DJ Waldow, director of community at Blue Sky Factory, gives an email anatomy lesson and "dissects" the various parts of an email. Includes many examples and suggestions to improve.
1. Baltimore, Maryland
Blue Sky Factory
Driving Email Marketing Performance
The Anatomy of an Email
September 24, 2009
1:00 to 1:45 PM ET
DJ Waldow
Director of Community, Blue Sky Factory
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2. About Blue Sky Factory
Blue Sky Factory is both a full & self service ESP.
Design, execute, and track your email marketing campaigns
with Publicaster ( that’s the name of our application)
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3. About Blue Sky Factory (bonus)
We’re also a fun company with cool people
Fruitcakes
Talent
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4. About DJ Waldow
DJ Waldow
@djwaldow
• Married, no children (yet)
• Salt Lake City, UT
• Dog, 3 cats
• U of Michigan, NY Giants
• Beer, coffee, people
• Former middle school teacher
• Director of Community, Blue Sky Factory
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5. 30 Minutes of Anatomy, 15 Minutes of Q&A
• A thorough understanding of the various parts of an
email
• Examples of "good" and "bad" email designs
• Tips and advice on where to spend time when planning
email campaigns
• Suggestions to increase opens, clicks, and conversion
What I’m hoping you’ll leave with today:
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6. 6 Parts of the Human Body
1. Head (Hair)
2. Face (Eyes, Nose, Mouth)
3. Neck & Upper Body
4. Abdomen (Guts)
5. Legs
6. Feet & Toes
6 Parts of an Email
1. Preheader
2. From Name/Subject Line
3. Header, Navigation, Hook
4. Main Call-to-Action
5. “Other Stuff”
6. Footer
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8. The Bad – From Name
1. David Axelrod: Who is David? (also too long)
2. concierge: Am I at a hotel?
3. register.welcome: Lazy. Lazy. Lazy.
4. data: Oops (see #3)
5. tim.westergen: I don’t know who that is. Do you?
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9. The Good – From Name
Perfect. Why? Simple. Company name.
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10. From Name Takeaway
The From Name
is a representation of
your company and/or brand.
Keep it simple. Be proud of it!
(Test)
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11. The Bad – Subject Line
1. Don’t miss this: Spammy!
2. A Message from…: I still don’t know who Tim Westergren is.
3. Your upcoming…: Use the data you have.
4. Your receipt…: See #1 and #3.
5. TwitBacks Newsletter: Boooooring.
6. EasyUpdate…: I have no idea what that is? Brand?
7. djwaldow…: Be careful with first name personalization.
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12. The Good – Subject Line
1. WEEKEND CLOSEOUTS…: It works. Trust me (they test)
2. 9 hours only!...: Sense of urgency.
3. Save up to 87%: Random number is catchy.
4. Miles or discount…: Intriguing. I have a choice?
5. 3 Minutes, 52 Seconds: Interest piqued (think: video)
6. REI Subscriber Exclusive…: Exclusivity.
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13. Subject Line Takeaways
1. Length
2. Exclusivity
3. Call-to-Action
4. Sense of Urgency
5. Dare to be Different
6. (Test)
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14. Image Credit: DJ Waldow (really)
Human Body Email
Head (Hair) Preheader
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15. Preheader Options
• Snippet Text
• Whitelisting/Address Book Instructions
• View Images
• Call-to-Action
• Mobile Device
• F2F and/or SWYSN
• Advertising
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16. The Bad
Too much preheaderNo preheader
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17. The Good
• (2) Calls-to-action
• Mobile/Text
• View with Images
• Fun icons
• Bonus: “secondary preheader” above navigation bar
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18. Preheader Takeaways
• Include it, but don’t over do it
• Size matters
• Be different
• Include call(s)-to-action
• Whitelisting option overrated?
• (Test)
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24. The Good
Fabric.com email – Images On
• Bulletproof buttons
• Clearance in red
• Clear header
• Hooks everywhere
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25. Header, Navigation, Hook Takeaways
1. Make it Pop (credit: Lisa Harmon)
2. Bulletproof Buttons (credit: Lisa Harmon)
3. Whitespace, but not too much
4. Clear hooks
5. Play with the colors
6. (Test)
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38. “Other Stuff” Takeaways
1. Bulletproof Button (credit: Lisa Harmon)
2. Image/Text Balance
3. Colors
4. White space
5. Many options to click
6. Clean
Note: Very similar to “Main Call-to-Action” Takeaways
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39. Image Credit: Flickr (vernhart)
Human Body Email
Feet & Toes Footer
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42. Footer Takeaways
• Unsubscribe
• Manage Preferences / Update Account
• SWYN / F2F / Other Social
• Tertiary Calls-to-Action
• Don’t Make Them Work For It
• Simple, Straightforward
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43. “…delivering anticipated, personal and relevant messages to
people who actually want to get them.” S. Godin (1999)
Send Timely, Targeted, Relevant
Emails To Subscribers Who
Have Asked For Them
If You’ve Learned Nothing Else Today, Know This “Secret”
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