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English Developmental Continuum P-10
Writing - Writing Strategy
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Developmental Overview
Each table contains the progression points and standards related to the Writing
Dimension and the Indicators of Progress for the focus on Writing Strategy.

Progressing towards Level 1


Progression Point      0.5
At 0.5, the work of a student progressing towards the standard at Level 1 demonstrates, for
example:
     • understanding that their writing can communicate ideas, feelings and information

     • use of letters and some words in the writing of brief texts about topics of personal

        interest
     • emergent writing showing concepts about print, including left to right, top to

        bottom
     • reading back from their own writing at the time of writing

     • approximate use of letters for some letter–sound relationships and common words

     • use of a variety of writing tools, including crayons, pencils and computer software.



                                          Indicators of Progress

The students use at least             Students see oral language             Students read back to others
some of the following                 being recorded in print; they          what they have written or
writing strategies:                   dictate text, see it written           believe they have written.
                                      and then say it aloud.                 They may retell/paraphrase
Students show an emerging                                                    or say the main ideas of the
ability to control how they           Students plan what they                message rather than reading
use a pencil or crayon. This          intend to write by saying it           it ‘word for word’.
includes the appropriate              first or drawing a picture or
pencil grip. They can trace           symbols to create a draft.             Students learn to copy
over and around letters,                                                     familiar words by saying the
outlines and shapes, write            Students write what they               word to themselves and then
letters ‘in the air’, in sand, in     say, perhaps saying each               telling themselves some of
finger-painting activities,           word as they write it.                 the letters. They can copy
develop the visual–motor                                                     words from the environment
coordination skills necessary                                                or from their favourite
for writing (for example,                                                    books.
eye–hand and hand–arm
coordination skills), engage                                                 Students articulate some of
in finger play, and develop                                                  the sounds and represent
                                                                             them with appropriate
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body posture and                                                 symbols.
movements that permit them
to write more easily.




Standard    1.0
At Level 1, students write personal recounts and simple texts about familiar topics to
convey ideas or messages. In their writing, they use conventional letters, groups of
letters, and simple punctuation such as full stops and capital letters. Students are
aware of the sound system and the relationships between letters and sounds in words
when spelling. They form letters correctly, and use a range of writing implements
and software.


                                   Indicators of Progress

Students plan what they         Students check what they         Students say how writing is
intend to write by saying       have written for correct         useful or helps them (for
aloud or ‘conferencing the      letter formation, spaces         example, to remember
topic’ or by drawing pictures   between words and letters,       something, to let other
of the key ideas.               use of full stops, and use of    people know what they
                                capitals for names and the       think) and suggest activities
Students say what they will     beginning letter of a            in which they could use
write in sentences and write    sentence.                        writing.
a first draft. As they write
they may say aloud what         Students read their writing      Students transfer what they
they are writing.               to others.                       know about writing in one
                                                                 context to another, for
Students read what they         Students form letters more       example, telling a story in
have written to see if it       accurately with correct          different contexts.
makes sense (that is, ‘sounds   starting points and
right’), and, if necessary,     increasing legibility.           Students show improved
add to or change the text.                                       physical control of
                                Students say how planning        handwriting; they are more
                                and reading over what they       able to coordinate pencil
                                have written helps them.         grip, body posture and the
                                                                 position of the paper or
                                                                 keyboard.




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Progressing towards Level 2


Progression Point        1.25
At 1.25, the work of a student progressing towards the standard at Level 2 demonstrates,
for example:
     • inclusion of their own experiences when writing for personal purposes and

       audiences such as in lists, letters, cards, posters
     • inclusion of one or more generally readable sentences

     • some correct use of capital letters and full stops

     • drawings that support the intended meaning of their writing

     • plausible attempts at spelling unfamiliar words, matching sound–letter

       relationships and using some simple spelling patterns.

                                   Indicators of Progress

Students plan aloud, with       Students read their writing      Students check for spelling
pictures, or in writing the     to others.                       and punctuation.
key ideas, and use the
planning ideas to write a       Students form letters more       Students transfer what they
first draft.                    accurately and write more        know about writing from
                                legibly.                         one context to another, for
Students say how planning                                        example, they write about a
and reading over what they      Students say how writing is      birthday party using
have written helps them.        useful and how it helps          different text types or write
                                them, and suggest activities     a brief message for different
Students read what they         in which they could use          people they know well.
have written either to          writing.
themselves or to others to
see if it makes sense or
‘sounds right’, and, if
necessary, add to or change
the text.



Progression Point        1.5
At 1.5, the work of a student progressing towards the standard at Level 2 demonstrates, for
example:
   • experimentation with a range of short text types; for example, recounts, letters, lists,
      procedures

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  • sequencing of a small number of ideas in short texts for different purposes and
     audiences
  • rereading of their own writing, checking that it makes sense
  • combination of writing with drawings or computer graphics to support meaning
  • correct spelling of some high-frequency words and plausible attempts at spelling
     unfamiliar words.

                                     Indicators of Progress

Students describe some of         (2) understand that              Students modify their
the differences between           paragraphs separate key          proofreading and editing to
speaking and writing and          ideas. While aware of these      include rereading what they
experiment with new text          text organisational features,    have written to check for
types.                            they may not use them            meaning, sentence form and
                                  correctly.                       their use of vocabulary.
Students combine their
                                                                   They:
writing with supportive           Students use sentence
drawings or computer              writing strategies in which      (1) reread their writing to
graphics.                         they:                            themselves or to others to
                                                                   revise or clarify ideas, and
Students begin to plan what       (1) write in complete
                                                                   are assisted to modify their
they will write about by          sentences;
                                                                   writing if necessary; and
using discussion or drawing
                                  (2) vary the length of
to identify what they want to                                      (2) edit for use of
                                  sentence; and
write prior to writing, say,                                       punctuation and for spelling
‘what they want to tell’ the      (3) experiment with              errors.
reader. During planning they      combining or expanding
                                                                   Students use explicit
organise the ideas prior to       sentences.
                                                                   publishing strategies for
their first draft, for example,
                                  Students use word- and           deciding how to present
by describing how they will:
                                  vocabulary-selection             their edited piece of writing.
(1) clearly define a topic;       strategies more effectively;
                                                                 Students articulate some of
and                               they:
                                                                 the strategies (that is, the
(2) add detail to a topic.        (1) try out unfamiliar words; actions) they used while
                                                                 writing.
Students begin to use             (2) select words by taking
explicit text organisational      account of the likely readers; Students learn strategies for
strategies, they:                 and                            copying sentences one or a
                                                                 few at a time; they learn to
(1) sequence the ideas in the     (3) try to avoid words that
                                                                 vocalise each sentence
writing with a clear              lack ‘voice’ such as
                                                                 before beginning to write
beginning, body or middle,        mundane or trite words and
                                                                 and rehearse it.
and end; and                      overuse of words or phrases
                                  such as and or then.



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Progressing towards Level 2


Progression Point        1.75
At 1.75, the work of a student progressing towards the standard at Level 2 demonstrates,
for example:
     • inclusion of information and ideas in short texts for known audiences and selected

       purposes
     • use of strategies to revise writing; for example, reading aloud, use of feedback

       from others
     • mostly correct use of capital letters, full stops, and question marks

     • correct spelling of unfamiliar words, using knowledge of sound–letter patterns.



                                   Indicators of Progress

Students plan what they will    (2) continue to develop          (2) select words by taking
write about by using            paragraphing skills.             account of the likely
information gathering                                            readers; and
strategies such as word         Students use drafting
mapping and charting prior      strategies such as               (3) select words that target
to drafting. They reflect on    elaborating on a topic and       most directly their intention.
‘what I want to tell the        giving supporting ideas, and
                                integrate these by using a       Students modify their
reader’. They use the
                                wider range of sentence          proofreading and editing by
strategies to assist
                                writing strategies in which      using computer resources to
themselves to:
                                they:                            check sentence form,
(1) narrow their focus on a                                      punctuation and spelling.
topic; and                      (1) write in complete
                                sentences;                       Students broaden their
(2) add detail to aspects of                                     publishing strategies, for
the idea.                       (2) vary the length of           example, by using word
                                sentence; and                    processing in different ways.
Students begin to use
explicit text organisational    (3) experiment with              Students discuss the writing
strategies; they:               combining or expanding           strategies they use and the
                                sentences.                       values and purpose of each,
(1) sequence the ideas in the                                    for example, of editing and
writing into an introduction,   Students use word and            revising and how they take
a body and an end; and          vocabulary selection             account of the readers when
                                strategies more effectively;     they write.
                                they:

                                (1) experiment with novel
                                words;
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Standard    2.0
At Level 2, students write short sequenced texts that include some related ideas about
familiar topics. They write texts that convey ideas and information to known
audiences. They select content, form and vocabulary depending on the purpose for
writing, and describe the purpose and audience for their own and others’ writing.
They use appropriate structures to achieve some organisation of the subject matter.
They link ideas in a variety of ways using pronouns; conjunctions and adverbial
phrases indicating time and place. They accurately spell frequently used words, and
make use of known spelling patterns to make plausible attempts at spelling
unfamiliar words. They use capital letters, full stops and question marks correctly.
They reread their own writing and use a range of editing resources to revise and
clarify meaning. They write upper- and lower-case letters legibly with consistent size,
slope and spacing.


