1. Joshua Whipday
Proposal
Susan Grey is a 26 year old woman from Staffordshire who has had a lifelong ambition to
become an S.A.S Veteran. She has been in the S.A.S for 6 years but never received a
Veteran award. Therefore she has made this her aim for 2012. She goes on a mission with
her team to Babylon, South of Baghdad, in which she goes off to discover on her own. She
comes across an alien invasion. She runs back to her teammates to reveal the news but
they don’t believe her, until all hell breaks loose.
Treatment
1 min. Susan Grey is stood in a very open dark field. She is armed with a rifle which she
struggles to carry as it is extremely heavy. Susan is also equip with camouflaged
clothing and looks as if she has been walking for miles, she appears very tired and
worn out. Susan appears to be alone as nobody is around just the sound of distant
gun shot draw her attention.
2 min. “Helpppp, helpppp” she suddenly hears, quickly advancing through some bushes
Susan finds a man of the opposing country sprawled across the floor crying in
agonizing discomfort. Susan decides to help the soldier because she had a moment
of weakness and felt sorry for the large amount of pain he was in.
3 min. Susan takes pity on the injured soldier checking he has no weapons. She slowly
approaches whilst the man is continuously begging for help. As she approaches him
she realises that he is unarmed. This relieves her and she goes in to help him.
4 min. She treats his wound, dressing and cleansing it whilst he screams in pain. She
cringed when the blood ran down her hands.
5 min. Once Susan had treated him he is very grateful and he can’t thank her enough for
her kindness however Susan is in a war and she had to quickly advance, so she
quickly helps him to his feet and advances across the battlefield.
6 min. Once her back is turn the soldier cunningly pulled out a knife he had hidden in his
boot. Susan takes a large gasp of air and loses her breath as he impaled her back
with his knife. Susan rolled over on the floor only to see a blooded knife in the hand
of her attacker stood over her nastily laughing.