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Rough Edit Review
By Aftab Ghaffar
Does this look like an opening of a
film?
• We gave a questionnaire to 25 peoples & the
first question was “Does this look like an
opening of a film?”. 19 people said yes so we
will keep the style of the opening the same.
Yes
No
Is our storyline clear and understood?
• The majority of the people agreed that our
storyline was clear and that they could follow
the plot. This has given us the confidence not
to modify the story. (Yes: 22, No: 3)
Does our opening fit into the crime
thriller genre?
• Most people stated that our film did fit into
the crime thriller genre. They said it presented
the story well as part of the crime thriller
genre. (Yes: 19, No: 6)
Is the music we use suitable for our
clip?
• Many people said that the music created
suspense and made the scene more
interesting . On the other hand a few people
commented on how the the music didn’t
sound right at the beginning of the scene.
(Yes: 18, No: 7)
What do you think about the transition
we used?
• Overall, the people said that the transitions
were fine and that the transition choices were
appropriate and that they creating suspense.
• However, one of the comments we received
criticized the speed of the cuts. They said that
the speed of cuts was too slow and that we
should speed it up. Also the transition at 0:34
wasn’t too good, it is likely we will change this.
Does the clip look professional overall?
• The majority of people said that our intro
looked professional but it still had minor
errors which we will address in our final cut.
Is there anything else we can do
improve our clip?
• One of the improvements we are going to
make to our clip is to move the bathroom
scene as people commented on how it didn't
fit in well were it was currently.
• Another improvement is to do with the music
which people believed didn’t fit the beginning
of the scene.

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Rought Edit - Feedback

  • 1. Rough Edit Review By Aftab Ghaffar
  • 2. Does this look like an opening of a film? • We gave a questionnaire to 25 peoples & the first question was “Does this look like an opening of a film?”. 19 people said yes so we will keep the style of the opening the same. Yes No
  • 3. Is our storyline clear and understood? • The majority of the people agreed that our storyline was clear and that they could follow the plot. This has given us the confidence not to modify the story. (Yes: 22, No: 3)
  • 4. Does our opening fit into the crime thriller genre? • Most people stated that our film did fit into the crime thriller genre. They said it presented the story well as part of the crime thriller genre. (Yes: 19, No: 6)
  • 5. Is the music we use suitable for our clip? • Many people said that the music created suspense and made the scene more interesting . On the other hand a few people commented on how the the music didn’t sound right at the beginning of the scene. (Yes: 18, No: 7)
  • 6. What do you think about the transition we used? • Overall, the people said that the transitions were fine and that the transition choices were appropriate and that they creating suspense. • However, one of the comments we received criticized the speed of the cuts. They said that the speed of cuts was too slow and that we should speed it up. Also the transition at 0:34 wasn’t too good, it is likely we will change this.
  • 7. Does the clip look professional overall? • The majority of people said that our intro looked professional but it still had minor errors which we will address in our final cut.
  • 8. Is there anything else we can do improve our clip? • One of the improvements we are going to make to our clip is to move the bathroom scene as people commented on how it didn't fit in well were it was currently. • Another improvement is to do with the music which people believed didn’t fit the beginning of the scene.