enough) and also I wanted to study radical culture. I did do lots of work on the Levellers and Diggers and all that good stuff, doing history, and I was interested in it, but it was almost, it was always too close. I am very interested in working-class histories, but I’m really glad I’m interested in them now, having come back to them from African American histories, and through that black Atlantic prism.’ In the classroom When asked what words he would use to describe himself in the classroom the quick fire answer was, ‘chalk and talk!’ and I wasn’t surprised to learn that Rice is quite mobile and energetic, but while his lectures are now ‘very improvised’ this wasn’t always the case: ‘When I first went to Preston I actually wrote out all of my lectures, longhand, that was partly because I didn’t have a year beforehand to kind of sort things out, I was just thrown in the deep end, and I really needed [the script]. But now, especially in the Black Atlantic class, there won’t be a note in sight usually … I tend to do mini-lectures now; 20-minute lectures and then encourage questioning and debate … I am very traditional – I’ve only just started to use PowerPoint – I’ve always used overheads and slides. And I’m not really that keen on it, but increasingly you’re forced into it by the technological world around you. I tend not to put text on [PowerPoint], it’s just a way of showing illustrations with the odd quote. If you’re doing PowerPoint in the way everybody what had saved me had been books. I really wanted to give that to other people, I really wanted to be involved in the world of ideas. Books Were My Liberation: an interview with Alan Rice©iStockphoto
  • 20. 18 Newsletter 14 April 2008 else does it, which is, here are the three main points, here are the other three main points – that’s really constrictive, because actually there never are three main points, and that’s my problem with it really – it makes (the lecture) almost a consumerist thing.’ The interdisciplinary way It was clear to me that Rice’s commitment to interdisciplinarity stretched across the various facets of his professional identity. So I asked him to talk about the practicalities and consequences of doing interdisciplinary work and training undergraduates in English and American Studies. His answer, a cross between a lecture and a sermon, was intense and absorbing. I gained a visceral sense of what a student in one of Rice’s no-lecture- classes might experience. ‘When I was an undergraduate in English literature and history, I’d get the essays back from the English literature people saying “there’s not nearly enough practical criticism here – context is great but you’re over-selling your context.” And when I’d get my essays back from historians it would be ‘you’re taking far too long over this source, this document, there’s context there but there’s not enough context.’ And I was determined that when I was an academic that I would never say, never say, those things to students. What they should have been saying to me was something along the lines of “actually, this is the way criticism should be, but if you want to do something more to it you could bring this in or that in.” So what my practice is about, for instance, showing people a paragraph out of Beloved and then doing almost a mind map but not literally, I don’t do it of that paragraph. So, for instance, you’ve got that paragraph in Beloved which is about cannibalism. You know the one where Stamp Paid is looking at the window and he says “it’s not what racism has done to black people, it’s what racism has done to white people.” Where they’re eating it up, they’re eating themselves up – it’s self cannibalism and its cannibalism and you know it’s a paragraph! And what I suppose I do is to say, in this paragraph we could look at Freud here, we could look at ideas to do with psychology and the whole psychology around cannibalism, but you could also look at the history of the cannibal in postcolonial discourse and the way in which this comes into it. Then there’s the whole thing about American history, and the way in which the black body which has been eaten in order for the white culture to live and sustain itself, and then you would almost say, well let’s trace that in this novel. At one point in Beloved there’s the line that says the Ku Klux Klan are actually like cannibals – that image goes through the text and each time it has a different kind of contextualisation which leads you to somewhere else. So you can’t hold this text in to a practical criticism – you don’t want to hold it in to a practical criticism, you don’t even want to hold it in to a contextualisation around history, you want to have contextualisation around so many different things. Then you might want to say, well actually, let’s have a look at some of these pictures of lynchings, to talk about the way in which people took away trophies from those lynchings, cut-up the bodies. And that’s what Morrison’s talking about again and again. She’s not just talking about slavery; she’s talking about post-slavery as well. She’s not just talking about Reconstruction, she’s not talking about the 1950s, even. What she’s talking about is the way in which the history of racism has impacted us all. So I suppose what my teaching practice is about is, as an English teacher, and I do teach English students as well as American Studies students, I don’t change one iota when I teach English students. Not one iota do I go back to those days when I was – at times – poorly taught at Edinburgh, being forced into a very narrow view of textual criticism as the be all and end all.’ Escaping the ivory tower Although it is difficult to fathom where he finds the time, a significant aspect of Rice’s life as an academic is the work he currently does outside of the classroom and the university. A key point however, and a lesson to beginning lecturers especially, is that each of Rice’s activities link up – they feed in and feed back into his courses and books, while what he teaches and writes gives him credibility as well as expertise in new environments beyond the walls of HEIs. His passion for this aspect of his working life also has deep roots dating back to those days in Edinburgh. ‘Even before I got into academia, I found people who were working on ideas in a broad sense. We had a reading group, mainly people who were on welfare, on the dole in Scotland, and we were all reading Derrida (this is the mid 1980s). When I was an undergraduate ... I’d get the essays back from the English literature people saying ‘there’s not nearly enough practical criticism here’ Books Were My Liberation: an interview with Alan Rice
  • 21. Newsletter 14 April 2008 19 We were reading Derrida, and about half of us were then going out on the miners’ picket line the next morning. The other half were saying ‘No!’, and arguing about Derridean ideas around it! But you know some of us were doing both and then we got very involved in the anti- poll tax movement. We were involved in community action but were also spending all our spare moments in the National Library reading things like Bataille … One of the guys, a guy called Jack Fuller, actually managed to get some money from the Adult Education to run a Derrida class, and we all hauled into this Derrida class ... that class sort of gave me a community even at that moment when there was no community for me, in terms of there was no department or anything like that. That gave me a real grounding in the fact that ideas don’t just happen in academia, they happen all over the place, and that seemed to me to be a really important lesson from that time in Edinburgh.’ Rice was an early English Subject Centre project holder, on the Americanisation and the Teaching of American Studies (AMATAS) project, and, more recently, he worked with Lancaster city partners on the Slave Trade Arts Memorial (STAMP) project. He has also curated ‘Trade and Empire: Remembering Slavery’ at the University of Manchester’s Whitworth Gallery (June 2007–April 2008). So I inquired about the relationship between his different working environments – his knack for juggling them – and I solicited his opinion on public intellectuals. Let’s talk about the STAMP project, because I think that’s a really interesting model. ‘One day in 2002 there was a training day for teachers to teach slavery. And Lancaster, to give it credit, was doing some of this work because it is a slave port and they were grasping towards getting it into the curriculum. There were about 10 teachers there and we did a day with them. I devised this slavery tableau – a tableau of the Atlantic Triangle, and it worked quite well. I developed it for work with schoolchildren as a way of explaining the Middle Passage, the whole triangle in fact, with 18 different character cards and they move round. The characters are based on characters in my book, Radical Narratives … It’s a dynamic way of teaching, and I use it in my Black Atlantic courses with my own undergraduates, just as a means of a different way of showing people how things work. At the end of the workshop we all sat down – people from the council diversity group, the museum, and the local non-governmental organizations like Political Link … We said, there’s a bit of a gap really, there’s the display in the museum which we know is a bit tired, but there’s nothing much else in Lancaster, and the only place people do go to think about slavery is Sambo’s grave, which is tidal – you can’t get there sometimes and you can get cut off there, you know?! So we all sat there and said it would be great to have a memorial wouldn’t it? We said, well maybe we can do this. A group to set up a slave memorial got together … and suddenly we were on the game and having public meetings and then we got some funding which just came out of virtually nowhere! And not just for the memorial but for a whole educational thing around the memorial, so we went into dozens of schools and us organisers spoke to nearly a thousand school children over the life of the project. We then commissioned an artist – the council gave us lots of support – and we now have the first ever memorial to the victims of the slave trade on a quay-side site in Britain. It’s a wonderful memorial but it’s also there permanently, so there’s always a place people can go to find out about slavery. I’ve got somewhere to take my students now, every single field trip. There’s a memorial right in the town next to me, to take my students to, to show them so they can discuss the issues around that memorial. What they have tended to do is stand by the memorial and start interviewing members of the public about what they think about it and getting different views about it and then writing them up and talking about these kinds of things. So it becomes a whole new method of how to work because of that memorial being there. I love that aspect of it. [The curatorial work] is very important to me as well, it means that I’ve been able to translate a lot of my academic work from Radical Narratives and since into an exhibition, which means being able to Books Were My Liberation: an interview with Alan Rice©iStockphoto It gave me a real grounding in the fact that ideas don’t just happen in academia, they happen all over the place, and that seemed to me to be a really important lesson from that time in Edinburgh.