                                 Indicators of Progress

Students select content and   (2) graphic organisers, word     Students ask questions about
form depending on their       mapping and charting to          others’ writing and their
purposes for writing and      plan what they will write.       own writing.
describe the purpose and      Students use drafting
audience for their own and    strategies such as one’s own     Students use corrective
others’ writing.              vocabulary and graphic           feedback from others to
                              organisers to create a first     revise their writing.
Students use planning         draft.
strategies such as:                                            Students publish their
                              Students reread their own        writing in different forms,
(1) saying what questions     writing and use a range of       including the use of word
they want to answer for       editing resources to revise      processing in e-learning
people who read what they     and clarify meaning.             focus groups.
write, for example, for A
project on Antarctica, How
cold is it? and




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Progressing towards Level 3


Progression Point        2.25
At 2.25, the work of a student progressing towards the standard at Level 3 demonstrates,
for example:
     • composition of short, sequenced factual and imaginative texts in print and

       electronic forms
     • related ideas, linked in sequence, to convey meaning to known audiences

     • simple, and some compound, sentences joined by appropriate conjunctions

     • effective vocabulary to convey meaning, including nouns, verbs and adjectives

     • correct spelling of words with regular spelling patterns and plausible attempts at

       some words with irregular spelling patterns.

                                   Indicators of Progress

Students select content and     (2) graphic organisers, word     Students use planning
form depending on their         mapping and charting; and        strategies such as graphic
purposes for writing and                                         organisers to create a first
describe the explicit purpose   (3) library resources such as    draft.
and audience for their own      dictionaries and taxonomies
and others’ writing.            to collate information about     Students reread their own
                                the topic.                       writing and use a range of
Students talk about their                                        editing resources to revise
action plan for writing, the    Students say what the            and clarify meaning. They
steps they will go through      finished outcome might           proofread paragraphs about
and the actions they will use   ‘look like’, what it might       familiar events consisting of
to produce each draft.          say, and the key ideas it will   up to four sentences for
                                mention.                         punctuation and simple one-
Students use planning                                            syllable spelling patterns.
strategies such as:             Students select the most
                                appropriate nouns,               Students ask questions about
(1) visualising their topic;    adjectives and verbs to          others’ writing and their
                                convey a message and can         writing.
                                write in a way to tell
                                someone who was not there
                                what happened.



Progression Point        2.5
At 2.5, the work of a student progressing towards the standard at Level 3 demonstrates, for
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example:
    • composition of short texts of more than one paragraph to describe experiences, tell

      a story, express a point of view
    • appropriate ordering of events and ideas in print and electronic texts

    • compound sentences linking two ideas or events, with correct use of verb tenses

    • development of character, setting and plot in short narrative texts

    • correct use of full stops and question marks, and experimentation with other

      punctuation; for example, commas, quotation marks.

                                   Indicators of Progress

Students describe their         Students use knowledge of        Students edit the text by
writing plan, that is, the      text structures to organise      correcting errors in spelling,
strategies they will use to     their ideas, for example,        punctuation, and
‘get their knowledge ready’     compare/contrast,                capitalisation. They may use
before beginning to write.      problem/solution,                a dictionary, other
                                cause/effect, description.       references and/or computer
Students describe their                                          technology to assist in
purpose for writing and the     Students describe how they       editing text.
questions they intend to        sequence the ideas in a
answer in their writing.        paragraph.                       Students name sources when
                                                                 writing reports.
Students consistently           Students paraphrase
organise and plan their         accurately what they write to Students begin to use
writing and use available       check that it meets their      available technology (e.g.,
resources in the school, such   purpose.                       word processor) consistently
as libraries, to assist.                                       throughout the writing
                                Students prepare a first draft process.
Students describe the main      by mapping the ideas
idea and the supporting         developed during planning      Students publish their text
ideas for their writing.        into phrases, sentences and    by producing a legible and
                                paragraphs.                    effective final product using
                                                               technology when
                                Students revise their draft by appropriate.
                                adding or changing
                                appropriate language and/or Students write legibly.
                                graphics to enhance text and
                                style.




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Progressing towards Level 3


Progression Point        2.75
 At 2.75, the work of a student progressing towards the standard at Level 3 demonstrates,
 for example:
   • composition of texts for different purposes; for example, to narrate, inform,
       describe, present a point of view or explain
   • composition of texts of three or four logically ordered paragraphs
   • composition of texts that take account of the needs and interests of familiar and
       some unfamiliar audiences
   • combinations of written and visual elements in print and electronic texts
   • correct spelling of two-syllable words with regular spelling patterns, and plausible
       attempts at spelling two-syllable words with irregular spelling patterns.

                                 Indicators of Progress

Students describe an updated (1) using a sequence of            Students extend their use of
writing plan.                 drawings or key words to          paraphrasing what they
                              show a text pattern;              write, use their knowledge
Students describe their                                         of vocabulary to substitute
purpose for writing and the    (2) using a ‘circle text’ (a     for over-used words in their
questions they intend to      sequence of pictures that         writing, and refine a
answer in their writing.      shows a particular character      sentence to express the
                              going through a story); and       intended meaning most
Students describe alternative
                                                                clearly.
ways of ‘getting their        (3) record the sequence of
knowledge ready’ for          key words. Students convert
writing and for collating     the message in these formats
what they know for more       to a first draft.
complex texts, for example:



Standard    3.0
At Level 3, students write texts containing several logically ordered paragraphs that
express opinions and include ideas and information about familiar topics. They write
narratives which include characters, setting and plot. They order information and
sequence events using some detail or illustrative evidence, and they express a point of
view providing some information and supporting detail. They combine verbal and
visual elements in the texts they produce. They meet the needs of audiences by
including appropriate background information.
They write a variety of simple and compound sentences and use verb tenses correctly.
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They use punctuation to support meaning, including exclamation marks and
quotation marks, and accurately use full stops, commas and question marks. They
use vocabulary appropriate to context and spell most one- and two-syllable words
with regular spelling patterns, and frequently used words which have less regular
spelling patterns. They use sound and visual patterns when attempting to spell
unfamiliar words.

                                   Indicators of Progress

Students describe their         Students sequence and            Students use rhythm, flow of
writing plan, that is, the      organise the main ideas and      language and imagery where
specific actions they will      the supporting ideas for their   appropriate, for example, in
take to complete the task.      writing and sequence the         verse.
                                ideas in a paragraph.
Students describe their                                        Students edit the text by
purpose for writing and the     Students paraphrase            correcting errors in spelling,
questions they intend to        accurately what they write to punctuation, and
answer in their writing,        check that it meets their      capitalisation. They may use
particularly for the new text   purpose.                       a dictionary, other
types.                                                         references and/or computer
                                Students prepare a first draft technology to assist in
Students use strategies to      by mapping the ideas           editing text.
generate relevant ideas, for    developed during planning
example, how to                 into sentences and             Students cite sources when
contextualise a topic in an     paragraphs, combine and        writing reports.
alterative culture or           sequence written and visual
historical era, and organise    information, and use a range Students use available
and plan the resources they     of sentence lengths and        technology (e.g., word
will use to complete the        types.                         processor) more regularly
writing, such as library                                       and consistently throughout
sources and on-line             Students revise their draft by the writing process.
databases.                      adding or changing
                                appropriate language and/or Students publish their text
                                graphics to enhance text and by producing a legible and
                                style.                         effective final product using
                                                               technology when
                                                               appropriate.




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Progressing towards Level 4

Progression Point        3.25
At 3.25, the work of a student progressing towards the standard at Level 4 demonstrates,
for example:
     • inclusion of familiar ideas and information for different purposes and audiences in

       print and electronic texts
     • use of strategies for planning, drafting, proofreading, editing and revising

     • appropriate vocabulary, punctuation and tense according to context, purpose and

       audience
     • typical features and structures of different texts such as narratives and reports

     • correct spelling of frequently occurring two- and three-syllable words and use of

       strategies to spell unknown words.

                                   Indicators of Progress

Students describe their         Students sequence and            Students revise their draft by
modified writing plan, that     organise the main ideas and      adding or changing
is, the strategies they will    the supporting ideas for two     appropriate language and/or
use to complete the task.       simultaneous sets of events,     graphics to enhance text and
                                for example, by allocating       style.
Students describe their         one paragraph to each of the
purpose for writing, the        simultaneous sequences.          Students identify and write
questions they intend to                                         the key ideas in a text from
answer in their writing,        Students integrate the ideas     which they need to learn as
particularly for the new text   in two or three sentences        they handle the information,
types learnt here, and how      into a single sentence,          for example, as they watch a
they indicate the purpose in    identify the ‘paragraph idea’    short video or read a simple
the text they write.            in a set of sentences and        text with a few key ideas.
                                summarise a sequence of
Students use strategies to      sentences.                       Students use various editing
generate relevant ideas, for                                     strategies such as a
example, how to                 Students prepare a first draft   proofreading checklist, a
contextualise a topic in a      by mapping the ideas             dictionary, and computer-
fantasy or adventure, a         developed during planning        based materials, to monitor
report or an argument and       into sentences and               their use of spelling,
organise and plan the           paragraphs, combine and          punctuation, grammar, and
resources they will use to      sequence written and visual      capitalisation.
complete the writing; these     information, and use a range
include libraries and           of sentence lengths and
databases.                      types.


