The document discusses changes made to a film poster and website based on feedback. The changes include replacing "deadly past" with "deadly fantasy" in the tagline, blending the victim image into the background at the neck, shrinking the size of the tagline, evenly distributing content across the top of the webpage, adding tabs for navigation, incorporating images more subtly, and including media icons which are common on other film websites.

1. FilmPosterDraftAfter
Feedback

2. I have also
considered and
changed ‘deadly
past’ to ‘deadly
fantasy’ as this
would make more
sense (fantasy 
reality, where past
 present/future,
which sounds odd).
I have used the
feedback and have
mist the image of
the victim. As she
is now blended
into the
background,
particularly at the
neck.
I have also shrank
the strap line so it
does not grab
away the
attention of the
title and images.

3. Also, I have equally moved the
component parts so that the content
is less heavily weighted at the top of
the webpage. This webpage seems
clear and carries on the brand image
of my poster and the website as I
have used a picture of the killer as
well as using tabs so that people can
click on them.
I have experimented with a billing box at
the bottom of the page which follows
conventions, I have adapted the
transparency of your images to they are
more subtly incorporated
I have also added media icons as this is crucial
and from looking at other film’s websites they
also have this.