  • 22. 20 Newsletter 14 April 2008 bring a whole new community into that work. So it’s teaching in a different kind of way. The university gave me full support to do this, even though it wasn’t in Preston, which I thought was quite good, because they/we were saying this is about community in the larger sense. But also it fed into my teaching as I started doing weeks, then developed a whole module, called ‘Monuments and Memorials of the Black Atlantic’, for our MA course. I think it is a great shame there are not more public intellectuals among academics … It’s a disgrace that the RAE culture means we are not being public intellectuals, both in the sense of having the time to be involved in community actions which feed into your academic work and having the time and energy to do curatorial work … Far too many academics are content to talk only to one another, and I am not content to do that.’ Endings Rice and I had started our day together, disregarding wind and rain, with a tour of places of interest and significance regarding Lancaster and the Atlantic slave trade. I was shown a private residence which is still home to the descendants of a major slave trader, the magisterial Lancaster Priory and parish church where, between the pews and stained glass windows, prominent city fathers have towering plaques detailing their good works, while history records their extensive dealings in human flesh and the profits they reaped from it. Most movingly perhaps, was when I saw the memorial to victims of the slave trade – the only one in Great Britain at present – the physical manifestation of the STAMP project. We ended the day in Rice’s home having tea with his partner, perusing his library and welcoming his young daughters as they arrived home from school. I have written elsewhere that we don’t often have the opportunity to visit each other’s classrooms, but my day with Alan Rice gave me that and more – I glimpsed a bit of the complex process of how we juggle our identities as teachers, researchers, members of families and tribes. It was quite a day. My last question to Rice was what he’d be doing if he weren’t an academic (and a curator and a community activist). He replied ‘I wouldn’t want to do anything else. It’s about the teaching and it’s about the research and it’s about the project thing. No, I don’t think I could do anything else, it’s in my DNA.’ Save the Date: The sixth Annual English Subject Centre New Lecturers Conference 21–23 November 2008 Registration will open soon on our website www.english.heacademy.ac.uk Books Were My Liberation: an interview with Alan Rice
  • 23. Newsletter 14 April 2008 21 This English Subject Centre round table in September 2007 – instigated by Mark Rawlinson of the University of Leicester – was a response to the alarm expressed by many colleagues in the higher education community over the perception that the close reading skills of undergraduates are in decline. Alan Brown and Adam Piette provided short reflective talks, and the day, which ended with a session in which three small groups each designed a ‘close reading’ module, included an intensive period of group work on specific poems (Kipling’s ‘The Dykes’ and Simon Armitage’s ‘Not the Furniture Game’). The opportunity to spend time with colleagues practising the skills which were under discussion was a particularly warmly welcomed aspect of a rich and productive event. This part of the day was an opportunity not just to do some close reading but also to reflect upon what that process involved – what presuppositions and knowledge (many of them not necessarily shared with our students) we’d brought to the task. It was also a salutary way of experiencing at first hand the anxieties and excitement of a seminar/tutorial from a student’s point of view. An underlying principle concerned the indivisibility of subject knowledge and pedagogic practice: that in sharing with students our own working practices and intellectual strategies we take part in the perpetual actualisation of the subject1 . Indeed, ‘close reading’ has been predicated on a long-standing – though now perhaps residual – insistence within English literary studies that there is no gulf fixed between the specialist knowledge of academics and what students can work out from a text, given confidence, argumentative stamina and a modicum of knowledge. And yet, as Alan Brown forcibly reminded us, there has, all the time, (and not least since practical criticism gave way to critical practice in the 1980s) been a paradox submerged beneath the apparent democracy of the text-focused classroom: that ‘English’ did in fact have designs on the formation of the subjectivity of its students, and that its teachers and examiners did possess a hidden knowledge or ‘true judgment’ to which students could only aspire to conform2 . Many forms of close reading therefore lead to students attempting to guess what is in the tutor’s mind, or, in some cases, adopting a stance designed to demonstrate their superiority to fellow students. The situation at A Level – and a lot of the time in universities – might be described as a kind of ‘cultural obedience’: inviting the production, in response to the actual or implied question ‘what did you think of this, then?’ of formulaic appreciations of texts which students had no intention of reading in their own time. Participants looked back frequently to the