Progression Point        3.5
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At 3.5, the work of a student progressing towards the standard at Level 4 demonstrates, for
example:
     • production of texts for a range of different audiences and purposes in print and

        electronic forms
     • use of strategies for planning; for example, using models of others’ writing or mind

        mapping
     • deletion of unnecessary information or addition of new information when editing

        and revising writing
     • inclusion of appropriate visual images and information in print and electronic texts.



                                   Indicators of Progress

In addition to the           Students organise the ideas into    Students use redrafting of
strategies described in      main and subordinate ideas,         their writing to develop their
level 3, students use the    and sequence and organise the       text through multiple drafts.
following methods.           ideas, for example, for two
                             simultaneous sets of events in a    Students use revising
Students describe a          narrative and two points of         strategies; they reread the
modified writing plan,       view in a persuasive text. They     text to check its sense and
that is, the actions they    link the ideas with the topic       may discuss it with others.
will take to complete the    and their intended message and      They can recognise when
task.                        narrow or expand the set of         their writing shows
                             ideas according to the topic.       redundancy and can correct
Students describe their                                          this.
                             They allocate the main and
purpose for writing, the
                             supporting ideas to paragraphs.
questions they intend to                                     Students use editing
answer in their writing,    Students map the ideas and       strategies; they use a range
particularly for the new    perspectives into a first draft. of sources to edit a text, such
text types learnt here and  They examine the development as their proofreading
how they indicate the       of details, organisation, and    checklist, a dictionary, and
purpose in the text they    voice in the draft and elaborate computer-based materials to
write.                      the initial ideas if necessary.  monitor their use of spelling,
                                                             punctuation, grammar, and
Students use a range of     Students select and use more     capitalisation.
strategies to generate and appropriate vocabulary,
organise relevant ideas,    language structures and          Students use publishing
for example, visualise a    features for their purpose,      strategies; they select a
topic, use brainstorming audience and type of text.          format for publishing that is
or network mapping,                                          appropriate to their message,
organise and plan the       Students evaluate two or three their purpose for writing and
resources they will use to sentences in each paragraph       their audience, for example,
complete the writing; this and integrate the ideas into a    a speech, a poster, an essay,
includes the use of library single sentence; they            or a report.
and databases.              summarise the sequence of
                                                             Students use technology-
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                         sentences to develop the topic       oriented strategies
                         sentence for each paragraph.         throughout the writing
                                                              process.




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Progressing towards Level 4

Progression Point        3.75
At 3.75, the work of a student progressing towards the standard at Level 4 demonstrates,
for example:
     • use of structures and features appropriate to purpose and audience of print and

       electronic texts
     • appropriate use of topic sentences and organisation of main and subordinate ideas

     • selection of vocabulary, text structures and visual features to effectively

       communicate ideas and information
     • maintenance of plot, characterisation and setting throughout extended narrative

       texts
     • use of knowledge about spelling patterns, including morphemic knowledge, visual

       and phonic patterns.

                                   Indicators of Progress
In addition to the strategies     Students show they have           • while revising,
described in 3–3.5, students use  linked the writing strategies     proofreading stage
the following methods.            into a sequence of self-          scripts such as—Is the
                                  instructional scripts that        text on the right track?
Students selectively use a
                                                                    Does it do what it is
variety of strategies for writing they can use to guide them
                                                                    supposed to do? Does it
according to the given purposes, through a writing activity as      say too much/too little? Is
such as note making, using        follows:
                                                                    the text easy to
models, planning, editing and       • while pre-writing and         understand? Are there
proofreading.                       planning stage scripts such     confusing parts? Are the
Students select and use specific    as—What do I know about         main points in the right
vocabulary according to the         the topic? Have I collected     order? Does the writing
                                    enough information? Why         begin smoothly? Does the
topic of the writing and its
                                    am I writing this? Who will     writer take too long to get
purpose.                                                            started? Does each
                                    read what I write? What
Students use multiple drafting      form should my writing take?    paragraph have one main
in a systematic, organised way      How well does the               idea? Are the paragraphs
to obtain a final product.          information I have gathered     linked together well? Does
                                    answer the set                  the writing finish well?
Students express and clarify                                        Have I used any words
their thoughts, feelings and        question/topic?
                                                                    that I am not sure of?
values through writing.             • while writing stage scripts   Have I checked the writing
                                    such as—What is the first       for correct grammar and
Students use a range of sentence    important idea I want to say?
and paragraph writing                                               sentences? Have I checked
                                    How will I say it? What ideas   the writing for correct
strategies, for example, they       go with it? What is the         spelling? Have I checked
vary the style of sentence forms    second important idea? What     the writing for correct
and use indexing, sentence          ideas go with it? How will I    punctuation? Does each
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organisation, compound          start the writing? What do I           sentence have one idea?
sentences, and subordinate and  want to tell the reader first?         Have I used pictures etc.,
embedded clauses.               How will I tell the reader             well? What will I call the
                                       about the main idea of the      passage of writing? Will I
Students use several drafts in a       passage? How will I finish      use subheadings?
systematic, organised way to           off the writing? What will
lead to a final product.                                              Students begin to adapt
                                       each paragraph be about?
                                       What is the main idea in
                                                                      the steps in the self-
                                       each paragraph?                instructional sequence to
                                                                      match different types of
                                                                      texts.


Standard    4.0
At Level 4, students produce, in print and electronic forms, a variety of texts for
different purposes using structures and features of language appropriate to the
purpose, audience and context of the writing. They begin to use simple figurative
language and visual images. They use a range of vocabulary, a variety of sentence
structures, and use punctuation accurately, including apostrophes. They identify and
use different parts of speech, including nouns, pronouns, adverbs, comparative
adverbs and adjectives, and use appropriate prepositions and conjunctions. They use a
range of approaches to spelling, applying morphemic knowledge and an
understanding of visual and phonic patterns. They employ a variety of strategies for
writing, including note-making, using models, planning, editing and proofreading.

                                      Indicators of Progress

Students use a range of            Students use drafting strategies   Students use editing
strategies including the           in which students:                 strategies to check the use
following:                                                            of spelling, punctuation,
                                   (1) use the ideas and              grammar, and
Students describe their            perspectives generated to write    capitalisation; students use
action plan for writing, and       a first draft;                     several resources such as a
the actions they will use to                                          dictionary, computer and
achieve their goals or             (2) elaborate initial ideas and
                                                                      style guides.
purposes for writing.              identify subordinate ideas; and
                                                                      Students use publishing
Students use idea generation       (3) focus on developing ideas,
                                                                      strategies such as:
and collation strategies,          details and organising them.
orientation strategies, and        Students use revising strategies   (1) selecting a format for
idea organisation strategies,      such as rereading the draft to     publication appropriate for
for example, brainstorming         check that there is consistency    the audience (for example,
and semantic mapping               of meaning and main ideas,         a letter, a poster, an essay,
(including computer and            language use and style, and        a report); and
graphic organisers in              modify the draft accordingly.
planning and collating                                                (2) using technology to
knowledge for writing                                                 support the publishing
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different text types), and                                  process.
strategies for narrowing or
expanding a topic prior to
drafting.




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Progressing towards Level 5


Progression Point        4.25
 At 4.25, the work of a student progressing towards the standard at Level 5 demonstrates,
 for example:
     • composition of print and electronic texts for a range of purposes, including

        speculative, imaginative, explanatory and persuasive
     • development of topics in coherent ways according to the purpose, and the needs

        and experience of the intended audience
     • use of a variety of sentence structures, including combinations of simple and

        compound sentences for particular effects
     • awareness of grammatical conventions; for example, tense and subject–verb

        agreement, appropriate punctuation
     • use of a range of planning strategies.


                                    Indicators of Progress

Students use the types of        Students use drafting            Students use revising
strategies described in level    strategies in which they:        strategies that take account
4 and modify these to                                             of the new text types as
                                 (1) use the ideas and
account for the types of texts                                    identified in 4.25 Ideas
                                 perspectives generated to
described.                                                        communicated in writing.
                                 write a first draft;
Students describe their                                           Students use editing
                                 (2) elaborate initial ideas
action plan for writing a                                         strategies that take account
                                 and identify subordinate
review of a film or a                                             of the new text types 4.25
                                 ideas; and
speculative text.                                                 Ideas communicated in
                               (3) focus on developing            writing.
Students use idea generation
                               ideas and details and
and collation strategies,                                         Students use publishing
                               organising them.
orientation strategies, idea                                      strategies including
organisation strategies and                                       computers and graphic
strategies for narrowing or                                       organisers for publishing the
expanding a topic prior to                                        text types.
drafting for an interpretative
essay.



