Final Draft/Rough draft for 2nd essay bartleet english 101. attach to a rough draft version and 2 rubrics w/ peer review

1. Johnson 1
Jodi Johnson
Ryan Bartlett
English 101
22nd, February 2012
Musician’s Abode
The time is 10:15pm and the musical event has been scheduled to last until at least 1:00am the following morning. It is lively and people of all
ages have come to visit the famous music venue, but the down-to-earth occupants chat casually with one another as if they had known eachother
all their lives. Among the line-up of bands scheduled to perform however is one that has a unique take on what someone would normally classify
a rock band to be.
Outside the venue I meet a musician. He is probably in his early 30’s, maybe a couple inches shorter then myself, with shoulder length
hair and a sort of happy golucky personality. He doesn’t seem busy, so I introduce myself. He’s friendly and doesn’t mind shaking hands. I ask
about himself and his band. He explains that he’s there with one of the band’s performing from overseas. The band is what he describes as,
“combines the softness of a falling feather with the heaviness of a hurricane”