origins of close reading in the work of I A Richards and the new critics, highlighting the embeddedness of the original practice of close reading in teaching. Alan Brown stressed the fact that Richards was interested less in the establishment of criteria for ‘good’ interpretation than in the close reading of poetry as a mechanism for the ordering of the mind. Adam Piette looked at the legacy of the American New Critics, whose work implied a hierarchy of readers ranging from less to more skilled, with themselves – an elite of poet-critics – at the top. Whether or not close reading should involve judgments of literary quality was touched upon briefly. One participant described an exercise in which he and his students analysed and compared ‘good’ and ‘bad’ poems – and uncovered a striking unanimity about literary value. Other participants tended to want to distance the critical act from value judgments, in a number of different ways – indeed, it was argued that the encounter with a text in a seminar should engage with the text beyond the issue of liking or disliking. Another colleague distinguished between different types of value judgment, saying that while she found asking students ‘Do you like it?’ in a seminar was Up Close: a round table on close reading Is close reading a dying art? In this extended event report, Ben Knights and Jonathan Gibson highlight current thinking about one of the fundamental processes of teaching and learning in our subject areas. Ben Knights is the Director of the English Subject Centre. His most recent book is Masculinities in Text and Teaching (Palgrave 2007). Jonathan Gibson is an Academic Co-ordinator at the English Subject Centre and also writes and researches in the areas of Early Modern and Renaissance Studies. 1 See, for example, Susan Bruce, Ken Jones and Monica McLean, ‘Some Notes on a Project: Democracy and Authority in the Production of a Discipline’, Pedagogy 7.3 (2007) 481–500. 2 Cf. Alan Brown, ‘On the Subject of Practical Criticism’, Cambridge Quarterly 28 (1999), 293–00327; Robert Scholes, The Crafty Reader (Yale UP, 2001). Up Close: a round table on close reading
  • 24. 22 Newsletter 14 April 2008 counter-productive, asking ‘Is it good?’ could be a useful starting point. She pointed out that students’ enthusiasm for a text could wax and wane in the course of a seminar. It was also quite possible for students to simultaneously dislike a text and enjoy analysing it – a practice, it was suggested, that was valuable in teaching them about the differences between reading for pleasure and reading as a literary critic. Models for this approach could be found in the analytical (rather than ‘appreciative’) approach to texts currently taught at English Language A Level. The importance of picking up and extending immediate student responses to text was highlighted by several participants: ‘not liking’ something in a text was often student shorthand for not understanding something. Another participant described a dramatic contrast between two halves of the same module: the first half was taught in a very ‘top- down’, theory-heavy manner, with the result that some students were completely alienated; in the second half of the course, a second lecturer’s student-led approach – built on brainstorming sessions with the students – was much more successful in building student commitment. A number of suggestions emerged from the module design exercise at the end of the day. First of all, that we should articulate (to ourselves and to our students) the skills and conceptual repertoires on which we draw. If we are aspiring to build ‘disciplinary consciousness’ we should not ‘smuggle in’ close reading, but foreground it, and offer students ‘kit bags’ for thinking about figurative language, device and linguistic choice. Stylistics and systematic language study are among the sources of such equipment, and we need to bear in mind that in many universities we have students who will have taken A Level English Language. While we can and should ask initial open questions of the ‘what did you notice?’/‘what do you think?’ variety, we have to do more work on how to build on the initial responses we receive, on drawing in the less confident or articulate members of the group, and on safeguarding co- operation. There was a plea for modules which foreground close reading to be taught by experienced teachers. It is dispiriting for students if terminology that has excited them in a close reading course cannot be applied on modules taught by other lecturers. One group suggested that close reading should be thoroughly ‘embedded’, playing a key role in every module on a degree. Another (Utopian) idea was for a year group to reassemble in a final-year module to bring together and interrogate, in unseen close reading, knowledge gathered in previous years. It was also strongly put to us that the close study of form, device and linguistic choice could only benefit from engagement with Creative Writing – itself a form of close reading. Even if our goal is not the teaching of creative writing in itself, one way of releasing the grip of anxiety generated by the apparently authoritative text is to use authors’ drafts or variant texts, or to engage in forms of transformative writing – to invite students to write their own versions or variant texts as a way of getting to grips with style, genre and linguistic choice3 . It