Progression Point        4.5
At 4.5, the work of a student progressing towards the standard at Level 5 demonstrates, for
example:
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    • composition of print and electronic texts in a wide range of forms, including

      narratives, reports, explanations, procedures and points of view
    • composition of persuasive texts about contemporary issues, including justification

      of personal points of view with supporting arguments
    • experimentation with different techniques to influence audiences and achieve the

      intended purpose of their writing
    • correct spelling, except of unfamiliar words with unusual spelling patterns

    • use of headings and subheadings in the organisation of information in texts

    • use of editing and proofreading skills for clarity and cohesion of ideas.

                                   Indicators of Progress
Students use the types of      (3) strategies for focusing or    Students use editing and
strategies described in        expanding a topic prior to        proofreading strategies; they
levels 4–4.25 and modify       drafting for an interpretative    (1) monitor for clarity and
these to account for the       essay (for example, by            for the cohesiveness of ideas
types of texts described       aligning the questions asked      in communicating the
above, as follows:             by a topic with the questions     intended message;
Students describe their        answered by the ideas).
                                                                 (2) use multiple resources to
action plan for writing        Students use drafting             edit the text (for example,
instances of the texts above   strategies; they                  dictionaries, computer-based
and discuss what they know     (1) integrate ideas across        facilities, peer feedback and
about writing for different    sentences within a paragraph      writing guides; and
purposes in a range of         for the text types taught;
contexts.                                                        (3) begin to cite sources
                               (2) coordinate ideas and          (e.g., references, footnotes,
Students use various           perspectives; and                 endnotes).
planning strategies:
                               (3) gradually use these           Students use various
(1) idea generation and        drafting strategies               publishing strategies; they
collation strategies such as   independently.
researching, mapping,                                            (1) select a format for
surveys and interviews;        Students use revising             publishing (e.g., multimedia
                               strategies; they                  formats, essay, research
(2) idea organisation                                            presentation) appropriate for
strategies such as             (1) reread what they have
                               written for sense;                the audience and purpose;
networking the main ideas                                        and
first, followed by the         (2) confer with others to
subordinate ideas,             modify the text;                  (2) produce a legible and
identifying the questions                                        effective final outcome
                               (3) adapt recommendations;        using a variety of
answered by the main ideas
                               and                               technologies.
(for example, using the
who, what, when, where,        (4) modify the language
why framework); and            and/or accompanying non-
                               text information to enhance
                               text and style.

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Progressing towards Level 5


Progression Point        4.75
At 4.75, the work of a student progressing towards the standard at Level 5 demonstrates,
for example:
     • control of writing texts in various forms, including narratives, reports,

       explanations, procedures and persuasive texts
     • composition of imaginative and informative texts presenting challenging ideas and

       issues
     • appropriate use of figurative language to achieve particular effects

     • strategic use of headings, subheadings, graphics, photographs and art work to

       support the meaning of the text
     • use of a variety of software packages to plan, organise, revise and present

       electronic texts.

                                 Indicators of Progress

Students use the types of
strategies described in levels
4–4.5 with greater
spontaneity and accuracy.




Standard    5.0
At Level 5, students produce, in print and electronic forms, texts for a variety of
purposes, including speculating, hypothesising, persuading and reflecting. They write
extended narratives or scripts with attention to characterisation, consistency of
viewpoint and development of a resolution. They write arguments that state and
justify a personal viewpoint; reports incorporating challenging themes and issues;
personal reflections on, or evaluations of, texts presenting challenging themes and
issues. Students improve the accuracy and readability of their writing, developing
confidence in the identification and use of grammatical conventions and features of
language and in their use of figurative language. They use a range of punctuation
accurately to support meaning, including the use of ellipses, dashes, colons and semi-
colons. They control tenses, and subject-verb and noun-pronoun agreement. They
accurately identify and use different parts of speech. They edit their writing for
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clarity, coherence and consistency of style, and proofread and correct spelling,
punctuation and grammatical errors.


                                 Indicators of Progress

Students modify and update    Students develop strategies      Students broaden their
their writing plans to        for using a variety of           strategies for linking main
accommodate the broader       sentence structures              and supporting ideas within
range of texts and purposes   selectively so that they         and between paragraphs by
for writing.                  convey their intention most      using a range of connectives
                              effectively.                     to communicate a sense of
                                                               coherence.
                              Students develop strategies
                              for improving the focus, the     Students edit their writing
                              accuracy and the readability     for clarity, coherence and
                              of their writing so that it      consistency of style, and
                              achieves its purpose             proofread for spelling,
                              effectively.                     punctuation and grammar.




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Progressing towards Level 6


Progression Point        5.25
At 5.25, the work of a student progressing towards the standard at Level 6 demonstrates,
for example:
     • composition of sustained narratives with some control of main plot and sub-plots

       and consistent character development
     • use of writing to explore complex issues and points of view

     • use of a variety of language techniques to present an argument and influence

       audiences to share a point of view
     • effective use of vocabulary and sentence structures appropriate to the intended

       purpose of the text
     • effective use of strategies for redrafting, editing for audience appropriateness,

       prioritising and sequencing ideas.

                                    Indicators of Progress

Students plan how to write      Students plan how to write        Students write creatively in
sustained narratives and        texts that explore a complex      terms of open-ended
how to prioritise and           current issue from different      possibilities.
sequence the ideas in a         perspectives or that argue a
sustained narrative; they       particular point of view, how     Students use composing,
say how they organise the       to support a clear position       and, if necessary, redrafting
ideas in terms of main plot     and to account for alternative    strategies.
and sub-plots; use language     opinions and different
                                                                  Students proofread their
(for example, vocabulary,       perspectives, and how to use
                                                                  writing and revise and edit it
sentence forms); allow key      language techniques to argue
                                                                  for vocabulary and spelling,
characterisation to evolve;     and persuade for a particular
                                                                  for audience
and maintain cohesion and       point of view.
                                                                  appropriateness, clarity,
develop a resolution.
                                                                  cohesion and consistency of
                                                                  viewpoint.




Progression Point        5.5
At 5.5, the work of a student progressing towards the standard at Level 6 demonstrates, for
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example:
    • expression of thoughts, feelings, opinions and ideas in print and electronic forms

    • use of writing to explore complex issues and to argue for a particular point of view

    • integration of complex ideas and multiple perspectives in writing

    • the written conventions, structures and features appropriate for a range of different

      text types
    • proofreading and redrafting for accuracy, clarity, coherence and consistency of

      style.

                                  Indicators of Progress
Students plan, organise,       Students use composing           Students use redrafting
prioritise and sequence the    strategies, for example,         strategies to improve clarity,
main and supporting ideas in   actions to integrate complex     coherence, creativity and
their writing, for example,    ideas and multiple               consistency of style if
how they will achieve          perspectives in their writing.   necessary.
character development,
consistency of viewpoint or    Students use writing to          Students proofread their
development of a resolution,   explore a complex issue          writing and reflect upon and
achieve cohesion in their      from different perspectives,     evaluate how well they have
writing and argue decisively   to examine the links             achieved their goal or
for their point of view,       between ideas and to             intention, for example, how
express alternative opinions   generate possibilities.          well they have stated their
and attempt to correct the                                      viewpoint to position
use of sociocultural bias.                                      readers.




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Progressing towards Level 6


Progression Point        5.75
At 5.75, the work of a student progressing towards the standard at Level 6 demonstrates,
for example:
     • composition of expressive and sustained narratives with attention to chronology,

       coherence of viewpoint, consistency of plot and character development, and
       development of effective resolution
     • use of writing to explore, speculate and reflect on complex themes and issues

     • strong arguments for particular points of view, using effective language to

       persuade readers
     • evaluation of the extent to which they have been effective in meeting the demands

       of purpose, audience and context in their writing
     • use of a range of strategies for gathering information, planning, structuring,

       composing, proofreading, revising and editing.

                                   Indicators of Progress

Students update their writing    (2) reflect upon and            Students proofread their
strategy plans to include       evaluate how well they are       writing and reflect upon and
what they have learnt about     conveying their intended         evaluate how well they have
writing and to show these as    message and take further         achieved their goal or
self-scripts.                   action if necessary; and         intention and met the
                                                                 demands of purpose, context
Students use modified           (3) use prioritising and         and audience, and modify
composing strategies, for       sequencing strategies.           the text if necessary, for
example, they:                                                   example, how well they
                                Students use writing to
                                                                 have stated their viewpoint
(1) evaluate alternative        explore and to speculate
                                                                 to position readers.
perspectives and synthesise     about a complex issue from
a position;                     different perspectives, to
                                examine the links between
                                ideas and to generate
                                possibilities.




 Standard    6.0
 At Level 6, students write sustained and cohesive narratives that experiment with
 different techniques and show attention to chronology, characterisation, consistent
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 point of view and development of a resolution. They write persuasive texts dealing
 with complex ideas and issues and control the linguistic structures and features that
 support the presentation of different perspectives on complex themes and issues.
 They select subject matter and begin to use a range of language techniques to try to
 position readers to accept particular views of people, characters, events, ideas and
 information. They compose a range of other texts, such as feature articles, web
 pages and workplace texts. They plan and deliver presentations, sequencing and
 organising complex ideas. They write accurately punctuated, grammatically sound
 and complex sentences with embedded clauses and phrases. They are able to
 maximise the effects of rhythm and tone, and write with developing fluency. They
 proofread and edit their own writing for accuracy, consistency and clarity.

