Description Writing

1. Walt: write a description about the bird.
Im flying above the water
With a big smile on my face
Grabbing fish with my claws.
My feathers are falling off
Why I fly threw the sky.
I look down I see a fish
I swoop down and get it
I pick it up with my claws
I take it home to my family.
While Im flying home I see a shark in the corner of my
eye,
It takes a bite at me but he misses so I fly away
unharmed to my house,
when I get there I see new baby birds that look just like
me.
By Scott
Scotty, your writing improves in leaps and bounds, well done. Iʼm very pleased :)
Next Steps: Iʼd like you to think about words that describe the bird, eg. strong claws,
treacherous talons, beady eyes etc