was felt that Virtual Learning Environments (VLEs) could be a potentially invaluable tool in enabling students to unpick texts at their own pace, or to supplement class activity in focusing on the effects of different approaches, students collectively building up layers of interpretations. The teaching of reading ‘pencil in hand’ can readily be translated to forms of annotation and hypertext. It was realised that many of the suggestions made implied making more use of formative assessment than recent regimes tend to encourage, or teachers have time to mark. But there was enthusiastic support for the portfolio of drafts with commentary as a form of summative assessment which could enable students to sustain and move through a cyclical process of reading, writing and revisiting. Classically, of course, practical criticism and new criticism are characterised as approaches brought to bear on context- Many forms of close reading therefore lead to students attempting to guess what is in the tutor’s mind 3 Rob Pope, Textual Intervention: Critical and Creative Strategies for Literary Studies (London: Routledge, 1995); Ben Knights and Chris Thurgar-Dawson, Active Reading: Transformative Writing in Literary Studies (London: Continuum, 2006). ‘not liking’ something in a text was often student shorthand for not understanding something. Up Close: a round table on close reading©RoyalHolloway,UniversityofLondon
  • 25. The Higher Education Academy is offering grants of up to £2,500 for projects relating to Education for Sustainable Development. Further information can be found on the Academy’s website www.heacademy.ac.uk/ourwork/learning/sustainability The deadline for applications is noon on 23 April. Education for Sustainable Development – Small Grants ©GettyImages Newsletter 14 April 2008 23 Up Close: a round table on close reading free texts, usually poems (‘the words on the page’). New critical readings are, however, heavily dependent on a wide-ranging cultural knowledge that is arguably more inaccessible than ever before for the majority of today’s students. It is clear, then, that the teaching of close reading must also involve the teaching of cultural contexts of various types. But, at the same time, as teachers we have to try to find ways of providing or pointing towards historical and contextual knowledge without skewing the discussion. Sensitive teaching avoids overwhelming people with specialist knowledge, but equally should not hoard knowledge as though it were only suitable for an inner circle of knowers. Communal close reading (as modelled in the group exercise on the day) seemed to be something favoured by many participants. The module plans produced at the end of the day involved several exercises of this sort, for example, the use of ‘peer-assisted-learning’ (tutorless groups of students). These plans also showcased ways in which comparing responses to a text with those of other students can be powerfully aided by modern technology: on a discussion board, for example, or via an annotation exercise on a wiki. All in all, there seemed to be little appetite for a ‘return’ to the practical criticism of the past. Rather, participants were keen to embed the teaching of close reading within a 21st-century curriculum. Several spoke of the need to apply the techniques of practical criticism to ‘non-literary’ as well as ‘literary’ texts. We were reminded how much close and careful reading – while we were urged to be wary of the reductivism of treating it as a ‘skill’ – is actually practised in a variety of professions. Also, as Adam Piette pointed out, close reading is actually a core activity of many strands of ‘theory’ (think of De Man, Derrida or the New Historicists). There seemed to be a drawing-back from the old idea that practical criticism is something that, in zooming in on a student’s mind in isolation, is a good way of ‘sorting out the sheep from goats’. The feeling of the day seemed to be, rather, that close reading is a desirable element in an English degree that has been skimped on in recent years and that can be incorporated into degree structures without becoming an inquisitorial tool. Despite qualifications and reservations, what emerged (not least from the period of practice) was a sense that ‘close reading’ is coming back to centre stage. That, in any case, it has never gone away as a core element in the teaching repertoire. And that participants shared an enthusiasm for close reading as a pedagogic form, provided it was conducted in a suitably generous spirit. In summary (and at the risk of over-simplification), the following recommendations emerge. • Teach close reading, and from the very beginning of the programme! But be explicit about why and how you are doing it. • Involve all your colleagues: practice close reading across the curriculum. • Don’t be purist. Don’t flinch from drawing on the analytical tools provided by stylistic analysis, or the use of methods of creative response, or from the medium provided by the VLE or the wiki. • Theory and close reading are not incompatible. • History and close reading are not incompatible. • Support students in learning to move between wide reading and detailed, ‘up close’ reading. the close study of form, device and linguistic choice can only benefit from engagement with Creative Writing Summaries of other Subject Centre events can be found on pages 36–39.