                                    Indicators of Progress

Students say their writing        Students write accurately        (1) accuracy, consistency
strategy plan, that is, the       punctuated, grammatically        and clarity;
strategies they will use in an    sound and complex                (2) sentence use and they
integrated way to create a        sentences with embedded          rephrase and clarify
written text. This will           clauses and phrases.             sentences and grammar if
include consideration of                                           necessary;
their purpose for writing and Students use a variety of
                              literary devices such as             (3) paragraph clarity and
the questions they intend                                          they may rearrange the order
their writing to answer or to simile, metaphor and other
                              figurative techniques to             of paragraphs, and delete or
raise.                                                             add paragraphs;
                              enhance their clarity of
Students select subject       writing, and to increase the         (4) relevance of the content
matter and language to try to rhythm, tone, and fluency of         for their intended purpose;
position readers to accept    their writing.                       and
particular views of people,                                        (5) overall coherence and
characters, events, ideas and Students proofread and edit          fluency.
information.                  their writing for:
                                                                   Students use written self-
Students use composing                                             reflection and goal setting to
strategies to write a range of                                     analyse academic
texts, such as feature articles                                    achievement and behaviour.
or web pages and workplace
texts.




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  • 1. English Developmental Continuum P-10 Writing - Writing Strategy © 2007 Developmental Overview Each table contains the progression points and standards related to the Writing Dimension and the Indicators of Progress for the focus on Writing Strategy. Progressing towards Level 1 Progression Point 0.5 At 0.5, the work of a student progressing towards the standard at Level 1 demonstrates, for example: • understanding that their writing can communicate ideas, feelings and information • use of letters and some words in the writing of brief texts about topics of personal interest • emergent writing showing concepts about print, including left to right, top to bottom • reading back from their own writing at the time of writing • approximate use of letters for some letter–sound relationships and common words • use of a variety of writing tools, including crayons, pencils and computer software. Indicators of Progress The students use at least Students see oral language Students read back to others some of the following being recorded in print; they what they have written or writing strategies: dictate text, see it written believe they have written. and then say it aloud. They may retell/paraphrase Students show an emerging or say the main ideas of the ability to control how they Students plan what they message rather than reading use a pencil or crayon. This intend to write by saying it it ‘word for word’. includes the appropriate first or drawing a picture or pencil grip. They can trace symbols to create a draft. Students learn to copy over and around letters, familiar words by saying the outlines and shapes, write Students write what they word to themselves and then letters ‘in the air’, in sand, in say, perhaps saying each telling themselves some of finger-painting activities, word as they write it. the letters. They can copy develop the visual–motor words from the environment coordination skills necessary or from their favourite for writing (for example, books. eye–hand and hand–arm coordination skills), engage Students articulate some of in finger play, and develop the sounds and represent them with appropriate www.education.vic.gov.au/studentlearning/teachingresources/english/englishcontinuum Writing Strategy, Level 1 to 6 - Page 1 of 24
  • 2. Writing Strategy - Developmental Overview body posture and symbols. movements that permit them to write more easily. Standard 1.0 At Level 1, students write personal recounts and simple texts about familiar topics to convey ideas or messages. In their writing, they use conventional letters, groups of letters, and simple punctuation such as full stops and capital letters. Students are aware of the sound system and the relationships between letters and sounds in words when spelling. They form letters correctly, and use a range of writing implements and software. Indicators of Progress Students plan what they Students check what they Students say how writing is intend to write by saying have written for correct useful or helps them (for aloud or ‘conferencing the letter formation, spaces example, to remember topic’ or by drawing pictures between words and letters, something, to let other of the key ideas. use of full stops, and use of people know what they capitals for names and the think) and suggest activities Students say what they will beginning letter of a in which they could use write in sentences and write sentence. writing. a first draft. As they write they may say aloud what Students read their writing Students transfer what they they are writing. to others. know about writing in one context to another, for Students read what they Students form letters more example, telling a story in have written to see if it accurately with correct different contexts. makes sense (that is, ‘sounds starting points and right’), and, if necessary, increasing legibility. Students show improved add to or change the text. physical control of Students say how planning handwriting; they are more and reading over what they able to coordinate pencil have written helps them. grip, body posture and the position of the paper or keyboard. Last updated: 14.01.08 (c) State of Victoria, 2008 Page 2 of 24
  • 3. Writing Strategy - Developmental Overview Progressing towards Level 2 Progression Point 1.25 At 1.25, the work of a student progressing towards the standard at Level 2 demonstrates, for example: • inclusion of their own experiences when writing for personal purposes and audiences such as in lists, letters, cards, posters • inclusion of one or more generally readable sentences • some correct use of capital letters and full stops • drawings that support the intended meaning of their writing • plausible attempts at spelling unfamiliar words, matching sound–letter relationships and using some simple spelling patterns. Indicators of Progress Students plan aloud, with Students read their writing Students check for spelling pictures, or in writing the to others. and punctuation. key ideas, and use the planning ideas to write a Students form letters more Students transfer what they first draft. accurately and write more know about writing from legibly. one context to another, for Students say how planning example, they write about a and reading over what they Students say how writing is birthday party using have written helps them. useful and how it helps different text types or write them, and suggest activities a brief message for different Students read what they in which they could use people they know well. have written either to writing. themselves or to others to see if it makes sense or ‘sounds right’, and, if necessary, add to or change the text. Progression Point 1.5 At 1.5, the work of a student progressing towards the standard at Level 2 demonstrates, for example: • experimentation with a range of short text types; for example, recounts, letters, lists, procedures Last updated: 14.01.08 (c) State of Victoria, 2008 Page 3 of 24
  • 4. Writing Strategy - Developmental Overview • sequencing of a small number of ideas in short texts for different purposes and audiences • rereading of their own writing, checking that it makes sense • combination of writing with drawings or computer graphics to support meaning • correct spelling of some high-frequency words and plausible attempts at spelling unfamiliar words. Indicators of Progress Students describe some of (2) understand that Students modify their the differences between paragraphs separate key proofreading and editing to speaking and writing and ideas. While aware of these include rereading what they experiment with new text text organisational features, have written to check for types. they may not use them meaning, sentence form and correctly. their use of vocabulary. Students combine their They: writing with supportive Students use sentence drawings or computer writing strategies in which (1) reread their writing to graphics. they: themselves or to others to revise or clarify ideas, and Students begin to plan what (1) write in complete are assisted to modify their they will write about by sentences; writing if necessary; and using discussion or drawing (2) vary the length of to identify what they want to (2) edit for use of sentence; and write prior to writing, say, punctuation and for spelling ‘what they want to tell’ the (3) experiment with errors. reader. During planning they combining or expanding Students use explicit organise the ideas prior to sentences. publishing strategies for their first draft, for example, Students use word- and deciding how to present by describing how they will: vocabulary-selection their edited piece of writing. (1) clearly define a topic; strategies more effectively; Students articulate some of and they: the strategies (that is, the (2) add detail to a topic. (1) try out unfamiliar words; actions) they used while writing. Students begin to use (2) select words by taking explicit text organisational account of the likely readers; Students learn strategies for strategies, they: and copying sentences one or a few at a time; they learn to (1) sequence the ideas in the (3) try to avoid words that vocalise each sentence writing with a clear lack ‘voice’ such as before beginning to write beginning, body or middle, mundane or trite words and and rehearse it. and end; and overuse of words or phrases such as and or then. Last updated: 14.01.08 (c) State of Victoria, 2008 Page 4 of 24
  • 5. Writing Strategy - Developmental Overview Progressing towards Level 2 Progression Point 1.75 At 1.75, the work of a student progressing towards the standard at Level 2 demonstrates, for example: • inclusion of information and ideas in short texts for known audiences and selected purposes • use of strategies to revise writing; for example, reading aloud, use of feedback from others • mostly correct use of capital letters, full stops, and question marks • correct spelling of unfamiliar words, using knowledge of sound–letter patterns. Indicators of Progress Students plan what they will (2) continue to develop (2) select words by taking write about by using paragraphing skills. account of the likely information gathering readers; and strategies such as word Students use drafting mapping and charting prior strategies such as (3) select words that target to drafting. They reflect on elaborating on a topic and most directly their intention. ‘what I want to tell the giving supporting ideas, and integrate these by using a Students modify their reader’. They use the wider range of sentence proofreading and editing by strategies to assist writing strategies in which using computer resources to themselves to: they: check sentence form, (1) narrow their focus on a punctuation and spelling. topic; and (1) write in complete sentences; Students broaden their (2) add detail to aspects of publishing strategies, for the idea. (2) vary the length of example, by using word sentence; and processing in different ways. Students begin to use explicit text organisational (3) experiment with Students discuss the writing strategies; they: combining or expanding strategies they use and the sentences. values and purpose of each, (1) sequence the ideas in the for example, of editing and writing into an introduction, Students use word and revising and how they take a body and an end; and vocabulary selection account of the readers when strategies more effectively; they write. they: (1) experiment with novel words; Last updated: 14.01.08 (c) State of Victoria, 2008 Page 5 of 24
