1. NO Element B D
1 Temperature 17 °C 29 °C
2 Pressure 973 mb 1013.2 mb
3 Humidity 98 % 60 %
TB = 17 °C TD = 29 °C
1. Oxygen (O2)
2. Sun Shine PB = 973 mb PD=1013.2 mb
3. Water vapor
RHB = 98 % RHD = 60 %

2. Title: Weather Condition
I. Introduction (paragraph 1)
A. Hook: All places in the nature have their own characteristic in weather
B. Connecting information: Temperature, Pressure, and Humidity
C. Thesis statement: The top of mountain and beach are included as place in nature.
They are similar in the appearance of oxygen (O2), sun shine, and water vapor (H2O).
However, they still have some different.
II. Body
1. Similarity between Place B and Place D (Paragraph 2)
a. Containing of oxygen (O2)
b. Sun shine
c. Water vapor
2. Different between Place B and Place D (Paragraph 3)
a. Temperature: Temperature on top of mountain (17oC) is lower than temperature on
the island (29oC)
b. Pressure: Pressure on top of mountain (973 mb) is lower than pressure on the island
(1013.2 mb)
c. Humidity: The top of mountain (98%) is more humid than island (60%)
III. Conclusion (paragraph 4)
A. Restated thesis: Place B (Top of mountain) and Place D (Island) have some similarity
in some aspect like contending oxygen (O2), sun Shine, and water vapor. But they
still have different that indicate their characteristic.
B. Opinion: Nevertheless, the similarity and the different of place B and place D give
information for us about the weather condition of places in the world.

3. Weather Condition
All places in the nature have their own characteristic in weather. They have some
different in weather parameters like Temperature, Pressure, and Humidity. The top of
mountain (place B) and island (place D) are included as place in nature. Although both
of them are different each other, they are similar in the contending of oxygen (O2), sun
shine, and water vapor (H2O).
If we look for a while, there is no similar between both of two places B and D.
Place B is a highland and place D is lowland. They are also different at their high level.
But let we see in another aspect, they still have similarity. We know that on earth
surface there always content of oxygen (O2). There are Oxygen (O2) on island (place D)
and on top of mountain (place B), although the number of oxygen (O 2) is different
between island and top of mountain. Number of oxygen on island is more than top of
mountain, because number of oxygen is affected by high level. Next aspect is sun
shine, we can see sun shine in entire place on the world every day except on North
Pole and South Pole. It happened because North Pole and South Pole only receive sun

4. shine every 6 month per year. Next similarity between these two places is water vapor.
Water vapor is like O2 where there is always it in entire places of the world. Water vapor
is found in troposphere up to level 12 km from earth surface. But amount of water vapor
is different at various place and it also affected by high level.
If we talk about different between both of these place, there are so many
different. We will take 3 different aspects that belong to weather phenomena. They are
temperature, pressure, and Humidity. First is temperature, temperature in the earth is
caused by radiation of sun that absorb by earth. In meteorology, we knew that radiation
of sun pass atmosphere and it is absorbed by earth surface. After that earth surface
emit the sun radiation as a long wave or we call it infrared radiation. It move from
surface to atmosphere, it cause temperature on surface is higher than temperature on
atmosphere. And in atmosphere, temperature is decrease by high per level. That is all
the reason why temperature in island (29oC) is higher than temperature in top of
mountain (17oC). Next aspect is pressure, pressure in island is 1013.2 mb and pressure
in top of mountain is 973 mb. We can see that pressure in island is higher than top of
mountain. Pressure is parameter of weather which affected by density of mass air.
Density of air is decrease by high level because density of air on bottom is higher than
density of air on top. Now we talk about humidity. We saw that RH in place B (98%) is
higher than RH in place D (60%). It means that RH in place B is higher than place D.
The different RH in various places is caused by amount of water vapor. More amount of
water vapor is higher the humidity in a place.
Place B (Top of mountain) and Place D (Island) have some similarity in some
aspect like contending oxygen (O2), sun Shine, and water vapor. But they still have
different that indicate their characteristic. Nevertheless, the similarity and the different of
place B and place D give us information about the weather condition in these places.