  • 6. Writing Strategy - Developmental Overview Standard 2.0 At Level 2, students write short sequenced texts that include some related ideas about familiar topics. They write texts that convey ideas and information to known audiences. They select content, form and vocabulary depending on the purpose for writing, and describe the purpose and audience for their own and others’ writing. They use appropriate structures to achieve some organisation of the subject matter. They link ideas in a variety of ways using pronouns; conjunctions and adverbial phrases indicating time and place. They accurately spell frequently used words, and make use of known spelling patterns to make plausible attempts at spelling unfamiliar words. They use capital letters, full stops and question marks correctly. They reread their own writing and use a range of editing resources to revise and clarify meaning. They write upper- and lower-case letters legibly with consistent size, slope and spacing. Indicators of Progress Students select content and (2) graphic organisers, word Students ask questions about form depending on their mapping and charting to others’ writing and their purposes for writing and plan what they will write. own writing. describe the purpose and Students use drafting audience for their own and strategies such as one’s own Students use corrective others’ writing. vocabulary and graphic feedback from others to organisers to create a first revise their writing. Students use planning draft. strategies such as: Students publish their Students reread their own writing in different forms, (1) saying what questions writing and use a range of including the use of word they want to answer for editing resources to revise processing in e-learning people who read what they and clarify meaning. focus groups. write, for example, for A project on Antarctica, How cold is it? and Last updated: 14.01.08 (c) State of Victoria, 2008 Page 6 of 24
  • 7. Writing Strategy - Developmental Overview Progressing towards Level 3 Progression Point 2.25 At 2.25, the work of a student progressing towards the standard at Level 3 demonstrates, for example: • composition of short, sequenced factual and imaginative texts in print and electronic forms • related ideas, linked in sequence, to convey meaning to known audiences • simple, and some compound, sentences joined by appropriate conjunctions • effective vocabulary to convey meaning, including nouns, verbs and adjectives • correct spelling of words with regular spelling patterns and plausible attempts at some words with irregular spelling patterns. Indicators of Progress Students select content and (2) graphic organisers, word Students use planning form depending on their mapping and charting; and strategies such as graphic purposes for writing and organisers to create a first describe the explicit purpose (3) library resources such as draft. and audience for their own dictionaries and taxonomies and others’ writing. to collate information about Students reread their own the topic. writing and use a range of Students talk about their editing resources to revise action plan for writing, the Students say what the and clarify meaning. They steps they will go through finished outcome might proofread paragraphs about and the actions they will use ‘look like’, what it might familiar events consisting of to produce each draft. say, and the key ideas it will up to four sentences for mention. punctuation and simple one- Students use planning syllable spelling patterns. strategies such as: Students select the most appropriate nouns, Students ask questions about (1) visualising their topic; adjectives and verbs to others’ writing and their convey a message and can writing. write in a way to tell someone who was not there what happened. Progression Point 2.5 At 2.5, the work of a student progressing towards the standard at Level 3 demonstrates, for Last updated: 14.01.08 (c) State of Victoria, 2008 Page 7 of 24
  • 8. Writing Strategy - Developmental Overview example: • composition of short texts of more than one paragraph to describe experiences, tell a story, express a point of view • appropriate ordering of events and ideas in print and electronic texts • compound sentences linking two ideas or events, with correct use of verb tenses • development of character, setting and plot in short narrative texts • correct use of full stops and question marks, and experimentation with other punctuation; for example, commas, quotation marks. Indicators of Progress Students describe their Students use knowledge of Students edit the text by writing plan, that is, the text structures to organise correcting errors in spelling, strategies they will use to their ideas, for example, punctuation, and ‘get their knowledge ready’ compare/contrast, capitalisation. They may use before beginning to write. problem/solution, a dictionary, other cause/effect, description. references and/or computer Students describe their technology to assist in purpose for writing and the Students describe how they editing text. questions they intend to sequence the ideas in a answer in their writing. paragraph. Students name sources when writing reports. Students consistently Students paraphrase organise and plan their accurately what they write to Students begin to use writing and use available check that it meets their available technology (e.g., resources in the school, such purpose. word processor) consistently as libraries, to assist. throughout the writing Students prepare a first draft process. Students describe the main by mapping the ideas idea and the supporting developed during planning Students publish their text ideas for their writing. into phrases, sentences and by producing a legible and paragraphs. effective final product using technology when Students revise their draft by appropriate. adding or changing appropriate language and/or Students write legibly. graphics to enhance text and style. Last updated: 14.01.08 (c) State of Victoria, 2008 Page 8 of 24
  • 9. Writing Strategy - Developmental Overview Progressing towards Level 3 Progression Point 2.75 At 2.75, the work of a student progressing towards the standard at Level 3 demonstrates, for example: • composition of texts for different purposes; for example, to narrate, inform, describe, present a point of view or explain • composition of texts of three or four logically ordered paragraphs • composition of texts that take account of the needs and interests of familiar and some unfamiliar audiences • combinations of written and visual elements in print and electronic texts • correct spelling of two-syllable words with regular spelling patterns, and plausible attempts at spelling two-syllable words with irregular spelling patterns. Indicators of Progress Students describe an updated (1) using a sequence of Students extend their use of writing plan. drawings or key words to paraphrasing what they show a text pattern; write, use their knowledge Students describe their of vocabulary to substitute purpose for writing and the (2) using a ‘circle text’ (a for over-used words in their questions they intend to sequence of pictures that writing, and refine a answer in their writing. shows a particular character sentence to express the going through a story); and intended meaning most Students describe alternative clearly. ways of ‘getting their (3) record the sequence of knowledge ready’ for key words. Students convert writing and for collating the message in these formats what they know for more to a first draft. complex texts, for example: Standard 3.0 At Level 3, students write texts containing several logically ordered paragraphs that express opinions and include ideas and information about familiar topics. They write narratives which include characters, setting and plot. They order information and sequence events using some detail or illustrative evidence, and they express a point of view providing some information and supporting detail. They combine verbal and visual elements in the texts they produce. They meet the needs of audiences by including appropriate background information. They write a variety of simple and compound sentences and use verb tenses correctly. Last updated: 14.01.08 (c) State of Victoria, 2008 Page 9 of 24
  • 10. Writing Strategy - Developmental Overview They use punctuation to support meaning, including exclamation marks and quotation marks, and accurately use full stops, commas and question marks. They use vocabulary appropriate to context and spell most one- and two-syllable words with regular spelling patterns, and frequently used words which have less regular spelling patterns. They use sound and visual patterns when attempting to spell unfamiliar words. Indicators of Progress Students describe their Students sequence and Students use rhythm, flow of writing plan, that is, the organise the main ideas and language and imagery where specific actions they will the supporting ideas for their appropriate, for example, in take to complete the task. writing and sequence the verse. ideas in a paragraph. Students describe their Students edit the text by purpose for writing and the Students paraphrase correcting errors in spelling, questions they intend to accurately what they write to punctuation, and answer in their writing, check that it meets their capitalisation. They may use particularly for the new text purpose. a dictionary, other types. references and/or computer Students prepare a first draft technology to assist in Students use strategies to by mapping the ideas editing text. generate relevant ideas, for developed during planning example, how to into sentences and Students cite sources when contextualise a topic in an paragraphs, combine and writing reports. alterative culture or sequence written and visual historical era, and organise information, and use a range Students use available and plan the resources they of sentence lengths and technology (e.g., word will use to complete the types. processor) more regularly writing, such as library and consistently throughout sources and on-line Students revise their draft by the writing process. databases. adding or changing appropriate language and/or Students publish their text graphics to enhance text and by producing a legible and style. effective final product using technology when appropriate. Last updated: 14.01.08 (c) State of Victoria, 2008 Page 10 of 24
  • 11. Writing Strategy - Developmental Overview Progressing towards Level 4 Progression Point 3.25 At 3.25, the work of a student progressing towards the standard at Level 4 demonstrates, for example: • inclusion of familiar ideas and information for different purposes and audiences in print and electronic texts • use of strategies for planning, drafting, proofreading, editing and revising • appropriate vocabulary, punctuation and tense according to context, purpose and audience • typical features and structures of different texts such as narratives and reports • correct spelling of frequently occurring two- and three-syllable words and use of strategies to spell unknown words. Indicators of Progress Students describe their Students sequence and Students revise their draft by modified writing plan, that organise the main ideas and adding or changing is, the strategies they will the supporting ideas for two appropriate language and/or use to complete the task. simultaneous sets of events, graphics to enhance text and for example, by allocating style. Students describe their one paragraph to each of the purpose for writing, the simultaneous sequences. Students identify and write questions they intend to the key ideas in a text from answer in their writing, Students integrate the ideas which they need to learn as particularly for the new text in two or three sentences they handle the information, types learnt here, and how into a single sentence, for example, as they watch a they indicate the purpose in identify the ‘paragraph idea’ short video or read a simple the text they write. in a set of sentences and text with a few key ideas. summarise a sequence of Students use strategies to sentences. Students use various editing generate relevant ideas, for strategies such as a example, how to Students prepare a first draft proofreading checklist, a contextualise a topic in a by mapping the ideas dictionary, and computer- fantasy or adventure, a developed during planning based materials, to monitor report or an argument and into sentences and their use of spelling, organise and plan the paragraphs, combine and punctuation, grammar, and resources they will use to sequence written and visual capitalisation. complete the writing; these information, and use a range include libraries and of sentence lengths and databases. types. Progression Point 3.5 Last updated: 14.01.08 (c) State of Victoria, 2008 Page 11 of 24
  • 12. Writing Strategy - Developmental Overview At 3.5, the work of a student progressing towards the standard at Level 4 demonstrates, for example: • production of texts for a range of different audiences and purposes in print and electronic forms • use of strategies for planning; for example, using models of others’ writing or mind mapping • deletion of unnecessary information or addition of new information when editing and revising writing • inclusion of appropriate visual images and information in print and electronic texts. Indicators of Progress In addition to the Students organise the ideas into Students use redrafting of strategies described in main and subordinate ideas, their writing to develop their level 3, students use the and sequence and organise the text through multiple drafts. following methods. ideas, for example, for two simultaneous sets of events in a Students use revising Students describe a narrative and two points of strategies; they reread the modified writing plan, view in a persuasive text. They text to check its sense and that is, the actions they link the ideas with the topic may discuss it with others. will take to complete the and their intended message and They can recognise when task. narrow or expand the set of their writing shows ideas according to the topic. redundancy and can correct Students describe their this. They allocate the main and purpose for writing, the supporting ideas to paragraphs. questions they intend to Students use editing answer in their writing, Students map the ideas and strategies; they use a range particularly for the new perspectives into a first draft. of sources to edit a text, such text types learnt here and They examine the development as their proofreading how they indicate the of details, organisation, and checklist, a dictionary, and purpose in the text they voice in the draft and elaborate computer-based materials to write. the initial ideas if necessary. monitor their use of spelling, punctuation, grammar, and Students use a range of Students select and use more capitalisation. strategies to generate and appropriate vocabulary, organise relevant ideas, language structures and Students use publishing for example, visualise a features for their purpose, strategies; they select a topic, use brainstorming audience and type of text. format for publishing that is or network mapping, appropriate to their message, organise and plan the Students evaluate two or three their purpose for writing and resources they will use to sentences in each paragraph their audience, for example, complete the writing; this and integrate the ideas into a a speech, a poster, an essay, includes the use of library single sentence; they or a report. and databases. summarise the sequence of Students use technology- Last updated: 14.01.08 (c) State of Victoria, 2008 Page 12 of 24
  • 13. Writing Strategy - Developmental Overview sentences to develop the topic oriented strategies sentence for each paragraph. throughout the writing process. Last updated: 14.01.08 (c) State of Victoria, 2008 Page 13 of 24
  • 14. Writing Strategy - Developmental Overview Progressing towards Level 4 Progression Point 3.75 At 3.75, the work of a student progressing towards the standard at Level 4 demonstrates, for example: • use of structures and features appropriate to purpose and audience of print and electronic texts • appropriate use of topic sentences and organisation of main and subordinate ideas • selection of vocabulary, text structures and visual features to effectively communicate ideas and information • maintenance of plot, characterisation and setting throughout extended narrative texts • use of knowledge about spelling patterns, including morphemic knowledge, visual and phonic patterns. Indicators of Progress In addition to the strategies Students show they have • while revising, described in 3–3.5, students use linked the writing strategies proofreading stage the following methods. into a sequence of self- scripts such as—Is the instructional scripts that text on the right track? Students selectively use a Does it do what it is variety of strategies for writing they can use to guide them supposed to do? Does it according to the given purposes, through a writing activity as say too much/too little? Is such as note making, using follows: the text easy to models, planning, editing and • while pre-writing and understand? Are there proofreading. planning stage scripts such confusing parts? Are the Students select and use specific as—What do I know about main points in the right vocabulary according to the the topic? Have I collected order? Does the writing enough information? Why begin smoothly? Does the topic of the writing and its am I writing this? Who will writer take too long to get purpose. started? Does each read what I write? What Students use multiple drafting form should my writing take? paragraph have one main in a systematic, organised way How well does the idea? Are the paragraphs to obtain a final product. information I have gathered linked together well? Does answer the set the writing finish well? Students express and clarify Have I used any words their thoughts, feelings and question/topic? that I am not sure of? values through writing. • while writing stage scripts Have I checked the writing such as—What is the first for correct grammar and Students use a range of sentence important idea I want to say? and paragraph writing sentences? Have I checked How will I say it? What ideas the writing for correct strategies, for example, they go with it? What is the spelling? Have I checked vary the style of sentence forms second important idea? What the writing for correct and use indexing, sentence ideas go with it? How will I punctuation? Does each Last updated: 14.01.08 (c) State of Victoria, 2008 Page 14 of 24
  • 15. Writing Strategy - Developmental Overview organisation, compound start the writing? What do I sentence have one idea? sentences, and subordinate and want to tell the reader first? Have I used pictures etc., embedded clauses. How will I tell the reader well? What will I call the about the main idea of the passage of writing? Will I Students use several drafts in a passage? How will I finish use subheadings? systematic, organised way to off the writing? What will lead to a final product. Students begin to adapt each paragraph be about? What is the main idea in the steps in the self- each paragraph? instructional sequence to match different types of texts. Standard 4.0 At Level 4, students produce, in print and electronic forms, a variety of texts for different purposes using structures and features of language appropriate to the purpose, audience and context of the writing. They begin to use simple figurative language and visual images. They use a range of vocabulary, a variety of sentence structures, and use punctuation accurately, including apostrophes. They identify and use different parts of speech, including nouns, pronouns, adverbs, comparative adverbs and adjectives, and use appropriate prepositions and conjunctions. They use a range of approaches to spelling, applying morphemic knowledge and an understanding of visual and phonic patterns. They employ a variety of strategies for writing, including note-making, using models, planning, editing and proofreading. Indicators of Progress Students use a range of Students use drafting strategies Students use editing strategies including the in which students: strategies to check the use following: of spelling, punctuation, (1) use the ideas and grammar, and Students describe their perspectives generated to write capitalisation; students use action plan for writing, and a first draft; several resources such as a the actions they will use to dictionary, computer and achieve their goals or (2) elaborate initial ideas and style guides. purposes for writing. identify subordinate ideas; and Students use publishing Students use idea generation (3) focus on developing ideas, strategies such as: and collation strategies, details and organising them. orientation strategies, and Students use revising strategies (1) selecting a format for idea organisation strategies, such as rereading the draft to publication appropriate for for example, brainstorming check that there is consistency the audience (for example, and semantic mapping of meaning and main ideas, a letter, a poster, an essay, (including computer and language use and style, and a report); and graphic organisers in modify the draft accordingly. planning and collating (2) using technology to knowledge for writing support the publishing Last updated: 14.01.08 (c) State of Victoria, 2008 Page 15 of 24
  • 16. Writing Strategy - Developmental Overview different text types), and process. strategies for narrowing or expanding a topic prior to drafting. Last updated: 14.01.08 (c) State of Victoria, 2008 Page 16 of 24
  • 17. Writing Strategy - Developmental Overview Progressing towards Level 5 Progression Point 4.25 At 4.25, the work of a student progressing towards the standard at Level 5 demonstrates, for example: • composition of print and electronic texts for a range of purposes, including speculative, imaginative, explanatory and persuasive • development of topics in coherent ways according to the purpose, and the needs and experience of the intended audience • use of a variety of sentence structures, including combinations of simple and compound sentences for particular effects • awareness of grammatical conventions; for example, tense and subject–verb agreement, appropriate punctuation • use of a range of planning strategies. Indicators of Progress Students use the types of Students use drafting Students use revising strategies described in level strategies in which they: strategies that take account 4 and modify these to of the new text types as (1) use the ideas and account for the types of texts identified in 4.25 Ideas perspectives generated to described. communicated in writing. write a first draft; Students describe their Students use editing (2) elaborate initial ideas action plan for writing a strategies that take account and identify subordinate review of a film or a of the new text types 4.25 ideas; and speculative text. Ideas communicated in (3) focus on developing writing. Students use idea generation ideas and details and and collation strategies, Students use publishing organising them. orientation strategies, idea strategies including organisation strategies and computers and graphic strategies for narrowing or organisers for publishing the expanding a topic prior to text types. drafting for an interpretative essay. Progression Point 4.5 At 4.5, the work of a student progressing towards the standard at Level 5 demonstrates, for example: Last updated: 14.01.08 (c) State of Victoria, 2008 Page 17 of 24
  • 18. Writing Strategy - Developmental Overview • composition of print and electronic texts in a wide range of forms, including narratives, reports, explanations, procedures and points of view • composition of persuasive texts about contemporary issues, including justification of personal points of view with supporting arguments • experimentation with different techniques to influence audiences and achieve the intended purpose of their writing • correct spelling, except of unfamiliar words with unusual spelling patterns • use of headings and subheadings in the organisation of information in texts • use of editing and proofreading skills for clarity and cohesion of ideas. Indicators of Progress Students use the types of (3) strategies for focusing or Students use editing and strategies described in expanding a topic prior to proofreading strategies; they levels 4–4.25 and modify drafting for an interpretative (1) monitor for clarity and these to account for the essay (for example, by for the cohesiveness of ideas types of texts described aligning the questions asked in communicating the above, as follows: by a topic with the questions intended message; Students describe their answered by the ideas). (2) use multiple resources to action plan for writing Students use drafting edit the text (for example, instances of the texts above strategies; they dictionaries, computer-based and discuss what they know (1) integrate ideas across facilities, peer feedback and about writing for different sentences within a paragraph writing guides; and purposes in a range of for the text types taught; contexts. (3) begin to cite sources (2) coordinate ideas and (e.g., references, footnotes, Students use various perspectives; and endnotes). planning strategies: (3) gradually use these Students use various (1) idea generation and drafting strategies publishing strategies; they collation strategies such as independently. researching, mapping, (1) select a format for surveys and interviews; Students use revising publishing (e.g., multimedia strategies; they formats, essay, research (2) idea organisation presentation) appropriate for strategies such as (1) reread what they have written for sense; the audience and purpose; networking the main ideas and first, followed by the (2) confer with others to subordinate ideas, modify the text; (2) produce a legible and identifying the questions effective final outcome (3) adapt recommendations; using a variety of answered by the main ideas and technologies. (for example, using the who, what, when, where, (4) modify the language why framework); and and/or accompanying non- text information to enhance text and style. Last updated: 14.01.08 (c) State of Victoria, 2008 Page 18 of 24
  • 19. Writing Strategy - Developmental Overview Progressing towards Level 5 Progression Point 4.75 At 4.75, the work of a student progressing towards the standard at Level 5 demonstrates, for example: • control of writing texts in various forms, including narratives, reports, explanations, procedures and persuasive texts • composition of imaginative and informative texts presenting challenging ideas and issues • appropriate use of figurative language to achieve particular effects • strategic use of headings, subheadings, graphics, photographs and art work to support the meaning of the text • use of a variety of software packages to plan, organise, revise and present electronic texts. Indicators of Progress Students use the types of strategies described in levels 4–4.5 with greater spontaneity and accuracy. Standard 5.0 At Level 5, students produce, in print and electronic forms, texts for a variety of purposes, including speculating, hypothesising, persuading and reflecting. They write extended narratives or scripts with attention to characterisation, consistency of viewpoint and development of a resolution. They write arguments that state and justify a personal viewpoint; reports incorporating challenging themes and issues; personal reflections on, or evaluations of, texts presenting challenging themes and issues. Students improve the accuracy and readability of their writing, developing confidence in the identification and use of grammatical conventions and features of language and in their use of figurative language. They use a range of punctuation accurately to support meaning, including the use of ellipses, dashes, colons and semi- colons. They control tenses, and subject-verb and noun-pronoun agreement. They accurately identify and use different parts of speech. They edit their writing for Last updated: 14.01.08 (c) State of Victoria, 2008 Page 19 of 24
  • 20. Writing Strategy - Developmental Overview clarity, coherence and consistency of style, and proofread and correct spelling, punctuation and grammatical errors. Indicators of Progress Students modify and update Students develop strategies Students broaden their their writing plans to for using a variety of strategies for linking main accommodate the broader sentence structures and supporting ideas within range of texts and purposes selectively so that they and between paragraphs by for writing. convey their intention most using a range of connectives effectively. to communicate a sense of coherence. Students develop strategies for improving the focus, the Students edit their writing accuracy and the readability for clarity, coherence and of their writing so that it consistency of style, and achieves its purpose proofread for spelling, effectively. punctuation and grammar. Last updated: 14.01.08 (c) State of Victoria, 2008 Page 20 of 24
  • 21. Writing Strategy - Developmental Overview Progressing towards Level 6 Progression Point 5.25 At 5.25, the work of a student progressing towards the standard at Level 6 demonstrates, for example: • composition of sustained narratives with some control of main plot and sub-plots and consistent character development • use of writing to explore complex issues and points of view • use of a variety of language techniques to present an argument and influence audiences to share a point of view • effective use of vocabulary and sentence structures appropriate to the intended purpose of the text • effective use of strategies for redrafting, editing for audience appropriateness, prioritising and sequencing ideas. Indicators of Progress Students plan how to write Students plan how to write Students write creatively in sustained narratives and texts that explore a complex terms of open-ended how to prioritise and current issue from different possibilities. sequence the ideas in a perspectives or that argue a sustained narrative; they particular point of view, how Students use composing, say how they organise the to support a clear position and, if necessary, redrafting ideas in terms of main plot and to account for alternative strategies. and sub-plots; use language opinions and different Students proofread their (for example, vocabulary, perspectives, and how to use writing and revise and edit it sentence forms); allow key language techniques to argue for vocabulary and spelling, characterisation to evolve; and persuade for a particular for audience and maintain cohesion and point of view. appropriateness, clarity, develop a resolution. cohesion and consistency of viewpoint. Progression Point 5.5 At 5.5, the work of a student progressing towards the standard at Level 6 demonstrates, for Last updated: 14.01.08 (c) State of Victoria, 2008 Page 21 of 24
  • 22. Writing Strategy - Developmental Overview example: • expression of thoughts, feelings, opinions and ideas in print and electronic forms • use of writing to explore complex issues and to argue for a particular point of view • integration of complex ideas and multiple perspectives in writing • the written conventions, structures and features appropriate for a range of different text types • proofreading and redrafting for accuracy, clarity, coherence and consistency of style. Indicators of Progress Students plan, organise, Students use composing Students use redrafting prioritise and sequence the strategies, for example, strategies to improve clarity, main and supporting ideas in actions to integrate complex coherence, creativity and their writing, for example, ideas and multiple consistency of style if how they will achieve perspectives in their writing. necessary. character development, consistency of viewpoint or Students use writing to Students proofread their development of a resolution, explore a complex issue writing and reflect upon and achieve cohesion in their from different perspectives, evaluate how well they have writing and argue decisively to examine the links achieved their goal or for their point of view, between ideas and to intention, for example, how express alternative opinions generate possibilities. well they have stated their and attempt to correct the viewpoint to position use of sociocultural bias. readers. Last updated: 14.01.08 (c) State of Victoria, 2008 Page 22 of 24
  • 23. Writing Strategy - Developmental Overview Progressing towards Level 6 Progression Point 5.75 At 5.75, the work of a student progressing towards the standard at Level 6 demonstrates, for example: • composition of expressive and sustained narratives with attention to chronology, coherence of viewpoint, consistency of plot and character development, and development of effective resolution • use of writing to explore, speculate and reflect on complex themes and issues • strong arguments for particular points of view, using effective language to persuade readers • evaluation of the extent to which they have been effective in meeting the demands of purpose, audience and context in their writing • use of a range of strategies for gathering information, planning, structuring, composing, proofreading, revising and editing. Indicators of Progress Students update their writing (2) reflect upon and Students proofread their strategy plans to include evaluate how well they are writing and reflect upon and what they have learnt about conveying their intended evaluate how well they have writing and to show these as message and take further achieved their goal or self-scripts. action if necessary; and intention and met the demands of purpose, context Students use modified (3) use prioritising and and audience, and modify composing strategies, for sequencing strategies. the text if necessary, for example, they: example, how well they Students use writing to have stated their viewpoint (1) evaluate alternative explore and to speculate to position readers. perspectives and synthesise about a complex issue from a position; different perspectives, to examine the links between ideas and to generate possibilities. Standard 6.0 At Level 6, students write sustained and cohesive narratives that experiment with different techniques and show attention to chronology, characterisation, consistent Last updated: 14.01.08 (c) State of Victoria, 2008 Page 23 of 24
  • 24. Writing Strategy - Developmental Overview point of view and development of a resolution. They write persuasive texts dealing with complex ideas and issues and control the linguistic structures and features that support the presentation of different perspectives on complex themes and issues. They select subject matter and begin to use a range of language techniques to try to position readers to accept particular views of people, characters, events, ideas and information. They compose a range of other texts, such as feature articles, web pages and workplace texts. They plan and deliver presentations, sequencing and organising complex ideas. They write accurately punctuated, grammatically sound and complex sentences with embedded clauses and phrases. They are able to maximise the effects of rhythm and tone, and write with developing fluency. They proofread and edit their own writing for accuracy, consistency and clarity. Indicators of Progress Students say their writing Students write accurately (1) accuracy, consistency strategy plan, that is, the punctuated, grammatically and clarity; strategies they will use in an sound and complex (2) sentence use and they integrated way to create a sentences with embedded rephrase and clarify written text. This will clauses and phrases. sentences and grammar if include consideration of necessary; their purpose for writing and Students use a variety of literary devices such as (3) paragraph clarity and the questions they intend they may rearrange the order their writing to answer or to simile, metaphor and other figurative techniques to of paragraphs, and delete or raise. add paragraphs; enhance their clarity of Students select subject writing, and to increase the (4) relevance of the content matter and language to try to rhythm, tone, and fluency of for their intended purpose; position readers to accept their writing. and particular views of people, (5) overall coherence and characters, events, ideas and Students proofread and edit fluency. information. their writing for: Students use written self- Students use composing reflection and goal setting to strategies to write a range of analyse academic texts, such as feature articles achievement and behaviour. or web pages and workplace texts. Last updated: 14.01.08 (c) State of Victoria, 2008 Page 24 of 24